高考英语作文提分亮点!

高考英语作文提分亮点！

高考英语写作时，适当使用含有较高级语法结构的句式，如强调句、倒装句、省略句、感叹句等，能给文章增色不少，是英语作文的提分亮点。

1

使用特殊句式

① As a saying goes，the little thing matters most.

→As a saying goes，it is the little thing that matters most.（强调句）

② The children can grow up healthy mentally and phys ically only in this way.

→Only in this way can the children grow up healthy mentally and physically.（倒装句）

③ If it is so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.

→If so，I hope you will have a wonderful time.（省略句）

④ It is a very splendid moment.

→How splendi d a moment it is!/What a splendid moment it is!（感叹句）

⑤ I won first prize with my teacher's help.

→Without my teacher's help，I couldn't have won first prize.（虚拟语气）

2

巧用从句

①如果他们在考试中经常作弊，他们就会养成一个坏习惯，这将会对他们的生活产生坏的影响。

If they often cheat in the exams，they will develop a bad habit，and it will have a bad effect on their life.

→If they often cheat in the exams，they will develop a bad habit，which will have a bad effect on their life.（定语从句）

②这正是我想要的。

It is just the thing I want.

→It is just what I want.（名词性从句）

3

善用非谓语动词

众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会给人单调乏味之感，句子与句子之间的关系也会显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词可以使文章结构更紧凑，表达更流畅。

1.运用非谓语动词转换简单句

写作时，我们可以利用非谓语动词将两个简单句转换成较高级的表达方式。转换时可采用三步法。

第一步：写出两个简单句。

第二步：让句②作主句，用非谓语动词改写句①。

第三步：句①表示原因，其中的动词feel与主语I之间为主谓关系，故用现在分词短语作原因状语，即Feeling quite sorry for that，I begin to think about what to do to help.

【举一反三】

①另一方面，我将帮着建立英语角，给我们学生提供一个练习英语口语的平台。翻译：On the other hand，I will help set up an English corner. I will provide us students with a platform to practice our oral English.

可用现在分词作状语将其转换为→On the other hand，I will help set up an English corner，providing us students with a platform to practice our oral English.

②这里的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。

翻译：All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom.

可用过去分词作定语将其转换为→All the people here lik e the novel written by Tom.

2.运用非谓语动词转换复合句

用非谓语动词转换复合句比转换简单句要容易一些，因为需转换的一般是从句部分，这时只需要判断用何种非谓语动词，再把握好时态和语态即可。

第一步：写出复合句。

例如：

After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner.

第二步：用非谓语动词作状语代替after引导的时间状语从句，practice与we之间为主谓关系，且表示完成，故用现在分词的完成式作状语，即Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months，we strongly desired to be the winner.

【举一反三】

①惊诧于他们的熟练程度，我决心要像他们一样好。

翻译：Because I was amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.

用过去分词作状语将其转换为→Amazed at how skillful they were，I determined to be just as good.

②看到一辆车朝她飞驰而来，我伸出手把她拉了回来。

翻译：When I saw a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.

用现在分词作状语将其转换为→Seeing a car running towards her，I reached my hand out and pulled her back.

③这里曾有一家生产化肥的工厂。它每天释放出大量有毒气体，污染环境。

翻译：There was a factory here，which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，which polluted the environment.

将第二个定语从句转换为现在分词短语→There was a factory here，which produced fertilizer. Every day it gave out a lot of poisonous gas，polluting the environment.

④由于老师的帮助，我的英语进步很大。

翻译：Because my teacher helps me，my English has greatly improved.

用”with+宾语+现在分词”的复合结构将其转换为→With my teacher helping me，my English has greatly improved.