高考英语作文-------询问信

高考英语作文-------询问信

[经典考题] (悟一悟)

[典例](2014·全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。

注意：1.词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

3．参考词汇：住宿—accommodation

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Dear Sir/Madam，

①My name is Li Hua, a middle school student from China and I intend to go to Britain to study English this summer vacation. ②Seeing your ad in the newspaper, I show great interest in it and I want to learn more information about your courses. ③First of all, would you please tell me the exact start date and class size? ④By the way, how many school hours are there each week? ⑤What’s more, I’d like to know how much I shall pay for the course and what type of accommodation you will provide for me.

⑥I would appreciate it if you could explain to me these questions in detail. ⑦Looking forward to your early reply!

Yours faithfully，

Li Hua [阅卷评点]

①“a middle school student from China”为Li Hua的同位语，其用法地道、得体，一语道破了Li Hua 的身份。

②此句应用了非谓语动词作状语的结构，为下文埋下了伏笔，同时也充分展示了作者很强的驾驭语言

能力，给阅卷人留下了很好的第一印象。此外，“show interest in”属于高级词汇。

③“first of all”及⑤“what’s more”的使用使文章层次清晰、行文连贯。

④看似不起眼的“by the way”却把前后句子紧密地衔接在一起，使文章过渡自然、顺畅。

⑥作者用固定句式“I would appreciate it if ...”收尾能够产生非凡的效果，一方面能够展示写信人的迫切心情，另一方面能够展示作者高超的语言运用能力。

Li Hua