(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达技巧小结及练习题及解析

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(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达的技巧及练习题及练习题(含答案)含解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·湖南长郡中学中考模拟）书面表达76,近年来，科技的进步正在逐步影响着人们的日常生活。

年5月，来'自一带一路”沿线的20国青年评选出了中国的“新四大发明”:高铁、支付宝、共享单车和网购。

假如你是李华，你的朋友Lisa是英国的一名初中生，她对我们的“新四大发明”很感兴趣。

请你给她写一封电子邮件，具体内容如下：1.介绍共享单车和网购的基本情况并谈谈你的看法和评价 2.邀请她下个月参加你校科技节，将展出学生制作的各类材质的小模型。

注意:1.词数80词左右，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数 2.可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。

参考词汇:共享单车:shared bikesDear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “FourNew”Inventions”______________________YoursLi Hua【答案】Dear Lisa,I’m glad to hear that you’re so interested in our “Four New Inventions” Let me tell you about them.They are high-speed railways,electronic payments,shared bicycles and online shopping.We travel by high-speed railways.They are very quick.We use electronic payments when we use online shopping,When we want to go somewhere by bike,we use shared bicycles.We use our mobile phone to unlock the shared bicycle.It is convenient and cheap.There is no pollution and oil cost.We can also keep healthy when we ride it.There will be the Science Festival in our school.It will show all kinds of models that students make.I hope you will come to visit them.YoursLi Hua【解析】【详解】这篇作文要求我们根据提示来介绍中国的新四大发明，题目中给出了具体的写作的内容，我们应将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。

【英语】九年级下册英语书面表达技巧和方法完整版及练习题及解析

【英语】九年级下册英语书面表达技巧和方法完整版及练习题及解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。

她在信中诉说了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。

要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks._______________________________________All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,I’m sorry to know that you aren’t allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained more and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages. For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to people's body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but it's an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，so…that，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。

(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达技巧小结及练习题含解析

（英语）九年级下册英语书面表达技巧小结及练习题含解析一、英语书面表达1．假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。

要点提示如下:（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞（do square dancing）。

（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。

（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。

（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。

（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但……要求：（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。

Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________That’s all. Thank you!【答案】Boys and girls,I’m very happy to speak here and I’d like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is much healthier than before. What’smore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they can’t fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healthy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldn’t make a lot of noise.That’s all. Thank you!【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提示写一篇学校英语兴趣小组的活动中的发言稿。

【英语】九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)含解析

【英语】九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)含解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·北京中考模拟）交流可以化解矛盾,增进友谊。

当今交流方式很多，但人们之间的情感似乎越来越淡。

学校英语专栏征文，主题是“Ways of Communication Today”。

假如你是李华，你对此很感兴趣，准备投稿，谈谈你日常的交流方式及你的感受。

提示词语： face to face， chatting on line， discuss，appear提示问题：·How many ways do you know to communicate with others?How do you usually communicate with your friends?Which is the best way and why?【答案】There are some ways to communicate with others, such as talking face to face, singing songs, using body and sign language, writing a letter, chatting on line, sending text messages. My friends and I usually have a talk face to face because we live near each other. We often send text messages, too. We can discuss our homework, talk about our interesting games. Sometimes we make phone calls.I think the best way to communicate is the mobile phone. It is one of the most welcome and useful inventions. After mobile phones appear, communication becomes easier and rapider. With the help of the phones, people can keep in touch with anyone at any time and in any place. （118）【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

【英语】九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧讲解及练习题(含答案)含解析

【英语】九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧讲解及练习题(含答案)含解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·黑龙江中考模拟）书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。

请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。

2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。

（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。

（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。

3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。

写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Billy,It’s my great pleasure to receive your e-mail. You wanted to know about my usual exercise. I’ll tell it to you.I am busy preparing for the coming physical test. So I take exercise less than an hour every day. Sometimes I don’t do exercise, because I have so much homework that I have no time to do it. I do well in playing balls.Doing exercise can help me keep a strong body, and it is good for my health. Besides, I think it can make me relaxed by doing exercise. So I advise you to spend more time doing exercise every week.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，给Billy回封电子邮件，介绍自己平时的锻炼情况，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

(英语)九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)含解析

（英语）九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编解题技巧和训练方法及练习题(含答案)含解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达中考后暑假即将开始，你和一些同学准备结伴出国旅行。

旅行社提供了两个国家供你选择游玩。

请根据旅行社提供的信息，将你的选择用英文向同学们介绍。

要求：1. 所写内容必须包括某一国家的所有信息及选择的理由；2. 结合游玩国家的情况，自拟希望可以安排的活动，并提出1-2点出游的注意事项；3. 文章不少于90词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；4. 语义通顺、意思连贯、条理清楚、书写规范；5. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad.I hope I will have a good time there!【答案】The summer holiday is coming. I think it’s a good idea to travel abroad. I have read information about two countries——Britain and Australia. I like britain. So I think we can go to Britain.The time is july 1 to july 14. Its activities include visiting the buckingham palace,visiting the british museum, and watching football matches.The first, I want us to visit the Buckingham Palace and the british museum, I think it is very helpful for us to understand the history and culture of Britain. Next I hope to watch football matches. I like football very much. It will be exciting.However, the weather in Britain is changeable, which will make our trip inconvenient. And it's expensive to travel to the UK, which costs 20000 yuan, But I still want to travel to England.I hope I will have a good time there!【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文。

九年级下册英语书面表达解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·西安市铁一中学中考模拟）由于父母的溺爱，现在许多孩子基本不做学习以外的事情，导致独立生活能力不强。

请你根据以下建议；自己的事情自己做；家里得事情帮着做；学校的事情抢着做，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立能力。

要求；1.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范2. 字数70 字左右（短文的开头已经给出，不计入总字数）As middle school students, it's very important for us to independent. What should we do to makeusindependent?___________________________________________________________________【答案】As middle school students, it's very important for us to independent. What should we do to make us independent?First, let's begin with our own things. It’s our job to clean our own rooms and make our beds. Second, help with housework. We can help cook or clean the house in our free time. Doing housework teaches us how to look after ourselves. Third, learn actively. We should learn by ourselves and finish our homework on time. Finally, think about things by ourselves. We sometimes need to make plans or decisions alone. Don’t always depend on others.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈作为中学生，我们应该如何培养自己的独立能力。

(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达技巧和方法完整版及练习题及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·山东中考模拟）写作现在，戴眼镜的学生越来越多，为此，国家把每年 6 月 6 日定为爱眼日。

请你结合自己的体会，就如何爱护眼睛，给校报英语栏目写一篇短文。

提示：1．吃有益于眼睛的食物，如胡萝卜、鸡蛋等；2．多做眼保健操，长时间用眼后可看看远方；3．养成良好的用眼习惯，如：不躺着玩手机或看书等。

要求：1．根据内容，可适当发挥；2．文中不能出现真实的人名和校名；3．词数90左右。

（开头已给出，不计入总词数）Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. ____________________________________________【答案】Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day is set on June 6th every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try our best to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.First, eat some foods that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eye exercises to make them relax. Also, it's helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good habit. Don't read books or use a cell phone in bed.In a word, eyes are so important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，写作前要认真阅读前面的提示，确定文章的中心。

(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题含解析

（英语）九年级下册英语书面表达解题技巧及练习题含解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达假如你是九年级学生李华，你的美国笔友Billy发来邮件询问你平时锻炼的情况。

请你根据以下信息，给Billy回封电子邮件，并建议他每周都要花些时间锻炼身体。

写作要点：1. 你最近正忙于为即将到来的体育测试（physical test）做准备。

2. 介绍你平时锻炼的情况：（1）每天锻炼的时间：不到一个半小时。

（2）偶尔不锻炼的原因：作业多，没时间。

（3）擅长的体育运动：球类运动。

3. 谈谈锻炼给你带来了哪些好处。

写作要求：1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。

2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。

3. 字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰。

4. 至少80词。

【英语】九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编答题技巧及练习题(含答案)含解析

【英语】九年级下册英语英语书面表达汇编答题技巧及练习题(含答案)含解析一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·黑龙江中考模拟）（B）图示作文：根据图画内容，展开想象，写一篇小短文。

小安是一名初三的学生，运动让他的生活发生了巨大的变化。

请根据所给图画，展开适当的联想，完成下面的短文。

要求：（1）话题作文或图示作文任选其一。

（2）词数在80〜100词之间。

（3）要求字迹工整，语法正确，意思连贯，合乎逻辑，可适当发挥。

【答案】Sport makes a differenceXiao An is a Grade 9 student. He used to be very weak and had to take a lot of medicine. He wanted to be as healthy as his classmates, so he decided to do sports.He joined Zhao Yang Football club and practiced hard there. Because of football, his life has changed a lot. He finds himself much healthier than before. Now, he has grown into a tall and strong guy. What’s more, he is very good at playing football. Last month, he took part in School Football Match and won the Best Player Award.Xiao An needn’t take a lot of medicine any more. Sport makes a great difference to his life.【解析】【详解】本文属于图画作文，表达运动让小安的生活发生了巨大的变化。

【英语】九年级下册英语书面表达解题技巧分析及练习题(含答案)含解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·河北中考模拟）为了让同学们认识到安全的重要性，网上进行了一项安全问题调查。

以下是100名学生伤亡的原因，请根据表格内容用英语写篇调查报告，就中学生应当如何做好自我保护这一问题谈谈你的看法。

要求：80词左右。

题目自拟，文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________【答案】A Report on Children’s I njury and DeathRecently we did a survey among 100 students. They were injured or dead. The reasons are different. Here’s the result of our survey.Car accidents are the most dangerous. About 63 students were injured or died in the streets or on roads. And 18 students lost their lives in rivers or lakes while they were swimming without adults. 10 students were hurt because they had the unhealthy snacks at the little food stalls. 9 of them were injured in the school yard while playing or exercising.So we must pay more attention to road safety in daily life. Many rules should be made to reduce this kind of accidents. In one word, safety is a big problem. All of us should look out.After all, life is not a small matter.【解析】【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。

九年级下册英语书面表达的技巧及练习题及练习题(含答案)含解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·福建中考模拟）亲爱的初三同学，考试来临，毕业在即，你遇到了人生路上的转折点，你的生活、学习平添了一些烦恼和压力。

当前正确面对烦恼，有效缓解心理压力非常重要。

请以＂How to solve our stress＂为题写一篇90词左右的短文，谈谈你在生活、学习方面的烦恼和压力，以及要如何面对困难，解决问题的方法。

开头已给出，不计入总词数。

要求：内容完整；书写规范；语法准确；语句通顺连贯。

参考词：stress（压力），nervous，sleep，time，healthy，smile，sports，helpHow to solve our stressThe entrance examination is coming. We will graduate soon. We all have some problems and stress in our lives thesedays.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________【答案】How to solve our stress?The entrance examination is coming .We will graduate soon . We all have some problems and stress in our lives these days. How should we solve them?First, we should take an active part in exercise. Sports can help us to have a healthier body and study better. Second, we need to talk with our teachers, parents and friends. Let them know our trouble. They may give us some useful advice. Third, we can also listen to music and read books. They are good ways to relax ourselves. Fourth, we should try our best to study hard 。

九年级下册英语书面表达技巧小结及练习题(1)

一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·福建中考模拟）书面表达91. 年3月9日，福建省教育厅在其网站发布《关于推迟中小学早上上学改革的相关举措征求意见》，向公众征求意见和建议。

你所在的学校就此进行了网上问卷调查，其中有92%的同学表示赞成，请根据下图提示，写一篇80字左右的短文，阐述你赞成的理由。

参考词汇：delay v.延迟要求：1. 必须包含所有提示信息，开头已给次，不计入总词数；2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范 3. 请勿在文中出现真实的信息。

Delay starting time for schoolOur school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here aer my reasons.【答案】Our school had a survey about delaying school starting time online. I agreed that students should go to school a little late. Here are my reasons.First of all, delaying starting time at school makes sure that we can have enough sleep for a day. A good sleep will make us more active in class so that we study more efficiently. Secondly, it also offers us more time to have breakfast. Breakfast provides energy for the whole morning. No breakfast will do harm to our health and our study. What’s more, we don’t have to go to school in such a hurry, and we can also do some exercise to keep fit.All in all, delaying school starting time does good to students, We are looking forward to it.【解析】这是一篇图表，要求阐述自己赞成推迟中小学早上上学的理由。

【英语】九年级下册英语书面表达技巧小结及练习题含解析

【英语】九年级下册英语书面表达技巧小结及练习题含解析一、英语书面表达1．书面表达难忘的初中生活即将结束。

你们班计划举行“告别初中生活”的主题班会。

假如你是班长，根据以下提示，用英语写一则通知。

要点如下：1. 时间：6月26日下午3:00.2. 地点:六楼会议室3. 活动内容：1）对老师用话语表达谢意；2）与同学交流自己的将来的梦想；3）师生合影，互赠留言等等。

参考词汇：look back at , say goodbye to, express thanks to , talk about, take photos..备注：词数100左右，通知开头已拟好，不计入总数。

Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end._______________________【答案】Boys and girls,The wonderful middle school life will go to the end. In the past three years, we have studied and stayed together. Looking back at the days we spend together, how sweet we feel. In order to keep the happy times in our hearts for ever, we are going to have a class meeting on the afternoon of June 26 next week. The theme of the class meeting is saying goodbye to our middle school life. It will be held in Conference Room on the Sixth Floor.We are going to have some meaningful activities. To express thanks to our teachers, we each should say a thankful word to our dear teachers. We can chat freely with our classmates and teachers about our plans of the summer vacation. We can even talk about the dreams of our future. Then, we are going to take some photos with our teachers and classmates. In the end, we may give our wishes to each other.Don't be late! That's all. Thank you!【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如In order to，look back at，be going to，have a class meeting，say goodbye to，talk about，the dreams of，take some photos，in the end，each other，be late等。

九年级下册英语书面表达解题技巧(超强)及练习题(含答案)及解析

九年级下册英语书面表达解题技巧(超强)及练习题(含答案)及解析一、英语书面表达1．亲爱的同学们，初中生活即将结束，你们一定有很多的感触.假如你是Tony,名城中学九（1）班的学生。

请以 My junior high school life为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。

提示：1.个人基本情况介绍2.校园（校园干净而美丽，活动非富多彩）；老师（传授知识，教会做人,经常鼓励）；同学（和睦相处，互相学习，共同进步）。

3.对学校、老师、同学表达感谢和祝福。

要求：1. 文章包含以上提示内容，适当发挥。

2.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。

【答案】My junior high school lifeMy name is Tony. I am studying in Grade 9.As time goes by, my colorful junior middle school life is coming to an end. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.Our campus is clean and beautiful, and there are all kinds of activities. Our teachers teach us rich knowledge and how to behave ourselves. They also encourage us to work hard. We all get on well with our classmates. Besides, we learn from each other and make progress together.I thanks for my school, my teachers and my classmates. Wish them better.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我的初中生活。

九年级下册英语书面表达技巧小结及练习题及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·江苏中考模拟）书面表达学校英语社团正在举办英语征文比赛，请你根据下表所列的内容要点，用英语以“Learn to Smile”为题写一篇短文，参加比赛。

注意：1．短文须包括所有内容要点，不要逐句翻译；2．表格中省略部分须用2至3句话作适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3．词数90左右。

短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；4．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude （态度） to life．_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Learn to SmileSmile is an attitude to life．In our life, there may be something unpleasant．For example, we may fail in an exam or we may be laughed at for some reason．These unpleasant things may make us feel bad．Why not learn to smile? Smiling to ourselves can cheer us up and bring back our confidence．It can also make us forget our worries．We should also learn to smile to others．It will help us to get closer to each other and bring us friendship．So, smile is a language that everyone can easily understand．【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。

(英语)九年级下册英语书面表达的基本方法技巧及练习题及练习题(含答案)含解析

（英语）九年级下册英语书面表达的基本方法技巧及练习题及练习题(含答案)含解析一、英语书面表达1．如今，很多城市出现了一种绿色出行方式――共享单车（bike-sharing），它因环保、便捷而备受青睐，但同时也引发了一些问题。

请你根据提示以＂Bike-sharing＂为题写一篇英语短文，表达自己的看法和建议。

要点提示：注意：1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名；3. 词数：80-100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Bike-sharingToday, as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities._______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________【答案】Today,as a greener means of transportation, bike-sharing is becoming more and more popular in many cities. It's known that it has many advantages. So it's enjoyed by lots of people. First of all, it's very convenient for people to go somewhere.【高分句型一】Also, it helps to reduce the traffic pressure. There will be less pollution because of bike-sharing. Besides, bike-sharing helps people take more exercise.In this way, it's helpful to people's health.（优势）However, it also brings some problems. For example, some people throw them away after using bikes. Even some people damage them, and some bikes are stolen.（难题）In my opinion, everyone should try to be civilized and follow the rules of using bikes. As long as we take good care of bikes, it will make our life better and better,and our environment will be more beautiful.【高分句型二】（建议）【解析】【详解】这篇短文内容丰富，表达了所有要点，语言表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。

【英语】九年级下册英语书面表达解题技巧及经典题型及练习题(含答案)及解析

一、中考英语书面表达汇编1．（·河南中考模拟）书面表达每个人都有自己心爱的物品，相信你也拥有一个自己心爱的物品吧！请以“A（n） _____ I have”为题，描述一个或一件你心爱的物品，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。

要求：1. 请在题目空白处填上你心爱物品的名字；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;3. 语言表达准确，短文连贯通顺，80词左右。

A（n） _________ I have_______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________【答案】A（n） toy gun I haveEveryone has an object that she/ he like best. So do I.In my drawer, there is a toy gun wrapped by yellow cloth. It’s a black toy gun and it can shot some small plastic pills for ten meters. When I was young, I played with other kids with my toy gun. They all admired me and put me in the place of leader. I was so happy then.When I was a little boy, I liked watching the war movies best. I was eager to have my own toy gun. One day, it was my birthday. I asked for it when my father came back. My family was poor then and my father didn’t promise me. From then, father worked harder and came back more lately. A week later, father put a box to me. A black toy gun in it! I was moved with tears. In order to get it, father worked late and hurt himself. He died a month later.Now I hope I can be a soldier and own a real gun to protect my country and family. I will remember my father’s love forever. Every time I miss him, I’ll take out the toy gun and say “Thank you, my dear father!【解析】写作分析：这篇作文需要就自己最喜欢的物品展开描述，要求是进行描述，并谈谈你是如何得到它的，以及它存在的意义。