鹤壁市综合高中高考英语作文复习专题

河南省鹤壁市综合高中2013年高考英语作文复习专题9对比类写作一般有两种方式：一是集中比较或对比（集中说明一个对象的诸种特征）；二是逐点比较或对比（一条一条地说明两者的异同）。

对比类写作可以大致分为以下几种：一、今昔对比在作今昔对比时，要注意时态的变化。

谈到过去的情况要用过去时态（主要是一般过去时），谈到现在的情况要用现在时态（主要是一般现在时）。

今昔对比的写作格式是：开头（提出什么事情发生了变化）→对具体事例作对比→结论。

写作方式既可采用集中比较，也可采用逐点比较。

在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：1. 开头常用句型(1) Great changes have taken place. 发生了巨大变化。

Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five years.Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.(2) T hings have begun to improve since…自从……以来，事情有了好转/改善。

Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.2. 对比常用句型(1) …used to…, but now…过去常……，但是现在……(2) …in the past, but now…在过去……，但是现在……(3) once…, but now…曾经…….，但是现在……(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了。

(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了。

Where the playground used to be now stands another new building---our library.I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. Now I have more free time.My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home.Once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV.When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment.在作对比时，为避免句型重复，可适当变换一些句式，比如：(1) Another change is…再有一个变化是……Another big change is in the housing conditions.(2) What’s more, …还有……What's more, I can go to bed earlier than in the past.3. 结尾常用句型In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience.2004年北京春季高考题范文Changes In Our LifeOver the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life(主题句). Take my family for example(过渡句). My parents contacted others mainly by sending them letters in the past, but now we call long distance at home(对比一). And once my parents listened to the radio for news and other information, but now we watch the news and other programs on TV(对比二). Another big change is in the housing conditions(过渡句). When they got married about twenty years ago, my parents lived in a small room crowded with furniture, but now we have moved into a big new three-room apartment(对比三). In short, changes in our life in the past twenty years have brought us comfort and convenience(总结句).在写这类文章时，首先要写好主题句。

同学们在审题时要把握全局，把全文要说明的主题在第一句交待清楚。

然后根据所给材料，展开今昔对比。

对比时不要单调地使用同一句型，要稍有变化，并中间要有恰当的过渡句。

最后写好总结句，即你对这种现象做出自己的理解或判断。

Passage 21云南省祥云一中2010届高三第二次月考）假如你是李华，目睹了近年来你所在城市的变化。

你写了一篇有关城市变化及所带来的思考的短文寄给某英语报社。

短文包括城市的变化，并表达你的感受和建议：在建设和发展的同时，还应加强文物和古迹保护，以传承文化。

几年前满街小商铺，小卖摊点，拥挤，垃圾现在街道宽敞，沿街种植了绿树和鲜花，新建了公园和高楼注意：1. 词数：100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3. 参考词汇：摊点：stalls 历史文物historical relics练后总结：3)典型错句：4)相关词汇：5)参考范文：Our city has changed greatly over the last few years. Streets used to be narrow, with old buildings and stalls crowded together, and litter everywhere. Nowadays the streets are wider, cleaner and there are trees and flowers growing along the sidewalks. However, in creating a more modern city some tradition has been lost. Some of the historical buildings have been torn down and high rise buildings and parks have been built in their place. The ancient culture has disappeared, and our city has become the same as all other cities: modern, clean but without its own special character. Are all changes good changes? I think we should do something to protect our historical relics at the same time.Passage 22009年江西师大附中、鹰潭一中、宜春中学、临川一中、南昌三中五校联考) 以下是某英文报联合你校对你市（Kangming City）1998年到2008年家庭消费变化的图表，请据此写一篇短文，做一文字说明。

文章的开头已经给出。

词数110左右。

图表 1 图表 2The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008.练后总结：1．典型错句：2．相关词汇：3．参考范文：The average family income in our Kangming City increased from 8,000 yuan per year in 1998 to 20,000 yuan in 2008. In the meantime, the structure of the average family expenses has changed, too. These graphs show the change clearly.The biggest part of the average family expenses is housing. In 1998, the average family spent 25 percent of its income on housing. In 2880, expenses on housing rose to 42 percent. Food and drink are the second biggest part of the average family expenses. In 1998, about 18% of the average income was spent on this item. In 2008, the figure grew to 30%. As a result of such increase in the expenses on housing and food, expenses on other ite ms have been reduced from 57% in 1998 to 28%in 2008.Thus, a conclusion can be drawn that as income increases, people can improve their living step. But still the average family has to spend a large part of income to meet the basic needs.二、正反观点对比对同一件事情，人们常有不同的看法，即正反两种观点。