英语写作常见错误分析

写作常见错误分析一、语法错误（一）句子结构错误1．主从句叠置1)There are more and more students like to use thecomputer.2)There are still many problems should be notedand resolved.2．简单句叠置I like chatting on line very much, I go to the net bar almost every weekend.3．从句叠置As is known to all that computers play an important role in many fields of our life.4．句子成分缺失If work hard, we will surely be successful.5．语序错误1)Why college students spend more and more timeon the computer?2)I often wonder where have they got their money.（二）动词错误1．时态错误Many people thought that the Internet will be more useful in the future.2．语态错误1)I have excited several days at the news that youwill come here.2)Most of the students satisfy with the service inthe dining hall.3)satisfy3．单复数错误1)Wise man seek opportunities rather than wait forthem.2)Someone are afraid that computer may controlmen in the future.4．非谓语动词错误1)Let me to represent everyone to say“hello” to you.2)On behalf of3)Do exercise in the morning is good forone’s health.4)Having studied in our school for 3 years,the canteen service has changed a lot.（三）代词错误1)We can use computers in doing everything youlike.2)A college student should be able to do theirwashing on their own.（四）冠词错误1)Horse is a useful animal.2)The exam will be held in the December, 2004.（五）词性错误1)I wish you can consider my suggests.2)If a person wants to success, he must learn toendure sufferings and setbacks.二、用词错误1)Students must know how to apply a computer.2)People can touch many new things on theInternet.3)The purpose of this letter is to react someopinions on the service in the dining hall. ReflectReact…to三、表达习惯错误1)Why generated so large a change?2)Now 6000 yuan can buy a P4 computer.3)A room often lives 6-8 students.accomodates4)I think this great change has three reasons.5)The prices of the food are too expensive.6)The reason for this is because some people wantto earn plenty of money without working hard.四、标点符号及大小写错误1)However, every coin has two sides, I think thesurroundings in our canteen are the best amongall universities.2)The man was racing down the street. Because hewas late for the class.3)At last I want to let you know, I love ouruniversity very much.4)My favorite sports are swimming、jogging、mountaineering and playing table tennis.5)The best English film in my eyes is《ForrestGump》.写作步骤1.审题（现象的描述，导致的后果，原因的剖析，正反观点的表述和理由，自己的观点）2.列提纲3.正文六级写作题型分类1.对立观点式给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生支持一方并进行说明。

如：2000年6月Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? （校园）1998年6月Do “Lucky Numbers” really bring good luck? （社会生活）1995年1月Can Money Buy Happiness?（社会生活）2.支持观点式给出一个论点，此论点不包括两种事物的比较，要求考生支持(或者反对), 并结识具体的现象或者原因。

如：1997年1月Practice Makes Perfect（社会生活）1994年1月The World Is Getting Smaller and Smaller（社会生活）这种题目比前一种简单，主要是围绕题目进行具体的解释说明。

3.社会现象描述并评价一种社会现象，如：1997年6月Getting to Know the World Outside the Campus（校园）1996年1月The Two-day Weekend（社会生活）4.社会问题批判及解决方法指出一种社会问题，让考生分析现象、原因及解决方法。

如：1998年1月Harmfulness of Fake Commodities（社会生活）1996年6月Global Shortage of Fresh Water（社会生活）Certificate Craze On Campus1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热”2)产生这一现象的原因3)你的看法文章开头一、谚语式开头在文章的开头，通过引用谚语来烘托主题。

由于谚语一般已经被大家所接受，所以这种方法既可增强文章的可信度，也容易被读者所接受。

例如“The Value of Time”一文可这样开头：A proverb says “Time is money”．but I think time is even more precious than money．Why? Because when money is spent，we can earn it again．However，when time is gone，it will never return．That’s the very reason we must value our time．二、介绍不同观点式开头文章先提出一部分人的观点，然后再提出另一部分人的观点，以此引入下文。

例如“Public Transport”一文可这样开头：Some people suggest that in China we should give priority to the development of private cars，but others argue that public transport shouldbe put in the first place．三、提问式开头通过提出一个或一连串的问题来引出要讨论的问题，这样可以激发读者的兴趣。

例如“Should Women Stay at Home or Go Out to Work?”一文可这样开头：Should women stay at home or go out to work? This is a controversial topic for decades，if not hundreds of years．I hold the view that women should go out to work as men do．The reasons are as follows．【请你试写】“Should Men and Women Be Equal?”一文的开头。

四、介绍当前形势式开头文章先指出目前出现的一种普遍现象，以此吸引读者的注意力。

这种方法多用于议论文或说明文。

例如“Hunting for a Job on Internet”一文的开头可为：Nowadays there’s a completely new way of finding a job for jobless people and laid—of workers．Instead of hunting for a job in the ads ofnewspapers or in a job market，a job seeker can look for a job on Internet．In fact，the ads success rate is very high，many people prefer to the new Ways．【请你试写】“Internet”一文的开头。

五、开门见山式开头文章开篇入题，一步到位。

这种方法比较适用于议论文的写作，便于抓住主题，避免离题。

例如“Advantages and Disadvantages of the Cell Phone”一文的开头可为：Nowadays，with the rapid development of IT and information industry，cell phones play a dominant role in people’s life．But，like everything else, they have both favorable and unfavorable aspects．六、下定义式开头通过对文章要讨论的问题，尤其是人们不太熟悉的主题进行释义来引出论题。