读后续写考场高分句型

读后续写高分句型

1.Doing..., 主+谓...

After/before doing, 主谓

While/when doing, 主谓

Done...,主+谓..

doing作状语，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主动关系；有时可以在doing前加before, after, while等; 但如果是被动关系，应该使用过去分词done作状语。例如：

例子：Pointing to a spot on her dress, she said, "Right here is where my mommy kissed my dress.

例子：Realizing the facts that I couldn't afford my further studies, I had to stop chasing my dream.

翻译一：跪下来，她轻轻地将女孩抱在怀中。

例子：When feeling hungry, I just drank water to fill my stomach.

翻译二：当

5) After knowing I had a good command of English, he offered me a

typing job, promised to teach me computer and provided accommodation.

6)Slowly turning the pages, I suddenly saw a picture of my beautiful daughter Beth, which instantly grabbed my heart and transported me back in time.

Kneeling down, she gently held the girl in her arms.

2. 主+谓..., doing...

doing作伴随状语，与句子的谓语动词同时发生，逻辑主语与句子的主语一致，构成主动关系；该句型可以以并列谓语的形式出现，转化为：主+谓...and 谓...; 但如果是被动关系，应该使用过去分词done作伴随状语。例如：

1) My mother, two brothers and I spent nearly every night riding around the city in our white Ford, singing every song we could think of.

2) I didn't move but instead stared blankly into my pillow, refusing to acknowledge(理会) her presence.

3) I gazed down at the street, holding out(抱有，抱着) hope that my mother would carry with a tin of her famous cookies.

4) Mom always encouraged me to take education seriously, saying it was the only way we could break away from the present situation.

5) The woman gathered her belongings and headed to the gate quickly, refusing to look back at the rude man.

6) She was getting angrier as the minutes went by, thinking, "How annoying!"

7) He sat with his head in his hands, not believing what I was proposing(建议).

8) I stood there, wondering how many times I had reacted to strangers like the young mother.

3. 主+谓1..., 谓2..., and 谓3....

描述一系列的动作。如果是两个动作，可以用这样的结构：主+谓...and(then) 谓...。例如：

1) The girl stopped crying, stepped back from the woman and began to sing.

2) She boarded the plane, sank in her seat, and looked for her book.

3) The woman grabbed the last cookie from him, glared at him and thought, "Oh, brother. How rude!"

情感类的形容词在句中作状语，说明主语的状态，可以转化为Feeling adj, 主+谓...。有时可以放在句后：主+谓...，表情感类的形容词。例如：

room and softly closed the door.

(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para1: But no more

night. （现在分词+情绪形容词）

(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录) Para 2: It was

continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.（现在分词+状态形容词）

1) I rolled over and faced her, ready to let her see the anger and disappointment in my eyes.

2) I stood in the living room doorway, absolutely shocked.

3) Curious to know what was inside, he tiptoed into the dark cave.

4）Unable to say a word, he was rooted to the spot.

(2016.10浙江高考读后续写范文摘录)Para 1:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Desperate and hopeless,Jane knelt down, tears streaming down her face.（并列情绪