2016年全国高考英语应用文写作训练——道歉信 (共26张PPT)
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道歉信--高三英语复习之应用文写作 PPT课件 图文
• I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.
5. I am indeed very sorry that I missed the…. I feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.
• I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.
10. Thank you for being patient with us.
11. In order to avoid … happening again, I have …
Part 4 常用模板
模板1：过去没有完成的事情
• I am writing this letter to apologize to
道歉信
— 技法点拨
什么是道歉信？
❀ 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事， 给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要 立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。 道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率， 诚恳。
❀ 道歉信通常包括三部分内容： 1、表示歉意，道歉的原由； 2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施； 3、请求原谅。 ❀ 语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。
3. I am sorry for any convenience caused.
5. I am indeed very sorry that I missed the…. I feel awful about it and want you to know what happened that day.
• I suddenly fell sick early that morning and my parents had to send me to the hospital.
10. Thank you for being patient with us.
11. In order to avoid … happening again, I have …
Part 4 常用模板
模板1：过去没有完成的事情
• I am writing this letter to apologize to
道歉信
— 技法点拨
什么是道歉信？
❀ 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事， 给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后要 立即写信给对方赔礼道歉时写的信件。 道歉是一种礼貌，道歉信要写得坦率， 诚恳。
❀ 道歉信通常包括三部分内容： 1、表示歉意，道歉的原由； 2、出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施； 3、请求原谅。 ❀ 语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实。
3. I am sorry for any convenience caused.
高考英语应用文练习之 道歉信课件(共14张)
请原谅我不能去。(信最后再次道歉) Please forgive me for my not being able to come. 期待你的回复。 I’m looking forward to your reply.
• Dear Mr. Smith,
•
I’m terribly sorry that I can’t go to your
你和朋友周凯约好周日下午去打篮球但是你的舅舅要从北京回来到你家过年你不能去了请用英语发邮件告诉你的朋友
假如你是李华。 你和外教史密斯先生约好周 末去他家帮他女儿Mary 学汉语。但是你需要 照顾生病的外公不能赴约。请你根据以下提 示用英语给他写一封电子邮件。
内容包括：
1. 说明情况 2. 表示歉意 3. 另约时间 注意： 1. 词数100左右
home to help Mary with her Chinese this
weekend, because my grandfather is ill and I’ll
have to look after him. （说明情况，表示歉意）
• Can I suggest that we put it off until next
I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing. Wish you have a good time this weekend.
writing to tell you the reason for it.
高考英语作文道歉信 ppt课件(推荐)
Skill 2 for High Marks:
advanced words, expressions and sentences
高级词汇, 短语,句子和不同语法结构
1.I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have
caused.
定语从句
2.The reason is that I caught a bad cold last week and
I was too weak to go to school. 表语从句
3.I wonder if I could hand it in next week . I sincerely hope you can forgive me and accept my apology. 宾语从句
句式升级
The reason why I can’t keep my word is that I will have to attend an important class meeting on Friday afternoon. That is quite beyond my expectation.
或：我的表哥李明告诉我他将在本周五下午归来。他是去 年出国深造的(further education)。他让我和他父母 一起去机场接他。你知道，我们已经大约一年没见了 。所以我真的不能拒绝他。
第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释
我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一个重
要的班会(a class meeting) 。那是我没有预料到的
3. It is mainly because I caught a bad cold last week, which is quite out of my expectation.
高三英语复习 作文案例1：道歉信 课件(共20张PPT)
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【2016新课标全国卷III】 假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书 店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包 括：1.表示歉意输；入文字输入文字 注输标意入题23：..说另1．明约词原时数因 间1输输输； 。0入入入0文文文左字字字输输输右入入入；文文文字字字
I would like to express my deepest apology for not being able
to attend it owing to the English Speaking Contest which is
already on the school schedule .I’m deeply sorry for the
just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that
afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much
2016年全国高考英语应用文写作训练——道歉信 (共26张PPT)
【模拟真题1：道歉不能赴约】
作文原题 假设你是李华，前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你 本答应要参加她的生日聚会，但你当时正忙着准备期末考 试，忘了赴约。请写封信向 Anne 表达你的歉意，说明原 因，并提出补救的方法。
作文翻译
亲爱的Anne， 我十分抱歉我未能参加你前天的生日派对。 你邀请我去生日派对真是太有心了。我理应来与你庆祝这珍贵 的时刻。但是期末考试就在眼前，所以我忙于准备考试，以致我忘 记了约会。我希望你能理解我的情况并原谅我。有没有可能我和你 在考试后进行一次私人的见面？ 我十分遗憾错过了相聚的机会。请再次接受我真诚的道歉。 你真诚的， 李华
满分佳作（二） Dear Tom, ①How is everything going? ②I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days. Now, I am writing to tell you my plans for the summer vacation. ③To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. ④In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots in order to enjoy some appealing scenery. What is more, I will do some voluntary work to enrich my life. ⑤I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? Yours sincerely, Li Hua
高中英语作文---道歉信 精品优选公开课件
3. 对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但 请相信，我并非故意要…… 3. I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but please believe I had no intention to… 4. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我 考虑，并接受我的道歉。 4. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my apology
thing will never happen again.
诵读经典范文
Dear Sir/Madam, I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the
will never happen again.
习作修改(做短文改错) Dear Sir/Madam,
I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrow from your library last week.
borrowed
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7. 赔偿；偿还
高考英语作文道歉信 ppt课件(完美版)
I am writing to apologize to you for being unable to go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have caused.
(beyond one’s expectation)。我是我们班的班长，所
以我不能错过这个班会。
The reason why I can’t keep my word is that I will have to attend an important class meeting on Friday afternoon. That is quite beyond my expectation. I am monitor of our class, so I can’t missess your apology
1. I am writing to apologize to you for not handing in my homework on time.
2. I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have caused.
3. It is mainly because I caught a bad cold last week, which is quite out of my expectation.
第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释 我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一 个重要的班会，那是我没有预料到的(beyond one’s expectation)。我是我们班的班长，所以我 不能错过这个班会。
(beyond one’s expectation)。我是我们班的班长，所
以我不能错过这个班会。
The reason why I can’t keep my word is that I will have to attend an important class meeting on Friday afternoon. That is quite beyond my expectation. I am monitor of our class, so I can’t missess your apology
1. I am writing to apologize to you for not handing in my homework on time.
2. I feel really sorry for the trouble that I may have caused.
3. It is mainly because I caught a bad cold last week, which is quite out of my expectation.
第二段：说明道歉原因，对失误进行解释 我不能信守承诺的原因是周五下午我不得不参加一 个重要的班会，那是我没有预料到的(beyond one’s expectation)。我是我们班的班长，所以我 不能错过这个班会。
高三英语复习 作文案例1：道歉信 教学课件(共20张PPT)【精美版】PPT文档共23页
25、学习是劳动，是充满思想的劳动不 容忽视 的。— —爱献 生
21、要知道对好事的称颂过于夸大，也会招来人们的反感轻蔑和嫉妒。——培根 22、业精于勤，荒于嬉；行成于思，毁于随。——韩愈
23、一切节省，归根到底都归结为时间的节省。——马克思 24、意志命运往往背道而驰，决心到最后会全部推倒。——莎士比亚
高三英语复习 作文案例1：道歉信 教 学课件(共20张PPT)【精美版】
36、如果我们国家的法律中只有某种 神灵， 而不是 殚精竭 虑将神 灵揉进 宪法， 总体上 来说， 法律就 会更好 。—— 马克·吐 温 37、纲纪废弃之日，便是暴政兴起之 时。— —威·皮 物特
38、若是没有公众舆论的支持，法律 是丝毫 没有力 量的。 ——菲 力普斯 39、一个判例造出另一个判例，它们 迅速累 聚，进 而变成 法律。 ——朱 尼厄斯
21、要知道对好事的称颂过于夸大，也会招来人们的反感轻蔑和嫉妒。——培根 22、业精于勤，荒于嬉；行成于思，毁于随。——韩愈
23、一切节省，归根到底都归结为时间的节省。——马克思 24、意志命运往往背道而驰，决心到最后会全部推倒。——莎士比亚
高三英语复习 作文案例1：道歉信 教 学课件(共20张PPT)【精美版】
36、如果我们国家的法律中只有某种 神灵， 而不是 殚精竭 虑将神 灵揉进 宪法， 总体上 来说， 法律就 会更好 。—— 马克·吐 温 37、纲纪废弃之日，便是暴政兴起之 时。— —威·皮 物特
38、若是没有公众舆论的支持，法律 是丝毫 没有力 量的。 ——菲 力普斯 39、一个判例造出另一个判例，它们 迅速累 聚，进 而变成 法律。 ——朱 尼厄斯
高中英语书面表达之道歉信 PPT课件 图文
Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.
6. 错过了...的机会，我感到非常遗憾。 I am terribly sorry for missing the chance of...
我写信是向你表示抱歉,因为我错过了参加你毕业典礼的机会 I am writing to express my sincere apology for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.
书面表达
假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点 去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语的建议。 但由于一些原因不能赴约，特写信表示歉意， 并希望另约时间。内容如下：
（1）.表达未能赴约的歉意 （2）.未能赴约的原因 （3）.希望另约时间 要求：100字左右
开头已给出，不计总数
审题
1. 文体： 电子邮件 2. 写作对象：外教Smith 4. 时态： 现在时&过去式 5. 写作要点：三大要点按照顺序写；开头部分
写作"三步曲"
• 表示歉意 • 说明具体原因、提出补救 办法 • 再次致歉，希望得到理解。
书面表达
假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点 去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语的建议。 但由于一些原因不能赴约，特写信表示歉意， 并希望另约时间。内容如下：
（1）.表达未能赴约的歉意 （2）.未能赴约的原因 （3）.希望另约时间 要求：100字左右
3. 对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但 请相信，我并非故意要……
3. I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but please believe I had no intention to…
6. 错过了...的机会，我感到非常遗憾。 I am terribly sorry for missing the chance of...
我写信是向你表示抱歉,因为我错过了参加你毕业典礼的机会 I am writing to express my sincere apology for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.
书面表达
假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点 去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语的建议。 但由于一些原因不能赴约，特写信表示歉意， 并希望另约时间。内容如下：
（1）.表达未能赴约的歉意 （2）.未能赴约的原因 （3）.希望另约时间 要求：100字左右
开头已给出，不计总数
审题
1. 文体： 电子邮件 2. 写作对象：外教Smith 4. 时态： 现在时&过去式 5. 写作要点：三大要点按照顺序写；开头部分
写作"三步曲"
• 表示歉意 • 说明具体原因、提出补救 办法 • 再次致歉，希望得到理解。
书面表达
假如你是李华，你和Smith先生约定昨天下午三点 去他办公室，听他给你关于学习英语的建议。 但由于一些原因不能赴约，特写信表示歉意， 并希望另约时间。内容如下：
（1）.表达未能赴约的歉意 （2）.未能赴约的原因 （3）.希望另约时间 要求：100字左右
3. 对于我说的话/做的事，我确实感到很抱歉。但 请相信，我并非故意要……
3. I am indeed very sorry for what I said/did, but please believe I had no intention to…
高考英语-书信类写作-道歉信-教师备课PPT
结尾 1. 渴望谅解 2. 再次道歉
渴望谅解 我希望你能接受我的道歉并且理解我。 I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand it.
再次道歉 再一次，为给你带来的不便道歉。 Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
道歉信
道歉信 开头：说明道歉事由；表明写信意图 正文：说明道歉原因；提出补救措施 结尾：渴望谅解；再次道歉
示例范文： 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你和在上海 上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游， 但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语 给他写一封电子邮件： 1. 表示歉意； 2. 解释原因； 3. 另约时间。
结尾 I sincerely hope you can accept my apology and understand it. Once again, I’m sorry for any inconvenience caused.
全文 I am sorry to tell you that I can’t go to Beijing with you next
所以呢？
So I have to stay and be well prepared for it. So I have no alternative but to stay and be well prepared for it.
说明具体原因 Just now I was informed that I entered the final of the English speech contest which is going to be held next Saturday. So I have no alternative but to stay and be well prepared for it.
道歉信-2016全国卷21页PPT
谢谢！
36、自己的鞋子，自己知道紧在弱。——拉罗什福科
xiexie! 38、我这个人走得很慢，但是我从不后退。——亚伯拉罕·林肯
39、勿问成功的秘诀为何，且尽全力做你应该做的事吧。——美华纳
40、学而不思则罔，思而不学则殆。——孔子
道歉信-2016全国卷
11、用道德的示范来造就一个人，显然比用法律来约束他更有价值。—— 希腊
12、法律是无私的，对谁都一视同仁。在每件事上，她都不徇私情。—— 托马斯
13、公正的法律限制不了好的自由，因为好人不会去做法律不允许的事 情。——弗劳德
14、法律是为了保护无辜而制定的。——爱略特 15、像房子一样，法律和法律都是相互依存的。——伯克
超实用高考英语二轮复习应用文：道歉信课件
you. ④ We look forward to continuing to serve you. ⑤ We owe you an apology.
道歉信的写作模板
Dear______, ① Thank you for your letter of _______ （收信日期）. I’m writing to tell you that I cannot _____ （道歉的原因）I am feeling terribly sorry for______. ② Here is the reason why I can’t _______. （过失的原因）Since ______ (具 体某件事)is around the corner, I decide to do______ . I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. ③ What about doing _____? (提出弥补方法) If you are free, we will have a wonderful time together. It’s much to my regret that I missed the chance of ______.
6. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened. 为此我感到非常内疚，所以想告诉你实情。
7. I fear you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I hope you will forgive me. 恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴，但是希望你能原谅我。
After learning this lesson, you will
道歉信的写作模板
Dear______, ① Thank you for your letter of _______ （收信日期）. I’m writing to tell you that I cannot _____ （道歉的原因）I am feeling terribly sorry for______. ② Here is the reason why I can’t _______. （过失的原因）Since ______ (具 体某件事)is around the corner, I decide to do______ . I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. ③ What about doing _____? (提出弥补方法) If you are free, we will have a wonderful time together. It’s much to my regret that I missed the chance of ______.
6. I feel awfully sorry about it and want you to know what happened. 为此我感到非常内疚，所以想告诉你实情。
7. I fear you are displeased at my failing to keep my promise, but I hope you will forgive me. 恐怕你会因为我的失约而不高兴，但是希望你能原谅我。
After learning this lesson, you will
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1. I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email in time. 十分抱歉我 不能及时回复您的邮件。 2. I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. 我十分抱歉没有及时回信。 3. I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. 我再次为我的错误真诚 地道歉。 4. It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. 错 过了在一起的机会，我感到很遗憾。
全国高考英语二轮突破
celebrate the precious moment 庆祝这珍贵的时刻 the final examinations 期末考试 be around the corner 即将到来 appointment 约会 accept sb. sincere apology 接受某人真诚的道歉 a face-to-face talk 一次面谈 for my health’s sake 为了我的健康 keep to sb. word 遵守承诺 further one’s studies 进修；继续学习
8. I would like to buy a new copy of that book and post them to you. 8. them改为it
9. My mobile phone ran out of battery, because I didn’t get your text messages. 9. because改为so
满分赏析 ①第一句为朋友式的日常问候，符合朋友间书信的特点。 ②I feel terribly sorry for …用来引出道歉的内容，句型运用得当。 ③本段用了to start with, in addition, what’s more等连接词，使行文 连贯；not only…but also…也是必须学会运用的高级句型；broaden my horizons也体现了作者平时勤于积累，能给阅卷老师留下良好的 印象。 ④It is a fabulous choice to…(……是极佳的选择)一句是难得的高级表 达；appealing(吸引人的)一词也体现了语言能力。 ⑤最后一段，作者再次用I sincerely apologize again for表达了真诚的 道歉；并询问了对方的暑期计划，符合真实交际情境。
【模拟真题1：道歉不能赴约】
作文原题 假设你是李华，前天是你的外国朋友Anne的生日。你 本答应要参加她的生日聚会，但你当时正忙着准备期末考 试，忘了赴约。请写封信向 Anne 表达你的歉意，说明原 因，并提出补救的方法。
作文翻译
亲爱的Anne， 我十分抱歉我未能参加你前天的生日派对。 你邀请我去生日派对真是太有心了。我理应来与你庆祝这珍贵 的时刻。但是期末考试就在眼前，所以我忙于准备考试，以致我忘 记了约会。我希望你能理解我的情况并原谅我。有没有可能我和你 在考试后进行一次私人的见面？ 我十分遗憾错过了相聚的机会。请再次接受我真诚的道歉。 你真诚的， 李华
满分佳作（二） Dear Tom, ①How is everything going? ②I feel terribly sorry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. You know, I’ve been preparing for the final exams these days. Now, I am writing to tell you my plans for the summer vacation. ③To start with, doing a part-time job is my dream because not only can I earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. ④In addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots in order to enjoy some appealing scenery. What is more, I will do some voluntary work to enrich my life. ⑤I sincerely apologize again for my mistake. By the way, what’s your plan to spend your summer vacation? Yours sincerely, Li Hua
Dear Anne, I am indeed very sorry that I didn’t attend your birthday party the day before yesterday. It was nice of you to invite me to your birthday party. I should have come and celebrate the precious moment with you. But the final examinations are around the corner, so I was so busy preparing for the exams that I forgot the appointment. I hope you can understand my situation and forgive me. Is it possible for you and me to have a private meeting after the examinations? It is much to my regret that I missed the chance to get together. Once again, please accept my sincere apology. Yours truly, Li Hua
5. careless改为carelessness 6. Again, I do hope that you can understand my situation and accept my apologize.
6. apologize改为apology
7. I am really sorry, but I’ve lost the book that you lend me when I stayed with you in June. 7. lend改为lent
满分赏析
④运用了 where 引导的定语从句修饰地点，使句式避免简单化； places of interest(名胜古迹)也运用得当，考生需注意积累，否则只 能生造出中式英语。 ⑤运用了There is no doubt that…(……毫无疑问)这样的万能句型；be badly in need of help(急需帮助)这一短语也给评卷老师眼前一亮。 ⑥make a difference(起作用、产生不同)这一短语也是增分点。 本篇句句高级、词词地道，怎能不拿满分？
满分佳作（一）
Dear Tom, ①I’m terribly sorry I couldn’t reply to your email which you sent me a week ago immediately. ②I was so occupied with the final exams. As for the coming summer holiday, I will first do a part time job in a fast-food restaurant. ③Not only will I earn some money but I will also gain some social experience through it. ④And then I will go on a trip to Sichuan, where there are a great number oБайду номын сангаас places of interest. Finally, I’ll go to Ya’an to work as a volunteer. ⑤There is no doubt that children there are badly in need of help. ⑥I hope what I will do will make a great difference to them. Best wishes. Yours sincerely, Li Hua
3. terrible改为terribly
4. I very sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the book report you assigned last week. 4. very前面加am
5. Please forgive me for my careless and the inconvenience that I may have caused.
1. I am so sorry for my mistake and I am now writing to apology for my carelessness. 1. apology改为apologize 2. Much to my regret I was unable to keep my promise to attend your birthday party last Saturday so I had to stay at home to look after my sick mother. 2. so改为because 3. I feel terrible sorry for missing the chance of attending your graduation ceremony.