2018高考英语写作指导课课件(全国卷)-( PPT)

conference
5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. ( 使用强调句型)
It was not until he had read the news in the _______________
2. Not long ago I won the first prize in the English contest. It was held in our school. (使用过去分词)
Not long ago I won the first prize in the held English contest_______in our school.(12 山东)
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。 2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确 定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确 定或调整档次，最后给分。 3.词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去 2分。 4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点，
应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性 及上下文的连贯性。
Avoid Chinglish!
1) Traffic in Shanghai is too crowded. heavy. 2) There is has a highway connected with Beijing. 3) Though she's almost 40，but she still plans to compete. 4) I forgot left my dictionary at home. 5) It will take cost us much money to buy one.
3. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (使用名词性从句) What surprises him is that ___________________________ the little girl knows so many things. 4. People suggest that the conference be put off. (改被动语态) It is suggested that the ___________________ be put off.
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
• • • • • • 1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。 2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
6.My English level is common and I can't speak very ∧ well.
average along it
7.I believe we can get alone well with each other.
8.Besides, I think speaking English is as important as writing English. spoken 9.I study English for 12 years so I think I know
This village is very small， which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are leading a richer and happier life than before. Now it is taking on a new look.
be attractive, beautiful,completed in a limited time!
DISCUSSION: What is a good writing？ Content: Everything which is related to your view needs to includ.(内容要完整) （内容要点一个也不能丢，如果人家给的是文字 提示，可以用笔在试题处标出1,2,3,4，如果人 家给的是图，那要先看懂图的意思，六个图都 要看看再动笔，不要看了一个马上就写。）
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面2
• 令她吃惊的是，小女孩知道这么多事情。 1. He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things. 2. To his surprise , the little girl knows so many things. 3. What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面2
•adj.令人惊奇的 • surprising •→amazing •→astonishing
二、感知典型范例
——句型层面1
• 他昨天下午来的。
1. He came here yesterday afternoon. 2. He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon. 3. Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. 4. It was yesterday afternoon that he came here.
newspaper _____ that he knew what had happened.
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英语高考第II卷
第二节 书面表达（25分）
近几年来，在新课标试卷中，书面表 达趋向于提纲式作文，但是这些提纲 只给出了大致的写作方向，没有限制 具体内容，属于半开放式的提示；考 查应用中的书信，话题与中学生的学 习生活密切相关，考生会觉得有话可 说，有利于考生的自由发挥。
高考英语评分原则：
第一档(差)：(1-5分)
• 1. 未完成试题规定的任务。 • 2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题 要求。 • 3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 • 4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 • 5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 • 6. 信息未能传达给读者。
二、感知典型范例 ——篇章层面1
DISCUSSION:
What is a good writing？ How to catch the experts' eyes?
What is a good writing？
A good composition
content
structure
language
改错
1.I can't understand them when I meet new words,so I have to refer to them in the meet with look up dictionary.
2.The ability to read English passages is slowly.
have studied
written
English very well.
is
10.There are some advice in teaching English.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
1. They even threw rubbish into the lake. They totally ignored the noticeable sign "No littering" nearby. (使用V-ing形式)
They even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign "No _____________ littering" nearby.
Adopt a variety of sentence patterns
使用较丰富的句式
Structure: * Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾) * Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理,行文流畅) Language: * No Chinglish (避免中文式英文) * No Grammatical mistakes (没有语法错误) * With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)
高考英语评分原则：
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。 评分时，应视其对交际影响的程度予以考虑。英， 美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 6. 如书写较差以至影响交际，将其分数降 低一个档次。 7. 语言首先要求准确通顺。 8. 鼓励写出新颖词汇，顺畅连接和复杂结构。
英语各档次的给分范围和要求
第五档(很好);(21-25分)
总结：什么样的作文是一篇好作文
• • • • 无遗漏信息点，即要点全面 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 句式复杂多样 地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组
接下来，我们具体感知一下优秀作文的要素。
二、感知典型范例
——词汇层面1
• adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的
• clever •→ wise •→ smart •→ bright •→ intelligent
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3.There is no doubt that English Study needs lots learning of time and efforts. 4.Only by this way, can we keep up with other students.in 5.I'm LiHua, a new student of you. Li Hua yours
• • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • • 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备 较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇 所致。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 达到了预期的写作目的。 1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
二、感知典型范例
——段落层面1
This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.