中文论文中的英文写作问题

署名、单位
• Bai aiguo*，Zheng chuansheng， Zhou guofeng，Liang huiming， Feng gansheng.
• Wantwanthospital, Changsha 410016, China • (Wang Wang Hospital)
人名的大小写。单位名称错误
ES embryonic stem cells
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EG embryonic germ cells
不好的中文题目 —滥用缩写
• 反复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大 鼠AMI模型方法对比研究
• 反复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大 鼠急性心肌梗死模型方法的比较
题目—滥用缩写
• 乳酸调控大鼠肠黏膜微血管内皮细胞 NF-κB信号通路的研究
通篇如此
错词
• RT-PCR was used to amplification the full-length sequence of …
• RT-PCR was used to amplify the full-length sequence of …
错词
• Other adverse reactions include atrial premature, oral mucositis, fatigue et al.
英文题目—很大错误
• 常压缺氧致大鼠小脑浦肯野细胞急 性病理改变的研究 • Acute pathology changes of Purkinje cells in mouse cerebellum under normobaric hypoxia
署名与单位
署名—大小写
• He bao-ming , wang zhizhong，liu xiaofei，yao hao,ouyang xiaohui,su jiagui • He Bao-ming , Wang Zhizhong， Liu Xiaofei，Yao Hao, Ouyang Xiaohui, Su Jiagui
很错误的英文题目
• 基因工程大鼠研究进展
• Process in Rat Genetics • Progress in research on rat genetic engineering
英文题目—错误用词
• The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of There Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled … • The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of Three Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled …
单位—大小写
• Department of …, The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, china. • Department of …, the Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, China.
（摘要首句）
用错词
错词
• 大鼠给予药液灌胃 • All rats were lavaged with KFL solution. • All rats were gavaged with KFL solution.
错词
• 神经上皮移植 • Neuralepithelial transplantation
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Auton Neurosci. 2013, 173(1-2):39-44.
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不好的英文题目
• 清脑方对缺血性眩晕大鼠脑损伤的 保护作用 • Protective effect of QNF on brain injury in ischemic vertigo rats • Protective effect of the Chinese medicine Qingnaofang on brain injury in ischemic vertigo rats
不好的英文题目
• 儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作 • Establishment of childhood simple obesity animal model
• Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity
题目—滥用缩写
• 哺乳动物 ES 细胞与 EG 细胞研究 进展 • 哺乳动物 胚胎干细胞与 胚胎生殖 细胞研究进展
姓名大写、标点符号
单位 错词、错名、大小写
• The forth Applicated Hospital of Suzhou University
• the Forth Affiliated Hospital of Soochow University
单位—不全
• Academy of Military Sciences • Academy of Military Medical Sciences
• Neuroepithelial transplantation
错词
• 巴马小型猪12只 • 12 Obama mini-pigs were randomly divided into … • 12 Bama mini-pigs were randomly divided into …
错词
• Low does • Low dose • High does • High dose
• Lactic acid inhibits NF-κB signaling pathways in RIMMVECs
读者看不懂 RIMMVECs
题目 — 拼写错误、大小写
• Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig
中文论文中的英文写作问题
周传农
中国医学科学院 肿瘤研究所 北京协和医学院
2014.10.29
题目
题目—太繁
• 二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌Huh-7 细 胞凋亡的实验及其机制研究
• 二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌Huh-7 细 胞凋亡及其作用机制
题目—不全
• 儿童单纯性肥胖模型的制作 • 儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作
英文题目—单复数
• 非人灵长类局部脑缺血动物模型研 究现状述评 • Review of focal cerebral ischemia model in non-human primate • Review of focal cerebral ischemia models in non-human primates
题目—错误
• 基因工程大鼠研究进展 • Process in Rat Genetics • Progress in research on rat genetic engineering
题目—太大
• 不同测压方法测试大鼠结肠破裂压 • A comparison of different pressure testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animals • Comparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in rats
• Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig • Comparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig
英文题目—ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ错误
• 改良半椎板切除法建立大鼠腰神经 根压迫模型的研究 • The study on rat model of lumbar never nerve root compression via modified unilateral hemilaminectomy approach
啰嗦、缺建立、拼写错误
英文题目—拼写错误
• Gong H, Shu L, Xu H, Chen B, Mao R, Zhang F, Wang Y.
• Bilateral internal carotid arteries ligation temporary impairs brain vasculaturev in young rats.
• Other adverse reactions include atrial premature, oral mucositis, fatigue, etc.
错词
• GeneBank • GenBank
• Comparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig
不好的中、英文题目
• LPS和石墨粉诱导小鼠急性肺损伤病 理形态学比较 • Pathological comparison of LPS and Graphite power-induced acute lung injury • 中文：应写明 脂多糖 • 英文：LPS Lipopolysaccharide • 英文： power powder
英文摘要中 滥用缩写
英文摘要—滥用缩写
• Objective ： To observe the affect of RGZ and ATRA on the growth of myeloma xenograft in nude mice and …
• RGZ rosiglitazone
• ATRA all-trans-retinoic acid • affect effect
英文题目—滥用缩写
• 小型猪体外循环下心脏手术的麻醉 • Anesthesia of Cardiac Surgery Under CPB on Swine • Anesthesia in Cardiac Surgery Under Cardiopulmonary Bypass on Pigs
英文题目— 拼写错误
滥用缩写—英文摘要
• IHC analysis on TMA revealed that …
• Immunohistochemical analysis on tissue microarray revealed that …
英文摘要—滥用缩写
• To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using SSH. • To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using suppression subtractive hybridization (SSH).
不好的中文题目
• 去垂体幼鼠生物特性及激素水平的 观察
• 去垂体幼年大鼠的生物学特性与激 素水平
不好的中文题目
• 中药松友饮对体内化疗后残余肝 癌作用的实验研究 • 中药松友饮对裸鼠体内化疗后残 余肝癌的作用
不好的中文题目
• IRP对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠IgG+和 SIgA+细胞表达的影响 • 板蓝根多糖对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠 IgG+和SIgA+细胞表达的影响
署名、单位
大小写、拼写错误、标点符号
• WEI Bing-yan,LIU Tian-fu,GUO Yong-chang ,ZHANG Yin-hong • (the center of Laboratory animal of Shan Xi Mendical University,taiyuan 030001, China)