IELTS Writing (1)
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40 mins >250 words
Three types of essay
Type 1 (C9T4T2)
Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
Task response
Example 1 Argument+reason+example+counterargument
I believe that changing the United States Federal Uniform Drinking Ague Act, by lowering the legal drinking age from 21 to 18, will lead to an increase in deaths on the road caused by drunk driving. This is because more young drivers will be tempted to drive while under the influence of alcohol. Many young people in US states travel to social gatherings by car rather than public transport. If 18-year-olds were legally able to drink alcohol in bars and clubs, more drunk teens would find themselves behind the wheel at the end of a night out.
Task response
Para 1: introduction (phenomenon+thesis) Para 2: concession Increasing the price of petrol---- one way X best way to solve traffic & pollution
IELTS test score: 8/9 2011-2013: Two-year IELTS teaching experience at EIC Group in Beijing
English-Chinese/Chinese-English certified translator in PRC
Assessment rubrics
Task Response/Achievement (TR) Coherence & Cohesion (CC) Lexical Resource (LR) Grammatical Range & Accuracy (GRA)
Assessment rubrics
IELTS Writing -intermediate level (1)
Saimou Zhang
2013-2014: University of Ottawa Master of Education Second language education (Exchange student at Carleton University, Applied linguistics) 2008-2012: University of International Relations in Beijing, English language & literature
Para 3 : measures to solve traffic (sky train, underground transit system)
Para 4: measures to solve pollution (clean energy/fuel) Para 5: conclusion (summary & restatement)
TR 7 7 7 7 7 6 CC 7 6 6 LR 6 6 6 GRA Overall 6.5 6.5 6
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6
6
6
6
Descriptors for IELTS Writing Task 2
Band 7
Task response Coherence & cohesion Lexical resources Grammatical range & accuracy
Task response
(Model answer C8T3) There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.
Twenku.baidu.comsk response
Task response
Topic sentence: main argument Supporting detail: reason(推理), example(例证)， evidence(证据)
Task response Example 1 Argument I believe that changing the United States Federal Uniform Drinking Age Act, by lowering the legal drinking age from 21 to 18, will lead to an increase in deaths on the road caused by drunk driving. Argument+reason I believe that changing the United States Federal Uniform Drinking Age Act, by lowering the legal drinking age from 21 to 18, will lead to an increase in deaths on the road caused by drunk driving. This is because more young drivers will be tempted to drive while under the influence of alcohol.
Type 3 (C8T4T2）
In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures should be taken to solve them?
Task response
Topic sentence Supporting detail 1 Supporting detail 2 ---
Background Topic sentence Supporting detail 1 Supporting detail 2
Background Supporting detail 1 Supporting detail 2 Topic sentence
Task response
How to write main/body paragraphs (except for the introduction and the conclusion)
Task response
Topic sentence (main idea)
Supporting details
Intermediate French level (TCF B1-B2)
8, 9 (Ideal)
7 (Goal)
6 (Borderline)
Two Writing tasks
Assessment
Task 1 x 1/3 + Task 2 x 2/3= Your total score
Task 1
Task response
How to write an introductory paragraph
sentence 1: background information
sentence 2: paraphrase the topic
sentence 3: declare your stance/opinion
Type 2 (C9T3T1)
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Task response Example 1 Argument+reason+example
I believe that changing the United States Federal Uniform Drinking Ague Act, by lowering the legal drinking age from 21 to 18, will lead to an increase in deaths on the road caused by drunk driving. This is because more young drivers will be tempted to drive while under the influence of alcohol. Many young people in US states travel to social gatherings by car rather than public transport. If 18-year-olds were legally able to drink alcohol in bars and clubs, more drunk teens would find themselves behind the wheel at the end of a night out.
criterion 1: Task response
Macrostructure
Topic sentence
Supporting details/ideas
Task response
Macrostructure (C8 T3) Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
20 mins >150 words
TASK 1
line graph/chart bar chart/graph pie chart/graph table flowchart map
C9 T4
C9 T2
C9 T3
C7 T1
General Introduction to Task 2
Task 2
Three types of essay
Type 1 (C9T4T2)
Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
Task response
Example 1 Argument+reason+example+counterargument
I believe that changing the United States Federal Uniform Drinking Ague Act, by lowering the legal drinking age from 21 to 18, will lead to an increase in deaths on the road caused by drunk driving. This is because more young drivers will be tempted to drive while under the influence of alcohol. Many young people in US states travel to social gatherings by car rather than public transport. If 18-year-olds were legally able to drink alcohol in bars and clubs, more drunk teens would find themselves behind the wheel at the end of a night out.
Task response
Para 1: introduction (phenomenon+thesis) Para 2: concession Increasing the price of petrol---- one way X best way to solve traffic & pollution
IELTS test score: 8/9 2011-2013: Two-year IELTS teaching experience at EIC Group in Beijing
English-Chinese/Chinese-English certified translator in PRC
Assessment rubrics
Task Response/Achievement (TR) Coherence & Cohesion (CC) Lexical Resource (LR) Grammatical Range & Accuracy (GRA)
Assessment rubrics
IELTS Writing -intermediate level (1)
Saimou Zhang
2013-2014: University of Ottawa Master of Education Second language education (Exchange student at Carleton University, Applied linguistics) 2008-2012: University of International Relations in Beijing, English language & literature
Para 3 : measures to solve traffic (sky train, underground transit system)
Para 4: measures to solve pollution (clean energy/fuel) Para 5: conclusion (summary & restatement)
TR 7 7 7 7 7 6 CC 7 6 6 LR 6 6 6 GRA Overall 6.5 6.5 6
6
6
6
6
6
Descriptors for IELTS Writing Task 2
Band 7
Task response Coherence & cohesion Lexical resources Grammatical range & accuracy
Task response
(Model answer C8T3) There is no doubt that traffic and pollution from vehicles have become huge problems, both in cities and on motorways everywhere. Solving these problems is likely to need more than a simple rise in the price of petrol.
Twenku.baidu.comsk response
Task response
Topic sentence: main argument Supporting detail: reason(推理), example(例证)， evidence(证据)
Task response Example 1 Argument I believe that changing the United States Federal Uniform Drinking Age Act, by lowering the legal drinking age from 21 to 18, will lead to an increase in deaths on the road caused by drunk driving. Argument+reason I believe that changing the United States Federal Uniform Drinking Age Act, by lowering the legal drinking age from 21 to 18, will lead to an increase in deaths on the road caused by drunk driving. This is because more young drivers will be tempted to drive while under the influence of alcohol.
Type 3 (C8T4T2）
In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures should be taken to solve them?
Task response
Topic sentence Supporting detail 1 Supporting detail 2 ---
Background Topic sentence Supporting detail 1 Supporting detail 2
Background Supporting detail 1 Supporting detail 2 Topic sentence
Task response
How to write main/body paragraphs (except for the introduction and the conclusion)
Task response
Topic sentence (main idea)
Supporting details
Intermediate French level (TCF B1-B2)
8, 9 (Ideal)
7 (Goal)
6 (Borderline)
Two Writing tasks
Assessment
Task 1 x 1/3 + Task 2 x 2/3= Your total score
Task 1
Task response
How to write an introductory paragraph
sentence 1: background information
sentence 2: paraphrase the topic
sentence 3: declare your stance/opinion
Type 2 (C9T3T1)
Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion
Task response Example 1 Argument+reason+example
I believe that changing the United States Federal Uniform Drinking Ague Act, by lowering the legal drinking age from 21 to 18, will lead to an increase in deaths on the road caused by drunk driving. This is because more young drivers will be tempted to drive while under the influence of alcohol. Many young people in US states travel to social gatherings by car rather than public transport. If 18-year-olds were legally able to drink alcohol in bars and clubs, more drunk teens would find themselves behind the wheel at the end of a night out.
criterion 1: Task response
Macrostructure
Topic sentence
Supporting details/ideas
Task response
Macrostructure (C8 T3) Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
20 mins >150 words
TASK 1
line graph/chart bar chart/graph pie chart/graph table flowchart map
C9 T4
C9 T2
C9 T3
C7 T1
General Introduction to Task 2
Task 2