英语应用文写作 书信电子邮件

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application? suggestion? introduction?
communicative sentences
1. I sincerely hope you can adopt my suggestions. Thank you! suggestion 2. I would appreciate it if you can give me the application chance. 3. I think it’s going to be great! Are you introduction satisfied with it? 4. If you can kindly give me the opportunity, I will do my work well. application
•Tell the advantages &disadvantages •give them marks!
letter structure& evaluation standards!
Passage A: Dear Wang Min, During the vacation, I took part in an interesting activity. My school organized us to went to London. In July20th morning we arrived at airport and the home-stay family welcome us heartedly. The second day, we were visited Oxford University and listened to the professor introduced their school. The third day, we visited Big Ben, which is the most famous building in London. All of took photo to record the unforgettable moments. The last day, we held a 缺少交际性语句、未写结尾语 party to say goodbye with England students. This activity is very meaningful.
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[技法指导] 书信、电子邮件的写作: 不论哪种书信、电子邮件，一般都有固定 的写作模式，只要记住其特定的写作模板，并 能在具体的写作中加以融会贯通，一定能让你 的作文水平快速提高，从而在考场上写出档次
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较高的文章。下面介绍一下几种常考书信的模
板，供大家写作时借鉴。
1．投诉信
Dear ________，
二档
Passage B： I had an unforgettable experience in winter vacation and I will share this activity with you. I went to London to study this vacation. On July 20th, As soon as I arrived at the airport, my home-stay family welcome me warmly … The second day, we visited Oxford University which is a famous school in the world. The professor was enthusiastic and … I hoped that I could study there. The third day, we went to the Big Ben. …. The day before I left, students in London held a party with us to say goodbye. Everyone enjoyed 交际性语句 the party. It was a meaningful experience for me. Do you think it was interesting? 结尾语 Looking forward to your letter.
第三档 (4-8分) 第四档…
未恰当完成试题规定的任务;内容不完整；所用词汇有限，语法或用词 方面的错误影响了对所写内容的理解。未能清楚地传达信息。 未完成试题规定的任务;写了少量相关信息； 语法或用词方面错误较多，严重影响了对所写内容的理解。
假定你是红星中学高三（1）班的李华， 假期里你参加了 一次“伦敦游学”活动。请根据下列提示给你的同学王明写 封信，向他介绍整个游学过程。
My name is/I am ________. I am writing to you
for ________. Firstly, ________. Secondly, ________. Thirdly, ________. Therefore, I require that you send me a new one of the same model within a month. To be honest/Honestly speaking, ________.
一档
你是红星中学的李华， 假期里你参加 a letter---introducing an activity 了一次“伦敦游学”活动。请给你的同 学王明写封信，向他介绍整个游学过程。
communicative sentences
I think it is a meaningful experience. Do you think it is interesting? What do you think of my experience? Do you have similar experience? I am eager to hear that!
应用文写作
---书信和电子邮件
[技法指导]
书信、电子邮件的写作是高考中出现频率 最高的一种题型。从内容上看，近几年高考书 信写作主要包括致歉信、致谢信、笔友信、慰
， 问信、投诉信、邀请信、介绍信、求职信、读
者请求的解答信及其答复读者的信等。
sai
suggestion
application
a letter of
application
海淀期末： 你校正在招募志愿者，为中 外学生交流活动做准备。请用 英语写一封信，向学校外事办 公室提出申请。
a letter of application? suggestion? introduction? introduction
西城期末： 你的英国朋友Tom要来你校 任教， 打算在学校附近租房子。 发来邮件向你咨询合适的房源。 请你根据回复信件，向他介绍 找到的房子。
目的
(purpose) Dear Tom,(address) I am writing to tell you that I’ve found a house which may meet your needs. The house which is on the second floor covers an area of 70 square meters. 主体 It faces south so that you can enjoy (body) enough sunshine.....If you are interested in it, please call 15382. If you need any more help, just let me know. Looking forward to hearing 交际性语句 from you. (communicative Yours, 结尾语 (ending) sentence) Li Hua(signature)
introduction
invitation
a letter of application? suggestion? introduction?
石景山期末： 请你代表你班同学给校 长写一封信，反映一下你校 食堂的几点问题，并针对所 提问题提出2条合理建议。
suggestion
a letter of application? suggestion? introduction?
correct mistakes
1.On Julymorning 20th morning, On the of July20
airport. 2. The home-stay family gave a gave me us a heated welcome. warm welcome 3. A professor showed took us usaround around the university. 4. I visited the Oxford University and listened to the introduction introduce of the school.
准确的语言
•On the morning of July 20th I arrived at the airport. The home-stay family picked me up and gave me a warm welcome. •The third day was the most exciting day because we went to Big Ben for sightseeing.
a letter of application? suggestion? introduction?
invitation
朝阳一模 你的美国朋友Chris目前在北京学习 汉语，他对中国传统文化非常感兴 趣。本周五下午你校将要举办一个 文化讲座，请你根据以下提示给他 写一封电子邮件，邀请他来参加。
Structure of a letter
应用文评分标准
第一档 内容 条理 交际 内容完整，条理清楚；交际得体，表达 (13-15分) 时充分考虑了交际的需求；体现出较强 语言 的语言运用能力。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。 条理 交际 第二档 内容 内容、条理和交际等方面基本符合要求； (9-12分) 所用语法和词汇满足了任务的要求； 语言 语法或用词方面有一些错误，但不影响 理解。基本达到了预期的写作目的。
* On the third day, I paid a visit to Big Ben. I was amazed at it and couldn’t help taking photos! * On the last day, we held a farewell party with England students. All of us were unwilling to say goodbye.
we arrived at the
Sentence appreciation
细节补充
* The following day, we visited the well-known Oxford University. A professor introduced this college to us. I was attracted and really benefited a lot from it!
时间 内容 7月20早 到 达 机 场 ； 受 到 接 待 家 庭 (home-stay family) 的热烈欢迎 第二天 参观牛津大学 (Oxford University) ，听教 授介绍学校 第三天 游览大本钟和伦敦眼 (Big Ben)； 照相留念 最后一天 与英国学生开告别晚会
注意：1. 词数不少于50； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
•I’m writing to share an experience with you, which is about a study tour to London.
点明目的 This is my unforgettable experience. Do you think it is interesting? 得体的交际