如何写好托福写作例子
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如何写好托福写作例子
托福*应该如何做到内容丰满,观点有力呢?今天给大家带来了如何写好托福写作例子,希望能够帮助到大家,下面就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。
如何写好托福写作例子
一.具体的例子
Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The students in university should not do any part-time jobs.
Position: Disagree
Reason: Doing part-time jobs can intensify our social ability.
Exemplification: Take myself for example. When I was a fresh man,I found it really hard to get along with people around me. Then I was advised to take a job as a waiter in the restaurant during which I had chances to communicate with different customers, making them satisfied with my “smile” service. After a year, I myself can realize that I have become more outgoing and understanding.
写一个很具体例子的时候同学们要注意几个问题:
1、不要写得特别长,写太多就变成了记叙文,而我们的托福独立写作是议论文体;
2、这种例子一定要和说理分析性的内容结合在一起才能够支撑起来一个主体段。
二.假设性的例子
假设性的例子有两点好处。其一就是别人不会怀疑我们写的这个例子的真实性,二就是假设性的例子其实是analytic example,这种伴随着分析的例子其实要更符合托福独立写作的风格,更能够体现一个学生的分析能力与水平,毕竟议论文的特点就是分析和证明。
Topic:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Land needs to be used to meet human need rather than to protect endangered animals.
Position:Protect endangered animals
Reason: Another important reason to protect endangered animals is that the delicate ecological balance of an area might be irreparably harmed by their extinction.
Exemplification: For example, if humans chop down forests and use the land to grow corn, they might simultaneously destroy the habitats of a kind of bird that eats locusts. The next year
because the locust population can grow unchecked, locusts might destroy the entire nearby corn crop. Not only do the birds lose their homes, but humans are also harmed. The ecological balance of many natural habitats is still not well understood and humans interfere in it at their peril.
上一个例子,考生能够感受到假设性的例子的威力。整段*篇幅短,例子少,但是却非常有效地证明了段首的观点即保护生态平衡的重要性。所以,*不一定要写很多,但是一定要写好,永远不要忘了,独立写作的灵魂和核心就是去证明一个观点的合理性和说服力,所以你用的手段很重要。
托福语法题做题规律口诀
这一口诀的含义是:做托福改错题时,分二个不同的步骤来考虑题.先凭语感直接判断;如果找不到正确答案,再从"理性"即语言规律或语言规则的层次解决问题.首先是"语感".托福改错题的"错误"——即正确选项——有相当一部分处于表层,凭直觉或语感一眼即可识别. 如:
(9) (Constantly) advances (made) by medicine and technology (extend) appreciably the average (persons) life expectancy.
题中的advances不可能是动词——因为托福语法不考祈使句,而且祈使句动词,需是原型. 副词一般不能修饰名词——只有
不是以"ly"结尾的"原型"副词可以,而且只能做后置定语. 所以,只读前两个词即知答案.
(10) (Alike) most (ethnic) groups is American society, Italians Americans (maintain) many fo the traditions of their (mother country).
由于alike只能做表语或后置定语,决不会出现再句首,——类似的以弱读a开始的形容词如alight,alive等基本上都是这样——所以只读一个词即知答案.
同时需要提到的是,like,unlike,likely和alike意义和用法的区分是托福结构(语法)——特别是改错部分——的一个经常性的题眼.其意义和用法上的区别如下:
like是动词(喜欢)和介词(象);
unlike是介词(不像)
likely是形容词,通常作表语或定语
alike是形容词——通常作表语和后置定语;以及作副词通常作状语.
这里我们似乎还应该加上dislike(不喜欢).
口诀四一个逗号看对面,两个逗号不用看