中考英语(写作真题30篇)
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帅帅福利:中考英语真题汇总(作文30篇)
一、书面表达(共30题;共146分)
1. ( 5分) (2016•长沙)假如你是李华,你的好朋友Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了, 她为这次失败所困扰,无心学习。
请你给她写一封电子邮件,建议她正确地看待达人秀节目,享受参与的过程而不必太在意结果;提醒她实现理想的途径有很多,只有努力才能获得成功;鼓励她好好学习,也不放弃个人爱好,开心地度过每一天。
要求:1)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2)字数:60 — 80词(信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。
2. ( 5分) (2017·宜宾)目前很多学生整天都忙于学习,成绩却不理想。
请根据表格内容,结合自身实际,写一篇关于"怎样提高学习效率"的短文。
90词左右。
(开头结尾己给出,不计入总字数)
2).短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校、地名等信息。
3).短文应包括全部信息,可围绕主题适当发挥。
How to improve our study effectively
A great number of students can't finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions.
……
If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
3. ( 5分) (2017·枣庄)Write a review of the following story in about 90 words.The review has to include the following points:
1).The name of your review.
2).The idea(s)of your review.
3).The reason(s)for your idea(s)..,
4).Something you decide after you consider all the information in the story."Cock﹣a﹣doodle﹣doo!"cried the cock(公鸡).Hestood in the farm﹣yard and cried aloud,so that all people might hear him."Cock﹣a﹣doodle﹣doo!How useful I an,for I always get uo first.And I cry aloud as siin as the sun rises to make all people in the house awake."
"Cluck!Cluck!Cluck!*cried the ben from the yard.She was walking about with three
pretty little chickens,and trying to find some food for them."Cluck!Cluck!Cluck!I'm more useful than you.Almost every day I ay a nice fresh gee for mu master's (男主人)breakfast.Then think how useful I am to my mistress(女主人).Howmany nice things does she make with my eggs for the children?She could not get on well without eggs."
4. ( 5分) (2017•深圳)假设你是李华,三年的初中生活即将过去,你的外籍同学Sam在英语学习上帮助了你,在即将毕业之际,请你在给Sam的毕业纪念册上用英语写一段留言,要求包括以下内容要点:
1 你在学习上曾遇到的困难;
2 Sam对你的帮助,建议及措施:(1) 多听多读;(2) 多看英语电影;多唱英文歌曲;(3) ……(自由发挥;不少于一项内容)
3 你的收获及对Sam的感谢和祝福。
Dear Sam,
How time flies! It's time for us to say goodbye. ……
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
5. ( 5分) (2016•河南)我们的每一次变化都见证着我们的成长。
请以“The biggest personal change I've ever made”为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
①要点:1)变化是什么;
2)变化是如何发生的;
3)变化后有何感受。
②要求:1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2)词数80左右。
The biggest personal change I've ever made
6. ( 5分) (2016•武汉)初中生即将结束,学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。
内容要点如下:1)初中科目更多,好的学习方法很重要;
2)锻炼身体,保持健康;
3)参加社团活动,使学校生活丰富;
4)多读书,多交朋友;
5)补充一两点个人想法。
注意:1)文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;
2)词数:60-80;
3)内容连贯,不要逐条翻译;
4)短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:method n.方法club.n 社团colorful adj.丰富的
Welcome to our school!
7. ( 5分) (2016·衡阳)荣光学校九年级(2)班就“环境问题”召开了一次班会,并且以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”为题进行了一次讨论。
许多同学对未来表示乐观,但也有些同学对未来有些担心。
请根据表格中的内容提示,用英语写一篇短文。
2)短文中应包含至少4个要点。
3)书写工整、语句通顺、连贯,词数不少于80.
注意:文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:optimistic adj.乐观的government n.政府take measures to采取措施private adj.私有的
Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?
Many students are optimistic about our environment in ten years.
8. ( 5分) (2017·南充)假如你是李华,你的笔友Frank 是一名美国中学生,打算今年暑假来南充旅游。
请你根据以下思维导图,用英语写一封email 给他介绍一下南充。
要求:1)语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
2)必须包含思维导图所给的提示,并做适当发挥;
3)行文中不得出现真实人名,校名或地名(思维导图中提及的除外);
4)词数:80-100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Frank,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to Nanchong this summer vacation.
Hope to see you!
Yours,
Li Hua
9. ( 5分) (2016·贺州)感恩是一个永恒的话题,我们应该对帮助过自己的人心存感恩。
感恩之际,我们也应该心存善念,去帮助需要帮助的人。
请你以“Learn to Be Thankful"为题,根据以下提示和要求写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
提示:
1).描述某人(如父母、老师、同学、朋友甚至陌生人等)在学习、生活上帮助过你的某件事;
2).你帮助过某人的事:
3).你对这些事的感想。
要求:文章必须包括所给提示中1~3项的内容,可展开思路,自由地适当发挥。
文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息。
Learn to Be Thankful
10. ( 5分) (2017·乐山)某英文杂志中学生专栏正在征集"二孩政策"放开后孩子们的意见。
你们班就"Do you agree that your parents have a second child?"这一话题,展开了一次讨论。
请你根据下表提示写一篇短文,向该杂志社投稿,介绍讨论的情况。
2).应覆盖所有要点;
开头己给出,不计入总词数;
可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Do you agree that your parents have a second child? Different students have different opinions about it. ……
11. ( 5分) (2017·安徽)假如你是李华,你们学校将举行"弘扬中华传统文化﹣﹣戏曲进校园"展演活动,你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加.请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件.1).时间:7月1日下午2点;
2).地点:学校操场;
3).内容:文化展览、节目表演等.
提示词:戏曲opera n.表演performance n.
注意:1).词数80~100;
2).可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3).信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4).开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数.
Dear Mike,
I know you are interested in Chinese traditional culture.
Yours,
Li Hua.
12. ( 5分) (2017·山西)在我们成长的过程中,有过各种各样的经历,其中,“考试“也是一种经历,”成绩“更是一直伴随”着我们。
为使同学们学会客观、理性地看待问题,九年级三班以
“考试成绩重要吗,它是否等同于实际能力?”为题展开了辩论。
假设你是正方或反方的一员(只需选择一方),请围绕你的观点,结合亲身经历来说服同学们。
要求:
1). 词数不少于80词;
2). 提示词正、反方均可使用,仅供参考;
3). 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
13. ( 5分) (2017·重庆)在我们成长的道路,朋友是不可或缺的那道风景。
在相知相伴的岁月里,留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆! 某英语报社以“A Story Between My Friend and Me”为题开展征文活动,请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。
要求:
1). 故事必须原创;
2). 80-120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3). 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考要点:
1). 分享故事(起因,经过,结果……);
2). 表达感受(幸福,感动,思考……);
3). ……
A Story Between My Friend and Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.
14. ( 5分) (2016•黔西南)当今社会,无论在大街小巷.餐馆,还是聚会场所,你都能看见一些人正低着头玩手机。
网络上给他们取了一个有趣的名字叫“低头族”。
作为中学生,对此现象,你有什么看法?请写一篇80--100词的文章。
写作要求:1)书写工整,语句通顺;
2)文章中请勿使用真实姓名或地名;
3)自拟作文标题。
15. ( 5分) (2016•贵州)Michael是你的美国朋友。
他想了解关于中国的传统节日。
请根据提示词,以"The Mid-autumn Festival"为题用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示词及要点:1)one of the most important...; Chinese traditional festival 2)get together, have a big dinner, with their family
3)in the open air, enjoy the bright full moon, delicious mooncake
4)mooncakes are round like...
5)carry people's wishes to the families they love(寄托人们对所爱家人的祝愿)
要求:1)内容完整、书写清楚、字迹工整,表达通顺;
2)80词左右,短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
3)尽可能使用提示词及要点,适当发挥。
The Mid-autumn Festival
Lunar August 15th of a year is Mid-autumn Festival.
This is the Mid-autumn Festival in China. I hope you'll like it.
16. ( 5分) (2016·黄冈)自古以来“友善”是中华民族的传统美德。
英才国际学校广播台正在进行“我友好,我善良”系列人物介绍。
请你根据下列表格提示和要求,写一篇介绍讲文明同学的文字稿。
参考词汇:say hello to ;make friends;kindness;get on well with;care about
写作要求:1)次数不少于80(短文的开始语已给出,不计人总词数);
2)内容完整,语言流畅,不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3)短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
Good morning,everyone!Today I am to introduce a teenager. his name Jiang Ming.
17. ( 5分) (2016•邵阳)近来,中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注。
其中垃圾食品、电子游戏等是影响健康的重要因素,请以“Keep Healthy”为题谈谈你的看法。
要求:1)列举中小学生面临的健康问题。
2)谈谈怎样才能保持健康。
3)80词左右,开头已给出,不计人词数。
4)语法正确,文理通顺、流畅,并适当发挥。
提示词:junk food, be bad for, computer games, suggestions, stay away from
Keep Healthy
Today, some students have several health problems.
18. ( 5分) (2016•南通)期中考试后,Julian所在班级将进行以“学会学习”为主题的英语演讲比赛。
假如你是Julian,请根据下表所提示的要点和内容,写一份英文演讲稿。
2)词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数。
3)演讲稿中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Hello,everyone!I'm glad to be here to share my ideas of” Learn how to learn”.
I hope everyone will enjoy learning.Thanks for listening.
19. ( 5分) (2017·赤峰)假如你是来自希望中学的李华,即将开始高中的学习生活,面对新老师、新同学,请用英文做一下自我介绍,可以涵盖以下内容。
①在家和学校的表现;②兴趣与爱好;③对高中生活的展望。
要求:1)除以上内容外,可适当发挥。
2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名或地名,否则不予赋分。
3)100词左右;首尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
4)请在答题卡指定位置作答,否则无效。
Hello, everybody! My name is Li Hua. I'm from the Hope Middle School.
Thank you!
20. ( 5分) (2017·贺州)2016年贺州市被评为"世界长寿市",作为"世界长寿市"的中学生,请根据下面的提示,以Good Ways to Keep Healthy为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,倡议"健康生活",从饮食、运动及心情三个方面说明如何保持健康。
短文首句已经给出,不计入总词数,可适当发挥。
提示词:
1).Healthy diet: vegetables, fruit...
2).Do exercise: take a walk, play basketball...
3).Keep happy: make friends…
要求:文章必须包括所给提示的内容,可展开思路,自由地适当发挥。
文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息。
Good Ways to Keep Healthy
21. ( 5分) (2015•长沙)假设你是李华,现就读于某寄宿制中学。
你的室友王明经常违反寝室(dormitory)规定,如不整理床铺,休息时间大声拨打电话,未经许可(permission)动用他人物品,离开寝室不关灯等。
为了提醒他改正不良习惯,做个文明室友,你决定写一封电子邮件给他。
要求:(1)包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
(2)字数:60-80词(信得开头和结尾已给出,不介入总词数);
(3)信中不得出现你的真实姓名,学校名和地名。
From:******************
To:*******************
Subject: To be a great roommate
Dear Wang Ming,
I'm writing to kindly remind you of the dormitory rules.
Best wishes,
LiHua
22. ( 5分) (2017·浙江绍兴)某英语教育网站正在开展主题为“How can a teenager have a successful life?”的讨论,为此你采访了一些同学(结果见下表)。
请据上经用英语写一篇短文参与讨论,并阐述你的观点.
2)你的观点至少两条;
3)词数:80—100;
4)短文首句仅供选择使用,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:尊重respect
短文首句:
I have recently done a survey about how a teenager can have a successful life. ……
23. ( 1分) (2017·孝感)假如你是某校九年级(1)班的学生,你校正在举行"Young Star Award"的评选活动,请你用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的同学李明,以供参评.内容要点如下:
1).个子高,性格外向,为人友善;
2).学习认真,成绩优秀;
3).爱好广泛,擅长踢足球;
4).乐于助人,…;
5).得到高度赞扬,我们以他为荣.
写作要求:
1).短文必须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺、意思连贯;2).第4要点的省略号部分,需作适当发挥(2﹣3句话即可);
3).词数在90个左右,短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数.
I'm glad to hear the news that"Young Star Award"is going on in our school.I think Li Ming is the hot favorite for the award.________
24. ( 5分) (2017·青岛)某英语杂志社对部分中学生的周末活动做了问卷调查(结果如图),请你写一篇英语短文参加征文活动.
内容包括:
1).简要描述调查结果.
2).谈一谈中学生应该如何度过一个有意义的周末(至少两条).
要求:1).词数:80﹣100.开头已给出,不计入总词数.
2).文中不得出现真实的校名和人名.
We did a survey about middle school students'weekend activities.Here are the results.
25. ( 5分) (2017·河北)英语课上,同学们正在准备举行以"真实的自我"为主题的演讲活动。
请你以李华的名义写一篇演讲词,向同学们介绍一下自己。
提示:( 1 ) What are your strong points?
( 2 ) How do you improve yourself?
( 3 ) What is your dream for the future?
注意:( 1 ) 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
( 2 ) 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;
( 3 ) 词数:80个左右。
(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)
Hello, everyone!
I'm Li Hua and I'm very happy to stand here to talk about myself.……
Thanks for your attention!
26. ( 5分) (2017·成都)假如你是班长,今天是你班的英语活动日,你将带领同学们骑车去Happy Park。
请按照下面的图示用英语写一篇发言稿,在入园前向同学们介绍景区设施(facilities)的位置及游园注意事项,并希望同学们遵守规则,玩得开心。
注意:1).短文应包括要求的所有信息。
2).发言稿的格式正确。
3).短文应结构完整、语句通顺、句式多样。
4).发言稿中不能出现个人和学校的真实信息。
5).词数:100左右。
27. ( 5分) (2016•大庆)假如你是初四(二)班班长王明,你收到了学生会发来的邀请卡,请你根据卡片的内容向班级同学说明该项活动的情况并鼓励大家踊跃参加。
(字数要求:30-40词)School-leavers' Party Invitation
Time: 6 p.m., 30th June
Place: the Student Hall
Activity: Enjoy traditional dishes, music and dancing
28. ( 5分) (2016•大庆)友谊是幸福的源泉之一。
请你写一篇短文,
要点如下:1)叙述一件你和好朋友之间发生的事情;
2)表明这件事情中你在他(她)身上学习到的品质。
注意:1)词数80词左右;
2)不得出现真实的人名,校名等相关信息。
29. ( 5分) (2017·遵义)我们都知道美国登山运动员Aron Ralston,他的故事令人感动,激励人心。
在我们身边,一定也有那么一些人和事,他们或许平凡,或许渺小,但却总能鼓舞我们,摧
人奋进。
以"The Person Encouraging Me"为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
2)文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名。
30. ( 5分
) (2016·桂林)在我们周围经常存在安全隐患,所以我们应该对安全问题引起足够的重视。
请以The safety around us为题,写一篇英语短文,说说我们身边的安全问题。
内容包括:
2).文中不得出现涉及考生真实信息的人名、地名或校名等。
3).文章字数在80~100之间,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
The safety around us
Safety is very important for us students. Accidents often happen around us. So we must pay much attention to safety. At home, we should
If we can do all these well, we'll enjoy our life better.
答案解析部分
一、书面表达
1.【答案】Dear Lisa,
I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling down because of your failure in this talent show. I'd like to share my thoughts with you on this matter.
Yes,talent shows may change one's future. They offer the opportunity to show one's talents, and give people a way to make their dreams come true. Since only some people are truly talented, there is no need to take the result too seriously.It may not be good for us teenagers to become famous overnight. So just enjoy the process.
In addition, there are many ways to success, and only by working hard can you achieve your goals. As a teenager, you should spare no efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time, which, without doubt, will enrich yourfuture life.
Hope you'll be happy every day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【考点】应用文写作,提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本文叙述Lisa不久前参加达人秀节目被淘汰了, 她为这次失败所困扰,无心学习。
写一封电子邮件来劝说她,所以句子的主语一般用第二人称,用适当的连词,要注意上下文的衔接,使用自己熟悉的句式,所写的句子符合英语语法。
【点评】短文用了一些短语和句式,如:offerthe opportunity to do sth; make one's dreams come true ;as a teenager;spareno efforts to study and develop your interests at the same time等,用了and连词,用了which引导的非限制定语从句,增加了文章的亮点。
2.【答案】How to improve our study effectively
A great number of students can't finish their tasks, which leads to bad results and makes them less interested in their study. How can we solve the problem? Here are some suggestions.
First, we are supposed to have good study methods, such as previewing the lessons before class, listening to the teacher carefully in class, taking notes in time, reviewing in time, doing homework on time, correcting mistakes at any time.
Then, it's helpful for study to have good health. So we should spend at least an hour (in) exercising our body every day.
Besides, we'd better make good use of time. Don't put off what we can do today till tomorrow. We should ask the teacher or classmates for help if we have some questions.
If you follow the advice that I have mentioned above, you will be successful.
【考点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本题是写一篇给定材料的书面表达,写作的话题为"怎样提高学习效率",在写作时应注意符合题意,根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯。
写作步骤:
一、阅读提示,弄清所有信息,明确写作要点。
1.应该有良好的学习方法:课前预习、认真听讲、做笔记、及时复习、按时做作业等。
2.良好的健康对有助于学习,每天要有足够的时间锻炼。
3.利用时间、今日事今日毕。
4.有问题问老师或同学。
5.总结:……
二、根据要点,写出关键词、短语或句子。
三、组词成句。
连句成篇。
注意使用一般现在时。
【点评】本题考查对所学知识的综合运用,熟练使用相关短语、单词和句型,注意词性的搭配,时态的把握,人称的使用等细节问题。
3.【答案】The Use of the Cock and the hen
The cock is useful.He always gets up first and cries,"Cock﹣a﹣diidke﹣doo!"to wake all people in the house up.
The hen is useful too.On the one hand,she tries to find food for pretty little chickens;on the other hand,she lays a nice fresh egg for her master's breakfast.Her mistress makes many things with her eggs for the children.She could get on well with eggs.
In a word,both the cock and the hen are useful.It is wrong of them to see their own use only instead of seeing each other's use.
【考点】其他,提纲作文
【解析】【分析】【高分句型一】
On the one hand,she tries to find food for pretty little chickens;on the other hand,she lays a nice fresh egg for her master's breakfast一方面,她尽力去为小鸡找食物,.另一方面下新鲜的鸡蛋给她的主人做早餐.
On the one hand,…;on the other hand…一方面…另一方面…
【高分句型二】
It is wrong of them to see their own use only instead of seeing each other's use他们只看见自己的用处而不是看见彼此的用处是不对的.
it's+adj+of sb+to do sth某人做某事是怎样的.
it是形式主语,动词不定式做真正主语.
4.【答案】Dear Sam,
How time flies! it's time for us to say goodbye!
You have offered me so much help in my English that I think words to show thanks are far from enough.
I still remember three years ago, I had difficulties in learning English. It was difficult for me to memorize so many words and understand what people were saying. My spoken English and written English were poor too. However, I'm so lucky that I met you, a
kind-hearted, smart and patient boy. Firstly, you taught me to listen more and read more. And it really helped me a lot. Besides, you suggested that I should watch English movies and sing classic English songs. In addition, you told me to form the habit of reading aloud in the morning and reading novels before going to bed. As a result, I finally made great progress.
Thank you for all your help and best wishes for you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua 【考点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文,以李华的语气给外籍同学Sam 写一段留言,感谢Sam 在三年的初中生活中在学习上对自己的帮助,重点需要写出Sam的帮助、建议以及措施。
Sam 的帮助属于过去的事情,故需要用动词的过去式。
动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲,写出关键单词。
写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系。
上下文之间可以适当使用连接词。
【点评】在写书面表达首先要注意的问题就是人称,不能混淆人称;其次,应注意动词的形式,根据不同的人称和时态确定动词的形式;再次,句型应该符合英语的表达习惯;最后,用自己熟练掌握的句型造句。
5.【答案】One possible version:
The biggest personal change I've ever mad The biggest personal change I've ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.
When I was a child, I didn't enjoy books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading,I feel like talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.
Books are my friends. And they have and will benefit me a lot.
【考点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇提纲作文,介绍我的个人变化。
写作要求:变化是什么;变化是如何发生的;变化后有何感受。
可知本文主要考查一般过去时和一般现在时,人称为第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:The biggest personal change I've ever made is that...,When I was …,my mother always read...,Gradually I began to...,Books are...,等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系.
【点评】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头The biggest personal change I've ever made is that I have fallen in love with reading.通过一个故事。
介绍了我最大的变化就是喜欢上读书,接下来介绍我是如何喜欢上读书的,主要是母亲的影响,最后介绍喜欢读书的感受,受益很多。
此处fall in love with, not....at all, begin to do sth, feel like doing sth, benefit sb a lot,等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
6.【答案】I will graduate from my school. Therefore I'd like to share something with you. Firstly, because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.
【考点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文,自己即将毕业,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。
结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时,人称为第一,第二人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:Therefore I'd like to ...,it is important for you to...,you can...,it is a good choice to ...,I hope you will...等句式的应用。
写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。
写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,完整地表达出提纲中所列内容。
【点评】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。
开头介绍了我要和你们分享一些事,接下来给七年级的新生提了几条建议:要有好的学习方法,一定要多做锻炼,可以参加社团活动,多交朋友,多读书;最后希望他们有一个精彩的校园生活。
此处graduate from, share sth with sb, in order to, be better at, join in, in one's spare time, keep balance, in addition, have a...life等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
7.【答案】One possible version:
Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?
Many students are optimistic(乐观的)about tour environment in ten years.In fact,they think that more and more people will take part in the environmental protection and our government will take more measures to improve our environment.As a result, our world will be more beautiful and we will have better lives.
However,other students are worried about the future.They say a number of trees will be cut down and there will be more and more private cars..Therefore,we will have even more environmental problems and live in a world with less energy available.But in my opinion,I think we will find ways to solve our problems and everyone will live more happily.
【考点】提纲作文
【解析】【分析】本文要求以“Our Environment in Ten Years: for Better or Worse?”为题作文,谈论学生们的不同观点。
根据图表提示要求,短文应该从“乐观者的观点”、“担心者的观点”及自己的观点与打算几个方面展开写作。
阐述不同人们的观点用一般现在时态,把观点叙述清楚即可,不必谈论其对与错。
短文要注意主动或被动语态的正确使用,要注意语句通顺,语言连贯,观点积极,中心明确。
【点评】本范文语言简捷,语句通顺,语义连贯。
第一段讲述乐观者的观点,第二段讲述担心者的观点,第三段阐述作者的观点。
层次清楚,条理分明。
短文中使用了大量的句型、词组及复杂句式,使短文具体生动,为短文增色添彩。
8.【答案】One possible version:
Dear Frank,
I'm glad to hear that you will come to Nanchong this summer vacation. Nanchong is a great city with a long history. You can watch North Sichuan Puppetry and know about Chen Shou, a well-known historian. He wrote a book called Records of the Three Kingdoms.
There are many places of interest in Nanchong. You can visit Langzhong Ancient City. The buildings are so amazing. And you can enjoy the fantastic Jialing River and the wonderful Mount Lingyun. If you want to relax yourself, make sure to try Zhangfei Beef, Clear Noodles in Chili Sauce and other delicious food. Besides, you can have fun and buy something special for your family and friends at Wangfujing Mall.
Hope to see you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【考点】提纲作文。