浙江新高考英语作文概要和续写

___ 年XX新高考英语题型解读一概要写作一、___ 年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题第二节：概要写作（满分25分）阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Gett ing rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thi ng. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.In the early 16th cen tury, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opi nion had it that washi ng off dirt with hot water could ope n up the ski n and let ills in. A particular dan ger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French ki ng had closed the bath houses in his kin gdom. So did the king of En gla nd in 1546. Thus bega n a long time whe n the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a frien dly way. Henry IV, Ki ng of Fra nee, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a no blema n had take n a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the n oblema n should not go out.Though the belief in the merit （好处）of dirt was Ion g-lived, dirt has no Ion ger bee n regarded as a n ice n eighbor ever since the 18 cen tury. Scie ntifically speaki ng, clea ning away dirt is good to health. Clea n water supply and hand wash ing are practical means of preve nti ng disease. Y et, it seems that sta ndards of clea nli ness have moved bey ond scie nee since World War II. Advertiseme nts repeatedly sell the idea: clothes n eed to be whiter tha n white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely no wadays. Many first-time pare nts n ervously try to warn their childre n off touchi ng dirt, which might be resp on sible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist免疫学家）, en courages childre n to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter （后者）positi on is gai ning some ground.（原创范文，仅供参考）One possible versionPeople have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.要点1 ） For a long time in history, people of some Europea n coun tries, such as Fran ce, believed that dirt protected people from gett ing ill. （要点2 ） However, people bega n to cha nge their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have bee n told that wash ing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.要点3） However, some scie ntists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.要点4）【范文点拨】（一）要点分析1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there isno thi ng fixed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have differe nt attitudes towards dirt.再结合下文谈到的主题可知Differe nt people have differe nt attitudes towards dirt on the skin.范文中的要点1 “ People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. ”概括非常精炼。

2. 第二段主要谈到了在16世纪，人们认为dirt on the skin was a means toblock out disease,尤以英、法两国的贵族为代表。

结合第三段第一句Though the belief in the merit of dirt was Ion g-lived, dirt has no Ion ger bee n regarded as a nice neighbor ever since 18 century可知，直到18世纪之前，人们都认为dirt是很友好的”有助于预防疾病。

范文中的要点 2 “For a long time in history, people of some Europea n coun tries, such as Fran ce, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.很好地总结了这些要点。

3. 第三段用Though引出人们对dirt观点的转变“…si nee the 18th cen tury. Scie ntifically speaki ng, clea ning away dirt is good to health.再结合本段最后一部分” Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea 可得出要点--3 “ However, people began to cha nge their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have bee n told that washi ng dirt off our body can keep us healthy. ”4. 文章最后一段第一句指出，现在人们对于dirt的态度还是有所不同，Onthe contrary引出专家的观点，一位免疫学家认为dirt有助于增强免疫系统。

这一观点获得了一些支持。

范文中的要点 4 “However, some scientists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.表达很恰切。

”（二）要点连接第一段：fixed （确定的；不变的）第二段：means手段，方法）,block out （挡住）,open up （打开）,upon （之后；立即）第三段：Iong-lived （长期存在的）, sell the idea说服某人接收某个观点）第四段：warn sb off （警告某人不要靠近）, position （观点）,gain some ground 取得优势）二、题型解读1.题型介绍♦选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；（2）所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。

♦评分参考阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：（1）对原文要点的理解和呈现情况；（2）应用语法结构和词汇的准确性；（3）上下文的连贯性；（4）对各要点表达的独立性情况。

注意：理解准确，涵盖全部要求，完全使用自己的语言，准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇，得分相应比较高。

相反，如果概要写作部分出现两句以上整句抄自原文现象，得分档次将会大大降低；所写内容与所提供内容无关不得分。

2考查能力3写作步骤1）细读原文。

首先要仔细阅读短文，掌握文章主旨和结构，明确各段的大2）弄清要求。

新高考的概要写作是写全文概要，不是写某一部分的概要，或者就某些问题写出要点。

3）列出原文要点。

分析原文的内容和结构，将内容分项扼要表述并注意在结构上的顺序。

在此基础上选出与文章主题密切相关的部分。

4）在写作时要特别注意下面几点：（1）概要应包括原文中的主要事实，略去不必要的细节。

（2）安排好篇幅的比例，概要应同原文保持协调，即用较多的文字写重要内容，用较少的文字写次要内容。

（3）注意要点之间的衔接，要用适当的关联词语贯通全文，切忌只简单地写出一些互不相干的句子，但也不要每两句之间都加关联词语，以免显得生硬。

（4）不排斥用原文的某些词句，但不要照搬原文的句子，如果不能完全用自己的话语表达，至少对原文句子做一些同义词替换，如果结构上也能有一些转换会更好。

（5）计算词数，看是否符合规定的词数要求。

4.备考建议概要写作，其实我们考生并不陌生，在日常的英语教学中，教师经常让学生就所学英语课文逐段概括段落大意或者复述课文，这在一定程度上都为概要写作打基础。