浙江新高考英语作文概要和续写

___ 年XX新高考英语题型解读一概要写作

一、___ 年浙江新高考《考试说明》英语写作样题

第二节：概要写作（满分25分）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Gett ing rid of dirt, in the opinion of most people, is a good thi ng. However, there is nothing fixed about attitudes to dirt.

In the early 16th cen tury, people thought that dirt on the skin was a means to block out disease, as medical opi nion had it that washi ng off dirt with hot water could ope n up the ski n and let ills in. A particular dan ger was though to lie in public baths. By 1538, the French ki ng had closed the bath houses in his kin gdom. So did the king of En gla nd in 1546. Thus bega n a long time whe n the rich and the poor in Europe lived with dirt in a frien dly way. Henry IV, Ki ng of Fra nee, was famously dirty. Upon learning that a no blema n had take n a bath, the king ordered that, to avoid the attack of disease, the n oblema n should not go out.

Though the belief in the merit （好处）of dirt was Ion g-lived, dirt has no Ion ger bee n regarded as a n ice n eighbor ever since the 18 cen tury. Scie ntifically speaki ng, clea ning away dirt is good to health. Clea n water supply and hand wash ing are practical means of preve nti ng disease. Y et, it seems that sta ndards of clea nli ness have moved bey ond scie nee since World War II. Advertiseme nts repeatedly sell the idea: clothes n eed to be whiter tha n white, cloths ever softer, surfaces to shine. Has the hate for dirt, however, gone too far?

Attitudes to dirt still differ hugely no wadays. Many first-time pare nts n ervously try to warn their childre n off touchi ng dirt, which might be resp on sible for the spread of disease. On the contrary, Mary Ruebush, an American immunologist免疫学家）, en courages childre n to play in the dirt to build up a strong immune system. And the latter （后者）positi on is gai ning some ground.

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One possible version

People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin.要点1 ） For a long time in history, people of some Europea n coun tries, such as Fran ce, believed that dirt protected people from gett ing ill. （要点2 ） However, people bega n to cha nge their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have bee n told that wash ing dirt off our body can keep us healthy.要点3） However, some scie ntists believe that exposure to some dirt may help our immune system.要点4）

【范文点拨】

（一）要点分析

1. 文章第一段就是本篇文章的主题句，亮明了总的观点：However, there is

no thi ng fixed about attitudes to dirt. 换句话说：Different people have differe nt attitudes towards dirt.再结合下文谈到的主题可知Differe nt people have differe nt attitudes towards dirt on the skin.范文中的要点1 “ People have mixed opinions towards dirt on our skin. ”概括非常精炼。

2. 第二段主要谈到了在16世纪，人们认为dirt on the skin was a means to

block out disease,尤以英、法两国的贵族为代表。结合第三段第一句Though the belief in the merit of dirt was Ion g-lived, dirt has no Ion ger bee n regarded as a nice neighbor ever since 18 century可知，直到18世纪之前，人们都认为dirt是很友好的”有助于预防疾病。范文中的要点 2 “For a long time in history, people of some Europea n coun tries, such as Fran ce, believed that dirt protected people from getting ill.很好地总结了这些要点。

3. 第三段用Though引出人们对dirt观点的转变“…si nee the 18th cen tury. Scie ntifically speaki ng, clea ning away dirt is good to health.再结合本段最后一部分” Advertisements repeatedly sell the idea 可得出要点--3 “ However, people began to cha nge their attitudes to dirt about 200 years ago. People have bee n told that washi ng dirt off our body can keep us healthy. ”

4. 文章最后一段第一句指出，现在人们对于dirt的态度还是有所不同，On

the contrary引出专家的观点，一位免疫学家认为dirt有助于增强免疫系统。这