高中英语 Unit 4 Wildlife Protection Section Ⅴ Writing—建议信教学案 新人教版必修2

Unit 4 Wildlife Protection Section Ⅴ Writing—建议信

建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。建议信可能是写给个人，也可能是写给某个组织或机构，信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。

一、基本结构

1．开头——说明写信的原因。

2．主体——陈述建议的具体内容，并指出你所提建议可能会带来的好处。

3．结尾——提出希望自己的建议被采纳的想法。

二、增分佳句

1．It is reported that more and more species of wildlife are dying out.

2．The reason why the number of the wildlife is decreasing is that their living places have been badly destroyed.

3．In modern times, with the development of economy and the improvement of people's life, more and more trees have been cut down.

4．I think stricter laws must be made to punish people who hunt for the rare animals.

5．As a result, these endangered animals even die out.

6．So, it's the time for us to protect our forests and living environment.

7．Only in this way can we save them in time.

8．I hope you will find these suggestions helpful/useful.

[题目要求]

假如你叫李华，你所生活的城市周围有很多动植物正逐渐减少，对此你向有关部门写一封信，分析造成这种现象的原因，并根据实际情况提出切实可行的几条建议。但以下几条要点要包括在内：

1．野生动植物的现状；

2．分析造成许多野生动植物濒临灭绝的原因；

3．提出几条保护野生动植物的具体措施。

注意：1.不可遗漏要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir or Madam，

I'm writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and

around our city.

________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

第一步：审题构思很关键

一、审题

1．确定体裁：本文为建议信；

2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第三人称；

3．确定时态：本文的主要时态应用一般现在时态。

二、构思

开头：描述现状。

主体：分析原因，提出措施。

结尾：提出希望。

第二步：核心词汇想周全

1．in_danger_of 危险中

2．extinction 绝

3．with_the_development_of_... 着……的发展

4．take_measures 取措施

5．protect_..._from_... 护……免受……

第三步：由词扩句雏形现

开头：描述现状

1．正如我们所知，许多野生动植物物种正面临灭绝。

As we know, many species of wildlife are_in_danger_of_extinction.

主体：分析原因，提出措施

2．这是因为野生动植物的生存环境遭到了极大的破坏。

This is because the environment that they are living in has_been_destroyed_greatly.

3．随着城市的发展，水和空气被严重污染。

With_the_development_of cities, water and air are_seriously_polluted.

4．它们不仅缺乏食物，而且有时还会被人猎杀。

They have little to eat and also can be_killed by human beings.

5．这些野生动植物是我们生活的重要部分，我们应该采取更多的措施保护它们免遭伤害。

These species of wildlife are important_part_of_our_life. More measures should be taken to_protect_them_from_being_hurt.

6．制定更多法律以阻止人们砍伐树木。

More laws must be made to_stop_people_from_cutting_down_trees.

7．所有工厂在排废水之前必须净化废水。

All the factories must clean the waste water before_it_is_poured_into rivers or lakes.

8．建立更多的动植物保护区以便它们安全地生活。

More reserves should be set up so_that_they_can_live_safely.

结尾：提出希望

9．我希望我的建议有帮助。

I hope my suggestions are helpful/of_help.

第四步：句式升级造亮点

1．用not only ...but also ...改写句4

They__not_only_have_little_to_eat,_but_also_can_be__killed_by_human_beings.

2．用恰当的过渡语连接句6、7、8

Firstly,_more laws must be made to stop people from cutting down trees. Secondly,_all the factories must clean the waste water before it is poured into rivers or lakes. Thirdly/Lastly,_more reserves should be set up so that they can live safely.

第五步：过渡衔接联成篇

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing to give some suggestions to protect the wildlife living in and around our city. As_we_know,_many_species_of_wildlife_are_in_danger_of_extinction.This_is_becaus e___the_environment_that_they_are_living_in_has_been_destroyed_greatly.

With_the_development_of_cities,_water_and_air_are_seriously_polluted._Their _living_areas_are_becoming_smaller_and_smaller._They_not_only_have_little_to_ea t,_but_also_can_be_killed_by_human_beings._These_species_of_wildlife_are_import ant_part_of_our_life._Personally,_more_measures_should_be_taken_to_protect_them