2021年八省联考英语作文解读及优秀范文

2021年八省联考英语作文解读及优秀范文

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假定你是李华，准备参加学校组织的英文诗朗诵比赛。请给外教George写封邮件求助，内容包括：1.说明比赛要求；2.请他推荐英文诗；3.请教朗诵技巧。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Mr.George,I’m writing to ask for your

help.________________________________Yours,Li Hua

题型解读

应用文写作主要考查学生英语语言的实际应用能力，该题型写作目的明确，测试学生在实际生活情景下运用英语传达信息、表达观点的能力，题目侧重英语语言的交际性和实用性。应用文写作文体以书信（邮件）类为主，这类应用文通常出现提纲式要点，话题常与学生的校园生活相关。此次八省联考英语写作部分第一题应用文写作考查的方向是求助信。这对学生作文训练的全面性和灵活性是一个挑战。

推荐词汇和句型

求助信是向对方求助，所以言辞要诚恳，如实说出自己的现状以及求助内容，一般分为三个部分，即说明写信目的、描述所遇问题、表达期望。其中“写信目的”和“表达期望”可以使用如下的一些常用句式进行展开：

【写信目的】

1.I’m writing to ask for your help.

我写信的目的是寻求你的帮助。

2.I wonder if you can offer me some tips on…

我想知道你能否给我一些关于……的建议。

3.I am writing in the hope that you can give me some advice on…我写信是希望你能给我一些关于……的建议。

4.Would you be kind enough to give me a hand with the following problems?

你能帮我解决下面的问题吗?

【表达期望】

1.I’d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance.

如果你能给我一些指导，我会很感激的。

2.I am eager to get your timely help.

我渴望得到你及时的帮助。

3.I will be grateful if you can spare time to give me a hand.

如果你能抽出时间帮助我，我将不胜感激。

优秀范文

Dear Mr.George,

I’m writing to ask for your help.

I am eager to enter for the English Poetry Declamation Contest our school will be holding next weekend.The theme must be related to nature.Each competitor will be given five minutes to read.Would you please be so kind as to give me some recommendations for poems?If it’s not too much to ask,could I also ask you for tips to polish my performance?Any advice on declamation,including pronunciation and intonation,would be helpful.

I’d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance.Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

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阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。During this past year,I’ve had three instances of car trouble.Each time these things happened,I was sick of the way most people hadn’t bothered to help.One of those times,I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep.I put signs in the windows,big signs that said NEED A JACK（千斤顶）,and offered money.Nothing.Right as I was about to give up,a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over,and the father bounded out.

He sized up the situation and called for his daughter,who spoke English.He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep,so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw（锯子）from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road.We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.

I started taking the wheel off,and then,if you can believe it,I broke his tire iron.No worries:He handed it to his wife,and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron.She was back in15 minutes.We finished the job,and I was a very happy man.

The two of us were dirty and sweaty.His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands.I tried to put a$20bill in the man’