雅思7分写作讲义

雅思考试写作金牌教程（6-7.5分）教学方案

第一次课

一、教学目标：雅思写作概述、基本构成、雅思写作考试与其他考试的类比

二、课时陈述：第一次课，2.5小时

三、教学重点：议论文体和报告文体的题型

四、教学难点：雅思评分标准与其他考试评分标准的异同

五、教学亮点：雅思考官阅卷的潜规则

六、课堂结构：

1、雅思考试介绍

2、雅思考试评分标准

3、雅思写作话题介绍

4、雅思写作题型介绍

5、中英两国写作对比

1、雅思考试介绍

雅思写作的量分 task1 占三分之一，而task2占三分之二。

Task 1 （以下简称小作文）

题型：LINE PIE BAR TABLE DIAGRAM MAP MIXED

Task 2 (以下简称大作文)

题型：argumentation report

2、雅思考试评分标准

孙武子说“知己知彼，百战百胜”.为了更好的对付雅思写作考试，我们起先要了解它的具体评分准则。

Task Response and Fulfillment

Coherence and Cohesion

Lexical resources

Grammatical Range and Accuracy

Band 7—good user

Has operational command of the language, though with occasional inaccuracies, inappropriacies and misunderstandings in some situations. Generally handles complex language well and understands detailed reasoning.

具体要求：

Task response: whether all parts of the task are addressed; whether a viewpoint is clearly expressed, developed and supported.

Coherence and cohesion: whether the response has a suitable layout and logical ordering of points; correct and appropriate use of connectives. Lexical resources: range and accuracy of vocabulary; the examiner will check the correct forms and the spelling of words used.

Grammatical range and accuracy: the range and accuracy of tenses and sentence structures.

Task response or fulfillment （完整性）

一篇文章必须有一定的架构，议论文通常由“内三合，外三合”所构成。内三合讲求论点，论据，论证。外三合正是Introduction（引言段）Body（正文）Conclusion（结尾段）.此外，每个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现，若只有主题句没有推展句来进一步充实，则有头无尾，不能构成一个完整的段落，反之亦然，若只有推展句，主题思想没有得到相对交代的话，则显突兀，也不算完整。Coherence（连贯性）

连贯性包括：意连和形连

意连指的是内在的逻辑性，形连指的是转换词语。两者相辅相成，只形连没意连，句子或段落缺乏有机联系，只意连无形连则行文不够流畅。

Sample:

表示层进：first of all, firstly, to begin with, in the first place, secondly, besides, in addition, moreover, meanwhile, third, thirdly, what’s more,

表示举例：for instance, such as, to take… as an example.

表示解释：as a matter of fact, in other words, frankly speaking.

表示总结：overall, in summary, to conclude, on the whole.

表示强调: above all, what’s more important, in fact.

表示让步：nevertheless, in spite of, even so.

表示比较：in comparison, similarly, equally, in the same way.

表示转折：in contrast, on the other hand, yet, despite the fact that. 表示原因：since, because of, due to, in that case.

表示结局: to sum up, in conclusion, in brief.

Cohesion (统一性)

一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。

One simple point is that fossil fuels are bad for our environment. The use of fossil fuels leaves behind particles in the air which can cause breathing disorders and pollute the natural world. The environment is naturally able to deal with a certain amount of pollution, but humans are now so numerous and our use of fossil fuels is so vast that this has now become impossible. As a result, we are faced with choosing renewable forms of energy or destroying our natural environment.

Vocabulary & sentence structure

注意熟识与精确记忆高频精妙词汇，如遇到语言类考试：