中考英语书面表达专题复习经典

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【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以My Life At School为题,写一篇发言稿。题目中利用表格的形式,展示了文章的具体内容,学生们可以此为提纲进行写作。审题可知,这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,注意根据表达需要使用正确时态,并注意谓语动词的正确形式。内容应主要包括三部分:首先是初中三年里的美好回忆;然后是不开心的事情;最后展望自己未来的高中生活。表格中有非常具体的提示,但不能逐词翻译表格中的短语,应把他们变成自己的话,并用英语表达出来。写作时应注意:文章中应包括表格中的所有信息,不能遗漏要点;第三部分的内容中还需要自己发挥想象力进行补充,注意应合情合理,与上文很好地衔接。另外注意句式结构要符合英语的表达习惯,用完整的句子表达。句式结构可以简单句为基础,穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式的使用,提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用适当的连接成分,使文意连贯、自然。
【答案】My Life At School
How time flies! It’s unbelievable that I’m going to graduate from my beloved school. There are many things to remember.
In the junior school, I got along well with my classmates. The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia. I learned a lot from the experience. I also remember I served as volunteer to help others. Certainly, there were also unhappy things. My good friend Li Hua went to another school. I was very sad. Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.
【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories alsoput waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.
感想建议
环境能够变得更好......
Change for a better China
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【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求,回忆了自己的初中生活,并展望了未来。短文有以下几个特点:首先文章内容完整,结构清晰。短文分三段,第一段基本是题目中给出的开头,作者使用一句话引出下文;第二段是主体,介绍了过去美好的回忆以及不开心的事情;最后一段对未来进行了展望。各部分内容安排合理,有层次、有条理。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,语法规范,用词准确,注意了动词正确形式的变化。句式结构完整,符合英语的表达习惯。语言准确、得体,表达自然、流畅。短文中使用了丰富的句型和短语,如The teachers are very friendly and they are ready to help me. The most unforgettable thing is that I got a chance of becoming an exchange students and spent two months in Australia.Luckily, we kept in touch with each other through emails. Besides, I was not good at Chinese writing.I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.等。
3.环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一,请以Change for a better China为主题,结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。
注意事项:
1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容,条理清楚,作适当发挥。
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,词数不少于80。
状况
水污染,大气污染......
应对措施
立即阻止此类活动,治理环境(至少两条)......
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英,也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维,考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以,考生不能遗漏要点,要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式,尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
2.马上要初中毕业了,大家都是依依不舍的。班主任决定在下周举办一场“My Life At School”主题班会,邀请全班同学参加。请你根据以下提示,写一篇发言稿。
美好的回忆
1.与同学融洽相处;2.得到老师的帮助;
3.获得交换生机会;4.参加志愿者活动。
不开心的事情
1.好朋友李华转学;2.不擅长语文写作。
未来展望
1.升上理想的学ຫໍສະໝຸດ Baidu;
2.能结识更多朋友;
3.请你补充(至少两点)
My Life At School
How time flies! It's unbelievable that I'm going to graduate from my beloved school.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少,如make good use of,last weekend,how to do,play a game,a kind of,spent more time on,forget to do,in the end,be angry with,be going to do,on the paper,put up等。而特殊非谓语动词结构Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用,丰富了短文内容,使表达多样化,是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章表达更有逻辑性,也更富有条理。
中考英语书面表达专题复习经典
一、中考英语书面表达(含答案详细解析)
1.你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。
内容包括:1.你没完成学习任务的经历(事情,原因及后果);2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。
作文要求:1.短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.
I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.
How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.
I hope I can go to a dream school and make more new friends. I also wish I can do better in all subjects when I am in high school and can go to a good college.
3.词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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