2015年第43周(高考英语作文赏析-图表作文)

1 高考英语作文赏析(图表作文)

作文一：

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

上海市正提倡建设“节约型社会”，下图为某校两个学期用水、用电、用纸的情况。请对其进行简要分析，以“How to build an economized society”为题，写一篇作文，谈谈自己的想法。

According to the graph, this school, the epitome of all the schools in Shanghai, didn’t have a good control of its water and electricity use. The water amount rises from 80 to 95 while electricity climbs from 60 to 75, both of which demand our prompt attention. As a citizen, my suggestions to develop Shanghai into an economized society are listed as follows.

To begin with, lights should be turned off when no one is in the room. The mentioned “room” ranges from classroom to home in definition. Fans are highly recommended to replace air-conditioners in summer time. In addition, water is encouraged to be recycled if possible. Finished using in dish-washing, water can be used in toilet-flushing. Creative minds are appreciated in using water in different purposes. What’s more, clothing bags ought to substitute for paper bags in daily life. The behavior of bringing one’s paper bag to the supermarket contributes to terminating white pollution.

Shanghai, a metropolitan city worldwide, expects our efforts to help itself turn into an economized society, which in turn will benefit ourselves and our future generations as well.

(180r ds)

审题：

本文是非常典型的图表材料议论文。此类体裁的写作首先要求作者能够细致、全面地观察图片，能够从图片中得到关于论点乃至于论据的信息，这样，作文就有了成功的基础。比如本图表，我们可以从中得知一个最明显的结论：该学校下半学期的用水、用电和用纸量都比上半学期多。接下来，应该重点围绕“How to build an economized society”，提出自己认为可行的解决方法。最后进行归纳总结。

高级词汇及短语：

epitome 缩, terminate 终止

多样句型：

1.非限制性定语从句1）The water amount rises from 80 to 95 while electricity climbs from 60 to

75, both of which demand our prompt attention；2）Shanghai, a metropolitan city worldwide, expects our efforts to help itself turn into an economized society, which in turn will benefit ourselves and our future generations as well.

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作文二：

Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

最近学校在高中学生中做了一次”有烦恼向谁说” (To whom do you go when in trouble)的调查活动，调查结果如图所示。请你简要描述调查结果，并结合自己的选择，谈谈想法和理由。

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A survey has been conducted among senior high students on the topic “T o whom do you go when in trouble.” The data from the pie chart shows that “classmates and friends” ranks first at 58%, which is followed by “their own” at 33%. However, the least proportion goes to “parents and teachers” at only 9%.

As far as I am concerne d, I’m not among the majority that tends to ask friends for help. I am more willing to go to parents and teachers and I think my peers should also consider going to them when in trouble.

Firstly, parents and teachers may know more about you than yourselves. Since they have a more objective and all-around perspective on you, they are bound to give you useful advice. What’s more, parents and teachers are experienced adults who must have suffered many worries and hardships. They must have accumulated much experience which can broaden your horizons when you deal with matters. Last but not least, by having constant communications with your parents and teachers, you are sure to strengthen the relationship with them despite the generation gap. In a word, to go to adults when in trouble may help you more when you are in difficulty.

For the reasons above, I want to call on my peers to communicate more often with their parents and teachers.

(224 words )

审题：

首先，文章需要大致介绍背景。其次，我们看出这个圆内扇形图有三个量，可以依次将数据表达出来。第二部分，需要学生做出自己的一个选择。注意，你可以选择三者中的任意一者，只需言之有理。但是，学生应该牢记一句翻译名句：Always give the money what he wants ，即“投其所好”，选择一个较容易下笔的面进行论述。提示考生没有必要为了博阅卷老师眼球，选择较难论述的一面。

高级词汇及短语：

the least proportion, have a more objective and all-around perspective on sb., be bound to, call on my peers to do

多样句型：

1. 非限制性定语从句 The data from the pie chart shows that “classmates and friends” ranks first at 58%, which is followed by “their own” at 33%.

2. 定语从句 parents and teachers are experienced adults who must have suffered many worries and hardships.