Simon考官范文-雅思大作文：'agree or disagree' essay structures
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目录1. 政府是否该支持本土电影 (2)2. 外国游客应该比本地游客花更多钱 (3)3. 现代社会的人变得更独立还是更不独立 (4)4. 选择工作最重要的考虑因素是薪水 (5)5. 动物实验是否应该禁止 (6)6. 政府是否应该支持艺术工作者 (7)7. 青少年是否应该无偿为社区工作 (8)8. 我们为什么需要音乐 (9)9. 电脑游戏是好还是坏呢 (10)10. 平均寿命变长的原因和应对方法 (11)11. 我们应该只关心自己的国家吗 (12)12. 科技是如何影响人们的日常交流的 (13)13. 兴趣爱好应该是很困难的 (14)14. 平等社会和个人成就之间的关系 (15)15. 大学每个科目的男生女生数量应该相等 (16)16. 博物馆的目的应该是娱乐还是教育 (17)17. 应该上大学还是应该直接找工作 (18)18. 政府是否应该出钱保护濒危语言 (19)19. 环境污染的方式以及政府和个人能够做什么 (20)20. 为何幸福很难定义以及如何获得幸福 (21)21. 你是否同意保护野生动物是浪费资源 (22)22. 严厉惩罚交通肇事能提高行驶安全吗 (23)23. 企业除了赚钱以外要承担社会责任 (24)24. 政府如何让城市生活更美好 (25)25. 现在人们更喜欢独居了是好还是坏呢 (26)26. 大学生应该学习自己喜欢的还是对社会有用的 (27)27. 让罪犯用亲身经历告诉青少年不要犯罪 (28)28. 传统思想在当代是否还有用武之地 (29)1.政府是否该支持本土电影Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?范文：It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidising the industry.There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain countries have huge budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the James Bond films are examples of such productions and the global appeal that they have. Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison.In my view, governments should support local film industries financially. In every country, there may be talented amateur film-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for film crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality films. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the Rings' films, which were partly funded by government subsidies.In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market.(295 words, band 9)2.外国游客应该比本地游客花更多钱Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for cultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea.The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going, which means that the resident population already pays money to these sites through the tax system. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel. The governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to visit them.If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on holiday. To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor Castle or Saint Paul’s Cathedral. These two sites charge the same price regardless of nationality, and this helps to promote the n ation’s cultural heritage. If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important buildings.In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to attract tourists from overseas, and it would be counterproductive to make them pay more than local residents.(269 words, band 9)3.现代社会的人变得更独立还是更不独立Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent on others nowadays. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independent than people were in the past.There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependent on each other now. Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especially because the cost of living has increased so dramatically. For example, young adults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. Property prices are higher than ever, and without help it would be impossible for many people to pay a deposit and a mortgage. Secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want a better quality of life for their families. This means that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they depend on support from grandparents and babysitters for child care. However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days. In most countries, families are becoming smaller and more dispersed, which means that people cannot count on relatives as much as they used to. We also have more freedom to travel and live far away from our home towns. For example, many students choose to study abroad instead of going to their local university, and this experience makes them more independent as they learn to live alone. Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world.In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now depend on each other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.4.选择工作最重要的考虑因素是薪水When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Many people choose their jobs based on the size of the salary offered. Personally, I disagree with the idea that money is the key consideration when deciding on a career, because I believe that other factors are equally important. On the one hand, I agree that money is necessary in order for people to meet their basic needs. For example, we all need money to pay for housing, food, bills, health care, and education. Most people consider it a priority to at least earn a salary that allows them to cover these needs and have a reasonable quality of life. If people chose their jobs based on enjoyment or other non-financial factors, they might find it difficult to support themselves. Artists and musicians, for instance, are known for choosing a career path that they love, but that does not always provide them with enough money to live comfortably and raise a family.Nevertheless, I believe that other considerations are just as important as what we earn in our jobs. Firstly, personal relationships and the atmosphere in a workplace are extremely important when choosing a job. Having a good manager or friendly colleagues, for example, can make a huge difference to workers’ levels of happiness and general quality of life. Secondly, many people’s f eelings of job satisfaction come from their professional achievements, the skills they learn, and the position they reach, rather than the money they earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and contribute something positive to society.In conclusion, while salaries certainly affect people’s choice of profession, I do not believe that money outweighs all other motivators.5.动物实验是否应该禁止Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animals before they are cleared for human use. While I tend towards the viewpoint that animal testing is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amount of animal experimentation for the development of medicines.On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation. To use a common example of this practice, laboratory mice may be given an illness so that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to subject animals to this kind of trauma, and that the lives of all creatures should be respected. They believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused, and that scientists should use alternative methods of research. On the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may not always be available. Supporters of the use of animals in medical research believe that a certain amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats can be justified if human lives are saved. They argue that opponents of such research might feel differently if a member of their own families needed a medical treatment that had been developed through the use of animal experimentation. Personally, I agree with the banning of animal testing for non-medical products, but I feel that it may be a necessary evil where new drugs and medical procedures are concerned.In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animals for vital medical research until equally effective alternatives have been developed.(270 words, band 9)6.政府是否应该支持艺术工作者Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.People have different views about the funding of creative artists. While some people disagree with the idea of government support for artists, I believe that money for art projects should come from both governments and other sources. Some art projects definitely require help from the state. In the UK, there are many works of art in public spaces, such as streets or squares in city centres. In Liverpool, for example, there are several new statues and sculptures in the docks area of the city, which has been redeveloped recently. These artworks represent culture, heritage and history. They serve to educate people about the city, and act as landmarks or talking points for visitors and tourists. Governments and local councils should pay creative artists to produce this kind of art, because without their funding our cities would be much less interesting and attractive.On the other hand, I can understand the arguments against government funding for art. The main reason for this view is that governments have more important concerns. For example, state budgets need to be spent on education, healthcare, infrastructure and security, among other areas. These public services are vital for a country to function properly, whereas the work of creative artists, even in public places, is a luxury. Another reason for this opinion is that artists do a job like any other professional, and they should therefore earn their own money by selling their work.In conclusion, there are good reasons why artists should rely on alternative sources of financial support, but in my opinion government help is sometimes necessary.7.青少年是否应该无偿为社区工作Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree? Many young people work on a volunteer basis, and this can only be beneficial for both the individual and society as a whole. However, I do not agree that we should therefore force all teenagers to do unpaid work.Most young people are already under enough pressure with their studies, without being given the added responsibility of working in their spare time. School is just as demanding as a full-time job, and teachers expect their students to do homework and exam revision on top of attending lessons every day. When young people do have some free time, we should encourage them to enjoy it with their friends or to spend it doing sports and other leisure activities. They have many years of work ahead of them when they finish their studies.At the same time, I do not believe that society has anything to gain from obliging young people to do unpaid work. In fact, I would argue that it goes against the values of a free and fair society to force a group of people to do something against their will. Doing this can only lead to resentment amongst young people, who would feel that they were being used, and parents, who would not want to be told how to raise their children. Currently, nobody is forced to volunteer, and this is surely the best system.In conclusion, teenagers may choose to work for free and help others, but in my opinion we should not make this compulsory.(250 words, band 9)8.我们为什么需要音乐There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?It is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world. Music is a vital part of all human cultures for a range of reasons, and I would argue that traditional music is more important than modern, international music.Music is something that accompanies all of us throughout our lives. As children, we are taught songs by our parents and teachers as a means of learning language, or simply as a form of enjoyment. Children delight in singing with others, and it would appear that the act of singing in a group creates a connection between participants, regardless of their age. Later in life, people’s musical preferences develop, and we come to see our favourite songs as part of our life stories. Music both expresses and arouses emotions in a way that words alone cannot. In short, it is difficult to imagine life without it.In my opinion, traditional music should be valued over the international music that has become so popular. International pop music is often catchy and fun, but it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and sold by business people. Traditional music, by contrast, expresses the culture, customs and history of a country. Traditional styles, such as ...(example)..., connect us to the past and form part of our cultural identity. It would be a real pity if pop music became so predominant that these national styles disappeared.In conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence, and I believe that traditional music should be given more importance than international music. (261 words, band 9)9.电脑游戏是好还是坏呢Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?Many people, and children in particular, enjoy playing computer games. While I accept that these games can sometimes have a positive effect on the user, I believe that they are more likely to have a harmful impact.On the one hand, video games can be both entertaining and educational. Users, or gamers, are transported into virtual worlds which are often more exciting and engaging than real-life pastimes. From an educational perspective, these games encourage imagination and creativity, as well as concentration, logical thinking and problem solving, all of which are useful skills outside the gaming context. Furthermore, it has been shown that computer simulation games can improve users’ motor skills and help to prepare them for re al-world tasks, such as flying a plane.However, I would argue that these benefits are outweighed by the drawbacks. Gaming can be highly addictive because users are constantly given scores, new targets and frequent rewards to keep them playing. Many children now spend hours each day trying to progress through the levels of a game or to get a higher score than their friends. This type of addiction can have effects ranging from lack of sleep to problems at school, when homework is sacrificed for a few more hours on the computer or console. The rise in obesity in recent years has also been linked in part to the sedentary lifestyle and lack of exercise that often accompany gaming addiction.In conclusion, it seems to me that the potential dangers of video games are more significant than the possible benefits.(258 words, band 9)10.平均寿命变长的原因和应对方法In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longer than ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate these potential problems. As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated. The main issue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who will be eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adults will be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxes in relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageing population will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Further pressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives.There are several actions that governments could take to solve the problems described above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life. A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in order to increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbers of older citizens.In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tackle the problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries grow older.(265 words, band 9)11.我们应该只关心自己的国家吗We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Some people believe that we should not help people in other countries as long as there are problems in our own society. I disagree with this view because I believe that we should try to help as many people as possible.On the one hand, I accept that it is important to help our neighbours and fellow citizens. In most communities there are people who are impoverished or disadvantaged in some way. It is possible to find homeless people, for example, in even the wealthiest of cities, and for those who are concerned about this problem, there are usually opportunities to volunteer time or give money to support these people. In the UK, people can help in a variety of ways, from donating clothing to serving free food in a soup kitchen. As the problems are on our doorstep, and there are obvious ways to help, I can understand why some people feel that we should prioritise local charity.At the same time, I believe that we have an obligation to help those who live beyond our national borders. In some countries the problems that people face are much more serious than those in our own communities, and it is often even easier to help. For example, when children are dying from curable diseases in African countries, governments and individuals in richer countries can save lives simply by paying for vaccines that already exist. A small donation to an international charity might have a much greater impact than helping in our local area.In conclusion, it is true that we cannot help everyone, but in my opinion national boundaries should not stop us from helping those who are in need. (280 words, band 9)12.科技是如何影响人们的日常交流的Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communication between people. Technology has affected relationships in various ways, and in my opinion there are both positive and negative effects.Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education and social life. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries to interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly, services like Skype create new possibilities for relationships between students and teachers. For example, a student can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or country. Finally, many people use social networks, like Facebook, to make new friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through their computers rather than face to face.On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. Cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when communication was limited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays, interactions by email, phone or video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings, and many of us benefit from these interactions, either in work or social contexts. On the other hand, the availability of new communication technologies can also have the result of isolating people and discouraging real interaction. For example, many young people choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers in the real world, and these ‘virtual’ relationships are a poor substitute for real friendships.In conclusion, technology has certainly revolutionised communication between people, but not all of the outcomes of this revolution have been positive.13.兴趣爱好应该是很困难的Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge. Personally, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore disagree with the statement that hobbies need to be difficult in order to be enjoyable.On the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies. One example of an activity that is easy for most people is swimming. This hobby requires very little equipment, it is simple to learn, and it is inexpensive. I remember learning to swim at my local swimming pool when I was a child, and it never felt like a demanding or challenging experience. Another hobby that I find easy and fun is photography. In my opinion, anyone can take interesting pictures without knowing too much about the technicalities of operating a camera. Despite being straightforward, taking photos is a satisfying activity.On the other hand, difficult hobbies can sometimes be more exciting. If an activity is more challenging, we might feel a greater sense of satisfaction when we manage to do it successfully. For example, film editing is a hobby that requires a high level of knowledge and expertise. In my case, it took me around two years before I became competent at this activity, but now I enjoy it much more than I did when I started. I believe that many hobbies give us more pleasure when we reach a higher level of performance because the results are better and the feeling of achievement is greater.In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing, but difficult hobbies can be equally pleasurable for different reasons.14.平等社会和个人成就之间的关系In recent years, there has been growing interest in the relationship between equality and personal achievement. Some people believe that individuals can achieve more in egalitarian societies. Others believe that high levels of personal achievement are possible only if individuals are free to succeed or fail according to their individual merits. What is your view of the relationship between equality and personal success?In my opinion, an egalitarian society is one in which everyone has the same rights and the same opportunities. I completely agree that people can achieve more in this kind of society.Education is an important factor with regard to personal success in life. I believe that all children should have access to free schooling, and higher education should be either free or affordable for all those who chose to pursue a university degree. In a society without free schooling or affordable higher education, only children and young adults from wealthier families would have access to the best learning opportunities, and they would therefore be better prepared for the job market. This kind of inequality would ensure the success of some but harm the prospects of others.I would argue that equal rights and opportunities are not in conflict with people’s freedom to succeed or fail. In other words, equality does not mean that people lose their motivation to succeed, or that they are not allowed to fail. On the contrary, I believe that most people would feel more motivated to work hard and reach their potential if they thought that they lived in a fair society. Those who did not make the same effort would know that they had wasted their opportunity. Inequality, on the other hand, would be more likely to demotivate people because they would know that the odds of success were stacked in favour of those from privileged backgrounds.In conclusion, it seems to me that there is a positive relationship between equality and personal success.(260 words)15.大学每个科目的男生女生数量应该相等Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every university subject.Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it is surely wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications.In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender.(265 words, band 9)。
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Introduction:In today's society, there are various issues and topics that people may agree or disagree on. These can range from political policies to social norms, and it is important for individuals to critically analyze and form their own opinions on these matters. In this essay, I will discuss the importance of being able to agree or disagree on different topics and provide examples to support my argument.Body Paragraph 1:Firstly, it is crucial for individuals to have the ability to agree or disagree on different topics because it promotes critical thinking and intellectual growth. When individuals are able to form their own opinions and engage in discussions with others who may have differing viewpoints, it allows for the exchange of ideas and perspectives. This can lead to a deeper understanding of the topic at hand and help individuals to expand their knowledge base. For example, in a classroom setting, students who are encouraged to express their opinions and engage in debates are more likely to develop critical thinking skills and become more open-minded individuals.Body Paragraph 2:Furthermore, the ability to agree or disagree on different topics fosters a sense of independence and individuality. When individuals are able to form their own opinions, it allows them to assert their own beliefs and values. This can lead to a greater sense of self-confidence and empowerment, as individuals are able to stand by their convictions and advocate for what they believe in. For instance, in a democratic society, the ability to express one's opinions and participate in debates is essential for the functioning of a healthy and inclusive society.Body Paragraph 3:On the other hand, some may argue that the ability to agree or disagree on different topics can lead to conflict and division. While it is true that disagreements can sometimes lead to tension and discord, it is important to recognize that healthy debates and discussions are essential for progress and growth. When individuals are able to express their opinions and engage in respectful dialogue, it can lead to the development of new ideas and solutions. For example, in the field of science, disagreements and debates have often led to groundbreaking discoveries and advancements.Conclusion:In conclusion, the ability to agree or disagree on different topics is essential for intellectual growth, independence, and the development of new ideas. It is important for individuals to be able to form their own opinions and engage in discussions with others who may have differing viewpoints. By doing so, we can promote a more inclusive and open-minded society where diverse perspectives are valued and respected.。
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雅思大作文同意不同意类一边倒范文英文回答：In the IELTS writing task 2, one of the question types assesses the candidate's ability to take a position on a given statement or argument and provide reasons to support their stance. The examiner presents a topic and asks the candidate to agree or disagree with the statement. This type of question is often referred to as the"agree/disagree" essay.In an agree/disagree essay, it is important for the candidate to clearly state their position in the introduction. They should make it clear whether they agree or disagree with the given statement and then provide reasons to support their position. The reasons should be specific, detailed, and relevant to the topic.In the body paragraphs, the candidate should develop their arguments and provide evidence to support theirclaims. They should use a variety of sentence structuresand vocabulary to demonstrate their language proficiency.It is also important to consider the opposing viewpoint and address any counterarguments.In the conclusion, the candidate should restate their position and summarize the main points of their essay. They should also provide a final thought or reflection on the topic.Overall, the agree/disagree essay requires thecandidate to demonstrate their ability to take a positionon a given topic, provide reasons to support their stance, and write a well-organized and cohesive essay.中文回答：雅思大作文中的一边倒类问题旨在考察考生的立场和论证能力。
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原文：In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?In the modern world, the use of animals for food, clothing, and medicine has become a controversial issue. While some people argue that it is no longer necessary to use animals for these purposes, others believe that there are still valid reasons for doing so. In my opinion, I agree that it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing or medicine.Firstly, with the advancements in technology and science, there are now alternative sources for food, clothing, and medicine that do not involve the use ofanimals. For example, plant-based diets have become increasingly popular as a healthier and more sustainable option for food. In addition, synthetic materials and fabrics have been developed as alternatives to animal products, reducing the need for animal-based clothing. Furthermore, modern medicine has made significant progress in the development of non-animal testing methods and alternative treatments, reducing the reliance on animal experimentation and products.Secondly, the ethical implications of using animals for human consumption and exploitation cannot be ignored. Many people are becoming more aware of the suffering and mistreatment of animals in the food, clothing, and pharmaceutical industries. The inhumane conditions in factory farms, the cruel practices of the fur and leather industries, and the use of animals in medical experiments have raised ethical concerns and led to calls for more compassionate and sustainable practices.Moreover, the environmental impact of using animals for food, clothing, and medicine is a pressing issue. Thelivestock industry is a major contributor to greenhouse gas emissions, deforestation, and water pollution. The demand for animal products has led to the unsustainable use of natural resources and the degradation of ecosystems. By reducing the reliance on animals, we can mitigate the environmental damage caused by these industries and work towards a more sustainable future.In conclusion, I believe that it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing, or medicine. The availability of alternative sources, the ethical implications, and the environmental impact all point towards the need for a shift towards more compassionate and sustainable practices. By embracing these alternatives, we can create a world where animals are no longer exploitedfor human needs, and where we can coexist in harmony with the natural world.仿写：In the contemporary world, the issue of whether it is still necessary to use animals for food, clothing, andmedicine has sparked heated debates. While some individuals argue that there are still valid reasons for using animals for these purposes, others believe that with the advancements in technology and science, it is no longer necessary to rely on animals. In my opinion, I strongly agree that it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing, or medicine.First and foremost, the rapid advancements in technology and science have provided us with alternative sources for food, clothing, and medicine that do not involve the use of animals. For instance, the rise ofplant-based diets has gained popularity as a healthier and more sustainable option for food consumption. Additionally, the development of synthetic materials and fabrics has offered viable alternatives to animal products, reducing the need for animal-based clothing. Furthermore, the field of modern medicine has made significant progress in the development of non-animal testing methods and alternative treatments, decreasing the reliance on animal experimentation and products.Secondly, the ethical considerations surrounding theuse of animals for human consumption and exploitationcannot be overlooked. The mistreatment and suffering of animals in the food, clothing, and pharmaceuticalindustries have raised ethical concerns among the public. The inhumane conditions in factory farms, the cruelpractices of the fur and leather industries, and the use of animals in medical experiments have led to a growing demand for more compassionate and sustainable practices.Moreover, the environmental impact of using animals for food, clothing, and medicine is a pressing issue thatcannot be ignored. The livestock industry is a major contributor to greenhouse gas emissions, deforestation, and water pollution. The demand for animal products has led to the unsustainable use of natural resources and the degradation of ecosystems. By reducing our reliance on animals, we can mitigate the environmental damage caused by these industries and work towards a more sustainable future.In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing, or medicine.The availability of alternative sources, the ethical implications, and the environmental impact all point towards the need for a shift towards more compassionate and sustainable practices. By embracing these alternatives, we can create a world where animals are no longer exploitedfor human needs, and where we can coexist in harmony with the natural world.。
simon范文(15篇)
simon范文(15篇)simon范文第1篇假如大家有空闲时间，并且想提高听力反应速度，可以渐渐从慢速过渡到正常速读。
在全部的慢速材料中，推举VOA 和BBC 英语，可以挑里面话题比较日常的新闻听一听。
练习的时候肯定要听懂每一个单词每一个句子，不要留下任何死角。
一旦习惯了这种语速，就可以听正常语速的材料了。
平常也要多涉猎一些题材，可以选择一些自己感爱好的英文电视剧或者电影，不要带字幕，然后一边看剧一边听，消遣的同时还能练习听力力量。
假如一部剧的一半以上都听不懂，那就选择更简洁一点的，比如一些动画片之类的，小猪佩奇也可以，哈哈哈。
simon范文第2篇part1 和2 是整个口最简单拿高分的部分，这个环节回答的好了，part3 也会水到渠成，大家务必重视。
关于part2，简单考察的话题就那么多，大家可以在训练营get 一下免费的题库，然后分为不同的话题，积累不同的表达，着重背诵和练习。
前两个部分是最基础和重要的，是能够通过不断反复练习快速拿下的。
对于前两个部分的话题和考官简单问的问题，口语题库基本是能够掩盖的。
大家平常肯定要去多多练习和积累。
对于真题上面的题目，可以预留1 个月的时间，着重练习一遍，检验自己的复习效果，也看看真题一般是怎么考察的。
对于心理素养和口语基础不好的同学，肯定要反复练习，只有娴熟到肯定程度，才不会在考试的时候由于紧急、可怕等各种缘由出错。
simon范文第3篇雅思阅读对阅读速度要求是很高的，一共三篇学术文章，有40 个题目，答题时间仅仅只有 1 个小时左右，想都读完读懂做题是完全不行能的事情。
假如每一句、每一段都细读的话，可能一半的题目都做不完。
因此，肯定要学会利用关键词句快速定位到答案，这就是为什么许多时候看不懂文章，题目正确率却很高的缘由。
有了肯定的长难句和语法基础后，平常肯定要养成快速阅读的习惯，抓住一个句子的主干，把一些修饰性的内容跳过或者略读，丢掉逐个单词阅读的坏习惯，而是要一行一行地快速阅读，查找关键词和关键句。
雅思作文万能模板同意与否
雅思作文万能模板同意与否Title: A Universal Template for IELTS Writing: Agree or Disagree。
Introduction:In the IELTS writing test, one of the most common essay types is the agree or disagree essay. This type of essay requires the test-taker to express their opinion on a given topic and provide reasons to support their stance. In this article, we will discuss a universal template that can be used to effectively structure an agree or disagree essay for the IELTS writing test.Paragraph 1: Introduction。
The first paragraph of an agree or disagree essay should introduce the topic and clearly state the test-taker's opinion. It is important to paraphrase the given statement or question to show an understanding of the topic. Additionally, the test-taker should clearly state whether they agree or disagree with the statement and briefly outline the reasons that will be discussed in the following paragraphs.Paragraph 2: Supporting Idea 1。
雅思大作文同意与否高分模板
雅思大作文同意与否高分模板Title: Agree or Disagree? A High-scoring Template for IELTS Writing Task 2 Introduction: In this modern era, the IELTS writing task 2 prompts often require candidates to express their agreement or disagreement on a given topic. While some may find it challenging to structure their response effectively, I believe that following a well-organized template can significantly enhance the coherence and clarity of their essay. In this essay, I will present a high-scoring template that addresses multiple perspectives and incorporates emotional elements, ensuring a compelling and authentic response. Body Paragraph 1: Agree with the Statement To begin with, I am inclined to agree with the statement for several reasons. Firstly, [provide a strong reason]. For instance, [give a specific example]. Thisillustrates that [elaborate on the significance of the example]. Moreover, [present another reason]. This highlights the fact that [explain the implications of this reason]. Thus, it is clear that agreeing with the statement is a logical and reasonable stance. Body Paragraph 2: Disagree with the Statement However, itis important to acknowledge the opposing viewpoint. Some individuals may arguethat [present the opposing viewpoint]. They believe that [explain the rationale behind this viewpoint]. While this perspective has its merits, I find it difficult to agree with it entirely. This is because [provide a counterargument]. For instance, [offer an example or evidence]. Therefore, it can be concluded that disagreeing with the statement has its own valid justifications. Body Paragraph 3: Balanced Viewpoint In my opinion, adopting a balanced viewpoint is crucial when addressing this topic. It is essential to consider both sides of the argument and find a middle ground. On one hand, [present the supporting argument]. This suggests that [explain the implications of this viewpoint]. On the other hand, [present the opposing argument]. This indicates that [elaborate on the consequences of this viewpoint]. Striking a balance between these perspectives can lead to a more comprehensive and nuanced understanding of the issue. Body Paragraph 4: Emotional Appeal Beyond logical reasoning, it is important to incorporate emotional elements into the essay. This helps to establish a deeper connection with the readers and make the essay more engaging. For example, [sharea personal anecdote or emotional story related to the topic]. This evokes empathyand allows the readers to relate to the issue on a personal level. By appealing to the readers' emotions, the essay becomes more persuasive and memorable. Body Paragraph 5: Counterarguments and Rebuttal To further strengthen the essay, it is essential to address potential counterarguments and provide a rebuttal. Some may argue that [present a potential counterargument]. However, this perspective fails to consider [present a flaw or limitation of the counterargument]. Therefore, itis evident that the counterargument does not undermine the validity of the initial stance. Conclusion: In conclusion, utilizing a high-scoring template for IELTS Writing Task 2 can greatly enhance the effectiveness of the essay. By presenting a well-structured response that addresses multiple perspectives, incorporates emotional elements, and counters potential counterarguments, candidates can demonstrate their ability to think critically and express their ideas convincingly. Remember, practice and familiarity with this template will lead to improved performance and ultimately, success in the IELTS exam.。
Simon考官范文-雅思写作Task 2：Crime话题范文(一边倒的写法)
题目：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?有些人进了号子之后放出来就变乖了，一些人觉得他们这伙人是最适合去给懵懂少年现身说法的。
多大程度上同意还是不同意？考官范文：1.开头段：完全同意题目的观点It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law.讲真有犯罪前科的前科的人是可以变成有益于社会的。
我完全同意让他们去给懵懂少年现身说法的主意，这是一种警示他们不要触犯法律的好办法。
2.主体段：(第一个理由)：犯人可以告诉青少年他们真实的犯罪经历。
年轻人会相信并被这些真实的故事所震慑，然后举例子In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.在我看来，骚年们更喜欢接受有实践经历的人来讲道理。
英语写作范文 Agree or disagree
Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this.To what extend do you agree or disagree?You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.Write at least 250 words.model answer:In some countries the media is controlled exclusively by large companies; in other it is the government that has this control. Often, in war situation, one of the first casualties is the media, which is seized by one group or another. This gives some support to the idea that the media is a source of power and control.Whoever controls the media also has ultimate control over what is published or broadcasted and what is omitted. They can also add a certain prejudice or bias to their coverage of certain news stories depending on their own feelings about the matter. This is not a new problem, although the issue is perhaps more pressing now that the Internet and play-TV have enabled these messages to be disseminated even further.However, we should remember that readers have their own ideas and opinions. You can control what is printed but you cannot control the opinions of your readers. I think the only positive here is that, nowadays, people seem to be much more cynical about what they read in the press or hear on the television. In particular, when it comes to the tabloid press, people know that they have to take what they read with a grain of salt. In other words, they read knowing they may be being lied to. Perhaps it is even greater concern that we have become so accepting of this form of censorship.The only thing that can be done to alter this situation is for the government to regulate the industry so that there is no longer a monopoly on media ownership. This also means that they have to allow and support a totally free press, even if this means the government may be criticised or ridiculed within its pages.(295 words)Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.To what extend do you agree or disagree with this option?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 wordsmodel answer:It does seem to be true that parents find teachers have lost the authority they used to have, especially in the eyes of teenagers. They are no longer seen as models for behaviour: hard work, politeness and other positive qualities are seen as old fashioned. Many young people have no respect for these qualities or the people who represent them. In fact, I think when young people today are so rebellious that it’s possible that both parents and teachers are afraid to exercise their authority. However, I do not agree that this is the basic reason for the increase in teenage violence.While I believe it is true that a lack of social and emotional learning contributes to the problem. Other factors are surely involved: economic factors, for example. If a child comes from a poor family and they live in low-quality housing in all undesirable area, this is sure to affect the child, however loving the parents are.There is also the question of who your friends are. I believe that when you are in your teens your friends have more influence on you than your parents or teachers. At that age, you want to be part of a group, or even a gang, and this might lead to breaking the law in a number of ways.In conclusion, while I agree that lack of social and emotional learning from parents and teachers is a factor in the growth of teenage violence, I do not believe that it is the only or main cause.(255 words)。
考官simon雅思大作文范文
考官simon雅思大作文范文## Navigating the Labyrinth: A Deep Dive into Simon's IELTS Writing Samples Simon's IELTS writing samples have become a cornerstone for countless students striving to achieve their desired band score. His meticulous analysis andinsightful commentary offer a valuable lens through which to dissect theintricacies of effective essay writing. However, like any tool, his samplesrequire careful navigation and a discerning eye. Let's embark on a journey to explore the depths of these resources and uncover the treasures they hold. One of the most striking aspects of Simon's approach is his emphasis on a structured and logical flow of ideas. He consistently demonstrates the power of a well-organized essay, where each paragraph seamlessly transitions into the next, building a compelling argument. His samples serve as blueprints, illustrating the importance of a clear introduction, well-developed supporting paragraphs, and a concise conclusion that leaves a lasting impression on the reader. Studying his workallows students to grasp the fundamental principles of essay organization andapply them to their own writing. Beyond structure, Simon's samples showcase the significance of vocabulary and grammatical accuracy. He demonstrates the art of using precise vocabulary to convey meaning effectively, avoiding redundancy and ambiguity. His essays are devoid of grammatical errors, showcasing the importance of meticulous proofreading and editing. By immersing oneself in his samples, students can expand their lexical repertoire and develop a keen eye for grammatical nuances, ultimately elevating the sophistication of their own writing. However, it is crucial to remember that Simon's samples are not templates to be blindly copied. Each essay is tailored to a specific topic and task response, and replicating his style verbatim may not always be the most effective approach. Instead, students should focus on understanding the underlying principles he employs – the logical flow, the use of evidence and examples, the clear and concise language. These principles can then be adapted and applied to a wide range of topics and essay prompts, fostering versatility and adaptability in writing. Furthermore, while Simon's essays are undoubtedly exemplary, they may not resonate with every individual's writing style. Some may find his tone overly formal, while others may prefer a more personal and engaging approach. It is important toremember that there is no single "correct" way to write an IELTS essay. The key is to find a style that is both effective and authentic to oneself. Simon's samples can serve as a springboard, inspiring students to develop their own unique voice and writing persona. Ultimately, the true value of Simon's IELTS writing samples lies in their ability to spark critical thinking and inspire a deeper understanding of effective writing techniques. They offer a window into the world of high-scoring essays, revealing the strategies and nuances that elevate writing from good to great. By engaging with his work thoughtfully and critically, students can unlock their own writing potential and approach the IELTS writing task with confidence and clarity. So, delve into the world of Simon's essays, explore the labyrinth of his analyses, and discover the tools to navigate your own path to IELTS success. Remember, the journey is just as important as the destination, and with each essay you dissect and each technique you master, you inch closer to achieving your desired band score and unlocking a world of opportunities.。
雅思真题：agree or disagree的结构问题(剑桥真题版)-雅思真题
第一段：一定要在第一句话提出你自己的观点，要坚定，直接，明了！然后简单叙述社会现象！最后一句最好能重申你的观点，但要短，精炼，还要换一种说法，不需要太直接！ 50-55 个词
第二段：第一句话要承认与你相反的观点也有正确性！这段要替她说话，替她立观点。
把他那种观点的好处写一点儿，但不要太深!写得太深你下面就没法写了！而且写他的论据的时候要有意留一点漏洞，以便你下面来驳斥！这段不要写太多， 50-65 个词！
第三段：明确不过的写出你不同意他的观点，或写他的观点还不太全面！这里千万不要用 in my opinion! i believe... ! 之类的话，显得无力，而且不能写出普遍的观点，有漏洞！下面就是写你的根据，可以举例子，但一定要小心，例子要恰当，要不不如不举！
最后一段：不要说什么 after examing all the things above (i)
can safely come to my conclution that .....之类的话，俗，而且是废话！你的观点早说过了，考官最想知道的是下面我们该怎么办？提建议才是正确的！如果有些问题你也不知道该怎么给建议，可以给一系列的反问！在最后一句点题，给出你的期望，或，给出你对未来的展望，或，客观的评价一下问题！。
英文同意反对的作文
英文同意反对的作文英文：To agree or disagree with something is a personal choice, and it depends on one's own values and beliefs. In my opinion, there are certain things that I agree with and certain things that I disagree with.For example, I agree with the idea of equal rights and opportunities for all individuals, regardless of their gender, race, or social status. I believe that everyone should be treated with respect and dignity, and should have the same chances to succeed in life.On the other hand, I disagree with the idea of using violence or force to solve problems. I think that violence only leads to more violence, and it doesn't solve the root cause of the problem. Instead, I believe in peaceful and diplomatic solutions that can benefit all parties involved.中文：同意或反对某事是个人的选择，这取决于个人的价值观和信仰。
在我看来，有些事情我同意，有些事情我不同意。
2024雅思写作范文
2024雅思写作范文很抱歉，截至2023年7月，我们还无法获取2024年雅思写作的题目内容，所以不能直接提供2024年雅思写作范文。
不过我可以给你一些雅思写作不同类型题目的示例及范文写作思路，并且按照口语化、幽默化的风格来呈现。
一、雅思大作文同意与否类（Agree or Disagree）题目示例：Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.口语化、幽默化范文：Well, when it comes to what university students should study, there are two really different ideas out there.On one hand, some folks say students should study whatever floats their boat. I mean, think about it. University is supposed to be a place where you can explore your interests, right? If a student is crazy about art history or ancient languages, they should be able to go for it. It's like when you're at a buffet. You should be able to pick the dishes you like, not just the ones that are "good for you" according to someone else. Studying something you love can make you super motivated. You'll be like a little knowledge seeking detective, digging deep into the stuff that really makes your heart sing.On the other hand, there are those who think students should just focus on subjects that are useful in the future, like science and technology. I get it. We live in a world that's all about high tech and innovation. Thereare lots of jobs waiting in those fields. It's like these subjects are the shiny new toys that everyone wants to play with because they seem to lead to well paying jobs and a stable future.But here's my two cents. I think we need a bit of both. Sure, it's great if students study useful subjects, but we can't forget about the joy of learning. A world where everyone just studies science and technology would be a bit like a party where everyone is wearing the same boring suit. We need art, we need literature, we need those "useless" subjects to add some color and soul to our society. And for those who study the so called "unuseful" subjects, they can always find ways to make their knowledge relevant. For example, an art history major could work in cultural heritage preservation or in the art market. So, let students have a bit of freedom to choose, but also encourage them to think about how their choice can contribute to the big, wide world out there.二、雅思大作文问题解决类（Problem Solution）题目示例：In many cities, the use of private cars is increasing. What problems does this cause? What are the solutions to these problems?口语化、幽默化范文：Hey, you know what's going on in our cities these days? Private cars are popping up like mushrooms everywhere. And boy, does it bring some headaches.One big problem is traffic jams. It's like the roads turn into huge parking lots during rush hour. You sit in your car, fuming, watching the minutes tick by, and you're not going anywhere fast. It's like being in a slow motion nightmare. And all those cars are spitting out exhaust fumeslike there's no tomorrow. The air gets all yucky, and it's not good for our lungs or the environment. It's like the city is choking on all that pollution. Another issue is the lack of parking spaces. You drive around in circles, praying for a little patch of empty ground to park your precious car.But don't worry, there are some ways to fix this mess. For traffic jams, the government could invest more in public transportation. Make the buses and subways so nice and convenient that people would rather jump on them than deal with the car chaos. You know, like making the buses like comfylittle moving living rooms with free Wi Fi and all. And for the pollution problem, we could encourage people to use electric cars or car sharing services. It's like sharing is caring, right? If we all share cars sometimes, there would be fewer cars on the road. And for the parking headache, well, we could build more multi story parking garages. They'relike car hotels, giving cars a proper place to stay.三、雅思小作文柱状图（Bar Chart）题目描述：The bar chart shows the number of international students from different countries studying in a UK university in 2022.口语化、幽默化写作思路：When we look at this bar chart about international students in a UK university in 2022, it's like looking at a little international party on paper.First off, we can see that some countries are really sending a whole bunch of students. Let's say China. Oh boy, the bar for China is like a skyscraper compared to some others. It's like China is saying, "We've gotlots of bright minds ready to study in the UK." Then there's India. Their bar is also pretty tall. It's like they're right on China's heels, bringing their own unique charm and intelligence to the UK university scene.But then there are some countries with shorter bars. Maybe they're just starting to dip their toes into sending students to the UK, or they have other options closer to home. It's like they're the quiet guests at the party, but still important.To really make sense of this chart, we can compare the heights of the bars easily. We can see that the differences between the numbers of students from different countries are quite obvious. Some countries are the superstars, while others are the up and comers or the more laid back participants.These are just some basic ways to describe this bar chart in a waythat's easy to understand and a bit more fun than just dry numbers.。
Simon雅思写作文写作范文
Simon雅思写作文写作范文本范文来自剑桥雅思考官Simon，是近乎9分的存在。
江湖有言：熟读剑雅一百遍，不会作文也会吟。
你是拿来无脑背诵也好，一篇一篇品评研究也好，照着葫芦画瓢也好，都是对你的写作大有裨益的。
个人建议：重点学习考官是如何入题，如何立论，如何论述，如何结尾，还有如何承接过渡的。
总之就是学习这些范文的骨架是如何搭建的。
剑桥雅思simon范文：同性学校和异性学校优劣对比分析Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools.同性学校与混合学校究竟孰优孰劣?Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.参考范文：Some countries have single-sex education models, while in others single sex and mixed schools co-exist and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable.Some educationalists think it is more effective to educate boys and girls in single-sex schools because they believe this environment reduces distractions and encourages pupils to concentrate on their studies. This is probably true to some extent. It also allows more equality among pupils and gives more opportunity to all those at the school to choose subjects more freely without gender prejudice. For example, a much higher proportion of girls study science to a high level when they attend girls’ schools than their counterparts in mixed schools do. Similarly, boys in single-sex schools are more likely to take cookery classes and to study languages, which are often thought of as traditional subjects for girls.On the other hand, some experts would argue that mixed schools prepare their pupils better for their future lives. Girls and boys learn to live and work together from an early age and are consequently not emotionally underdeveloped in their relations with the opposite sex. They are also able to learn from each other, and to experience different types of skill and talent than might be evident in a single gender environment.Personally, I think that there are advantages to both systems.I went to a mixed school, but feel that I myself missed the opportunity to specialize in science because it was seen as the natural domain and career path for boys when I was a girl. So because of that, I would have preferred to go to a girls’ school. But hopefully times have changed, and both genders of student can have equal chances to study what they want to in whichever type of school they attend.(304)雅思Simon考官大作文范文：经济发展题目：Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.?Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.范文：People have different views about how governments should measure their countries’ progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I agree with those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important.There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goal for countries. Firstly, a healthy economy results in job creation, a high level of employment, and better salaries for all citizens. Secondly, economic progress ensures thatmore money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. For example, a government with higher revenues can invest in the country's transport network, its education system and its hospitals. Finally, a strong economy can help a country’s standin g on the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power.However, I would argue that various other forms of progress are just as significant as the economic factors mentioned above. In particular, we should consider the area of social justice, human rights, equality and democracy itself. For example, the treatment of minority groups is often seen as a reflection of the moral standards and level of development of a society. Perhaps another key consideration when judging the progress of a modern country should be how well that country protects the natural environment, and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively, the success of a nation could be measured by looking at the health, well-being and happiness of its residents.In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country’s success, but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.(262 words, band 9)雅思Simon考官9分大作文范文：Gender And University题目： Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?范文： In my opinion, men and women should have the same educational opportunities. However, I do not agree with the idea of accepting equal proportions of each gender in every university subject.Having the same number of men and women on all degree courses is simply unrealistic. Student numbers on any course depend on the applications that the institution receives. If a university decided to fill courses with equal numbers of males and females, it would need enough applicants of each gender. In reality, many courses are more popular with one gender than the other, and it would not be practical to aim for equal proportions. For example, nursing courses tend to attract more female applicants, and it would be difficult to fill these courses if fifty per cent of the places needed to go to males.Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I also believe that it would be unfair to base admission to university courses on gender. Universities should continue to select the best candidates for each course according to their qualifications. In this way, both men and women have the same opportunities, and applicants know that they will be successful if they work hard to achieve good grades at school. If a female student is the best candidate for a place on a course, it is surely wrong to reject her in favour of a male student with lower grades or fewer qualifications.In conclusion, the selection of university students should be based on merit, and it would be both impractical and unfair to change to a selection procedure based on gender. (265 words, band 9)雅思Simon考官9分大作文Minority languages范文题目： Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.范文： It is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future. Although it can be argued that governments could save money by allowing this to happen, I believe that these languages should be protected and preserved.There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste of money. Firstly, if a language is only spoken by a small number of people, expensive education programmes will be needed to make sure that more people learn it, and the state will have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing. This money might be better spent on other public services. Secondly, it would be much cheaper and more efficient for countries to have just one language. Governments could cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group.Despite the above arguments, I believe that governments should try to preserve languages that are less widely spoken. A language is much more than simply a means of communication; it has a vital connection with the cultural identity of the people who speak it. If a language disappears, a whole way of life will disappear with it, and we will lose the rich cultural diversity that makes societies more interesting. By spending money to protect minority languages, governments can also preserve traditions, customs and behaviours that are part of a country’s history.In conclusion, it may save money in the short term if we allow minority languages to disappear, but in the long term this would have an extremely negative impact on our cultural heritage. (258 words)雅思Simon考官9分大作文人与环境参考范文题目：Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do toaddress these problems? What can individual people do?范文： Humans are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can also take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to the planet. This essay will discuss environmental problems and the measures that governments and individuals can take to address these problems.Two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which may have a devastating effect on the planet in the future. As the human population increases, we are also producing ever greater quantities of waste, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.Governments could certainly make more effort to reduce air pollution. They could introduce laws to limit emissions from factories or to force companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind or wate r power. They could also impose ‘green taxes’ on drivers and airline companies. In this way, people would be encouraged to use public transport and to take fewer flights abroad, therefore reducing emissions.Individuals should also take responsibility for the impact they have on the environment. They can take public transport rather than driving, choose products with less packaging, and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for shoppers as well as ‘banks’ for recycling gla ss, plastic and paper in their car parks. By reusing and recycling, we can help to reduce waste.In conclusion, both national governments and individuals must play their part in looking after the environment.雅思Simon考官9分大作文Minority languages范文题目： Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.范文： It is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future. Although it can be argued that governments could save money by allowing this to happen, I believe that these languages should be protected and preserved.There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste of money. Firstly, if a language is only spoken by a small number of people, expensive education programmes will be needed to make sure that more people learn it, and the state will have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing. This money might be better spent on other public services. Secondly, it would be much cheaper and more efficient for countries to have just one language. Governments could cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group.Despite the above arguments, I believe that governments should try to preserve languages that are less widely spoken. A language is much more than simply a means of communication; it has a vital connection with the cultural identity of the people who speak it. If a language disappears, a whole way of life will disappear with it, and we will lose the rich cultural diversity that makes societies more interesting. By spending money to protect minority languages, governments can also preserve traditions, customs and behaviours that are part of a country’s history.In conclusion, it may save money in the short term if we allow minority languages to disappear, but in the long term this wouldhave an extremely negative impact on our cultural heritage. (258 words)。
雅思前考官simon高分范文分析
雅思前考官simon高分范文分析考雅思的朋友应该都听说过雅思考官Simon，为了提高大家的写作水平，下面小编给大家带来雅思前考官simon高分范文分析。
雅思Simon考官9分大作文范文：Hobbies题目 Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?范文： Some hobbies are relatively easy, while others present more of a challenge. Personally, I believe that both types of hobby can be fun, and I therefore disagree with the statement that hobbies need to be difficult in order to be enjoyable On the one hand, many people enjoy easy hobbies. One example of an activity that is easy for most people is swimming. This hobby requires very little equipment, it is simple to learn, and it is inexpensive. I remember learning to swim at my local swimming pool when I was a child, and it never felt like a demanding or challenging experience. Another hobby that I find easy and fun is photography. In my opinion, anyone can take interesting pictures without knowing too much about the technicalities of operating a camera. Despite being straightforward, taking photos is a satisfying activity.On the other hand, difficult hobbies can sometimes be more exciting. If an activity is more challenging, we might feel a greater sense of satisfaction when we manage to do it successfully. For example, film editing is a hobby that requires a high level of knowledge and expertise. In my case, it took me around two years before I became competent at this activity, but now I enjoy it much more than I did when I started. I believe that many hobbies give us more pleasure when we reach a higher level of performance because the results are better and the feeling ofachievement is greater.In conclusion, simple hobbies can be fun and relaxing, but difficult hobbies can be equally pleasurable for different reasons.雅思Simon考官大作文范文：人工智能的影响题目：Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.范文：People seem to be either excited or worried about the future impact of artificial intelligence. Personally I can understand the two opposing points of view; I am both fascinated by developments in artificial intelligence and apprehensive about its possible negative effects.On the one hand, the increasing intelligence of technology should bring some obvious benefits. Machines are clearly able to do many jobs better than humans can, especially in areas that require high levels of accuracy or calculations using large amounts of data. For example, robots are being developed that can carry out surgical procedures with greater precision than a human doctor, and we already have cars that use sensors and cameras to drive themselves. Such technologies can improve safety by reducing the likelihood of human errors. It is easy to imagine how these developments, and many others, will steadily improve our quality of life.On the other hand, I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence may harm us if we are not careful. In the short term, it is likely that we will see a rise inunemployment as workers in various industries are replaced by machines or software programs. For example, self-driving vehicles are expected to cause redundancies in driving jobs, such as lorry drivers, taxi drivers and bus drivers. In the medium term, if intelligent technologies gradually take jobs away from humans, we may find that people become deskilled and lose their sense of purpose in life. A longer term fear is that computers become so intelligent that they begin to make decisions without human oversight and without regard for our well-being.In conclusion, while intelligent machines will no doubt improve our lives in many ways, the potential risks of such technologies should not be ignored.(295 words, band 9)雅思Simon考官大作文范文：老一代人的生活思想对年轻一代是否有帮助题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?范文：It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally,I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they hada more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.(299 words, band 9)雅思Simon考官9分大作文Minority languages范文题目： Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.范文： It is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future. Although it can be argued that governments could save money by allowing this to happen, I believe that these languages should be protected and preserved.There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste of money. Firstly, if a language is only spoken by a small number of people, expensive education programmes will be needed to make sure that more people learn it, and the state will have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing. This money might be better spent on other public services. Secondly, it would be much cheaper and more efficient for countries to have just one language. Governments could cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group.Despite the above arguments, I believe that governments should try to preserve languages that are less widely spoken. A language is much more than simply a means of communication; it has a vital connection with the cultural identity of the people who speak it. If a language disappears, a whole way of life will disappear with it, and we will lose the rich cultural diversity that makes societies more interesting. By spending money to protect minority languages, governments can also preserve traditions, customs and behaviours that are part of a country’s history.In conclusion, it may save money in the short term if we allow minority languages to disappear, but in the long term this would have an extremely negative impact on our cultural heritage. (258 words)雅思Simon考官大作文范文：外国游客支付旅游费用题目：Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors forcultural and historical attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?范文：It is sometimes argued that tourists from overseas should be charged more than local residents to visit important sites and monuments. I completely disagree with this idea.The argument in favour of higher prices for foreign tourists would be that cultural or historical attractions often depend on state subsidies to keep them going, which means that the resident population already pays money to these sites through the tax system. However, I believe this to be a very shortsighted view. Foreign tourists contribute to the economy of the host country with the money they spend on a wide range of goods and services, including food, souvenirs, accommodation and travel. The governments and inhabitants of every country should be happy to subsidise important tourist sites and encourage people from the rest of the world to visit them.If travellers realised that they would have to pay more to visit historical and cultural attractions in a particular nation, they would perhaps decide not to go to that country on holiday. To take the UK as an example, the tourism industry and many related jobs rely on visitors coming to the country to see places like Windsor Castle or Saint Paul’s Cathedral. These two sites charge the same price regardless of nationality, and this helps to promote the nation’s cultural heritage. If overseas tourists stopped coming due to higher prices, there would be a risk of insufficient funding for the maintenance of these important buildings.In conclusion, I believe that every effort should be made to attract tourists from overseas, and it would be counterproductiveto make them pay more than local residents.(269 words, band 9)。
雅思同意不同意类作文写作
雅思同意不同意类作文写作英文回答：Do I agree or disagree with the statement that "IELTS agrees or disagrees with different types of essays"? Well, I have to say that I both agree and disagree with this statement. Let me explain why.On one hand, I agree that IELTS does agree with different types of essays. This is because IELTS is designed to assess a test taker's ability to communicate effectively in English. It doesn't matter what type of essay you are writing, whether it's an argumentative essay, a descriptive essay, or a narrative essay, IELTS is interested in how well you can express your ideas and opinions in English. So in this sense, IELTS does agree with different types of essays.On the other hand, I also disagree with the statement. This is because IELTS has specific criteria andrequirements for each type of essay. For example, in a discursive essay, you are expected to present both sides of an argument and then give your own opinion. In a problem-solution essay, you need to identify a problem and propose possible solutions. So, while IELTS may agree withdifferent types of essays in terms of assessing your English language skills, it also has specific expectations for each type of essay.中文回答：对于“雅思同意或不同意不同类型的作文”这个观点，我既同意也不同意。
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实用文档前雅思考官Simon的大作文范文36篇Discussion：1. Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are thekey to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.People have differing views with regard to the question of how to make ourroads safer. In my view, both punishments and a range of other measures canbe used together to promote better driving habits.On the one hand, strict punishments can certainly help to encourage peopleto drive more safely. Penalties for dangerous drivers can act as a deterrent, meaning that people avoid repeating the same offence. There are various typesof driving penalty, such as small fines, licence suspension, driver awareness courses, and even prison sentences. The aim of these punishments is to show dangerous drivers that their actions have negative consequences. As a result,we would hope that drivers become more disciplined and alert, and that theyfollow the rules more carefully.On the other hand, I believe that safe driving can be promoted in severaldifferent ways that do not punish drivers. Firstly, it is vitally importantto educate people properly before they start to drive, and this could be donein schools or even as part of an extended or more difficult driving test.Secondly, more attention could be paid to safe road design. For example, signscan be used to warn people, speed bumps and road bends can be added to calm traffic, and speed cameras can help to deter people from driving too quickly. Finally, governments or local councils could reduce road accidents byinvesting in better public transport, which would mean that fewer peoplewould need to travel by car.In conclusion, while punishments can help to prevent bad driving, I believethat other road safety measures should also be introduced.实用文档2. Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.People have different views about whether we are more or less dependent onothers nowadays. In my view, modern life forces us to be more independentthan people were in the past.There are two main reasons why it could be argued that we are more dependenton each other now. Firstly, life is more complex and difficult, especiallybecause the cost of living has increased so dramatically. For example, youngadults tend to rely on their parents for help when buying a house. Propertyprices are higher than ever, and without help it would be impossible for manypeople to pay a deposit and a mortgage. Secondly, people seem to be more ambitious nowadays, and they want a better quality of life for their families.This means that both parents usually need to work full-time, and they dependon support from grandparents and babysitters for child care.However, I would agree with those who believe that people are more independent these days. In most countries, families are becoming smaller and moredispersed, which means that people cannot count on relatives as much as theyused to. We also have more freedom to travel and live far away from our home towns. For example, many students choose to study abroad instead of goingto their local university, and this experience makes them more independentas they learn to live alone. Another factor in this growing independence is technology, which allows us to work alone and from any part of the world.In conclusion, while there are some reasons to believe that people now dependon each other more, my own view is that we are more independent than ever.实用文档3. Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animalsto suffer, while others are in favour of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.It is true that medicines and other products are routinely tested on animalsbefore they are cleared for human use. While I tend towards the viewpointthat animal testing is morally wrong, I would have to support a limited amountof animal experimentation for the development of medicines.On the one hand, there are clear ethical arguments against animal experimentation. To use a common example of this practice, laboratory micemay be given an illness so that the effectiveness of a new drug can be measured. Opponents of such research argue that humans have no right to subject animalsto this kind of trauma, and that the lives of all creatures should be respected.They believe that the benefits to humans do not justify the suffering caused,and that scientists should use alternative methods of research.On the other hand, reliable alternatives to animal experimentation may notalways be available. Supporters of the use of animals in medical researchbelieve that a certain amount of suffering on the part of mice or rats canbe justified if human lives are saved. They argue that opponents of suchresearch might feel differently if a member of their own families needed amedical treatment that had been developed through the use of animal experimentation. Personally, I agree with the banning of animal testing fornon-medical products, but I feel that it may be a necessary evil where newdrugs and medical procedures are concerned.In conclusion, it seems to me that it would be wrong to ban testing on animalsfor vital medical research until equally effective alternatives have beendeveloped.实用文档4. Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate.Discuss both views and give you own opinion.People have different views about the role and function of museums. In myopinion, museums can and should be both entertaining and educational.On the one hand, it can be argued that the main role of a museum is to entertain. Museums are tourist attractions, and their aim is to exhibit a collectionof interesting objects that many people will want to see. The average visitormay become bored if he or she has to read or listen to too much educationalcontent, so museums often put more of an emphasis on enjoyment rather than learning. This type of museum is designed to be visually spectacular, andmay have interactive activities or even games as part of its exhibitions.On the other hand, some people argue that museums should focus on education.The aim of any exhibition should be to teach visitors something that theydid not previously know. Usually this means that the history behind the museum's exhibits needs to be explained, and this can be done in various ways. Somemuseums employ professional guides to talk to their visitors, while othermuseums offer headsets so that visitors can listen to detailed commentaryabout the exhibition. In this way, museums can play an important role inteaching people about history, culture, science and many other aspects oflife.In conclusion, it seems to me that a good museum should be able to offer an interesting, enjoyable and educational experience so that people can havefun and learn something at the same time.实用文档5. Some people believe that studying at university or college is the bestroute to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to geta job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.When they finish school, teenagers face the dilemma of whether to get a jobor continue their education. While there are some benefits to getting a jobstraight after school, I would argue that it is better to go to college oruniversity.The option to start work straight after school is attractive for severalreasons. Many young people want to start earning money as soon as possible.In this way, they can become independent, and they will be able to affordtheir own house or start a family. In terms of their career, young peoplewho decide to find work, rather than continue their studies, may progressmore quickly. They will have the chance to gain real experience and learnpractical skills related to their chosen profession. This may lead topromotions and a successful career.On the other hand, I believe that it is more beneficial for students tocontinue their studies. Firstly, academic qualifications are required inmany professions. For example, it is impossible to become a doctor, teacheror lawyer without having the relevant degree. As a result, universitygraduates have access to more and better job opportunities, and they tendto earn higher salaries than those with fewer qualifications. Secondly, thejob market is becoming increasingly competitive, and sometimes there are hundreds of applicants for one position in a company. Young people who donot have qualifications from a university or college will not be able tocompete.For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that students are more likelyto be successful in their careers if they continue their studies beyond schoollevel.实用文档6. Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spokenby very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.It is true that some minority languages may disappear in the near future.Although it can be argued that governments could save money by allowing thisto happen, I believe that these languages should be protected and preserved. There are several reasons why saving minority languages could be seen as a waste of money. Firstly, if a language is only spoken by a small number of people, expensive education programmes will be needed to make sure that more people learn it, and the state will have to pay for facilities, teachers and marketing. This money might be better spent on other public services. Secondly, it would be much cheaper and more efficient for countries to havejust one language. Governments could cut all kinds of costs related to communicating with each minority group.Despite the above arguments, I believe that governments should try topreserve languages that are less widely spoken. A language is much more than simply a means of communication; it has a vital connection with the cultural identity of the people who speak it. If a language disappears, a whole wayof life will disappear with it, and we will lose the rich cultural diversitythat makes societies more interesting. By spending money to protect minority languages, governments can also preserve traditions, customs and behaviours that are part of a country's history.In conclusion, it may save money in the short term if we allow minority languages to disappear, but in the long term this would have an extremely negative impact on our cultural heritage.实用文档7. Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative artists such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.People have different views about the funding of creative artists. While some people disagree with the idea of government support for artists, I believethat money for art projects should come from both governments and other sources.Some art projects definitely require help from the state. In the UK, thereare many works of art in public spaces, such as streets or squares in city centres. In Liverpool, for example, there are several new statues andsculptures in the docks area of the city, which has been redeveloped recently. These artworks represent culture, heritage and history. They serve to educate people about the city, and act as landmarks or talking points for visitorsand tourists. Governments and local councils should pay creative artists to produce this kind of art, because without their funding our cities would bemuch less interesting and attractive.On the other hand, I can understand the view taken by many people that artistsshould not expect the state to fund their work. Most musicians and themajority of painters make a living by performing or selling their artistic creations to fans or collectors; they would not expect to receive any helpfrom their governments. Industry sponsorships can be another useful sourceof revenue for creative artists. For example, media companies like the mobile giant Apple are often willing to pay huge fees to inspirational designerswho work on their advertising campaigns, product packaging, and even the appearance of their electronic devices. Finally, some artists may be lucky enough to receive donations from wealthy individuals.In conclusion, there are good reasons why artists should rely on alternative sources of financial support, but in my opinion government help is sometimes necessary.实用文档8. Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.People have different views about how much choice students should have with regard to what they can study at university. While some argue that it wouldbe better for students to be forced into certain key subject areas, I believethat everyone should be able to study the course of their choice.There are various reasons why people believe that universities should onlyoffer subjects that will be useful in the future. They may assert thatuniversity courses like medicine, engineering and information technology are more likely to be beneficial than certain art degrees. From a personal perspective, it can be argued that these courses provide more job opportunities, career progression, better salaries, and therefore animproved quality of life for students who take them. On the societal level,by forcing people to choose particular university subjects, governments can ensure that any knowledge and skill gaps in the economy are covered. Finally,a focus on technology in higher education could lead to new inventions, economic growth, and greater future prosperity.In spite of these arguments, I believe that university students should befree to choose their preferred areas of study. In my opinion, society willbenefit more if our students are passionate about what they are learning. Besides, nobody can really predict which areas of knowledge will be mostuseful to society in the future, and it may be that employers begin to value creative thinking skills above practical or technical skills. If this werethe case, perhaps we would need more students of art, history and philosophythan of science or technology.In conclusion, although it might seem sensible for universities to focus onlyon the most useful subjects, I personally prefer the current system in whichpeople have the right to study whatever they like.实用文档9. Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.People have different views about how governments should measure their countries' progress. While economic progress is of course essential, I agreewith those who believe that other measures of progress are just as important. There are three key reasons why economic growth is seen as a fundamental goalfor countries. Firstly, a healthy economy results in job creation, a highlevel of employment, and better salaries for all citizens. Secondly, economic progress ensures that more money is available for governments to spend on infrastructure and public services. For example, a government with higher revenues can invest in the country's transport network, its education systemand its hospitals. Finally, a strong economy can help a country's standingon the global stage, in terms of its political influence and trading power. However, I would argue that various other forms of progress are just as significant as the economic factors mentioned above. In particular, we should consider the area of social justice, human rights, equality and democracyitself. For example, the treatment of minority groups is often seen as areflection of the moral standards and level of development of a society.Perhaps another key consideration when judging the progress of a moderncountry should be how well that country protects the natural environment,and whether it is moving towards environmental sustainability. Alternatively,the success of a nation could be measured by looking at the health, well-beingand happiness of its residents.In conclusion, the economy is obviously a key marker of a country's success,but social, environmental and health criteria are equally significant.实用文档10. Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and giveyour own opinion.People have different views about whether children should be taught to becompetitive or co-operative. While a spirit of competition can sometimes beuseful in life, I believe that the ability to co-operate is more important.On the one hand, competition can be a great source of motivation for children.When teachers use games or prizes to introduce an element of competitivenessinto lessons, it can encourage children to work harder to outdo the otherpupils in the class. This kind of healthy rivalry may help to build children's self-confidence, while pushing them to work independently and progress morequickly. When these children leave school, their confidence anddetermination will help them in competitive situations such as job interviews.It can therefore be argued that competition should be encouraged in orderto prepare children for adult life.On the other hand, it is perhaps even more important to prepare children forthe many aspects of adult life that require co-operation. In the workplace,adults are expected to work in teams, follow instructions given by theirsuperiors, or supervise and support the more junior members of staff. Teamcollaboration skills are much more useful than a competitive determinationto win. This is the attitude that I believe schools should foster in youngpeople. Instead of promoting the idea that people are either winners or losers,teachers could show children that they gain more from working together.In conclusion, I can understand why people might want to encouragecompetitiveness in children, but it seems to me that a co-operative attitudeis much more desirable in adult life.实用文档：Report1. These days more fathers stay at home and take care of their children while mothers go out to work. What could be the reasons for this? Do you thinkit is a positive or a negative development?It is true that men are increasingly likely to take on the role of househusband,while more women than ever are the breadwinners in their families. There couldbe several reasons for this, and I consider it to be a very positive trend.In recent years, parents have had to adapt to various changes in our societies.Equal rights movements have made great progress, and it has become normalfor women to gain qualifications and pursue a career. It has also becomesocially acceptable for men to stay at home and look after their children.At the same time, the rising cost of living has meant that both marriagepartners usually need to work and save money before starting a family.Therefore, when couples have children, they may decide who works and who staysat home depending on the personal preference of each partner, or based onwhich partner earns the most money.In my view, the changes described above should be seen as progress. We shouldbe happy to live in a society in which men and women have equal opportunities,and in which women are not put under pressure to sacrifice their careers.Equally, it seems only fair that men should be free to leave their jobs inorder to assume childcare responsibilities if this is what they wish to do.Couples should be left to make their own decisions about which parental roleeach partner takes, according to their particular circumstances and needs.In conclusion, the changing roles of men and women in the family are a resultof wider changes in society, and I believe that these developments aredesirable.实用文档2. Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult todefine? What factors are important in achieving happiness?It is no doubt true that the majority of people would like to be happy intheir lives. While the personal nature of happiness makes it difficult todescribe, there do seem to be some common needs that we all share with regardto experiencing or achieving happiness.Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to eachindividual person. Nobody can fully understand or experience another person's feelings, and we all have our own particular passions from which we takepleasure. Some people, for example, derive a sense of satisfaction fromearning money or achieving success, whereas for others, health and familyare much more important. At the same time, a range of other feelings, fromexcitement to peacefulness, may be associated with the idea of happiness,and the same person may therefore feel happy in a variety of different ways.Although it seems almost impossible to give a precise definition of happiness,most people would agree that there are some basic preconditions to achievingit. Firstly, it is hard for a person to be happy if he or she does not havea safe place to live and enough food to eat. Our basic survival needs mustsurely be met before we can lead a pleasant life. Secondly, the greatest joyin life is usually found in shared experiences with family and friends, andit is rare to find a person who is content to live in complete isolation.Other key factors could be individual freedom and a sense of purpose in life.In conclusion, happiness is difficult to define because it is particular toeach individual, but I believe that our basic needs for shelter, food andcompany need to be fulfilled before we can experience it.实用文档3. In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.It is true that people in industrialised nations can expect to live longerthan ever before. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, societies can take steps to mitigate thesepotential problems. As people live longer and the populations of developed countries grow older, several related problems can be anticipated. The mainissue is that there will obviously be more people of retirement age who willbe eligible to receive a pension. The proportion of younger, working adultswill be smaller, and governments will therefore receive less money in taxesin relation to the size of the population. In other words, an ageingpopulation will mean a greater tax burden for working adults. Furtherpressures will include a rise in the demand for healthcare, and the fact young adults will increasingly have to look after their elderly relatives. Thereare several actions that governments could take to solve the problemsdescribed above. Firstly, a simple solution would be to increase theretirement age for working adults, perhaps from 65 to 70. Nowadays, peopleof this age tend to be healthy enough to continue a productive working life.A second measure would be for governments to encourage immigration in orderto increase the number of working adults who pay taxes. Finally, money from national budgets will need to be taken from other areas and spent on vital healthcare, accommodation and transport facilities for the rising numbersof older citizens. In conclusion, various measures can be taken to tacklethe problems that are certain to arise as the populations of countries growolder.实用文档4. There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?It is true that a rich variety of musical styles can be found around the world. Music is a vital part of all human cultures for a range of reasons, and Iwould argue that traditional music is more important than modern,international music.Music is something that accompanies all of us throughout our lives. Aschildren, we are taught songs by our parents and teachers as a means oflearning language, or simply as a form of enjoyment. Children delight insinging with others, and it would appear that the act of singing in a groupcreates a connection between participants, regardless of their age. Laterin life, people's musical preferences develop, and we come to see ourfavourite songs as part of our life stories. Music both expresses and arousesemotions in a way that words alone cannot. In short, it is difficult to imaginelife without it.In my opinion, traditional music should be valued over the internationalmusic that has become so popular. International pop music is often catchyand fun, but it is essentially a commercial product that is marketed and soldby business people. Traditional music, by contrast, expresses the culture,customs and history of a country. Traditional styles, such as ...(example)...,connect us to the past and form part of our cultural identity. It would bea real pity if pop music became so predominant that these national styles disappeared.In conclusion, music is a necessary part of human existence, and I believethat traditional music should be given more importance than internationalmusic.实用文档5. Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?It is true that new technologies have had an influence on communicationbetween people. Technology has affected relationships in various ways, andin my opinion there are both positive and negative effects.Technology has had an impact on relationships in business, education andsocial life. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people indifferent countries to interact without ever meeting each other. Secondly,services like Skype create new possibilities for relationships betweenstudents and teachers. For example, a student can now take video lessons witha teacher in a different city or country. Finally, many people use socialnetworks, like Facebook, to make new friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through their computers rather than face toface.On the one hand, these developments can be extremely positive. Cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when communication was limited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays,。
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题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?传统思想在当代是否还有用武之地。
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参考范文：It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’sense of community and neighbourliness.In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.题目：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?已走回正途的前牢友是教育孩子预防犯罪的好方法，同意与否。
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4. Conclusion: repeat / summarise your view
Balanced opinion
1. Introduce the topic, then explain that you have a balanced view
Notice that we never discuss the views of other people in this type of essay; the question asks for your views.
Strong answer, two supporting ideas
1. Introduce the topic, then state a strong opinion (e.g. I completely agree)
2. Main paragraph: explain your views on one side of the argument
3. Main paragraph: explain why you also recognise the opposite view
4. Conclusion: balanced opinion, but favouring one side
1. Introduce the topic, then use a "while" sentence (while I accept A, I believe B)
2. Main paragraph: explain why you accept one side of the argument
3. Main paragraph: but explain why you still favour the opposite view
4. Conclusion: repeat / summarise your views
Strong answer, refute the opposite view
1. Introduce the topic, then state a strong opinion (e.g. I completely agree)
2. Main paragraph: explain your opinion
If you're still confused about how to answer questions that ask "to what extent do you agree or disagree?", just use one of the essay structures below.
2. Main paragraph: explain one reason for your opinion
3. Main paragraph: explain another reason for your opinion
4. Conclusion: repeat / summarise your view