my公开课非谓语动词在写作中的运用

3. A team calling the supper cook is good at cooking. 主动、被动含义混淆×
The uses of the non-finite verbs in writing
Teaching goal: Master the use of non-finite verbs in writing.
运用非谓语美化复合句
1. The book, which was written in simple English, is easy to understand. The book , written in simple English, is easy to understand .
2.When my son talked about the trip to Beijing , he was impressed most with Qinghua University. Talking about the trip to Beijing , my son was impressed most with Qinghua University.
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高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还 能增强克服困难的勇气 。
建议 有足够的睡眠是必要的。
1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。
原因
2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的 基础。
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翻译: 高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑， 还能增强克服困难的勇气 。 Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文)
Find out the mistakes of the sentences and correct them. 1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致×
Seeing from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful . Seen from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful .
Sentence2: With College Entrance Examination coming, it is important to have a right attitude which Tip: Try to use different helps us to relax and overcome difficulties ways to express. bravely.
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It is necessary to have enough sleep . 建议 有足够的睡眠是必要的。 Having enough sleep is necessary. It will be an effective way to improve our in the class. 1.learning 它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。
3.消防队员及时赶到。他们对我们帮助很大。 The firefighters came here in time. They helped us a lot. (非谓语作主语) The firefighters’ coming here in time helped us a lot.
4.我们应该如何提高我们的英语口语水平？这是个问题。 How should we improve our spoken English? It is a question. (非谓语作主语/表语) How to improve our spoken English is a question. The question is how to improve our spoken English.
• Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams. It is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons.
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• Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons.
Step3：合并句子
①College Entrance Examination is coming. ② It is important to have a right attitude. ③ It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.
3.Because my teacher helps me, my English has greatly improved.
(With) my teacher helping me, my English has greatly improved. 4.Most of you spare no effort to study so that you can realize your dream. Most of you spare no effort to study so as to realize your dream.
2、用动词原形充当主语×
In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.
In my opinion, climbing mountain is an enjoyable thing.
3、主பைடு நூலகம்、被动含义混淆×
A team calling “the Super Cook” is good at cooking.
① Having (have) a disability does not mean 主语 your life is not satisfying (satisfy). 表语 ②A robot is a machine designed(design) to do jobs that are usually performed by humans. 定语 ③Without pausing (pause) we jumped into the boat… 宾语 ④As we drew closer, I could see a whale 宾语补足语 being attacked (attack) by a pack of killers. ⑤There was Tom, leading (lead)us to the island 状语 again.
Sentence1: With National College Entrance Examination
coming, it is important to have a right attitude to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.
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运用非谓语美化文章
Nowadays, some students often cheat in exams. It is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. ／They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Also, some ／ students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.
美化后的文章
Nowadays, cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and don’t work hard at their lessons. They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired. Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.
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Step3：合并句子
① National College Entrance Examination is coming. ② It is important to have a right attitude.
③ It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.
①高考临近。 (National College Entrance Examination) ②保持良好的心态很重要。 (have a right attitude) ③它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。
Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句
①National College Entrance Examination is coming. ② It is important to have a right attitude. ③ It helps us to relax and overcome difficulties bravely.
They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.
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They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.
A team called “the Supper Cook” is good at cooking.
写作中非谓语动词常见的错误 1. Seeing from the top of mountain, the city is beautiful . 状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致× 2. In my opinion, climb mountain is an enjoyable thing. 用动词原形充当主语×
1.这儿的人都喜欢Tom写的那本小说。 All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom. (非谓语作定语) All the people here like the novel written by Tom. 2.发现学生下午昏昏欲睡的样子，老师竭尽所能来激发他 们的兴趣。(非谓语做状语) The teacher found students sleepy in the afternoon and did everything he could to arouse their interest. Finding students sleepy in the afternoon, the teacher did everything he could to arouse their interest.
Also, some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.
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Being afraid of failing in exams, some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams
Teaching important point: Three forms of non-finite verbs.
Teaching important difficult point: How to use non-finite verbs to make sentences.
运用非谓语美化简单句