英语句子常见错误

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第一讲写出语法正确，形式多样的句子

1.1 常见句子错误分析

Ⅰ逗号连接两个独立的句子

I like sports, they can improve my health.

改为:I like sports. They can improve my health.

或:I like sports; they can improve my health.

或:I like sports because they can improve my health.

或:I like sports which can improve my health.

或:I like sports and they can improve my health.

My roommate is so troublesome, I can hardly put up with him any more.

改为:My roommate is so troublesome that I can hardly put up with him any more

Ⅱ动词（短语）作了除谓语以外的其他成分

改为:Raising pets is becoming more and more popular.

改为:Students spend too much time on television, ignoring their studies.

或:Students spend too much time on television, and ignore their studies.

或:Students spend so much time on television that they ignore their studies.

I am a student lived in room 808.

改为:I am a student living in room 808

改为:I am a student coming from China.

Ⅲ动词形式使用错误

改为:Raising pets can bring us a lot of disadvantages.

Ⅳ主谓不一致

I am a student who live in China.

改为:I am a student who lives in China.

How we solve this problem are a controversial issue.

改为:How we solve this problem is a controversial issue.

改为:Raising pets is a great pleasure to many people.

改为:Raising pets is becoming more and more popular in big cities.

With the limited budget. The government is unable to invest much money in education.

改为:With the limited budget, the government is unable to invest much money in education.

Now is the golden time for us to attain a fair command of English.

改为:Now it is the golden time for us to attain a fair command of English.

Ⅶ代词使用错误

If one has talents and self-confidence, we will surely succeed.

改为:If one has talents and self-confidence, he will surely succeed.

中式英语

改为:It is easier to use computer to control the procedure of the big project.

As the internet comes into our life, our life has taken place many changes.

改为:As the internet comes into our life, many changes have taken place in our life.

用词不当

Some people are worried if computers can instead of human beings.

改为:Some people are worried if computers can replace human beings.

Please write to me if you are convenient.

改为:Please write to me if it is convenient for you.

One of the most significant changes is families are not as close as before.

改为:One of the most significant changes is that families are not as close as before

Ⅺthere be句型使用错误

There are more and more people go abroad nowadays.

改为:There are more and more people going abroad nowadays.

或:There are more and more people who go abroad nowadays.

There is a social phenomenon has aroused that families are not as close as before.

改为:A social phenomenon has aroused that families are not as close as before.

There is a tall building stands in the way.

改为:There is a tall building standing in the way.

或:There is a tall building which stands in the way.

或:A tall building stands in the way.

Ⅻ从句使用错误

The reason why fast food is gaining popularity in China is because it is delicious and inviting.

改为:The reason why fast food is gaining popularity in China is that is delicious and inviting.

改为:It is a must that college students grasp a foreign language.

重复累赘

In my opinion, I think the owner is justified to do so.

改为:In my opinion, the owner is justified to do so,

As far as I’m concerned, I personally think that it is improper for him to say so.

改为:As far as I’m concerned, it is improper for him to say so.

XV 改错练习

改正下列句子中的错误

[1] It is benefit to children.

[2] I am agree with the later view.

[3] We must choice a way which is suit for me.

[4] I think we should thinking about this issue objective.