雅思基础写作第一讲解析

Some people argue that young people are spending too much time on watching TV, what do you think of it? And what kinds of activities should be encouraged to them？




6. The development of technology has changed the way that people interact with each other. In which ways does it change the type of relationship that people build with each other? Does this have positive or negative effect on society? 7. The subjects and course contents for children are decided by the authorities, such as the central government. Some people think that teachers should decide these for students. To what extent do you agree of disagree with this opinion? 8. The news media are increasingly influential today. To what extent do you think this is a positive development? 9. When we travel to foreign countries, we tend to see the same things as we see in our home countries. What are the causes of this phenomenon and do you think this is positive or negative? 10. Some people think that students should go to university for further education. However, some others claim that students should go to learn skills such as fixing cars or construction. What is you opinion?
例如：

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages about this What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this issue?


第五类：综合类
题目中出现之前提到的两种文章组合
例如：





1. Some research reports suggest that the majority of criminals who were sent to prison would commit crimes again when they are set free. What do you think of these reports? What can be done to solve this problem? 2. Some people believe that those who are not talented in language learning should not be required to learn a foreign language. What is your opinion? 3. Developing countries often request help from international organizations. Some people think that financial aid is important. However, others believe that practical aid or advice is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 4. Money for postgraduate research is limited. Therefore， some people think financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research by postgraduate students rather than their research on less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree? 5. Many people think companies and individuals, instead of governments, should pay for reducing the pollution they have produced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Assessment Criteria
IELTS 写作新评分标准：
GRA: Grammatical Range and Accuracy （语法范围与精确性)
语言能力
LR:Lexical Resource （词汇资源) CC: Coherence & Cohesion （内容连贯与篇章衔接）
思维能力
第二类 议论文-同意不同意，观点比较 题目问题中出现立场性的问题

例如： What's your opinion? Do you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

第三类：说明文 题目的问题当中没有立场，需要描述事实 注意关键名词， 如：advantage and disadvantage
但是，雅思写作涉及的词汇量并不是大得令 人生畏，大概有六七千左右。考生万一碰到 个把单词不理解的话，完全可以通过上下文 加以推测。 对策：对于单词，考生应该平时注意积累， 应试时根据上下文推断。
Evidence(论据)： 关键要合理，并且能够证明论点。 例1：Wild animals have no place in the 21st century and trying to protect these animals is a waste of resources. Do you agree or disagree? 有同学这样写道：We can hardly imagine what our life will be like without wild animals. For example, if there is no cat, there will be more mice. The increase in the number of mice will result in the reduction of food resources and the spread of diseases. Thus, it is very important to protect animals. 这里猫的论据是不合适的，因为猫不属于wild animals(野生动物)。

To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? what measures do you think can protect them? 说明+解决方案 An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry. Why do you think it is the case? And do you think it is positive?" 说明文+议论文 Women now can do some work which traditionally be done by men. Why do you think this changes happened? What is your opinion about this change? 说明文+议论文
1）Arguments, Ideas and evidence: 内容切题，论据合理，论证充分。 不要出现跑题。 有的考生由于词汇量有限，导致题目中的单 词不认识，从而写作的时候写离题了。
例：
Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. Do you agree or disagree? 如果考生不懂international tourism是什么意 思的话，这道题是没法写的。
TA: Task Achievement(任务完成)--1 TR: Task Response(任务回应)--2
Task 2议论文评分标准：
Arguments, Ideas and Evidence(论证，论 点和论据)； Communicative Quality(交流质量)；
Vocabulary and Sentence Structure(词汇 与句子结构)。
雅思大作文写作
考试考查点
有没有明确的中心观点 有没有证明中心观点的论据 能否充分展开论证
有没有明确的开头、正文和结尾 段落是否有明确的主题句和论证句 句子和句子之间，段落和段落之间是否有衔接
语法是否正确 句法是否成熟 选词是否得体、生动



Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s opinions and ideas. Why is this the case and do you think it is a positive or a negative situation? 2009年3月5日 Some people think music plays an important role in society. Others think it is it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion. 2009年3月7日 More and more students choose to go to another country for their higher education. Do you think the benefits outweigh the problems? 2009年3月14日
雅思大作文的类型
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第一大类：问题解决类
题目中的问题提及原因分析(和 “解决方 案” )




For Example: There is a higher rate of juvenile delinquency （youth crime）today. What are the causes and what are your solutions? 2009年11月7日 The resources on the earth are above a dangerous level. What the causes of this problem? How to solve this problem? The gap between the rich and the poor is widening, as the rich becomes richer and the poor becomes poorer. What are the causes of this and can you suggest some solutions. More and more children are putting on more weight than ever before. What are the causes of this and any suggestions.