如何在作文中举例子

例子三部曲

人物背景→过程→结局

1)人物背景：例如姓名，身份，职业，与理由有关的细节1句

2)故事因为本段理由逐步发展的过程。2~3 何人何时何人及其感受

3)故事的结局（回到全文观点）1~2

例一

全文观点：人们要选择一个开心的工作

主题句：因为做一份工作时候没有快乐，他们会失去激情

解释部分：这样的话，他们的收入带来消极影响。当工作成为一个不快乐任务的时候，它再也不激励人们努力了

例子部分：

1 设计谁？

至少准备3类我们熟悉的人物

①高中生②大学生③工作者

2 如何设计呢？

加入多元素：任务的学校，公司

①高中生：the example of my little brother Tom, who is studying in the high school attached

to the Tsinghua University, can support my idea.

句型：the example(case/fact/instance) of…, who is studying in…., can support my idea(opinion/viewpoint/standpoint)

The example of my confidante Alice

②大学生

This provides(proves/offers/shows)a good(typical/concrete/notable/striking)instace of a student called….., majoring in….in/at……University of California at Los Angeles

③作者（smith）

Take my uncle Smith as an example. He is in charge of business while working in the Microsoft Corporation.

Take …as an example/instance. He/she is in charge of (is responsible for/manages/takes charge of)…while working in the corporation (company/firm) of….

花样例子让例子更丰富

①人物背景→曾经情况→变化过程→结果

②人物对比（有共性）

人物背景1~2→没有在本理由影响下的A1~2→在本段理由影响下的B的情况2~3句Explanation:

Sports→healthy→happy→beneficial to life

Example:

Grandpa retired from Microsoft Corporation and aunt work in university

A not like playing sports but instead watching TV at home→every day spent 12 hours on

various TV programs t→turn into a couch potato→unhealthy

In a team, those who do not accept others’ criticism cannot succeed.

To begin with, there is no doubt that people can improve themselves, when they accept team members’ criticism. In a group, humans who are not good at listening to others’ advice can know about their own strength and weakness more completely. Thus, they have enough capacity to achieve success through promoting themselves. The example of my friend Alice, who is studying in University of California at San Diego and majoring in microeconomics, can support my standpoint. Last semester, she was a leader in an academic team conducting a research on aging population. At first, she was too pretentious, refusing any advice. Such the paper, merely consisting of her own view, definitely failed to satisfy her professor. Later, the whole team gathered and discussed the research topic together. Unlike the previous performance, she adopted their suggestions this time, deleted useless contents and added a key point of the aging impacts on the industrial upgrade. Finally their essay achieved a high score thanks to Alice’s taking suggestions.

伴随状语：是主句主语的形式主语

结果状语：是整个句子的形式主语

Which way do you think is the best way for a student to make new friends? A. joining a sports team.

To begin with, there is no doubt that students can cooperate with teammates and learn more about each other during sports game. In a sports game, taking the basketball game for example, players have to communicate and exercise together, thus winning the game. The instance of my friend Tommy, who is studying in the University of California at San Diego, can support my view perfectly. He is the international student and had a quite miserable time for everything was new and no friend could lend him a hand when he was new here.

Nevertheless, he participated in the school basketball team. As a team member, doing exercises with partners was an everyday routine and he had no choice but had to follow.

During this process, the relationship between him and the team members gradually got improved. Soon he made friends with his teammate, having a brilliant time in a foreign country.

Nowadays it is easier to maintain good health than in the past.