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医学英文综述的书写PPT课件
医学英文综述的书写
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资料性摘要：告诉读者研究的总体情况，使他们了解研 究的目的、材料、方法、结果、结论以及存在的问题。 资料性摘要分为传统型或非结构式（non-structured）和 结构式(structured)两大类型。 据报道，现代医学期刊杂 志论文中约有60%的资料性摘要采用结构式的写作格式。
Autonomously functioning thyroid adenoma in a male with thyroxine-binding globulin excess: a case report
A male with thyroxine-binding globulin (TBG) excess and an autonomously functioning thyroid adenoma is presented. The problem of diagnosing hyperthyroidism in the presence of TGB excess is discussed. The utility of the Thyrotropin-releasing hormone test (TRH) is emphasized.
医学英文综述的书写
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Non-structured abstract – example
The overall operative morbidity was 54 percent, and the hospital mortality was 11 percent. Significant factors contributing to this high rate of complications included a delay in diagnosis, especially in the young children, and increased operative difficulty due to extensive adhesions and intraoperative hemorrhage. 【结果 - 过去 时表述】 Our analysis suggests that patients receiving long-term TPN should have a program of ultrasound surveillance for gallbladder formation, elective cholecystectomy when stones first appear, and consideration of cholecystectomy at the time of laparotomy performed for other reasons. 【结论 - 时态视具体情况】 Whether TPN-induced gallstones can be prevented through daily stimulated gallbladder emptying awaits results of future studies. 【前瞻性说明 - 现在时或将来时表述】 非结构式摘要的主要缺点是：段落不明，给编辑、审稿、阅读及计
《医学英文写作》课件
Improving based on feedback
Prepare the paper for submission to medical journals, following their guidelines for formatting and submission
Submitting to journals
The characteristics of basic research reports: Basic research reports mainly involve animal or cell experiments, aiming to explore issues such as disease pathogenesis and drug action mechanisms. This type of report also requires rigor, objectivity, accuracy, and must follow certain formats and standards.
Basic Requirements
Language accuracy: Medical English writing requires the use of accurate and professional language to avoid ambiguity and misunderstanding.
Case Analysis of Medical English Writing
The characteristics of clinical research reports: Clinical research reports are a common type of medical paper that mainly introduce experimental or observational studies conducted on patients or populations. This type of report requires rigor, objectivity, accuracy, and must follow certain formats and standards.
Prepare the paper for submission to medical journals, following their guidelines for formatting and submission
Submitting to journals
The characteristics of basic research reports: Basic research reports mainly involve animal or cell experiments, aiming to explore issues such as disease pathogenesis and drug action mechanisms. This type of report also requires rigor, objectivity, accuracy, and must follow certain formats and standards.
Basic Requirements
Language accuracy: Medical English writing requires the use of accurate and professional language to avoid ambiguity and misunderstanding.
Case Analysis of Medical English Writing
The characteristics of clinical research reports: Clinical research reports are a common type of medical paper that mainly introduce experimental or observational studies conducted on patients or populations. This type of report requires rigor, objectivity, accuracy, and must follow certain formats and standards.
如何撰写医学论文英文摘要全PPT参考课件
Study of Clinical Prospective on Maternal-fetal Human Bocavirus Transmission
Prospective clinical study on maternal-fetal transmission of human bocavirus
急性心肌梗死病人冠状动脉支架置入和阿昔单抗治疗的费用效益：降低血 管成形术晚期并发症的阿昔单抗和器械对照(CADILLAC)研究
这一题目比较长，主要因为其中包括一项研究的很长的名称。虽然长，但 内容清楚，容易理解。
Increased expression of human calcium-activated chloride channel 1 is correlated with
一律小写，中间要带连字符；
举例：
BAO Xin-hua, PEI Zhu-ying, QIN Jiong, WU Xi-ru.
YANG Ming, YANG Yong-hong, Alexander Dmitriev, SHEN A-dong, TONG Yue-juan, SHEN Xu-zhuang, FAN Xun-mei.
趋化因子受体CCR1的遗传缺陷保护小鼠不患 急性难辨梭状芽胞杆菌毒素A肠炎
由13个主要词组成，主语是Deficiency，而谓语是protects, 注
意，这种情况下，谓语动词用一般现在时。后面有补语和状语 。还请注意细菌种属名称用斜体字。
Cost-effectiveness of coronary stenting and abciximab for patients with acute myocardial
十分简捷，但不够清楚， comparison是 比较，比较哪方面？比较的结果如何？至少可 以回答有差别还是无差别这一问题, 甚至可以 点出哪一方面有差异。因此如改为： Rural-urban differences in the prevalence
英文医学论文写作.ppt
老外的计算机操作系统可能识别为乱码或者为非法程序） • 空格是否恰当？ • 注意缩写的格式，时间表示的格式，希腊字母的格式 • 该斜体的地方是否是斜体（in vitro，in vivo等） • 材料与方法中试剂后的厂家是否该杂志的要求（有的不但要标明公司名字和
国家，还要城市名，货号） • 稿件一定要连续编写页码 • 前后一致：缩略语，分组及组的名称 • 字数是否符合杂志要求（有的杂志对字数也有要求。比如最多8个版面。他一
投稿前准备之四——伦理学要求
• Ethical issues are of vital importance in today’s research climate
• 动物实验 • 人体试验
• whether the procedures followed were in accordance with the ethical standards of the responsible committee on human experimentation (institutional and national) and with the Helsinki Declaration of 1975, as revised in 2000. If doubt exists whether the research was conducted in accordance with the Helsinki Declaration, the authors must explain the rationale for their approach, and demonstrate that the institutional review body explicitly approved the doubtful aspects of the study. When reporting experiments on animals, authors should be asked to indicate whether the institutional and national guide for the care and use of laboratory animals was followed
国家，还要城市名，货号） • 稿件一定要连续编写页码 • 前后一致：缩略语，分组及组的名称 • 字数是否符合杂志要求（有的杂志对字数也有要求。比如最多8个版面。他一
投稿前准备之四——伦理学要求
• Ethical issues are of vital importance in today’s research climate
• 动物实验 • 人体试验
• whether the procedures followed were in accordance with the ethical standards of the responsible committee on human experimentation (institutional and national) and with the Helsinki Declaration of 1975, as revised in 2000. If doubt exists whether the research was conducted in accordance with the Helsinki Declaration, the authors must explain the rationale for their approach, and demonstrate that the institutional review body explicitly approved the doubtful aspects of the study. When reporting experiments on animals, authors should be asked to indicate whether the institutional and national guide for the care and use of laboratory animals was followed
医学论文英文要领-IPPT课件
Zunyi Medical College
increased operative difficulty due to extensive adhesions and intraoperative hemorrhage. Our analysis suggests that patients receiving long-term TPN should have a program of ultrasound surveillance for gallbladder formation, elective cholecystectomy when stones first appear, and consideration of cholecystectomy at the time of laparotomy performed for other reasons. Whether
指示性摘要或通报性摘要
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一、报道性摘要 Informative abstract
报道性摘要是指明一次文献的主题范围及内容梗 概的简明摘要，相当于简介。字数: 中文摘要一般不宜 超过200-300字，外文摘要不宜超过250个实词。
Types:
Non-structured structured
Full-structured abstract Semi-structured abstract
Zunyi Medical College
1） 非结构式（ Non-structured ）摘要：
医学英语写作英文PPT教程.ppt
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《医学英文写作》课件
The Im p o rtance o f M ed ical
Writing in Eng lish
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Glo bal Reach
Understand how effective medical writing in English can reach a wider
audience and contribute to global healthcare advancements.
English writing.
writing.
acronyms to enhance
clarity and readability.
Avoiding Common Grammatical
Errors in Medical Writing
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Subject-Verb Agreement
Learn how to ensure proper
Learn to identify and remove unnecessary repetition and wordiness for concise and
impactful medical writing.
Paragraph Structure
Explore effective paragraph organization and transition techniques to enhance
coherence in your writing.
Pronoun Usage
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agreement between subjects and
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Tense Consistency
verbs in your medical writing.
如何写医学论文英文结构式摘要PPT课件
如何写医学论文英文结构式摘要
这些结构式摘要有8段式、7段式、6段式、 5段式、4段式及3段式等，内容主要包括研究 目的、研究设计、研究单位、研究对象或病 人、处理方法、检测方法、结果及结论共8项。 而在实际应用中，8段式结构式摘要逐渐简化
为4段式。我国大多数医学期刊都采用了4段 式结构式摘要，即目的、方法、结果和结论。
摘要的种类摘要的种类非结构式摘要非结构式摘要nonnonstructuredabstractstructuredabstract结构式摘要结构式摘要structuredabstractstructuredabstract摘要的内容摘要的内容11指示性摘要指示性摘要indicativeabstrห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ctindicativeabstract指示性摘要亦称通报性文摘一般只提指示性摘要亦称通报性文摘一般只提示论文的要点不涉及其方法材料数据示论文的要点不涉及其方法材料数据结果等内容有的甚至只用结果等内容有的甚至只用1122个句子
如何写医学论文英文结构式摘要
（2）报道性摘要 （Informative Abstract）
• 报道性摘要，亦称资料性摘要，内容比较具体，一 般要列举关键数据，大多医学论文的摘要为报道性 摘要。一般包括下述内容：
• a. 简介（Brief Introduction）：介绍研究背景 （Background）、目的（Objective/Purpose）或解 题性说明（Explanation）；
如何写医学论文英文结构式摘要
摘要的种类
非结构式摘要(Non-structured Abstract) 结构式摘要(Structured Abstract)
如何写医学论文英文结构式摘要
摘要的内容
（1）指示性摘要（Indicative Abstract） 指示性摘要，亦称通报性文摘，一般只提示论文 的要点，不涉及其方法、材料、数据、结果等内容， 有的甚至只用1-2个句子。医学文选综述的摘要多 为提示性的。这种摘要为非结构式摘要，句中谓语 动词常用一般现在时或现在完成时。
这些结构式摘要有8段式、7段式、6段式、 5段式、4段式及3段式等，内容主要包括研究 目的、研究设计、研究单位、研究对象或病 人、处理方法、检测方法、结果及结论共8项。 而在实际应用中，8段式结构式摘要逐渐简化
为4段式。我国大多数医学期刊都采用了4段 式结构式摘要，即目的、方法、结果和结论。
摘要的种类摘要的种类非结构式摘要非结构式摘要nonnonstructuredabstractstructuredabstract结构式摘要结构式摘要structuredabstractstructuredabstract摘要的内容摘要的内容11指示性摘要指示性摘要indicativeabstrห้องสมุดไป่ตู้ctindicativeabstract指示性摘要亦称通报性文摘一般只提指示性摘要亦称通报性文摘一般只提示论文的要点不涉及其方法材料数据示论文的要点不涉及其方法材料数据结果等内容有的甚至只用结果等内容有的甚至只用1122个句子
如何写医学论文英文结构式摘要
（2）报道性摘要 （Informative Abstract）
• 报道性摘要，亦称资料性摘要，内容比较具体，一 般要列举关键数据，大多医学论文的摘要为报道性 摘要。一般包括下述内容：
• a. 简介（Brief Introduction）：介绍研究背景 （Background）、目的（Objective/Purpose）或解 题性说明（Explanation）；
如何写医学论文英文结构式摘要
摘要的种类
非结构式摘要(Non-structured Abstract) 结构式摘要(Structured Abstract)
如何写医学论文英文结构式摘要
摘要的内容
（1）指示性摘要（Indicative Abstract） 指示性摘要，亦称通报性文摘，一般只提示论文 的要点，不涉及其方法、材料、数据、结果等内容， 有的甚至只用1-2个句子。医学文选综述的摘要多 为提示性的。这种摘要为非结构式摘要，句中谓语 动词常用一般现在时或现在完成时。
英文医学论文写作PPT课件
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Editorial Office, Chinese Medical Journal Chinese Medical Association 42, Dongsi Xidajie Beijing, 100710, China. Dear Editor,
Enclosed please find the original article entitled “Validation of the Logistic Organ Dysfunction score compared with Acute Physiology and Chronic Health Evaluation II score in prediction of the hospital outcome in critically ill patients” submitted for your consideration to be published in the “Chinese Medical Journal”. The manuscript has never been prior or duplicate publication or submission elsewhere of any part of the study. This study has not financial or other conflict of interests.
• 格式一定要严格按照稿约 • 双倍行距，字数 • 注意文章中不要有中文输入法情况下的标点符号（英语没有顿号、书名号，
老外的计算机操作系统可能识别为乱码或者为非法程序） • 空格是否恰当？ • 注意缩写的格式，时间表示的格式，希腊字母的格式 • 该斜体的地方是否是斜体（in vitro，in vivo等） • 材料与方法中试剂后的厂家是否该杂志的要求（有的不但要标明公司名字和
医学论文--纯英文--PPT模板参考
METHODOLOGY
VENUS
Venus has a beautiful name and is the second planet from the Sun. It’s terribly
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Saturn is a gas giant, composed mostly of hydrogen and helium
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Here you could describe the topic of the section
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医学类论文英文摘要的撰写PPT课件
学术会议论文 英文摘要
学位论文英文 摘要
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学术期刊论文英文摘要
随论文一起在学术刊物上 发表的摘要，至于主体部 位之前。
字数在100-150左右。
只需简明扼要地将目的、 方法、结果和结论分别用 1-2句话加以概括即可。
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学术会议论文英文摘要
往往在学术会议召开之前撰写，目的是交给会议 论文评审委员会评阅，从而决定是否能够录用。
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按格式分类之非结构式
• 引言（Introduction）
• 材料与方法（Materials and Methods ） • 结果（Results） • 讨论（Discussion）
• 通常是一段式，没有固定的写作结构，内容上大致包 按格式分类之 括以上等主要方面，即IMRAD的写作模式。
• 介绍研究的 主要内容
• 介绍主要研 究成果
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• 总结并评价研究 的价值与意义， 特别是新创造、 新突破、新见解 或新方法
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以上三种英文摘要的共性
语言特点和文体风格都是相同的，内容上一般也都 包括以下内容：
目的 方法
• 包括研究背景、范围、内容、问题 及意义等
• 包括材料、手段、过程等
23普通英语和科技英语的对比普通英语用词makeupuseupfindout科技英语用词discover24treatmentgroupcontrolgroup住院病人hospitalizedpatientsretrospectivestudyprospectivestudy治疗方案protocolregimen治疗结果therapeuticoutcome功效efficacyoverallmortalityratedeathrate平均年龄meanage25危险因素riskfactors副作用sideeffects不良反应adversereactions临床诊断病例clinicallydiagnosedcases疑似病例suspectedpossiblecaseshighriskpopulationsusceptiblepopulation鉴别诊断differentialdiagnosis直接和间接原因causescontributingfactorsbaselinephysical术前评价preoperativeassessment术中大出血intraoperativemassivebleeding术后随访postoperativefollowup围手术期护理perioperativecare26医院感染hospitalinfection住院天数dayshospitalstay远期疗效longtermoutcomeseffects出院医嘱dischargeorderssuggestions出院带药dischargemedicationsuccessratecurecurativeratecasefatalityrate27研究
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• A statement that the manuscript has been read and approved by all the authors, that the requirements for authorship as stated earlier in this document have been met, and that each author believes that the manuscript represents honest work, if that information is not provided in another form
• The name, address, and telephone number of the corresponding author, who is responsible for communicating with the other authors about revisions and final approval of the proofs, if that information is not included on the manuscript itself.
• The name of the department(s) and institution(s) to which the work should be attributed.
英文医学论文 投稿前的准备
郝秀原 中华医学会 中华医学杂志英文版编辑部
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“A naturalist’s life would be a happy one if he had only to observe and never to write.”
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投稿前准备之一——论文格式
Sincerely yours,
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• 文题页（Title Page)
• The title of the article. Concise; study design
• Authors’ names and institutional affiliations.
• 格式一定要严格按照稿约 • 双倍行距，字数 • 注意文章中不要有中文输入法情况下的标点符号（英语没有顿号、书名号，
老外的计算机操作系统可能识别为乱码或者为非法程序） • 空格是否恰当？ • 注意缩写的格式，时间表示的格式，希腊字母的格式 • 该斜体的地方是否是斜体（in vitro，in vivo等） • 材料与方法中试剂后的厂家是否该杂志的要求（有的不但要标明公司名字和
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Editorial Office, Chinese Medical Journal Chinese Medical Association 42, Dongsi Xidajie Beijing, 100710, China. Dear Editor,
Enclosed please find the original article entitled “Validation of the Logistic Organ Dysfunction score compared with Acute Physiology and Chronic Health Evaluation II score in prediction of the hospital outcome in critically ill patients” submitted for your consideration to be published in the “Chinese Medical Journal”. The manuscript has never been prior or duplicate publication or submission elsewhere of any part of the study. This study has not financial or other conflict of interests.
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投稿前准备之二——投稿信和文题页
• 写好投稿信（Cover letter）
• A full statement to the editor about all submihat might be regarded as redundant publication of the same or very similar work. Any such work should be referred to specifically, and referenced in the new paper. Copies of such material should be included with the submitted paper, to help the editor decide how to handle the matter.
国家，还要城市名，货号） • 稿件一定要连续编写页码 • 前后一致：缩略语，分组及组的名称 • 字数是否符合杂志要求（有的杂志对字数也有要求。比如最多8个版面。他一
般会告诉你怎么推测自己的文章占几个版面，比如有的杂志大约是8000个字 符数(characters)（包括空格）为一个版面） • 全文的字号是否符合要求。一般是12号字(12-point)，双倍行距（Double space）
• A statement of financial or other relationships that might lead to a conflict of interest, if that information is not included in the manuscript itself or in an authors’ form
• The name, address, and telephone number of the corresponding author, who is responsible for communicating with the other authors about revisions and final approval of the proofs, if that information is not included on the manuscript itself.
• The name of the department(s) and institution(s) to which the work should be attributed.
英文医学论文 投稿前的准备
郝秀原 中华医学会 中华医学杂志英文版编辑部
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“A naturalist’s life would be a happy one if he had only to observe and never to write.”
—— Charles Darwin
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投稿前准备之一——论文格式
Sincerely yours,
Bodin Khwannimit, MD.
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令人震撼的 Title Page
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• 文题页（Title Page)
• The title of the article. Concise; study design
• Authors’ names and institutional affiliations.
• 格式一定要严格按照稿约 • 双倍行距，字数 • 注意文章中不要有中文输入法情况下的标点符号（英语没有顿号、书名号，
老外的计算机操作系统可能识别为乱码或者为非法程序） • 空格是否恰当？ • 注意缩写的格式，时间表示的格式，希腊字母的格式 • 该斜体的地方是否是斜体（in vitro，in vivo等） • 材料与方法中试剂后的厂家是否该杂志的要求（有的不但要标明公司名字和
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Editorial Office, Chinese Medical Journal Chinese Medical Association 42, Dongsi Xidajie Beijing, 100710, China. Dear Editor,
Enclosed please find the original article entitled “Validation of the Logistic Organ Dysfunction score compared with Acute Physiology and Chronic Health Evaluation II score in prediction of the hospital outcome in critically ill patients” submitted for your consideration to be published in the “Chinese Medical Journal”. The manuscript has never been prior or duplicate publication or submission elsewhere of any part of the study. This study has not financial or other conflict of interests.
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投稿前准备之二——投稿信和文题页
• 写好投稿信（Cover letter）
• A full statement to the editor about all submihat might be regarded as redundant publication of the same or very similar work. Any such work should be referred to specifically, and referenced in the new paper. Copies of such material should be included with the submitted paper, to help the editor decide how to handle the matter.
国家，还要城市名，货号） • 稿件一定要连续编写页码 • 前后一致：缩略语，分组及组的名称 • 字数是否符合杂志要求（有的杂志对字数也有要求。比如最多8个版面。他一
般会告诉你怎么推测自己的文章占几个版面，比如有的杂志大约是8000个字 符数(characters)（包括空格）为一个版面） • 全文的字号是否符合要求。一般是12号字(12-point)，双倍行距（Double space）
• A statement of financial or other relationships that might lead to a conflict of interest, if that information is not included in the manuscript itself or in an authors’ form