高考【概要写作话题训练4】社会热点 共17张PPT

Because of the high demand for job candidates with a computer science background, careers in computer science related fields are well-paid. The average starting salary for a new computer science graduate is over 60, 00per year nationally, while the median salary for all software developers and programmers is over $ 97, 930annually. In comparison, the median salary for all occupations is 48, 320 per year. Thus, as a computer science graduate, you can be expected to make more than twice the salary of most occupations.
【概要写作话题训练4】 社会热点
人与环境
主题语境:社会热点 关键词: RC model airplane 语篇类型:事物Leabharlann Baidu绍 短文词数:324 语篇难度:★★★★建议时间:23mins
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要
Computer Science Career Opportunities Computer scientists and engineers continue to be in great demand. As businesses everywhere use increasingly accurate and complex computer technology in their daily operations, there is a greater need for the expertise of highly-skilled professionals. As a result, with the development of industry and agriculture, there are more jobs created in the U.S. than are transferred offshore
高级语块
★高级语块重要短语 more and more(数量上)越来越多 a minimum of最少;至少 What' s more而且;此外 more than多于
★高级句型 1. However, it needs a minimum of a Bachelor's degree, so
people must get the degree by going to university which can offer them(连词so连接两个并列分句,后一分句表结果;句中 which引导定语从句) 2. 2. After they get the degree, they can get a job as a software developer(连词after引导时间状语从句)
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语言点津: because与 because of
The shortened workweek would increase company profits because employees would feel more rested and alert, and as a result, they would make fewer costly errors in their work. Hiring more staff to ensure that the same amount of work would be accomplished would not result in additional payroll costs because four-day employees would only be paid 80 percent of the normal rate. In the end, companies would have fewer overworked and error-prone employees for the same money, which would increase company benefits For the country as a whole, one of the primary benefits of offering this option to employees is that it would reduce unemployment rate. If many full-time employees started working fewer hours, some of their workload would have to be shifted to others. Thus, for every four employees who went on an 80 percent week, a new employee could be hired at the 80 percent rate
语境演练
阅读短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要
In the United States, employees typically work five days a week for eight hours each day. However, many employees want to work a four-day week and are willing to accept less pay in order to do so. A mandatory policy requiring companies to offer their employees the option of working a four-day workweek for fourfifths(80percent)of their normal pay would benefit the economy as a whole as well as the individual companies and the employees who decided to take the option.
难句解读
原文： The most recent study projects that softwaredeveloper jobs will grow by 17. 0% nationally in the tenyear period ending in 2024
译文:最近的一项研究预测,软件开发人员的岗位截止到2024年,在十年 内将在全国范围内增长17.0%。
精彩点评
本篇范文作者引用原文词句较少,所表述的四个要点内 容条理清晰,并且使用句式比较复杂,如so连接并列分句, after引导的状语从句, which引导的定语从句等;另外, 作者在遣词造句方面能够较多地使用高级词汇,如 more and more、a minimum of 、more than等； 在使用关联词方面独具匠心， 如however，what’s more等。
In fact, good jobs-offering a high salary, interesting work and benefitsare plentiful in the computer science field. However, to obtain one, you will need to complete a minimum of a Bachelor‘s degree in the subject area. Most transfer to the majority of them. Once you have completed your degree in computer science, a typical career path is software development. The U.S. Department of labor lists software developers among the fastest growing occupations in the U.S. The most recent study projects that software developer jobs will grow by 17.0% nationally in the ten-year period ending in 2024. In comparison, the average job growth rate for all occupations is 7.0% for the same period. In California, jobs for software developers, systems software are expected to increase by 25. 6%, between 2014 and2024, far exceeding (is)the average rate for all occupations of 15. 1%
分析:这是一个主从复合句。动词 projects后由that引导的从句为宾语 从句。
笔前点睛
★审题分析 ①审要求:概要写作,本文属于说明文; ②审人称:第二人称和第三人称; ③审时态:以一般现在时为主; ④审要点:科学技术方面需要大量人才;这些人才需要有该领域本科及以上 的学位;毕业后可以做软件开发师;薪资待遇丰厚,是多数领域工作岗位的 两倍多。
文章来源 文章来源本文选自英文网站 cabrillo.edu,原文题目为 “ Computer Science Career Opportunities”《计算机科学的 就业机会》,作者不详。
语篇解读
计算机科学技术职业就业机会多、待遇高,那么怎样才能进入这个 行业,有什么要求以及可以获得哪些好处呢? Computer Science Career Opportunities More talents are needed in computer technology Required qualifications -a minimum of a Bachelor's degree Having a Bachelor's degree -working as a software developer Salary-more than twice the salary of mostoccupations
because是连词,其后接从句; because of是复合介词,其后接名词,代词,动名词,what从句等; 虽然because of之后可接what从句,但不能接that从句或没 有引导词的从句; because所引导的从句除用作原因状语外,还可用作表语。 但是有时若主语是代词(不是名词),也可以用 because of引出 的短语作表语。
★思路点拨
本篇原文要点清晰,只需要用适当的句式对要点进行概括即可。首先确 定需要表述的要点内容,然后把握适当句式,接着尽可能多用高级词汇填 充句式,同时注重句子之间的逻辑关系,用怡当的关联词连接句子,构成一 篇短文。
高分范文
Nowadays, more and more computer scientists and engineers are needed.(要点1)However, it needs a minimum of a Bachelor‘s degree, so people must get the degree by going to university which can offer them. (要点2)After they get the degree, they can get a job as a software developer .(要点3)What's more, a person with a computer science background can get more than twice the salary of most jobs.(要点4)(60 words)