医学英语写作与翻译

第三部分医学英语的写作

任务一标题的写作（Title）

●标题的结构

1. 名词+介词

Blindness（视觉缺失）after Treatment for Malignant Hypertension

2. 名词+分词

Unilateral Neurogenic Pruritus Following Stroke

中风后单侧神经性瘙痒

3. 名词+不定式

Suggestion to Abolish Icterus Index Determination（黄疸指数测定）where Quantitative Bilirubin Assay（胆红素定量）is Available

建议能做胆红素定量的化验室不再做黄疸指数测定

4. 名词+同位语

Gentamicine, a Selelctive Agent for the isolation of Betahemolytic Streptocc ociβ-溶血性链球菌

庆大霉素是分离β-溶血性链球菌的选择性药物

5. 名词+从句

Evidence that the V-sis Gene Product Transforms by Interaction with the Receptor for Platelet-derived Growth Factor血小板源性生长因子.

V-sis 基因产物由血小板生成因子受体相互作用而转化的依据

6. 动名词短语

Preventing Stroke in patients with Atrial Fibrillation心房纤维性颤动

心旁纤颤患者中风预防

Detecting Acute Myocardial Infarction（急性心肌梗死）by Radio-immunoassay for Creative Kinase（酐激酶）用放射免疫法测定酐激酶诊断急性心肌梗死

7. 介词短语

On Controlling Rectal Cancer

8. 陈述句

Dietary Cholesterol is Co-carcinogenic协同致癌因素for Human Colon Cancer

9. 疑问句

Home or Hospital Births

Is Treatment of Borderline Hypertension Good or Bad?

●注意副标题的作用

1．数目：Endoluminal Stent-graft 带支架腔内搭桥for Aortic Aneurysms动脉瘤: A report of 6 cases

带支架腔内搭桥治疗动脉瘤的六例报告

2．重点：Aorto-arteritis 大动脉炎Chest X-ray Appearance and Its Clinical Significance

大动脉炎胸部X线表现及临床意义

3．方法：Gallstone Ileus（胆结石梗阻）: A Retrospective Study

4．作用：Carcinoembryonic Antigen in Breast-cancer Tissue: A useful prognostic indictor

乳腺癌组织中癌胚抗原——一种有用的预后指示

5．疑问：Unresolved—Do drinkers have less coronary heart disease?

6．连载顺序：Physical and Chemical Studies of Human Blood Serum: II. A study of miscellaneous Disease conditions

人类血清的理论研究：II. 多种病例的研究

7．时间：A Collaborative 综合Study of Burn Nursing in China: 1995-1999

常见标题句式举例

1. 讨论型：Discussion of/ on; An approach to; A probe into; Investigation of; Evaluation of / on

汉语中的“初步体会”、“试论”、“浅析”之类的谦辞可以不译。直接表达本意。

2. 观察、报告、结果型：An observation/ Observations of / on/in

3. 调查类：Survey of / on

4. 体会经验类: Experience in / with；Reflection on

5. 总结综述：Summary of/ Experience of ; Review of

6. 问题型：Problem of ; Some Aspects on

7. 探究：Study of/ on / in; Probe into; Exploration of

8. 报告：Report of / on

9. 药物治疗和非药物治疗：… in the Treatment of …; Management of …; Treatment ... with..; Use of … in the

treatment of … Therapy of / for … by …

10．诊断：… in the diagnosis of … ; Detection of … in … Diagnosis of … by/ with … Detection of … by …

Application of … to the diagnosis of …

练习

1.判断下列标题的书写格式是否正确

- Treatment of Psoriasis by hemodialysis（不对）

- Asthma in a Vietnamese refugee population（不对）

- Management of Hypertension in diabetes（不对）

- Does the Chronic Fatigue Syndrome Involve the Autonomic Nervous system? （不对）

- Treatment of macroprolactinoma with cabergoline: A study of 85 Patients（不对）

- Clinical Observation on 342 Cases with Allergic Rhinitis鼻炎（对）

2.在下列英文标题中识别关键词、分析结构并翻译。

- Sudden cardiac death：Clinic pathologic investigation of 51 cases

心脏性猝死51例临床病理探讨

- Paranthyroidectomy in Chronic Renal Failure: Survey of 38 Cases

慢性肾功能衰竭的甲状旁腺切除疗法38例调查

- Recent Experience with Bacillemia菌血症due to Gram-negative Organisms.

治疗革兰氏阴性杆菌血症的新体会

- Treatment for Malignant Hypertension: An Experience of 35 Cases

35例恶性高血压治疗总结

-Certain Problems of the Surgical Treatment of Hyperparathyroidism.

甲状旁腺机能亢进手术治疗的几个问题

- Platelet Function Studies in Heart Disease

心脏病患者血小板功能的研究

- A Report of Rosai-Dorfman

腮腺肿块性病报告

- Use of Steroid （类固醇）in the Treatment of Clinical Septic Shock

皮质激素治疗败血症休克

- Treatment of Psoriasis by Hemodialysis

血液透析治疗牛皮癣

- Ultrasonography in the Diagnosis of Gallstones.

胆石症超声波诊断