2019-雅思写作练习：句子改错(1)-范文模板 (1页)
常见雅思写作语法错误
海口朗阁名师解析常见雅思写作语法错误朗阁海外考试研究中心杨晔一、语序从句不使用疑问句语序，而使用陈述句语序，即主语在前，谓语在后的顺序排列。
错例1：Can you tell me how many students are there in this class?正解：Can you tell me how many students there are in this class?错例2：They were more worried about how far did they have to walk to get to the train station and could they catch the train before it left.正解：They were more worried about how far they had to walk to get to the train station and if they could catch the train before it left.改错练习：1. It’s hard to decide whe n and where will we hold the sports meeting.2. If you want to learn about the latest developments and discoveries from around the world, you will read about them in journals and research reports published in English, no matter whether are the scientists who wrote them from China or Norway.二、主谓一致和冠词的用法错例1：A part-time job offers you chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.正解：A part-time job offers you a chance to demonstrate your ability and apply what you have learned in school.错例2：Books are of the various kinds and have different contents.正解：Books are of various kinds a nd have different contents.改错练习：1. The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve.2. The governments of all countries on this planet is beginning to realize the severity of water shortage.三、固定搭配对“to”的错觉1、介词“to”错例：In addition to give a general introduction to computer, the course also provides practical experience.正解：In addition to giving a general introduction to computer, the course also provides practical experience.课程除了一般介绍电脑知识外，还提供实际操作的机会。
2019-2020-雅思写作7分句评析：强调句与定语从句-范文word版 (1页)
2019-2020-雅思写作7分句评析：强调句与定语从句-范文word版本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！== 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ ==雅思写作7分句评析：强调句与定语从句下面这些句子是雅思基础班语法课的作业，所选句子全部来自于雅思高分作文，对于其它雅思班的同学来说也可以当作一个很好的参考，看看下面这些句子你的表达和这里提供的 model answer 是否一致，如果基本一致的话，恭喜你!说明你的雅思写作水平已经达到7分的水准啦!第一单元：强调句1. 一个人的实际能力才是企业所真正看重的。
It is ones practical capability that enterprises truly value .2. 我认为我们发明一种新的语言来取代英语是没有必要的.I dont think it necessary to invent a new kind of language to take the place of English .7. 令人感到遗憾的是大多数人所在乎的仅仅就只是他们怎么样才能更多地赚到钱。
It is a pity that all the majority of people care about is how they could be paid more .8. 随着越来越多的妇女参与全职工作，由谁来照顾孩子已经成为了社会上的一个问题。
With increasing number of women taking part in full - time jobs , who should take care of children has become a social issue .第二单元：定语从句1. 我们这次还是约在上次一起吃晚饭的餐厅见面吧!Lets meet at the restaurant where we had dinner together last time !。
2019年雅思写作范文：nature or nurture？(一)-word范文 (1页)
2019年雅思写作范文：nature or nurture？(一)-word范文本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！== 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ ==雅思写作范文：nature or nurture？(一)There has been an argument on personality and individuals development for a long time . The key point of the dispute is which factor plays a more important role , genes or training after birth ? In my opinion , the latter is the crucial complication , though genes are significant .Although genes have great effects on ones personality , environment plays a more important role in his further development . Lets take an experiment for instance . There was a research on a couple of identical twins who were born in a big city , but they were separated after birth . One was taken to a poor suburban area , while the other remained in the city . Fifteen years later , surely , the one in city grew tall , strong , extroverted and well educated . By contrast , the other was short , thin , introverted and nearly illiterate . This well demonstrates the importance of nurturing .In addition , education , especially early education , is another key factor . When children are very young , they try to imitate their parents behaviors , and run into some manners . After going to school , different education systems and even different courses students taking will make influence on their personalities and ideas . Students of science and technology subjects are good at logical thinking , while students of arts usually think in terms of imagine .As you can tell from my comments above , no one can choose his nature , but one can be greatly successful after striving for himself or being well educated . And no one can be successful relying on his genes without good environment . So , in my opinion , environmental influence and education will ultimately decide ones personality and development .。
短文改错改正训练题纠正你的短文错误并进行改正训练
短文改错改正训练题纠正你的短文错误并进行改正训练下面是一篇包含错误的短文，请你仔细阅读并找出错误所在，并进行改正。
此练习旨在提高你对语法、拼写和标点符号的敏感度，同时帮助你更好地写作和修改文章。
识别出并改正错误后，你可以进一步理解和掌握正确的写作技巧。
（以下为待改正的短文）My family just comeback from a two-week holiday in Thailand. It was a fantastic experiences that we will never forget. We stayed in a luxuries resort by the beach, and enjoy the beautiful view every day. However, there were some issue during our stay.Firstly, the service in the resort was terrible. The staffs were impolite and never respond to our requests. We ask for a room change due to the foul smell, but they ignores us completely. It was very disappointing.Secondly, the food was also disappointed. The breakfast buffet was very limited choose, and the food tasted plain and unappetizing. We expected to enjoy the local cuisine, but it was nothing like what we anticipated.Thirdly, the hotel organization was poorly. There were no clear instructions or indications about the facilities in the resort. We had difficulty finding where the gym and swimming pool located. It was such a hassle.visited many touristic spots and experienced the rich culture and tradition of the country. The beautiful beaches and clear blue sea made up for the disappointing resort experience.In conclusion, our holiday in Thailand had its ups and downs. While the resort had its faults, we still enjoyed the overall trip and appreciate the wonderful memories we made.（以下为已改正的短文）My family just came back from a two-week holiday in Thailand. It was a fantastic experience that we will never forget. We stayed in a luxurious resort by the beach and enjoyed the beautiful view every day. However, there were some issues during our stay.Firstly, the service in the resort was terrible. The staff were impolite and never responded to our requests. We asked for a room change due to the foul smell, but they ignored us completely. It was very disappointing.Secondly, the food was also disappointing. The breakfast buffet had very limited choices, and the food tasted plain and unappetizing. We expected to enjoy the local cuisine, but it was nothing like what we anticipated.Thirdly, the hotel organization was poor. There were no clear instructions or indications about the facilities in the resort. We had difficulty finding where the gym and swimming pool were located. It was such a hassle.visited many tourist spots and experienced the rich culture and traditions of the country. The beautiful beaches and clear blue sea made up for the disappointing resort experience.In conclusion, our holiday in Thailand had its ups and downs. While the resort had its faults, we still enjoyed the overall trip and appreciated the wonderful memories we made.。
雅思写作句子改错(参考答案)
雅思写作常用语法错误分析1．We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity.错因：statement是可数名词，在这里要么加冠词，要么变复数。
改正：We are frequently confronted with statements about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity．大意：我们经常听到关于语言多元性快速丧失的言论。
2．Globalization will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause．错因：惯用法。
介词使用错误，blind后面常加to.改正：Globalization will always have supporters who are blind to the destruction it can cause.大意：全球化总有一些支持者，他们对由全球化造成的破坏视而不见。
3．One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．错因：句子结构。
有两个谓语动词，分别是is和fail，需要将其中一个改成从句。
改正：One problem that has not yet been addressed is that the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．大意：一个仍然还没有被解决的问题是现有的基础设施和设备不能够满足越来越多的游客的需要.4．Children，if grown up in a multicultural society，are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．错因：从句部分不能用过去分词，小孩与grow up之间是主动关系。
句子改错英语范文
句子改错英语范文61. I don't think he can do the work well, can't he? (can he?)62. The book which brought for me by my brother cost a lot of money. （去掉which）63. You must do everything you can help them. (to help them)64. The farmers re very busy today and they will stop working until dark. (will not)65. After mixing the three together, he dipped one of his finger into the cup. (fingers)66. The old man asked a policeman,” Could you show me how get to the post office? (how to get to)67. The teacher found a cup broken and tried to find who had broken it. (find out)68. In England as early as the twelve century, young people enjoyed playing football.(twelveth)69. Jack regretted not go to the meeting last week. (going)70. I have lost my key; I can't remember where I forgot it. （把forgot改成left）71. What a terrible weather we have been having！（去掉a）72. The position is well written except a few spelling mistakes. (except for)73. The students have to follow the teacher's advice, haven't they? (don't they)74. Autumn has e and it is time for harvest the rice. (to harvest)75. Please put everything back and tidy the lab in the end of your experiment. (at the end of)76. “Listen to me carefully; do all what I'll ___ you to do,” said the teacher.. (do all that)77. The other day we dropped in on the village. （去掉on）78. There will not be enough rooms for such a large population in the future. (room)79. “Help yourselves with the fish. It's very delicious.” mother said to the guests. (to the fish)80. To my opinion, puters will enter every family in the near future (in my opinion)基本上全错了，吃饭那句可以，不过特指午饭。
句子改错（含答案）
句子改错（含答案）1) Whether poor or rich, we all like him.Whether he is poor or rich, we all like him.2) The entry into WTO will bring a large challenge.The entry into the WTO will bring a lot of challenges.3) The retired people can gain money is less than before.The retired people can earn less money now than before.4) We have not big enough living house today.We don’t have big enough apartments to live in today. Or: The apartments we live in today are not big enough.5) If we keep on thinking just but doing efforts, our desire will not become vainly hope. If we only think but never make any effort, our desire will not come true.6) I don’t lose my heart to study.I never lose heart to studying.7) Work pressure can lead work to be efficient.Work pressure can raise work efficiency.8) Buses, cars and bicycles are full of the streets.The streets are full of buses, cars and bicycles.9) Those who give birth a second child will fine a large number of money.Those who give birth to a second child will be fined a large amount of money.10) There will be more and more nuclear families appear in China.More and more nuclear families will appear in China.11) Some couples refer enjoying their own entertainment to the children.Some couples prefer to enjoy themselves rather than lookafter their children.12) In future, China would be faced too much heavier food shortage.China will face a serious food shortage in the future.13) China is the largest population country in the world.China is the country with the largest population in the world.14) He is easily to be gotten along with.It is easy to get along with him.15) I go to my office by my car only in less than 10 minutes.It only takes me less than 10 minutes to get to my office by car.16) People’s life level is also developed.People’s standard of living is also improved.17) I would go home to pick up my child from school.I would pick up my child from school on my way home.18) China enter the WTO will give us a chance to rich us.China’s entry into the WTO will make it possible for us to live a prosperous life. Or: China’s entry into the WTO will give us a chance to live a prosperous life.19) People always avoid to eat the food they do not fond of it.People always avoid eating the food they are not fond of.20) There are overcrowded people in almost every train.Almost every train is overcrowded with people.21) In modern China, there are nearly all families are three people.In modern China, nearly/almost all families have three people.22) We should prepare the aged society coming in China.We should prepare for the arrival of an aging society in China.23) In China, it is not a imagine that if people own private cars, the streets will be no space.In China, it is imaginable that if people owned private cars, the streets would have no space. 24) Neither the fat nor the slim is health.Neither being overweight nor being underweight is good for peo ple’s health.25) I take my dinner and at the same time watch the TV news.I have my dinner while I’m watching TV news.26) They might feel that they lost their faces.They might feel that they lost face.27) The power of a group is more strong than that of individual.The power of a group is stronger than that of an individual.28) Emotional problems also let people feel unhappy.Emotional problems also make people feel unhappy.29) Life have different goal: rich, famous, value and happy family etc.People have different goals in life: wealth, fame, values, anda happy family, etc.30) I came true my ideal.My ideal came true.31) It was snowing heavily this morning. I had to queen for a bus. I was late for school.I was late for school because it was snowing heavily this morning and I had to queue for a bus. It was snowing heavily this morning. I was late for school because I had to queue for a bus.32) We were given a room. It was very old. The walls were painted green. The paint had faded. We were given an old room. The green paint on the walls had faded.33) The bus went on a muddy road. The road was very narrow. It led into a village. The village was small. We wondered whether it was safe.The bus went on a narrow muddy road leading into a small village. W wondered whether it was safe.34) The dictionary was expensive for him. He borrowed one from the library. He copied it page by page into several notebooks.As the dictionary was expensive for him, he borrowed one from the library and copied it page by page into several books.35) Jane and Rochester were having their wedding. Rochester’s brother-in-law rushed in. he madea fact publicly known. The fact was that Rochester was a married man. His wife was mad. Jane was greatly shocked and bitterly hurt.Just before Jane and Rochester were going to be named husband and wife, Rochester’s brother-in-law rushed in and declared that Rochester already had a wife, who was mad. Jane was greatly shocked and bitterly hurt.36) Lenin studied very hard. He was the best student in his class. He was always ready to help the other students with their lessons.Lenin studies hard and was the best student in his class. He was always ready to help the other students.37) A poor student in his primary and secondary school years, Ted became a famous linguist.Ted was a poor student in his primary and secondary school years. However, he worked very hard at university. He read a lot about linguistics and missed no chance to ask his professors questions. So in his forties he became a famous linguist.38) Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous music ian.He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory (音乐学院：音乐或戏剧艺术的学校). In the 70s he became a famous musician.39) Du Fu was one of the greatest poets.Du Fu was one of the greatest poets of the Tang period.40) A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds.A man is judged not only by what he says but also by what he does.A man is judged not only by his words but also by his deeds.41) Professor Smith is a learned man, warmhearted, and helpful.Professor Smith is learned, warmhearted, and helpful.42) We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman.We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman.We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable.43) In this war, many parents lost their sons, many wives lost their husbands, many children lost their fathers and thousands of promising young men missed their best years for schooling.In this war, many parents lost their sons, many wives lost their husbands and many children lost their fathers. Thousands of promising young men missed their best years for schooling.44) He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious.He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly hurt.45) I’m going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama,because he is a dramatist I like.I’m going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama, because the speaker is a dramatist I like. 46) At the age of three, my mother died.*a) My mother died when I was three years old.*b) At the age of three, I became a motherless child.c) When I was three years old, I became motherless.d) At the age of three, I became motherless.47) Looking out of the window, the grassland stretched as far as the eye can reach.Looking out of the window, he (she, I) can see the grassland stretching as far as the eye can reach.48) Outside the window, the grassland stretched as far as the eye can reach.On entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, “Good morning!”When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, “Good morning!”49) To get ready for this trip, all the things she needed were put into a suitcase.To get ready for this trip, she put all the things she needed into a suitcase.50) I read an article of my professor’s in a new book, which discusses the differences in kinship terms between Chinese and English.In a new book, I read an article of my professor’s, which discusses the differences in kinship terms between Chinese and English.51) I read an interesting story in a magazine about sportsmen.I read in a magazine an interesting story about sportsmen.In a magazine I read an interesting story about sportsmen.52) She bought several picture books and put them into her bag, which she intended to give to her children.She bought several picture books for her children and put them into her bag.She put into her bag the picture books she had bought for her children.53) The idea he mentioned at first sounded good.The idea he first mentioned sounded good.The idea he mentioned sounded good at first.54) I have read a story recently. This story happened in the early 1960s.I have read a story recently. It happened in the early 1960s.55) There is only one interpretation that is acceptable.Only one interpretation is acceptable.56) There are some mistakes in grammar and spelling that you have made.Y ou have made some mistakes in grammar and spelling.57) There are some people who know little but brag a lot.Some people know a little, but they brag a lot.58) It is your assignment to write a summary of the story you have read this week.Y our assignment is to write a summary of the story you have read this week.59) It is likely that Professor Huang will talk on current world affairs.Professor Huang is likely to talk on current world affairs.60) Mary is a girl at the age of sixteen.Mary is sixteen.61) This orphan lost his parents at the age of three.The child became an orphan at the age of three.62) Mary has two big eyes.Mary has big eyes.63) Her two big eyes beneath her forehead are big in size and blue in color.Her eyes are big and blue.64) The teacher is always talking with a smile on his face.The teacher always talks with a smile.65) The walls of the classroom were painted white in color.The walls of the classroom were painted white.66) In my opinion, I think English is easier to learn than Russian.I think English is easier to learn than Russian.67) There is a big pine tree that stands like a giant on the top of the mountain. It towers over the trees around it.There is a giant pine tree on the top of the mountain, towering over the trees around it.68) I learned the news that you had won the first prize in the competition.I learned that you had won the first prize in the competition.69) I pulled myself together and managed to swim back with my arms and legs.I pulled myself together and managed to swim back.70) The old professor has a face lined deeply with wrinkles.The old professor has a deeply lines face.71) It was raining very hard outside the house.It was raining very hard.72) I held up my head and saw he was smiling.I looked up and found him smiling.。
英语作文改错练习
作文改错练习-1Revised version 1In last week, I participated a student Form facing to the hole school, and am invited to speak there, which turned out to be impressive and meaningful.The information center news comes out in the Monday morning as usually, which brought us a news that the Student Form falls in the afternoon of Friday. Having knew a good news, I could hard waited to take part in.To be one of the talker, I briefly decided my fundamental topic and the structure of the lecture. Having registered desirably, within hours, I was honored to be told that I will be a talker.Then at free time, I would stay in the library in search of the topic is about history, I check in the internet and read Chinese essay in the website to seek for an answer.The exciting moment came finally, when I was about to speak out. While the hall was full with student, I deliver speech calmly and confident because of my ready good prepare. After finished, I won a lot applaud.This was indeed a impressive experience for me, for not only did I took part this Forum and gained many knowledges, but I also obtain an experience to talking in the front of many, this was indeed unforgettable.Revised version 2Last week, I signed up in the “Student Forum” activity holded by our school, which is not only interesting but also meaningful.I immediately got interests in this activity when I read the note on the noticing board last month, and decide to took part in it for I am a big fan of art and would really like to share it with others.After filled in the information blank, I give it to the teacher, who is kind to ask me to prepare good for it. I was asking to take a interview and after that, they told me that I was chosen as a talker.I began to prepared the talk. I looked for informations and details in both school library and internet, which enlarged my knowledge. I also made a text for myself to bring my speech alive and more attractive.Finally the big day come. I give the speech smoothly without a single mistake because I have made a lot effort on it. After finished it, audiens gave long and loudly applause for my speak.I think it is a good chance for me to improve myself, and I would like to do it again if I can!作文改错练习-1Revised version 1In (去掉介词) last week, I participated in the S tudent Form intended/ designed for (facing to 中文) the whole school, and was invited to speak there, which turned out to be impressive and meaningful.The information center news came (去掉out) on Monday morning as usual, which brought us the news that the Student Form would fall on the afternoon of Friday. Having known the good news, I could hardly wait (waited改为动词原形) to take part (in去掉).To be one of the talkers/ speakers, I briefly decided on (添加介词on) my fundamental topic and the structure of my lecture. Having registered desirably (标点去掉) within hours, I was honored to be told that I would be a talker/ lecturer.Then at free time, I went to the school library in search of the topic (去掉is) about history.(逗号改成句末点) I also (添加)check ed on the Internet and read Chinese essays(复数) on the website to seek for more information. (an answer 改为help/ more information).The exciting moment came finally (逗号去掉) when I was about to speak (out去掉). While the hall was filled with(或者full of) students, I delivered my speech calmly and confident ly because of my (ready去掉) good preparation. After I (缺少主语) finished my speech (缺宾语), I won a lot of applauses (名词复数).This was indeed an impressive experience for me, for not only did I take part this Forum and gained much knowledges, but I also obtain ed an experience of(= and this) was indeed unforgettable. （补充：Did you go there? Where did you go?Revised version 2Last week, I signed up in the “Student Forum” activity held (过去分词错误) in our school, which was not only interesting but also meaningful.I immediately got interested (是系表结构，不是宾语) in this activity when I read the note on the ), and decid ed to take part in itbecause) I am a big fan of art and I (建议添加主语) would really like to share it with others.After I (缺少主语) filled in the information form (建议将blank换成form), I gave it to the teacher, who is kind to ask me to prepare well for it.(此处情节未必合理；对方是同学或老师都不重要) I was asked to take an interview and after that, they told me that I was chosen as a talker.I began to prepare for the talk. I looked up (look for 是寻找的动作；information (不可数名词一般地只有单数which enlarged my knowledge. I also made a PPT text for myself to bring my speech alive and more attractive.Finally the big day ve the speech smoothly without a single mistake because I hadmade a lot of effort s the audience (单词拼写错误) gave long and loud applauses for sb. a long applause或give sb. long applauses, 对于可数名词，可以用单数，也可以用复数，但最好根据具体情况确定单复数)I think it is a good chance for me to improve myself, and I would like to do more in the future if I can!。
句子改错(含答案)
1) Whether poor or rich, we all like him.Whether he is poor or rich, we all like him.2) The entry into WTO will bring a large challenge.The entry into the WTO will bring a lot of challenges.3) The retired people can gain money is less than before.The retired people can earn less money now than before.4) We have not big enough living house today.We don’t have big enough apartments to live in today. Or:The apartments we live in today are not big enough.5) If we keep on thinking just but doing efforts, our desire will not become vainly hope. If we only think but never make any effort, our desire will not come true.6) I don’t lose my heart to study.I never lose heart to studying.7) Work pressure can lead work to be efficient.Work pressure can raise work efficiency.8) Buses, cars and bicycles are full of the streets.The streets are full of buses, cars and bicycles.9) Those who give birth a second child will fine a large number of money.Those who give birth to a second child will be fined a large amount of money.10) There will be more and more nuclear families appear in China.More and more nuclear families will appear in China.11) Some couples refer enjoying their own entertainment to the children.Some couples prefer to enjoy themselves rather than look after their children.12) In future, China would be faced too much heavier food shortage.China will face a serious food shortage in the future.13) China is the largest population country in the world.China is the country with the largest population in the world.14) He is easily to be gotten along with.It is easy to get along with him.15) I go to my office by my car only in less than 10 minutes.It only takes me less than 10 minutes to get to my office by car.16) People’s life level is also developed.People’s standard of living is also improved.17) I would go home to pick up my child from school.I would pick up my child from school on my way home.18) China enter the WTO will give us a chance to rich us.China’s entry into the WTO will make it possible for us to live a prosperous life. Or: China’s entry into the WTO will give us a chance to live a prosperous life.19) People always avoid to eat the food they do not fond of it.People always avoid eating the food they are not fond of.20) There are overcrowded people in almost every train.Almost every train is overcrowded with people.21) In modern China, there are nearly all families are three people.In modern China, nearly/almost all families have three people.22) We should prepare the aged society coming in China.We should prepare for the arrival of an aging society in China.23) In China, it is not a imagine that if people own private cars, the streets will be no space.In China, it is imaginable that if people owned private cars, the streets would have no space. 24) Neither the fat nor the slim is health.Neither being overweight nor being underweight is good for people’s health.25) I take my dinner and at the same time watch the TV news.I have my dinner while I’m watching TV news.26) They might feel that they lost their faces.They might feel that they lost face.27) The power of a group is more strong than that of individual.The power of a group is stronger than that of an individual.28) Emotional problems also let people feel unhappy.Emotional problems also make people feel unhappy.29) Life have different goal: rich, famous, value and happy family etc.People have different goals in life: wealth, fame, values, and a happy family, etc.30) I came true my ideal.My ideal came true.31) It was snowing heavily this morning. I had to queen for a bus. I was late for school.I was late for school because it was snowing heavily this morning and I had to queue for a bus. It was snowing heavily this morning. I was late for school because I had to queue for a bus. 32) We were given a room. It was very old. The walls were painted green. The paint had faded. We were given an old room. The green paint on the walls had faded.33) The bus went on a muddy road. The road was very narrow. It led into a village. The village was small. We wondered whether it was safe.The bus went on a narrow muddy road leading into a small village. W wondered whether it was safe.34) The dictionary was expensive for him. He borrowed one from the library. He copied it page by page into several notebooks.As the dictionary was expensive for him, he borrowed one from the library and copied it page by page into several books.35) Jane and Rochester were having their wedding. Rochester’s brother-in-law rushed in. he madea fact publicly known. The fact was that Rochester was a married man. His wife was mad. Jane was greatly shocked and bitterly hurt.Just before Jane and Rochester were going to be named husband and wife, Rochester’s brother-in-law rushed in and declared that Rochester already had a wife, who was mad. Jane was greatly shocked and bitterly hurt.36) Lenin studied very hard. He was the best student in his class. He was always ready to help the other students with their lessons.Lenin studies hard and was the best student in his class. He was always ready to help the other students.37) A poor student in his primary and secondary school years, Ted became a famous linguist.Ted was a poor student in his primary and secondary school years. However, he worked very hard at university. He read a lot about linguistics and missed no chance to ask his professorsquestions. So in his forties he became a famous linguist.38) Born in a small town in South China in the early 50s, he grew up to be a famous musician.He was born in a small town in South China in the early 50s. In his childhood he liked to sing songs. Later he entered a conservatory (音乐学院：音乐或戏剧艺术的学校). In the 70s he became a famous musician.39) Du Fu was one of the greatest poets.Du Fu was one of the greatest poets of the Tang period.40) A man is judged not only by what he says but also by his deeds.A man is judged not only by what he says but also by what he does.A man is judged not only by his words but also by his deeds.41) Professor Smith is a learned man, warmhearted, and helpful.Professor Smith is learned, warmhearted, and helpful.42) We thought she was charming, intelligent, and a very capable young woman.We thought she was a charming, intelligent, and very capable young woman.We thought she was charming, intelligent, and very capable.43) In this war, many parents lost their sons, many wives lost their husbands, many children lost their fathers and thousands of promising young men missed their best years for schooling.In this war, many parents lost their sons, many wives lost their husbands and many children lost their fathers. Thousands of promising young men missed their best years for schooling.44) He was knocked down by a bicycle, but it was not serious.He was knocked down by a bicycle, but was not badly hurt.45) I’m going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama, because he is a dramatist I like.I’m going to the lecture on modern Chinese drama, because the speaker is a dramatist I like. 46) At the age of three, my mother died.*a) My mother died when I was three years old.*b) At the age of three, I became a motherless child.c) When I was three years old, I became motherless.d) At the age of three, I became motherless.47) Looking out of the window, the grassland stretched as far as the eye can reach.Looking out of the window, he (she, I) can see the grassland stretching as far as the eye can reach.48) Outside the window, the grassland stretched as far as the eye can reach.On entering the classroom, the students stood up and said, “Good morning!”When the teacher entered the classroom, the students stood up and said, “Good morning!”49) To get ready for this trip, all the things she needed were put into a suitcase.To get ready for this trip, she put all the things she needed into a suitcase.50) I read an article of my professor’s in a new book, which discusses the differences in kinship terms between Chinese and English.In a new book, I read an article of my professor’s, which discusses the differences in kinship terms between Chinese and English.51) I read an interesting story in a magazine about sportsmen.I read in a magazine an interesting story about sportsmen.In a magazine I read an interesting story about sportsmen.52) She bought several picture books and put them into her bag, which she intended to give to her children.She bought several picture books for her children and put them into her bag.She put into her bag the picture books she had bought for her children.53) The idea he mentioned at first sounded good.The idea he first mentioned sounded good.The idea he mentioned sounded good at first.54) I have read a story recently. This story happened in the early 1960s.I have read a story recently. It happened in the early 1960s.55) There is only one interpretation that is acceptable.Only one interpretation is acceptable.56) There are some mistakes in grammar and spelling that you have made.You have made some mistakes in grammar and spelling.57) There are some people who know little but brag a lot.Some people know a little, but they brag a lot.58) It is your assignment to write a summary of the story you have read this week.Your assignment is to write a summary of the story you have read this week.59) It is likely that Professor Huang will talk on current world affairs.Professor Huang is likely to talk on current world affairs.60) Mary is a girl at the age of sixteen.Mary is sixteen.61) This orphan lost his parents at the age of three.The child became an orphan at the age of three.62) Mary has two big eyes.Mary has big eyes.63) Her two big eyes beneath her forehead are big in size and blue in color.Her eyes are big and blue.64) The teacher is always talking with a smile on his face.The teacher always talks with a smile.65) The walls of the classroom were painted white in color.The walls of the classroom were painted white.66) In my opinion, I think English is easier to learn than Russian.I think English is easier to learn than Russian.67) There is a big pine tree that stands like a giant on the top of the mountain. It towers over the trees around it.There is a giant pine tree on the top of the mountain, towering over the trees around it.68) I learned the news that you had won the first prize in the competition.I learned that you had won the first prize in the competition.69) I pulled myself together and managed to swim back with my arms and legs.I pulled myself together and managed to swim back.70) The old professor has a face lined deeply with wrinkles.The old professor has a deeply lines face.71) It was raining very hard outside the house.It was raining very hard.72) I held up my head and saw he was smiling.I looked up and found him smiling.。
雅思写作句子改错(参考答案)
雅思写作常用语法错误分析1．We are frequently confronted with statement about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity.错因：statement是可数名词，在这里要么加冠词，要么变复数。
改正：We are frequently confronted with statements about the alarming rate of loss of language diversity．大意：我们经常听到关于语言多元性快速丧失的言论。
2．Globalization will always have supporters who are blind on the destruction it can cause．错因：惯用法。
介词使用错误，blind后面常加to.改正：Globalization will always have supporters who are blind to the destruction it can cause.大意：全球化总有一些支持者，他们对由全球化造成的破坏视而不见。
3．One problem that has not yet been addressed is the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．错因：句子结构。
有两个谓语动词，分别是is和fail，需要将其中一个改成从句。
改正：One problem that has not yet been addressed is that the existing infrastructure and facilities fail to meet the demand posed by increased arrivals of tourists．大意：一个仍然还没有被解决的问题是现有的基础设施和设备不能够满足越来越多的游客的需要.4．Children，if grown up in a multicultural society，are more likely to embrace different cultures and values．错因：从句部分不能用过去分词，小孩与grow up之间是主动关系。
19年全国英语卷改错真题+答案
19年2卷 Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different job I would like to do. First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coolly. Then, when I was in the five grade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teacher too much. When I studied chemistry high school, I reconsidered my goal or decided to be a doctor. They were two reasons for the decision. One was that I was amazing at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is that I wanted to help people in need.19年1卷 I became interesting in playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly football fell just in front of me but almost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked it hardly back to the playground. To everyone`s surprising, the ball went into the net. All the football player on the playground cheered loudly, say that I had a talent for football. From now on, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.18年2卷When I was little, Friday’s night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of all sort in the sitting room. As the kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching them, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us that playing card games would help my brain. Still I unwilling to play the games for them sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are until I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where I was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life.18年1卷 During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years,but he agreed.17年2卷Mr. and all work in our live far from the school,and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every their spare time,they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden,that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables have also bought for some gardening ,they often get some useful informations from the summer came,they will invite their students pick the vegetables！17年1卷In the summer holiday following my eighteen birthday, I took driving lessons. I still remember how hard first day was. Before getting into the car, I thought I had learned the instructor’s orders, so once I started the car, my mind goes blank. I forgot what he had said to me altogether. The instructor kept repeating the word, “Speed up!” “Slow down!” “Turning left!” I was so much nervous that I could hardly tell which direction was left. A few minutes late, the instructor asked me to stop the car. It was a relief and I came to a suddenly stop just in the middle on the road16年2卷My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area. It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest. Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking. My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time. Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.16年1卷The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest wecan go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.15年2卷One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his was very saw a toy on a shop liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were was scared and begun to woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a minutes saw said,”How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried.”Tony promised her that this would never happen again.15年1卷When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city ,but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so ,we’ll live to regret it .第一节短文改错192 Since I was a kid, I’ve considered different jobjobsI would like to do.First, I wanted to be a fireman, whose uniform looked so coollycool. Then, when I wasin the fivefifthgrade, I wanted to be a teacher because I liked my English teachertoo very/so much. When I studied chemistryin/athigh school, I reconsidered my goalor and decided to be a doctor.TheyTherewere two reasons for the decision. One was thatI wasamazing amazed at the fact that a sick person could feel much more better after seeing a doctor. And the other is was that I wanted to help people in need.191 I became interesting int erestedin playing football thanks to a small accident. One afternoon where when I was in primary school, I was walking by the school playground. Suddenly a ∧ football fell just in front of me but andalmost hit me. I stopped the ball and kicked ithardly hard back to the playground. To everyone’s surprising surprise , the ball went into the net. All the football player playerson the playground cheered loudly, say saying that I had a talent for football. From now thenon, I started to play my football with classmates after school. I am a good player now.182 When I was little, Friday s Friday’ night was our family game night. After supper, we would play card games of allsort sortsin the sitting room. As the a kid, I loved to watch cartoons, but no matter how many times I asked to watching watchthem, my parents would not to let me. They would say to us methat playing card games would help my brain. Still I was ∧ unwilling to play the games for witht hem sometimes. I didn’t realize how right my parents are wereuntil I entered high school. The games my parents taught me where whenI was a child turned out to be very useful later in my life. 181 During my last winter holiday, I went to the∧countryside with my father tovisit my grandparents. I find found a big change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another otheranimals. Last winter when I went here there again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken chickens . They also had a small pond which in where或 they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell selling the fish. I felt happily happythat their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but andhe agreed.172 71. all both 72. a an 73. interesting interested 74. that which75. early earlier 76. for 删除 77. beside besides 78. informations information79. came comes 80. students pick students to pick171 2017年71. eighteen →eigh teenth 72. first 前加the 73. so →but/yet →went 75. word → words 76. Turning →Turn 77. much 去掉 78. late→later 79. suddenly →sudden 80. on→of（2016年全国二卷）71. how 改为 what; 72. chose 改为 choose; 73. take 改为 taking;74. but 改为and; 75. 在world 前加the; 76. your 改为 our;77. knowledges 改为 knowledge;78. can 改为 should 或 去掉can;79. thought 改为 think; 80. many 改为 much（2016年全国一卷）第一节 短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）71. that →where 72. but 去掉 73. had →have 74. honest→ honesty75. or→ and76. using →used 77. becoming 前加of 78. the →a 79. our→ his 80. stead→steadily（2015全国二卷）. 71. parent改为parents 72. on改为in 73. very去掉 74. looks改为looking 75. where改为that76. begun改为began 77. telling改为told 78. a改为the 79. saw后加his 80. terrible改为terribly（2015全国一卷）When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I wouldbe happy there. Now I am livingthoughtin a city, but I miss my h ome in∧countryside. There the air is clean or the mountainsare green.the and Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots ofwith studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airsseriousairwe breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. Wemust found ways toMany find protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we’ll live to regret it.our/the。
雅思语法改错练习
雅思语法改错练习Parents will always accompany with their kids during the childhood.错误的原因：1accompany是及物动词要去掉withTeachers usually help children to gain knowledge about science, math and language, which are a regular part of daily life.错误的原因： 2 gain knowledge去替代acquire more common sense 后面定语从句的谓语动词应该是单数 which is important to their day-to-day decision making. 用单数If children live in a family full of violence and conflicts they can be very easy to get angry.错误的原因：人不能说easy, 应该说they can be temperamentalThis means that they can save much time and allocate this timeto company with （应该是accompany） their families or focus on their work to make more money.shopping online sometimes may mislead people make some unwise decisions (两个动词)It is because that children in cities can receive more information.错误的原因：去掉that， because本身就可以引导从句Online shopping is changing their lifestyles, they can shopping (应该是go shopping) via the Internet on smartphones, computers or other devices. They do not need (应该是need to) go out and it save （应该是saves） much time. Then they may have more time to stay with family or to do some social activities with friends.There are various products are saled （两个动词）online and people can buy what they like without limit. For example they can buy a product which is produced in America through e-buy and this product may not be saled （应该是On sale） in stores. In this case,people buy more things so the local economy will see a (应该是an) increase.More and more libraries are equipped with advanced equipments to help readers.错误的原因：equipment是不可数名词，没有复数Technology has the changed the way of people to access knowledge.错误的原因：“of doing something“是正常的表达，可以说”the way people access knowledge”变成定语从句There are many people tend to search the web to gather information.错误的原因：两个动词，在“people”后面加“who”，使其变成定语从句2. Family life and parents （觉得这两个有点重复）absolutely play a vital role in children’s life,while they （指代不清，改为children）are also exposed to many external influences.4. Parents can encourage children to do their interested activities.(貌似没这个说法，改为activities that they are interested)错误的原因：interested过去分词不可能修饰没有生命的物体。
【最新2019】雅思写作范文：nature or nurture？(二)-实用word文档 (1页)
【最新2019】雅思写作范文：nature or nurture？(二)-实用word文档本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！== 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ ==雅思写作范文：nature or nurture？(二)Nowhere in the world has the issue of childrens education been so much debated as in our society . Nowadays , many parents let their children attend all kinds of courses that will help children to get a better future ; therefore , some people think that the postnatal nurture is more important than the congenital factors for personal growth and progress . The above point is certainly true ; this essay will outline three reasons .The main reason is that success of a child would not be separated from right teaching and personl effort . Currently , lots of famous scientists and politicians gain huge success in the world , as they are long - term to hard work . Moreover , the main reason why plenty of developing countries drop behind is their poor education .Another reason is that if people do not work hard but only depend on their high intellect , they will be far from successful . For instance , the little Bronte was quite clever during his childhood ; he was particularly adept at writing . But he was so satisfied with his superior intellect that he did not studycarefully . Finally , he became an idle person . However , hissisters became famous authors as a result of their hard study . They are Charlotte Bronte and Emily Bronte . Charlotte wrote Jane Eyre , Wuthering Heights was written by Emily .Last but not the least reason is the advantages of natural factors that are more and more similar . Plenty of advanced technological products are invented and widely used . They can supply peoples gaps . In the past , the difference of mathematical ability was remarkable . With the invention of the calculator , people can hardly find out the difference .。
雅思语法改错练习
作文中几个常见语法错误1、动词或者句子不能充当主语或者宾语1）Give children a comfortable home environment is parents’ duty2）Students receive job training is important.3) Students receive job training can become competitive in the labour market.4) Many rural residents have decided move to cities.2、主谓不一致1）R aising standards of literacy are the government’s priority.2) To rear a child alone are challenging to any parent3)The adequacy of financial resources are crucial to the operation of a not-for-profit organization.4)Overworking,coupled with poor diet,lead to physical degeneration.5)Even if somebody fall sick,everything go on as usual.6) There is a number of countries which perform poorly in containing pollution.7)How we cope with massive technological change inthe 21st century are an interesting issue.3、不及物动词和系动词没有被动语态1）The accident was similar to the one that was happened last year.2) I disagree many points made by the supporters of globalization3)The curriculum is consisted of core courses and optional courses有一些动词词组，如consist of、belong to、take place、benefit from也没有被动语态4）Most children are seemed to be better at remembering bad habits,instead of good ones.准系动词seem、remain、prove、appear、look、smell、taste不用被动语态4、及物动词的使用错误1、I will discuss in some detail.2、In some countries,salaries remain unchanged and even reduce.3、Education can let young people to find jobs easily after they finish their education.4、5、Private sponsorship has allowed the academiccommunity survive.6、7、Consumer confidence should improve,as it is crucialto an economic recovery.5、介词的使用错误1）Many smokers are unwilling to cease smoking despite they have knowledge of ill health effects.2)Many children depend on their parents give support3)People have different attitudes at life.。
初中英语作文病句和错句修改范例 (1)
初中英语作文病句和错句修改范例下面的英语句子不是病句就是错句. 让我们用锐利的眼睛, 一起来找茬吧.1. We have computer class one week a time.2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.3. There have 100 books.4. I study there very happy.5. I usually swimming there.6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.7. Several hours after, he was surprised.8. He had to asked the other one.9. He thought he speak well.10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.12. This film is very good-looking .13. It is very good to family look.14. I think we can’t live Internet.15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.16. I have a future dream.17. It can help me to walk on my life road.18. I think everything must be change a lot.19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.20. But I singing not very 21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.22. Almost students use the computer not study.23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.24. When I was very small.下面我们来看看要怎么改正吧.1. I have computer class once a week.英语中表达频率次数时:一次once, 两次twice 从三次开始用three times ...2. Going into my school, you can see many flowers.这里使用动名词going做主语, go 这个动作由后面的you 发出.3. There are 100 books.表示某个地方有什么,一般使用There be 的存在句型.4. I study there very happily.Study 是个动词,表示动作的程度要使用副词,不可以用形容词happy.5. I usually swim there.-ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语.6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题.如果单从中文意思来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为:By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall.7. Several hours later, he was surprised.使用after时,不能放在时间表达语的后面.8. He had to ask the other one.“Have to do something”是固定用法,不定式后用动词原形.9. He thought he spoke well.这个句子属于语法时态的不一致.10. Mr. Li is from Beijing .一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词..11. He studies very hard.. He likes studying Chinese.首先要区分hard 和hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词,但在意思上有很大的区别. He works very hard. 他工作很努力Hehardly works. 他几乎不工作.这个两个表达相差很大. 其次,be 动词后面不能使用副词.12. This film is very interesting.这是一个完全中文式的英语句子. good-looking 一般用来形容人物的.13. It is fit for family to enjoy.又是一个中文式的句子,14. I think we can’t live Internet.学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网.不改变原意的基础上,我们修改为:I think we can’t rely on Internet.15. Most people use the net to send the mails.这是一个要表达比例的英语句子.学生在这里做了一个中文句子的”强行”翻译.16. I have a dream about future..Future 在这里不可以直接修饰dream.17. It can help me to walk on my life ‘s journey.“人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不可用“road”来表达。
雅思语法改错练习
雅思语法改错练习雅思语法改错练习澳大利亚西蒙国际外语雅思培训部 Jack Stone写正确的句子:常见错误解析•1、成分完整：主谓宾的叙事框架不可缺亦不可多•It often swaying the customers by using the data that how many people are using their brands saying how awesome the particular product is.•Generally speaking, television computer just like a library, they are conveniently and simply provided something what children want to understand.•If there were no math how could build so many mansion without accidents happen frequently.•It is true that all those great projects which represent the trace of our history will beyond our ability without math.•Young person committed crime is higher in the whole of criminal rate because some young adults are not have a steady income.•Conversely, children who spend time on these things, they also bring a large quantity of benefits.•In the same way, children often face computer and television not only reduce time to participate in social activities or play in sports, but also alienate from the others in their life.•2、时态正确、准确、一致I was always holding the opinion that philosophy has less contribution to our life. •We have just being told that there are billions of male and more than female, especially in China.•Some people might questioned that if the universities’ behavior can arouse citizen’s anger because of the unfair treatment. •However, my favorite place is a Chinese city—Xin Jiang—which I have visit for two times.•That is also has positive effects on our market economic system.•However, there's a somewhat aggressive perspective said that we can't neglect the bad part of the science and technology…•In conclusion, I prefer to forwards. Even with the advent of science and technology in the 21st century. Children should spending time effectively•In conclusion, advertisement more or less conveyed the information of a country. •Therefore I firmly held the opinion that to protect local culture from extinction weight heavier than that in regard to the relationship between tourism and local culture.•3、a / an / the 的使用必须准确•名词不可裸奔原则•The second time I went there is for the traveling.• Advertising has a irreplaceable role in today’s business world. •The colleges and universities today offer the students choice to choose their teachers.•4、主谓一致•The history of science and technology have accompanied the evolution of human civilization. •Then, some excellent television program such as DISCOVERY HISTROY or English Language Teaching can open their mind and develop ability to thinking.•Moreover, customs and rituals of a nation is always the significant factor that all the companies are concern about which obviously can be seen from the way they do their advertising campaign.•Economic situations can also be translated into the slogans the company are using to express their concern on the latest issues such as rising oil prices.•Nowadays, research in growing numbers proves that experience we enjoy in our life do a declining effect on our personal character and development than the identity we are born with.•5、代词正确、前后一致•My mother acquired me to write a plan for what you will do next year.•My first reason is that some of the advertising exaggerate greatly. It seems their goods are able to copy with most of the problems, if not all.•Therefore I firmly held the opinion that to protect local culture from extinction weight heavier than that in regard to the relationship between tourism and local culture.•For visitors, following local customs and behavious is a significant approach to understand the colourful culture of host country in depth, because whatever you have already known about other nation is only a tip of the iceberg, a part of the reality, an experience of other people.6、词性、词形(主被动、可数、不可数、分词)正确•Nowadays technology is developing fastly andsome of us feel uneasy.•… a large amount of endeavor citizens made has been damaging the originate view of the nature…•Admittedly, if there are enough number of male and female students study all the subject, it must cause a large amount of waste which can result in the students’ skill training inefficiency.•Worse more, the quantity of unemployment people might dramatically increase.•Some consumer goods advocated by advertising makers, far from advantage, might impair our health, especially for babies. •However, as far as I concerned, try to keep these traditional skills and way of life is really have great meanings.•The final reason, and possibly the most significant one, is that prevents crime and advocates peace should be propagated by government at school and family. Children need to be educated on the dangers of commit crime.•The exceedingly density of population will trigger the tension of traffic, banking and eating. •Some people argue that young students of different abilities should be mix together while many others contend that it has detrimental impact for talent children.•7、避免出现“CHINGLISH”—汉化表达•While there are some advertising which are so excellent that might provide recreation and refreshment to fatigued urban dwellers, however, they are only the tip of the iceberg. •Different background people hold different attitudes toward this issue.•So we can discuss this argumentation from positive and negative perspective in modern-day society.•8、注意句子中并列成分的正确性•that’s not only good for those major’s student quality but also benefit for improving the society’s efficiency and stabilized the develop balance.•I’d like to explain that it is not only just male have more major selecting opportunities that female but also have a lot of major which male get less chance.•9、避免串句、断句、破句•For example, if you taught everybody of a poor country philosophy, they can use this subject to make them rich which can make them don‘t have to eat the roots of trees and grass to feed their family, and grass to feed theirthey can’t use it to make live peacefully which allow them sleep with an eye open all through the night.•As to this matter I hold the opinion that the society and the universities should treat female and male fairly but there are several jobs exist which men can do them better than women or women are more suitable for them, compared with men.•By all accounts, above 90 percent nurses in hospital are female, what made that happened?。
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英文修改句子作文模板英文：When it comes to writing in English, there are a few key things to keep in mind. First and foremost, it's important to have a good grasp of grammar and vocabulary. This means practicing regularly and expanding your knowledge through reading and studying.Another important aspect of writing in English is understanding the nuances of the language. English has many idioms and expressions that can be difficult to understand for non-native speakers. One way to improve your understanding of these is to immerse yourself in English-speaking culture by watching movies, listening to music, and reading books.In addition to grammar and vocabulary, it's important to structure your writing effectively. This means organizing your thoughts and ideas in a clear and concisemanner. One way to do this is to create an outline before you start writing, which can help you stay on track and ensure that your writing flows smoothly.Finally, it's important to proofread your writing carefully to catch any errors or mistakes. This means checking for spelling and grammar errors, as well as ensuring that your writing makes sense and is easy to read.中文：谈到用英语写作，有几个关键点需要注意。
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雅思写作练习：句子改错(1)
下面雅思为大家整理了雅思写作练习：句子改错，供考生们参考，以下是
详细内容。
1 Futurism , an early twentieth - century movement in art , rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporary life by emphasizing the machine and motion .
2 But , for a small group of students , professional training might be the way to go since well - developing skills , all other factors being equal , can be the difference between having a job or not .
3 For a group of remaining in existence , a profit - making organization must , in the long run , produces something consumers consider useful or desirable .
4 For a result of two or three centuries of scientific investigation we have come to believe that Nature is understandable
in the sense that when we ask her questions by way of appropriate observations and experiments ， she will answer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure .
5 At the same time , young people should be encourage to communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skills , which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents .
6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion , it is advisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at , for , however farfetched and unreasonable their principles may seem today , it is possible that in years to come they may be regarded as normal .。