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2015高考真题——英语(陕西卷)Word版含答案

2015年陕西省高考英语试题第一部分：英语知识运用（共四节，满分55分）第一节语音知识（共5小题；每小题1分，满分5分）从每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中，找出其划线部分与所给单词的划线部分读音相同的选项，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。

1. stomachA. technologyB. exchangeC. chairD. church2. uncleA. concertB. strangeC. blanketD. autumn3. exactA. excellentB. exampleC. exerciseD. expensive4. tableA. cottageB. basketC. wakeD. family5. doubleA. soulB. groupC. pronounceD. coupleKey: 1--5ACBCD第二节情景对话（共5小题；每小题1分，满分5分）根据对话情境和内容，从对话后所给的选项中选出能填入每一空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。

选项中有两个为多余选项。

Doctor: Good morning, Sir. 6Johnson :Yes, doctor. I'm always tired but when I go to bed I can't sleep. Doctor: 7Johnson : Since I started my new job two months ago.Doctor : What is your job ?Johnson : I’m in advertising. 8Doctor : It depends. How many hours do you work?Johnson: About 80 hours a weekDoctor: 9 . Do you often take exercise? Johnson: Not very often. 10 .Doctor; Well, you do need to find some time. Try to work less, or look for a more stress-free job.A. That's a lot!B. I like my job.C. Does it matter?D. How can I help you?E. I don't have the time.F. What time do you usually go to bed?G.. How long have you had this problem?Key:6—10 DGCAE第三节语法和词汇知识（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）从每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。

2015年高考真题——英语(陕西卷) Word版含答案

2015年高考真题——英语（陕西卷）第一部分：英语知识运用（共四节，满分55分）第一节语音知识（共5小题；每小题1分，满分5分）从每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中，找出其划线部分与所给单词的划线部分读音相同的选项，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。

1. stomachA. technologyB. exchangeC. chairD. church2. uncleA. concertB. strangeC. blanketD. autumn3. exactA. excellentB. exampleC. exerciseD. expensive4. tableA. cottageB. basketC. wakeD. family5. doubleA. soulB. groupC. pronounceD. couple第二节情景对话（共5小题；每小题1分，满分5分）根据对话情境和内容，从对话后所给的选项中选出能填入每一空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。

选项中有两个为多余选项。

Doctor: Good morning, Sir. 6Johnson :Yes, doctor. I'm always tired but when I go to bed I can't sleep.Doctor: 7Johnson : Since I started my new job two months ago.Doctor : What is your job ?Johnson : I’m in advertising. 8Doctor : It depends. How many hours do you work?Johnson: About 80 hours a weekDoctor: 9 . Do you often take exercise?Johnson: Not very often. 10 .Doctor; Well, you do need to find some time. Try to work less, or look for a more stress-free job.A. That's a lot!B. I like my job.C. Does it matter?D. How can I help you?E. I don't have the time.F. What time do you usually go to bed?G.. How long have you had this problem?第三节语法和词汇知识（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）从每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。

2015年高考英语陕西卷

Doctor: Good morning, Sir. 6
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2. 选择题的作答：每小题选出答案后，用统一提供的 2B 铅笔把答题卡上对应题目
A. That’s a lot!
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题区域内。写在试题卷、草稿纸和答题卡上的非答题区域均无效。 C. Does it matter?
考试结束后，请将本试题卷和答题卡一并上交。 D. How can I help you?
Johnson: Since I started my new job two months ago.
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英语 Doctor: What is your job?
Johnson: I’m in advertising. 8
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绝密★启用前选项中有两个为多余选项。
形码粘贴在答题卡上的指定位置。用统一提供的 2B 铅笔将答题卡上试卷类型 A Johnson: Not very oft试题卷、草稿纸和答题卡上的非答题区域均无效。
3. 完成句子和短文写作题的作答：用统一提供的签字笔直接答在答题卡上对应的答 B. I like my job.

2015年高考英语真题试卷（陕西卷）【答案加解析】

1 / 202015年高考英语真题试卷（陕西卷）一.语法和词汇知识：本大题共15小题，每小题1分，共15分1.（2015陕西）陕西）---Let's go to the New Year's Eve party, shall we? ---- _________ I guess it will be fun.A. Forget it!B. No way ！C. Why not?D. What for?2.（2015.陕西）The li le pupil took his grandma ________ the arm and walked her across the street.A. onB. byC. inD. at3.（2015.陕西）To warm himself, the sailor sat in front of the ﬁre rubbing one bare foot against________.A. anotherB. the otherC. otherD. either 4.（2015陕西）陕西）______ more learned a man is, _______ more modest he usually become. A. The ; the B. A; a C. The ; a D. A; the5.（2015.陕西）As the smallest child of his family, Alex is always longing for the me_______ he should be able to be independent.A. whichB. whereC. whomD. when6.（2015陕西）—Sir, could I hand in my homework a bit late?— __________, since you've been unwell these days.A. You can't be seriousB. I'm afraid notC. Good ideaD. Well, all right7.（2015.陕西）A er receiving the Oscar for Best Suppor ng Actress, Anne Benedict went on _________ all the people who had helped in her career.A. to thankB. thankingC. having thankedD. to have thanked8.（2015陕西） Back from his two-year medical service in Africa, Dr. Lee was very happy to see his mother ______ good care of at home.A. takingB. takenC. takeD. be taken9.（2015.陕西）Reading her biography, I was lost in admira on for _______Doris Lessing had achieved in literature.A. whatB. thatC. whyD. how10.（2015.陕西）I believe you will have a wonderful me here _______ you get to know everyone else. A. though B. as if C. once D. so that11.（2015陕西） You_______ feel all the training a waste of me, but I'm a hundred percent sure later you'll be grateful you did it.A. shouldB. needC. shallD. may12.（2015陕西）Mary _________ really hard on his book and thinks he'll have ﬁnished it by Friday.A. workedB. has been workingC. had workedD. has worked13.（2015.陕西）Ellen is a fantas c dancer. I wish I ________ as well as her.A. danceB. will danceC. had dancedD. danced14.（2015陕西）At college, Barack Obama didn't know that he ______the ﬁrst black president of the United States of America.A. was to becomeB. becomesC. is to becomeD. became15.（2015陕西）Peter will _______ his post as the head of the travel agency at the end of next month.A. take upB. put upC. add upD. break up二.完形填空：共20小题，每小题1.5分，共30分16. （2015陕西）完形填空。

2015年陕西高考英语真题作文

2015年陕西高考英语真题作文In the journey of life, challenges are inevitable. They come in various shapes and sizes, testing our resolve and determination. The English proverb, "No pain, no gain," aptly captures this essence, emphasizing the need for perseverance in overcoming obstacles. This was the central theme of the 2015 Shaanxi Provincial College Entrance Examination English essay prompt, which asked students to reflect on their own experiences and discuss the importance of perseverance in achieving success.Perseverance is the steadfastness in doing something despite difficulty or delay in achieving success. It is the driving force that propels us forward when faced with adversity. In the context of the exam, it was about the student's personal journey towards achieving a goal, despite encountering setbacks and difficulties. This journey was not just about academic success but also about personal growth and development.Looking back on my own life, I can recall several instances where perseverance played a pivotal role. One such instance was when I decided to learn a new skill –playing the guitar. It was a challenge I had set for myself, as I had never played a musical instrument before. Theinitial stages were tough, with my fingers hurting from the strings and my patience tested by the seemingly impossible task of coordinating my hands and eyes. However, I did not give up. I persevered, practiced daily, and slowly but surely, I began to see progress. It was this perseverance that eventually led me to master the guitar and experience the joy of playing beautiful melodies.The same can be said for any goal or aspiration in life. Whether it is academic, career-related, or personal, perseverance is the key to success. It is the ability tostay focused and determined, to keep going when others may have given up. It is about finding the inner strength to overcome obstacles and turn challenges into opportunitiesfor growth.The importance of perseverance is further emphasized by the fact that success often does not come easily. Itrequires hard work, dedication, and the willingness to push oneself beyond one's comfort zone. This was echoed in the exam prompt, which reminded students that success was notjust about the destination but also about the journey. It was about the lessons learned, the challenges overcome, and the personal growth achieved along the way.In conclusion, perseverance is a valuable trait thatcan help us achieve our goals and dreams. It is the driving force that keeps us going when faced with difficulties and setbacks. As the English proverb goes, "No pain, no gain." By persevering, we can turn our challenges intoopportunities for growth and ultimately achieve the success we desire. Let us all remember this as we embark on our own journeys towards success.**坚持的力量**在人生的旅途中，挑战是不可避免的。

2015陕西高考英语作文

2015陕西高考英语作文It was a hot summer day in 2015, the sun was shining brightly in the clear blue sky. I remember feeling excited and nervous at the same time as I walked into the exam room for the Shaanxi college entrance examination. The room was filled with students, all focused and ready to tackle the challenge ahead.As I sat down at my desk, I could feel the tension in the air. The sound of pencils scratching against paperfilled the room as we all began to work on the exam questions. I tried to stay calm and focused, but my mind was racing with thoughts of whether I had studied enough and if I would be able to perform well on the test.Time seemed to fly by as I worked through each section of the exam. I tried my best to answer each question to the best of my ability, hoping that all of my hard work and preparation would pay off in the end. Despite the pressure and stress, I tried to stay positive and remind myself thatI had done everything I could to succeed.Finally, the exam was over and I felt a sense of relief wash over me. I had survived the Shaanxi college entrance examination and now all that was left to do was wait for the results. I knew that no matter what the outcome was, I had given it my all and that was something to be proud of.Looking back on that day, I realize how much I had grown and learned from the experience. The Shaanxi college entrance examination was not just a test of my academic abilities, but also a test of my resilience and determination. It taught me the importance of hard work and perseverance, and I am grateful for the opportunity to have taken part in such a challenging and rewarding experience.。

2015年度陕西高考英语试题及标准答案解析

2015年陕西高考英语试题及答案第一部分英语知识运用（共四节，满分55分）第一节语音知识（共5小题，每小题1分，满分5分）从A、B、C、D四个选项中，找出与所给单词划线部分读音相同的选项，并在机读卡上将该选项涂黑。

1.StomachA. technologyB. exchangeC. chairD. church2. uncleA. concertB. strangeC. blanketD. autumn3. exactA. excellentB. exampleC. exerciseD. expensive4.tableA. cottageB. basketC. wakeD. Family5.doubleA. soulB. groupC.pronounceD.couple第二节: 情景对话（共5小题，每小题1分，满分5分）根据对话内容，从对话后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项，并在机读卡上将该选项涂黑，选项中有两项为多余选项。

Doctor: Good morning, Sir ______6______Johnson: Yes, doctor. I’m always tired but when I go to bed I can’t sleep.Doctor: ______7________Johnson: Since I started my new job two months ago.Doctor: What is your job?Johnson: I’m in advertising. _______8________Doctor: It depends. How many hours do you work?Johnson: About 80 hours a week.Doctor: __9___________ Do you often take exercise?Johnson: Not very often. _____10__________Doctor: Well, you do need to find some time. Try to work less, or look for a stress-free job.A.That’s a lot.B.I like my job.C.Does it matter?D.How can I help you ?E.I don’t have the time.F.What time do you usually go to bed?G.How long have you had this problem?第三节语法和词汇知识（共15小题，每小题1分，满分15分）从A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在机读卡上涂黑。

2015年高考真题陕西卷书面表达

2015年高考真题陕西卷书面表达书面表达（满分30分）假定你是李华。

在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。

写作要点：1.表示写信意图；2.陈述应征目的；3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。

【参考答案】Dear MS Chen ,I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua。

2015年陕西高考英语试题及答案-解析(word精校版)

2015年陕西高考英语试题及答案解析第一部分：英语知识运用（共四节，满分55分）第一节语音知识（共5小题；每小题1分，满分5分）从每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中，找出其划线部分与所给单词的划线部分读音相同的选项，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。

选项中有两个为多余选项。

2015高考试题——英语(新课标Ⅱ卷)陕西

2015年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语本试卷分第Ⅰ卷（选择题）和第Ⅱ卷（非选择题）两部分。

考试结束后，将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。

第Ⅰ卷注意事项：1. 答第Ⅰ卷前，考生务必将自己的姓名、准考证号填写在答题卡上。

2. 选出每小题答案后，用铅笔把答题卡上对应题目的答案标号涂黑。

如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案标号。

不能答在本试卷上，否则无效。

第一部分听力（共两节，满分30分）做题时，先将答案标在试卷上。

录音内容结束后，你将有两分钟的时间将试卷上的答案转涂到答题卡上。

第一节（共5小题；每小题1.5分，满分7.5分）听下面5段对话。

每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项，并标在试卷的相应位置。

听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。

每段对话仅读一遍。

例：How much is the shirt?A. £19.15B. £9.18C. £9.15答案是C。

1.What time is it now?A. 9:10B. 9:50C. 10:002.What does the woman think of the weather?A. It’s niceB. It’s warmC. It’s cold3.What will the man do?A. Attend a meetingB. Give a lectureC. Leave his office4.Wh at is the woman’s opinion about the course?A. Too hardB. Worth takingC. Very easy5. What does the woman want the man to do ?A. Speak louderB. Apologize to her.C. Turn off the radio.第二节（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分）听下面5段对话或独白。

2015年陕西高考英语试题及答案word精校版(陕西卷)

1. stomachA. technologyB. exchangeC. chairD. church2. uncleA. concertB. strangeC. blanketD. autumn3. exactA. excellentB. exampleC. exerciseD. expensive4. tableA. cottageB. basketC. wakeD. family5. doubleA. soulB. groupC. pronounceD. couple第二节情景对话（共5小题；每小题1分，满分5分）根据对话情境和内容，从对话后所给的选项中选出能填入每一空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。

选项中有两个为多余选项。

Doctor: Good morning, Sir. 6Johnson :Yes, doctor. I'm always tired but when I go to bed I can't sleep. Doctor: 7Johnson : Since I started my new job two months ago.Doctor : What is your job ?Johnson : I’m in advertising. 8Doctor : It depends. How many hours do you work?Johnson: About 80 hours a weekDoctor: 9 . Do you often take exercise?Johnson: Not very often. 10 .Doctor; Well, you do need to find some time. Try to work less, or look for a more stress-free job.A. That's a lot!B. I like my job.C. Does it matter?D. How can I help you?E. I don't have the time.F. What time do you usually go to bed?G.. How long have you had this problem?第三节语法和词汇知识（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）从每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。

2015陕西省高考英语试卷(word版有答案)

选项中有两个为多余选项。

Doctor: Good morning, Sir. 6Johnson :Yes, doctor. I'm always tired but when I go to bed I can't sleep. Doctor: 7Johnson : Since I started my new job two months ago.Doctor : What is your job ?Johnson : I’m in advertising. 8Doctor : It depends. How many hours do you work?Johnson: About 80 hours a weekDoctor: 9 . Do you often take exercise?Johnson: Not very often. 10 .Doctor; Well, you do need to find some time. Try to work less, or look for a more stress-free job.A. That's a lot!B. I like my job.C. Does it matter?D. How can I help you?E. I don't have the time.F. What time do you usually go to bed?G.. How long have you had this problem?Key:6—10 DGCAE第三节语法和词汇知识（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）从每小题的A、B、C、D四个选项中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该选项涂黑。

2015年陕西高考英语试题及答案

2015年陕西高考英语试题及答案一、听力理解（共20小题；每小题1分，满分20分）A1-5 CBCAB 6-10 ACBCCB11-15 ACBAA 16-20 CACBC二、阅读理解（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）21-24 DCBD 25-28 CAAB 29-31 BCB 32-35 BACC三、完形填空（共15小题；每小题1.5分，满分22.5分）36-40 DABCA 41-45 BCADB 46-50 CABCD四、语法填空（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）51. who 52. to do 53. sailing 54. a 55. which56. traveling 57. will 58. why 59. for 60. them五、短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）There were a lot of people at the station waiting for the train when I arrived there. The train I was take was already on the platform waiting for us.I quickly look at my watch and saw that I had ten minutes to get to the ticket office and to buy a ticket. I felt frustrating because the queue was very long and it seemed that everybody had to hand bags of money to pay for the ticket. Time passed quickly. I thought I would not be able to get my ticket beforethe train journeys begins. But, at last, it was my turn, I bought the ticket and ran to the train. But as I arrived at the train, the doors were close and the train was beginning to move.答案：1. take → taking2. look → looked3. frustrating → frustrated4. and → so5. to hand bags → handing bags6. journeys → journey7. last → lastly8. bought → had bought9. arrived → arrived at10. c lose → closed六、任务型阅读（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）61. with/getting 62. and 63. feeling 64. time65. attention 66. practice 67. helpful 68. improve69. worse 70. own七、短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）Every year, a Jeans Day is hold at my school to raise money for a charity. The idea is so students pay $1 a year to wear jeans on that day instead of uniforms. Last year, the charity that we were raising money to was a hospital in a poor area. After we raised the money, we sent people to buy needles, medicine and others materials that the hospital needed. We also will send doctors to help them. Most students are happy to know they can do something to help people. Of course, it doesn't matter to them whether they wear blue jeans to uniforms on that day.答案：1. hold → held2. so → that3. a → an4. others → other5. will send → sent6. are → were7. know → knowing8. blue → their9. uniforms → uniform10. on → or八、书面表达（满分25分）范文：Dear Mr. Smith,I am writing to thank you for your warm welcome during my recent visit to your company. It was a great pleasure to tour your factory and learn about your production processes.I must say that I was deeply impressed by the advanced technology and state-of-the-art facilities in your factory. The cleanliness and efficiency of the production line left a lasting impression on me. It is no wonder that your products enjoy such high reputation in the market.Moreover, I would like to express my gratitude to the staff who accompanied me throughout the visit. They were extremely knowledgeable and patient in explaining every detail to me. I truly appreciate their effort in ensuring that I had a comprehensive understanding of your company.In addition, I would like to commend your company for its commitment to environmental sustainability. The measures you have taken to minimize waste and reduce energy consumption are truly admirable. I firmly believe that more companies should follow your example in promoting a greener and more sustainable future.Once again, I would like to extend my heartfelt thanks for your warm hospitality. I am confident that our partnership will be beneficial for both parties, and I look forward to working closely with your esteemed company in the near future.Yours sincerely,[Your Name]。

(完整word版)2015年陕西高考英语试题及答案解析

2015英语高考作文陕西

2015英语高考作文陕西In the 2015 English Gaokao, Shaanxi province presented its students with an essay that was both thought-provoking and reflective of the socio-cultural trends of the time. The essay prompt was designed to assess the students' ability to express their opinions on a contemporary issue while demonstrating their command of the English language.Prompt:The essay prompt typically required students to discuss the impact of the Internet on interpersonal communication. Students were expected to explore both the positive and negative aspects of online interactions and how they have transformed the way people connect with one another.Sample Introduction:"In the digital age, the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate, making it possible to connect with others across the globe with the click of a button. However, this convenience has also raised concerns about the quality of our interpersonal relationships."Body Paragraphs:1. Positive Impacts:- Discuss how the Internet has facilitated communication,allowing for the exchange of ideas and the formation of global communities.- Mention the role of social media in keeping in touch with friends and family, especially for those who live far apart.2. Negative Impacts:- Address the concerns about the superficiality of online interactions and the potential for misinformation.- Highlight the issue of cyberbullying and the negative effects it can have on mental health.3. Balancing Online and Offline Interactions:- Suggest ways in which individuals can balance the use of technology with face-to-face communication to maintain meaningful relationships.- Emphasize the importance of digital literacy andcritical thinking to navigate the online world responsibly.Sample Conclusion:"As we continue to embrace the Internet as a tool for communication, it is crucial to be mindful of its effects on our social lives. By striking a balance between online and offline interactions, we can harness the benefits of technology while preserving the depth and authenticity of our human connections."Evaluation:The essay would be evaluated based on the following criteria:- Clarity and coherence of the argument.- The range and accuracy of vocabulary used.- The complexity and variety of sentence structures.- The relevance and support of the examples provided. Reflection:The 2015 English Gaokao essay in Shaanxi was a comprehensive test of students' English writing skills. It required them to not only demonstrate their language proficiency but also to engage with a topic that is highly relevant to their lives. The essay prompt encouraged critical thinking and personal reflection, making it an effective tool for assessing students' abilities to communicate complex ideas in English.。

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高考英语书面表达应用文书信体写作申请与自荐（A Letter of Application ）申请信是日常交际中常见的一种请求手段，广泛用于求职、求学等方面。

在申请信中，说明清楚申请的内容及原因十分重要。

此外，申请离不开自荐，即主动向对方推荐、介绍自己的优势、长处，信中应着重强调出自己的条件符合对方的要求，力求给对方留下深刻印象。

需注意：申请信的语气要诚挚、友好，千万不要表现出强求的意思，但是期望得到的心情一定要表达出来。

【真题例析】（2015·陕西）假定你是李华。

在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。

写作要点：1. 表示写信意图；2. 陈述应征目的；3. 说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。

写作要求： 1.邮件词数不少于100； 2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数； 3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

【标准范文】Dear MS Chen ,I’m Li Hua, a student from Clas s2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua【独家点评】——高瑞翔 Xavier广东北江中学2016 届高三英语限时训练20选用的即是2015年陕西卷真题。

从同学们本次训练的情况上看，英语写作即书面表达部分仍有所欠缺，有待提高。

主要存在的问题有：1、犯简单、低级错误的不在少数，如单词拼写错误，冠词使用不当，名词单复数不对，动词时态变形错误，词类转换错误等，凡是我们在短文改错中常见的错误，都可视为无谓的简单、低级错误，写作时应当予以避免甚至杜绝。

其中首段首句出错的问题十分严重！第一段第一句（不计已给出的开头）应当表述内容要点1——写信意图，即“我写这封信是为了应征英语文化节志愿者”，可译为“I am writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer in the English festival.”但是不少同学把该句的第三个单词误写为“writting”，即犯了动词时态的变形错误。

注意，V .-ing 形式只有当动词的最后一个音节为重读闭音节时，才需要双写末尾辅音字母再加-ing ，如“hitting”、“permitting”；而单词“write”是以不发音的“e”结尾的开音节，应当去e 再加-ing 。

这一英语语法知识是小学、初中最基础的内容，若是因为粗心笔误，又没有写完后回读检查的习惯，而犯这样的错误是十分不应该的！此外，据不完全统计，有近半数的同学写作时中式思维严重，写出了像“apply for the volunteer”这样不准确、不地道的表达。

在英语中，短语“apply for”意为“申请”，后面应当接一个职务、职位，而“volunteer”这一名词表示的是“志愿者”一类人，并不是某个职务，因此这样的表达有搭配不当之嫌。

正确的应为“apply for the position as a volunteer”或“apply for a volunteer job”或“apply to become a volunteer”。

而与之不同的是，如果想要表达“申请参加活动/项目”，习惯上，表述为“apply for the activity/program”即可，并不需要“apply for taking part in the activity”。

还有的同学出现“I’m desire to……”一个主谓句有两个动词的语法错误。

在英语作文中想要获得高分数，一定要注重写好首句和尾句！换位思考一下，假设你是一位阅卷老师，看到一篇作文的第一句话有出现有错误、表达不准确的情况，我相信，你不会再有很好的心情阅读下去，印象分肯定很低很低。

曾有某大学毕业生小蔡好不容易进入复试阶段，却因自己手写的400字简历中有24个错别字而被拒录，她求职遗憾的惨痛经历应当要让我们引以为戒；而如今你写的一篇100词的应征申请信中首句第三个单词就拼错了，呵呵，在全省几十万考生的激烈竞争中，你想要脱颖而出当上自愿者恐怕是没希望了。

所以，夯实基础，注意细节，养成良好的语言习惯，对作文拿高分至关重要！！！2、除个别同学未分段外，绝大多数同学都能做到结构清晰；但新的问题又出现了，那就是——详略不当。

注意这是Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is nowlooking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for T alent Show, SpeechContest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an applicationemail at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@.一篇应征文，你想要获得这项职位，文章的重点应放在“表明自己能够胜任”上，即内容要点3——应征条件（性格、能力等）应突出地写、详写。

而许多同学在审题时并没注意到这一隐性的要求，在13行的文稿纸中写作时，要点2花费了5-6行的笔墨大写特写自己的“雄心壮志要抓住此次的宝贵机会”，而到写自己的优点、长处（要点3）时却只留下3-4行的位置去“挤”，最后只能两三句话草草带过，这样的段落结构安排显然是不合理的。

我们说，书信——应用文（实用类文本）的写作，其本质要求和第一标准应当是看——它是否达到了交际的目的。

这就要求我们在写作时把自己置身于具体的社交情境中，而不仅仅是完成题目中的写作任务。

假设你是该校志愿者招募工作的负责人Ms. Chen，难道你最先关注的不是应征者的性格、能力等吗？同学们不妨以此自评，看看自己写的申请信能否让Ms. Chen满意。

如果你是Ms. Chen，你会给自己一个志愿者的名额吗？为了增强申请文的说服力，在篇幅允许的情况下，可以适当增加一些个人事例（可以虚构）作为补充细节，让文章内容有血有肉！这点有部分同学做到了且做得挺好。

3、以上详略不当的问题，其实也反映了同学们在写作思路上的局限：写应征目的比较有话可说，而当要“自夸”自己的才能时却显得信心不足，显然没能很好地认识自己、发觉自己身上的能力；或有碍于“面子”，不好意思虚构。

从实际写作反映的情况上看也是如此，大多数同学要点2写得很精彩，诸如：提高自己的交际能力、英语水平，给高中校园生活留下美好回忆等。

不少同学充分利用好了招募启事中的“annual”这一信息，设想自己在往届英语节中担任志愿者的经历，表明自己对这份工作的热爱且经验丰富。

有位同学在作文中写道：自己去年是以观众的身份参加英语文化节的，由于受到了好心志愿者的热情接待和周到服务，对成为志愿者心生向往，认为他们是校园活动中一道亮丽的风景线（In my mind, the volunteers were a beautiful landscape in our school, because they added a brilliant contribution to the English festival. How wonderful it is to become a volunteer!），因此希望今年自己也能够成为他们的一员。

看，像这样的写作思路就非常开阔，因此笔者在她的文章中点评：“好！文章有个性！”有同学在作文中引用名句谚语“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。

”——“Rose given, fragrance remains in hand.”以此来表达他希望通过帮助别人来获得快乐的美好心愿。

其中非常高级的独立主格结构的准确运用，真不失为文章一大增分的亮点！好！但也有同学在文章中写出了像答政治题的假、大、空的话，如：“achieve the value of my life（实现人生价值......太扯淡了！）”，还有像“make a little difference in the world”、“contribute to the society”，别忘了你只是“当个校园志愿者”，大可不必把自己想得那么伟大！有的同学在要点2中写当志愿者参加活动是想提高自己在某方面的能力，但却不小心写出了自己在某方面能力上的不足：“Speaking of my purpose, I think it results from two reasons. First of all, I lack an abilit y of communicating with others. That is, I my sometimes annoy other people. So I want to improve my ability by being a volunteer...”这在申请信中可是一败笔啊！别忘了应征、申请都离不开自荐，其准则应当是“多写优点、充分肯定自身长处、优势”，像这样自暴缺点的负面信息还是少提供为好。