赣州市书面表达训练中考英语专项训练含答案解析

赣州市书面表达训练中考英语专项训练含答案解析

一、中考英语书面表达训练

1．为了宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化, 某双语杂志将举办征文活动来介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”是其中一个选题。请你根据下面的内容提示, 用英语写一篇短文参加此活动。

内容提示：

1. 杨时去拜见老师程颐一老师在睡觉一杨时在雪地等一老师醒来发现杨时在门口

2. 通过介绍这个故事, 发表你的看法或者观点。

要求：

1. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯：词数：100左右.

2. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称、老师和同学的真实姓名。

【答案】Long long ago, there was a man called Yangshi. Once he went to visit his teacher, Chengyi. Unfortunately, Mr. Cheng was sleeping in the room. He didn’t wake up the teacher. So he stood in front of the gate. At that moment, there were snowflakes flying over his head and it was very cold. But yangshi still stood in the snow until Mr. Cheng woke up. When the teacher woke up, the snow was very deep. Yangshi was like a snowman standing at the gate. Finally, the teacher was moved deeply.

After reading the story, I think we should respect our teacher. We should study hard.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，主要介绍中国的经典故事, “程门立雪（Stand in the snow to wait for Master Cheng respectfully）”。目的是宣传和弘扬中华优秀传统文化。时态为一般过去时，灵活运用动词的过去式。作文要包含材料上的所有信息，通过介绍这个故事，发表看法或者观点。写作时，避免汉语式英语。注意固定搭配及主谓一致的问题，例如:There was/ were...注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，具有条理性。

2．书面表达

“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”

----Forrest Gump 中文译名：《阿甘正传》

“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”

----The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：《肖申克的救赎》

“We are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.”

----President Xi Jingping

以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程。所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。请以Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自己的观点。

要点提示：

1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实；

2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；

3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动；

4.补充自己的观点。

写作要求：

1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯；

2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；

3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；

4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。

Dream Chaser

As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset.__________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true, firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activities. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.

【解析】

【详解】

1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。

2.例文点评：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，主要讲述如何实现自己的目标（Firstly,…More importantly,…Besides,…Finally,…）。承接文章开头，句意完整，避免汉语式英语，叙述条理清晰。

3.高分亮点：

高分短语：feel satisfied；feel upset；come true；set a practical goal；both…and…；keep patient。

高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。

3．书面表达

难忘的初中三年学习生活已经接近尾声，你一定既有收获又有不足，也有许多对自己未来的期待。请以My Unforgettable Middle School Life为题，根据下面的思维导图，写一篇短文介绍自己难忘的校园生活并描述对未来的期盼。