2018高考英语二轮复习 专题五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误靶向训练
高考英语二轮复习 专题五 短文改错 第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误课件.pptx
【真题例析 1】(2016·全国卷Ⅰ) My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live. 答案：that→where 解析：考查宾语从句。此处表达的是“靠近我所住 的地方”，故需将 that 改为 where。where 在此引导宾 语从句，并在从句中作地点状语。
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【真题例析 1】(2016·全国卷Ⅰ) Though not very big，but the restaurant is popular in our area. 答案：去掉 but 解析：考查行文逻辑错误。从属连词 though(虽然) 不能与并列连词 but 一起使用，故去掉 but。
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句法类错误设置重点考察基本句法知识，包括句子 成分的划分，句子结构分析及连词的用法，特殊句式的 基本结构及其用法等，要求考生有一定的复合句结构分 析能力和辨别能力。行文逻辑错误设置重点考察对短文 前后逻辑语义的把握能力。
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技巧 1 短文改错题涉及时态的考查点通常为： (1)一般现在时和一般过去时的混用； (2)短文中时态的使用前后不一致； (3)在特定语境条件下时态的误用(含有状语从句的 复合句，主句用将来时态，而从句中则用一般现在时态)； (4)有时也涉及对其他时态的考查。
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专题五 短文改错
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第 讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误
高考英语短文改错常见的句法错误有动词的时态、 语态错误，非谓语动词使用错误，主谓一致错误，名词 性从句、定语从句和状语从句等三大从句出现的错误以 及句子成分的赘余等。还有语气的误用，主要体现在虚 拟语气的误用、主从句语气不一致等。这些错误通常与 句子成分的分析紧密相关，所以难度较大。行文逻辑错 误主要设置连词、代词和否定词。
最新2018高考英语短文改错设题方式讲解与选练题附(解析)答案
2018高考英语短文改错：设题方式讲解与选练题附（解析）答案12短文改错的设题方式：【一】错词【二】漏词【三】多词3一．短文改错的设题方式----错词：4错词的情况归纳起来大致可分为虚词选择错误、实词词形错误、同(近)义5词、形似词选择错误等。
61．虚词错误①介词错误。
介词错误主要集中在介词的固定搭配、介词多词义的用法以78及一些意义相近介词、副词和连词的混用等。
91.After five years away in my hometown，I find that the neighborhoodwhich I used to live in has changed a lot.(09全国卷I)1011析：“从……离开，远离”应为短语 away from，不能与in搭配。
应将in 12改为from。
13②连词错误主要表现: 句与句之间的关系混淆，是并列、转折、承接、还14是表原因；连词与介词、副词的混用，一些连词具有多重功能和词性以及意义15相近连词的区别等。
161.I meant to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，and17I was held up on my way back(09全国卷II)18析：分析前后两个句子可知，前面的句子与后面的句子存在转折关系，不19是并列关系，应将 and 改为but。
③冠词错误：冠词的考查集中在：应该使用定冠词的地方使用了不定冠词；2021应该使用不定冠词的地方却使用了定冠词；不定冠词a与an的误用等。
221.Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat with 23them. （2009.四川卷）24析：初次提到的人或物前应该用不定冠词，因此要将第一个the改为an。
252．实词错误26①名词错误主要集中在：名词的单复数形式，特别注意不规则名词的复数27形式；可数名词和不可数名词的混用；抽象名词具体化；名词的所有格等。
2018届二轮复习短文改错考纲解读及解题指导 课件(45张)
二、名词。主要考查可数名词和不可数名词辨析、 可数名词单复数等。 1. He has ruined his healthy. (辽宁2013) 解：名词用法。his是形容词性物主代词，其后 应接名词，故应将healthy改为health。 2. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard ... (2013新课标全国I) 解：名词单复数。“宽厚的肩膀”应用broad shoulders，将shoulder改为复数形式。
应试策略 做短文改错时，应注意以下情况： 1. 看到平行结构时，要检查是否有用词不一 致或成分缺失而引起的句子不平衡错误； 2. 看到转折、因果、对比等结构时，要检查 是否有行文逻辑方面的错误； 3. 看到多重结构句时，要检查是否有时态、 语态、引导词或成分残缺等错误；
4. 看到名词、代词结构时，要检查是否有数、 格或指代不一致的错误； 5. 看到固定短语、词组时，要检查副词、介 词、冠词等是否有使用错误或缺失。
5. I am awfully tiring ... (浙江2013) 解：动词-ing形式和动词-ed形式的形容词辨 析。由语境可知，本句的意思是“我非常 累”，故应将tiring改为tired。
五、代词。主要考查各类代词的用法及其误 加与漏用。 1. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others ... (2013新课标全国卷I) 解：which指代的是voice，从句意为“声音将 他和其他人区分开来”，从语意上看此处不 需要使用反身代词，故应将himself改为him。
2. Dad lost his job, and as Mom explained, “He was lucky to find other one.” (浙江2013) 解：other和another的区别。other表示 “其他的，别的”，其后常接可数名词复 数；another表示“另一个”，其后常接可 数名词单数。此处表示“另一份工作”， 故应将other改为another。
高三英语二轮复习 专题五 短文改错 习题讲评 课三 短文改错4步曲再查逻辑课件
though I didn’t feel well one day.
but→and
解析：此处表示：这是一个很棒的地方，而且我们玩得很开
心。根据语境可知前后内容之间是并列关系，故将 but 改为
and。 12/11/2021
第二页，共二十五页。
6．(2018·太原阶段测评)While someone from the north of China
解析：前后句之间为转折关系，故应用 but 连接。
12/11/2021
第十四页，共二十五页。
6．Should I tell him the truth, and should I pay to repair it？I
wish for your advice.
and→or
解析：根据语境可知，两个问句之间表示逻辑上的选择关系，
12/11/2021
第一页，共二十五页。
4．(2018·石家庄检测)However, after a few days, I decided not to
let one single loss keep me from doing what I love.But I cheered up and devoted myself to singing again. But→So 解析：上一句说的是“我决定不让一次失败阻止我做自己喜欢
but→and
解析：praised 和 asked 之间是并列关系，用 and。
3．In my spare time, I often read some books written by famous
writers in or abroad.
or→and
解析：in and abroad 固定词组，意为“国内外”，故此处应
2018高三年级短文改错二轮改错公开课
短文改错考些什么？怎么考？ 你有什么解题经验和大家分享？
1. 长度： 短文有6～10句话,含92～119个词.
2. 内容： 取材于学生习作,贴近学生生活.
3. 体裁： 除20XXⅡ卷是说明文外,其余都是记叙文.
4. 考点 ： 动,名,形,副,介,冠,代,连词等.
5. 考法：
1> 8:1:1的规律 即：8个改错题,1个加词题, 1个删词题 2每个句子最多不超过两个错误, 一词改一词
"Slow down!" "Turning left!"
Turn
3. <2016全国Ⅰ卷> It is always crowded with customers at meal times. Some
people even had to wait outside. My uncle tells me that… 4. <2016全国hⅠave卷> Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high
quality oil are using for cooking. used
have 5. <2017全国Ⅲ卷> I had grown not only physically, but also mentally in the past
few years.
6. <2017全国Ⅲ卷> About one month after this photo was taken, I entered my
介性误用
sudden 词性误用
just in the middle on the road. 〔作者暑假学车的经历, 8句,109词
2018届高考英语二轮复习 短文改错十大考点精准解析 课件 (共23张PPT)
2....they often get some useful informations from the Internet.(2017· 全国Ⅱ) 分析：information是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故将informations改为 information。 3.When I was a very young children，my father created a regular practice
分析：从属连词though不可与并列连词but连用但可以与yet连用，因此
应该删除but或将but改为yet。
(八)从句的引导词
主要考查定语从句中关系词的错用或缺失、状语从句引导词的错用、 名词性从句引导词的错用、多余或缺失。 1.Around me in the picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time(2017· 全国Ⅲ) 分析：由句子结构可知，things是先行词，后面是定语从句，从句中缺
在dreams后加上介词of。
4.Now I am leaving home to college.(2016· 全国Ⅲ)
分析：leave...for...是固定搭配，表示“离开……去……”，所以应把to
改为for。
(七)连词
主要从逻辑关系角度考查连词的误用，或从成分缺失的角度考查连词的 漏用。 1.Before getting into the car，I thought I had learned the instructor’s
road.(2017· 全国Ⅰ)
分析：此处表示“我来了个紧急刹车”。suddenly是副词，表示“意外地，
忽然地”；sudden为形容词，表示“突然的；迅速的”。修饰名词stop应
2018高考英语二轮复习专题五短文改错第2讲句法错误和行文逻辑错误靶向训练
专题五 短文改错第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误[真题演练]Passage 1(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)When I look at this picture of myself ，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically ，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took ，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time ：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案：When I look at this picture of myself ，I realize how fast time flies.I had have grown not only physically ，and but also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took taken ，I entered my second year of high school and become becamea new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are thethings they that/whichwere very important in my life at that time ：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference differentkinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late latestmusic albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your myhigh school days. 【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。
高考英语短文改错 2 第二讲 句法类错误
第二讲句法类错误考点1主谓一致误用[典例1](2018·全国卷Ⅲ)The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistakes as well.[考场思维](1)根据and之前的is，可判断include的时态。
(2)找出include的主语：that。
(3)尝试解答：include→includes[典例2](浙江卷)He would ask who we was and pretend not to know us.[考场思维](1)主谓判断：主语是we；谓语动词应该使用复数。
(2)尝试解答：was→were[过关检测]1．She took the lift to the eleventh floor, and the secretary showed her where her desk and her computer was.was→were 2．(2019·长春外国语学校第二次质量检测)You are the most considerate person who know exactly what I need in our class.know→knows 3．(2019·甘肃兰州一中高三月考)Each student learn a foreign language, mostly English, from Day One of their compulsory education.learn→learns 4．My village lie in the mountains in southwest China.lie→lies 5．I, together with him, were going to do just what we had discussed.were→was 6．Selling newspapers not only makes some money but also give us some working experience during the summer vacation.give→gives [技法点金]1．判断主谓语是关键①可数名词单数或不可数名词作主语时谓语动词用单数。
2018届二轮复习 短文改错解题指导 课件(30张)
2. 2015全国新课标卷 II One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded. parents Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it in so very much that he quickly walked into the
6. begun→ began 因begin的过去式是 began。 7. telling→ told 与前面的saw是并列 谓语，用told。 8. a→ the 特指上文提到的那家商店， 用the。 9. saw后面加his 指Tony的父母，故 加his。 10. terrible→ terribly 修饰形容词 (worried)用副词。
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Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom his said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I
were terrible worried. ” Tony promised her terribly that this would never happen again.
本文叙述了Tony在购物中心与父母走散后，在热 心人的帮助下找到父母的经历。 1. parent→ parents 由下文的his parents were missing可知用复数。 2. on→ in 据常识，玩具应在橱窗里面，故用in。 3. 去掉so后的very 这是so…that…结构，不用 very。 4. looks→ looking 介词after后面接动名词，故用 looking。 5. where→ that 或者去掉where宾语从句，从句 的结构与意思完整，用that引导或省略that。
2018版高考英语二轮专题5 短文改错 考法2 句法错误
考法2| 句法错误错误1——连接词、从句引导词有误1．(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)Around me in the picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time: car magazines and musical instruments.they→that/which[things是先行词，后面是定语从句，they不能引导定语从句，故用that/which引导。
]2．(2015·全国卷Ⅱ)After looking at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing.where→that或去掉where[found后为宾语从句，引导词不作句子成分只起连接作用，应用that引导，而且that可省略。
]3．(2017·桂林市校际联考)Although we must have a fast step, but I don't think we should have fast food.去掉but[although或though和but不能同时放在同一个句子里。
] 4．(2017·西安市第八十三中学模拟)I was about to leave while the owner of the shop waved at me.while→when[考查句式be about to do sth. when ...意为“正要做某事，这时……”。
]5．(2017·赤峰市模拟)It's true what honesty is more important than money!what→that[it作形式主语，后面的句子为真正的主语，引导词在从句中无任何意义而且不作任何成分，故应用that。
2018年高考英语二轮专题复习与测试：第一部分第二章短文改错 课件
4．介词的误用。
此类错误的设置一般包括以下几个方面： (1)介词短语中介词的使用错误。 (2)介词与动词的搭配错误。 (3)介词与形容词的搭配错误。 (4)介词与名词的搭配错误。 (5)介词的多余与缺失。
【典例】 (2015·陕西卷)My soccer coach retired in last week.
【典例 2】 (2014·陕西卷)Suddenly the arrows was was (were) flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain!
精析：去掉 looked 或其前的 were，语态的误用。look
为系动词无被动语态。
第一部分 语法知识
第二章 短文改错
一、词法型错误(主要包括 8 种类型)
1．冠词的多用、漏用和误用。 此类错误的设置一般包括以下几个方面： (1)定冠词和不定冠词的混用。 (2)零冠词和非零冠词的混用。 (3)不定冠词 a 和 an 的混用。 (4)冠词的缺失与多余。 (5)某些习语或固定搭配中冠词的缺失与误用。
精析：可数名词与不可数名词的混用。time 表示“次 数”时为可数名词，表示“时间”时为不可数名词。此处 表示次数，故应用复数形式。故把 time 改为 times。
【典例 2】 (2016·四川卷)Mum has a full－time job， so so (but) she has to do most of the houseworks. 精析：housework 为不可数名词，没有复数形式，故 改为 housework。
精析：由前文看应是三者以上，故应用 None。Neither
改为 None。
2018届高三英语第二轮复习资料-----短文改错
短文改错Passage 1Several days ago, I went to have dinner with my father. We came to a restaurant and order tow bowls of noodles. We waited and found the people around us all served their meals, though they came late than us. We were very puzzled and a little bit angrily. Finally, my father asked for the waitress passing by our table. “I know you’re all busy, ” she said calmly, “so you won’t mind that we send out for a pizza, will you?” Say noting, the waitress smiled but went away. Our meals were in front of us five minute later.Passage 2My uncle and aunt come home one evening and discovered huge hole in their roof. They also found that their dog was dead and their furniture were covered in horrible-smelling matter. Upset by which they saw, they phoned the police. After the police looked into the problem, they were told what had happened to. It seemed that the container holding the wastes from the toilets on a passing plane had burst openly. The contents froze in the atmosphere as it fell towards the ground. Then the resulting block of ice crashed through the roof and broke into piece, killing the dog after melting in their house.Passage 3Christmas is supposed to be a time express our love and goodwill towards others. It is supposed to be a time which we perform acts of kindness for people less fortunate to ourselves. But do we think of the other people when we sat down to our Christmas dinner? Of course not —we’re too busy eating those delicious foods related with Christmas. We are too busy wondering that the presents we gave were as nice or better than the one we received. We forget to think of the sick and the homeless. The whole idea of Christmas has complete changed. What shame!Passage 4Last Thursday, we had class meeting to discuss where to go for their autumn outing. Wecame up with several idea such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to a park. Final, we decided to go mountain climbing. The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climb the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. Therefore, when reaching the highest point, we were shocking to see rubbish here andthere. Then we start to pick up the rubbish. Afterwards, we had put the rubbish into the nearbyrubbish can. We were tired and happy.Passage 5Nowadays more and more students were found cheating in exams. Some copy from each other; some copy from their text books, reference books or prepare notes; others use modern communication tool such as mobile phones. Cheating in exams will cause some worse effects. For one thing, it will result unfair competition and destroy the creativity of bright students. For another, students who often cheats in exams will develop bad habits and won’t be able to meet the needs of society in the future. So how can cheating in exams be stopped? On my opinion, severe punishments should be put into the effect to prevent students from cheating. At the same time, great efforts should be made to make students understood what kind of person society needs or try to build up their honesty.Passage 6Last Friday，we were having our class while our teacher Miss Li suddenly slipped and fall to the ground．All the students were concern about her．Helped by some students，I carried her on back to the clinic immediately．Her left leg was turned out to be broken and she had to stay in hospital for half a month．The following day，we paid a visit for her with flower and fruits．See her leg wrapped in bandages，all of us felt sorry for her，hoping she would recover soon．Unexpectedly，only five days late，Miss Li returned to the class on a wheelchair to give us lessons．We were deep moved，all rising to applaud her．短文改错答案Passage11.order→ordered2. all served前加were3. late→later4. angrily→angry5. asked for去掉for6.she→he7. that→if8. Say→Saying9. but→and 10. minute→minutesPassage2e → came2. huge前加a3. were → was4.which → what5. 去掉to6. wastes → waste7. openly → open8. it → they9. piece → pieces；10. after → beforePassage31. express前加to2. which → when3. to → than4. 去掉the5. sat → sit6. with → to7. that → whether / if8. one → ones9. complete → completely10. 加aPassage41. class前加a2. their → our3. idea → ideas4. Final→ Finally5. climb →climbing6. Therefore →However/Anyhow7. shocking → shocked8. start → started9. had去掉10. and → butPassage51. were → are2. prepare → prepared3. tool → tools4. worse → bad5. unfair前加in6. cheats → cheat7.On → In8. 去掉the9.understood → understand10.or → andPassage6while→when2．fall→fe ll3．concern→concerned4．back前加my/the5．去掉turned 前的was6．for→to7．flower→flowers8．See→Seeing9．late→later10．deep→deeply。
2018高三二轮短文改错解题技巧讲解与训练
高考英语短文改错解题技巧短文改错口诀动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注；冠词连词常光顾详解：一、动词形：主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。
动词形常见错误：1）一般过去时与一般现在时错用。
2）第三人称单数形式错用。
第三人称单数：Is/was2）and，but,or,also 前后动词时态不一致。
(具有对称性）4）主谓不一致。
5）缺少谓语动词1.主谓宾结构缺少be动词2、主系表结构（am/is/are/was/were）6）主动语态与被动语态错用wash-is washed7）Used to 的运用错误例如：My favorite sport are football. (is)Now my picture and prize is hanging in the library. (are)二、名词数：指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。
常表现为将名词复数写成单数。
改正方法：１）根据名词前的修饰限定成份．２）根据上下文的逻辑关系．例如：…so that I’ll get good marks in all my subject. (subjects)三、还要注意形和副：注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。
这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。
命题特点及改正方法：主要考查形容词和副词的误用、形容词及副词的比较级等。
根据adj 或adv的基本用法确定错误；修饰系动词(am/is/are/was/were)或名词用形容词；修饰行为动词、形容词、过去分词及整个句子用副词。
例如：I’m sure we’ll have a wonderfully time together. (wonderful)Unfortunate, there are too many people in my family. (Unfortunately)四、非谓语，细辨别：这是考查最多的错误形式之一。
浙江省2018高考英语二轮复习 专题训练 短文改错+书面
浙江省2018高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（2）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）下面短文中有10处语言错误。
请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for him. In the morning I buy some flowers with my pocket money and put them in a vase. In the afternoon, I went to buy some vegetable and cooked simple but delicious dinner for my family. After the meal, I gave mother a card what I made myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day”to her. Then I told her to pay more attention on her health and not overwork. I also promised to help her to do some housework from today on. Heard the words, mother was moved to tears.Today is a specially day, warm but meaningful.第二节：书面表达（满分30分）目前一所知名高中决定在初中毕业生中降分招收音乐、体育特长生，这一做法在社会上引起了很大反响。
2018高考英语短文改错设题方式讲解与选练题附(解析)标准答案
201８高考英语短文改错:设题方式讲解与选练题附(解析)答案短文改错的设题方式：【一】错词【二】漏词【三】多词一.短文改错的设题方式----错词：错词的情况归纳起来大致可分为虚词选择错误、实词词形错误、同(近)义词、形似词选择错误等。
1.虚词错误①介词错误。
介词错误主要集中在介词的固定搭配、介词多词义的用法以及一些意义相近介词、副词和连词的混用等。
1.After five yeａｒs aｗay in mｙhoｍｅtown，I fiｎd thaｔthｅｎeigｈborｈoｏd whicｈIｕseｄｔo liｖe iｎhas chanｇed a lｏt.（09全国卷I）析：“从……离开,远离”应为短语aｗay ｆroｍ,不能与in搭配。
应将ｉn改为frｏm。
②连词错误主要表现: 句与句之间的关系混淆,是并列、转折、承接、还是表原因；连词与介词、副词的混用,一些连词具有多重功能和词性以及意义相近连词的区别等。
1．I meaｎt to give it ｂack ｔo you bｅfｏrｅfouｒin the aｆternoon,anｄI was hel ｄup on my way back（09全国卷IＩ)析：分析前后两个句子可知,前面的句子与后面的句子存在转折关系，不是并列关系，应将aｎｄ改为bｕt。
③冠词错误：冠词的考查集中在:应该使用定冠词的地方使用了不定冠词；应该使用不定冠词的地方却使用了定冠词;不定冠词a与ａn的误用等。
1．Thrｅe men werｅfishing when tｈe angｅｌappｅaｒed iｎthe boａt with them.（2009.四川卷）析:初次提到的人或物前应该用不定冠词，因此要将第一个the改为ａn。
２.实词错误①名词错误主要集中在：名词的单复数形式，特别注意不规则名词的复数形式；可数名词和不可数名词的混用；抽象名词具体化;名词的所有格等。
1．I stayｅd tｈeｒe ｆor one ａｎd a half hｏｕr and maｄe sｕre thａt ｔｈe girl was alｌrｉght. （０9全国卷IＩ）析：onｅaｎd ａhａlｆ后接可数名词的复数形式，不能用单数。
2018高考英语短文改错设题方式讲解与选练题附(解析汇报)问题详解
2018高考英语短文改错：设题方式讲解与选练题附（解析）答案短文改错的设题方式：【一】错词【二】漏词【三】多词一．短文改错的设题方式----错词：错词的情况归纳起来大致可分为虚词选择错误、实词词形错误、同(近)义词、形似词选择错误等。
1．虚词错误①介词错误。
介词错误主要集中在介词的固定搭配、介词多词义的用法以及一些意义相近介词、副词和连词的混用等。
1.After five years away in my hometown，I find that the neighborhood which I used to live in has changed a lot.(09全国卷I)析：“从……离开，远离”应为短语 away from，不能与in搭配。
应将in改为from。
②连词错误主要表现: 句与句之间的关系混淆，是并列、转折、承接、还是表原因；连词与介词、副词的混用，一些连词具有多重功能和词性以及意义相近连词的区别等。
1.I meant to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，and I was held up on my way back(09全国卷II)析：分析前后两个句子可知，前面的句子与后面的句子存在转折关系，不是并列关系，应将 and 改为but。
③冠词错误：冠词的考查集中在：应该使用定冠词的地方使用了不定冠词；应该使用不定冠词的地方却使用了定冠词；不定冠词a与an的误用等。
1.Three men were fishing when the angel appeared in the boat with them. （2009.四川卷）析：初次提到的人或物前应该用不定冠词，因此要将第一个the改为an。
2．实词错误①名词错误主要集中在：名词的单复数形式，特别注意不规则名词的复数形式；可数名词和不可数名词的混用；抽象名词具体化；名词的所有格等。
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专题五 短文改错第2讲 句法错误和行文逻辑错误[真题演练]Passage 1(2017·全国卷Ⅲ)When I look at this picture of myself ，I realize of how fast time flies.I had grown not only physically ，and also mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took ，I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time ：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference kinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late music albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.答案：When I look at this picture of myself ，I realize how fast time flies.I had have grown not only physically ，and butalso mentally in the past few years.About one month after this photo was took taken ，I entered my second year of high school and become becamea new member of the school music club.Around me in picture are thethings they that/whichwere very important in my life at that time ：car magazines and musical instruments.I enjoyed studying difference differentkinds of cars and planes ，playing pop music ，and collecting the late latestmusic albums.This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your myhigh school days. 【语篇解读】 本文是一篇记叙文。
文章讲述了由一张照片引发的作者对高中时光的回忆。
71．解析：词法错误。
realize“认识到，意识到”，是及物动词，后面直接跟宾语。
答案：去掉of72．解析：句法错误。
由in the past few years可知句子要用现在完成时。
答案：had改为have73．解析：行文逻辑错误。
not only...but also...“不仅……而且……”，连接并列成分。
答案：and改为but74．解析：句法错误。
被动语态的结构为“be＋及物动词的过去分词”，take的过去分词是taken。
答案：took改为taken75．解析：句法错误。
句子用了过去时，and连接并列谓语entered和became。
答案：become改为became76．解析：词法错误。
picture在文中第一句已经出现过，故此处可以加the表示特指；也可加this，表示“在这张照片中”。
答案：in后加this/the77．解析：句法错误。
things是先行词，后面是定语从句，从句中缺少主语，故引导词用that或which。
答案：they改为that/which78．解析：词法错误。
形容词修饰名词kinds。
答案：difference改为different79．解析：词法错误。
the latest music albums“最新的音乐专辑”。
latest“最近的，最新的”。
答案：late改为latest80．解析：行文逻辑错误。
句意：这张照片常常让我想起我高中时的快乐时光。
此处是以作者的口吻写的“我的高中时光”。
答案：your改为myPassage 2(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that I live.Though not very big, but the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest.Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or high quality oil are using for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the short period of time.Instead, he hopes that our business will grow steady.答案：My uncle is the owner of a restaurant close to that whereI live.Though not very big ，the restaurant is popular in our area.It is always crowded with customersat meal times.Some people even had haveto wait outside.My uncle tells me that the key to his success is honest honesty .Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables or andhigh quality oil are using used for cooking.My uncle says that he never dreams becoming rich in the a short period of time.Instead ，he hopes that our hisbusiness will grow steady steadily. 【语篇解读】 本文主要讲述了作者的叔叔经营餐馆的成功之道。
71．解析：句法错误。
close to 后接宾语从句。
I live 缺少地点状语，故用where 引导宾语从句。
答案：that→where72．解析：行文逻辑错误。
though 与but 不能用在同一个句子中。
答案：去掉but73．解析：句法错误。
文章通篇用一般现在时，故将had 改为have 。
答案：had→have74．解析：词法错误。
主语是the key ，与表语构成同位关系，并非对主语的描述，故用名词。
答案：honest→honesty75．解析：行文逻辑错误。
fresh vegetables 和high quality oil 是并列关系，不是选择关系，故将or 改为and 。
答案：or→and76．解析：句法错误。
fresh vegetables and high quality oil 与use 是被动关系，故用被动语态。
be used for 被用于。
答案：using→used77．解析：词法错误。
dream of doing sth.“梦想做某事”，是固定搭配。
答案：dreams 后加of78．解析：词法错误。
in a short period of time“在短时间内”，是固定短语。
答案：short 前面的the 改为a79．解析：行文逻辑错误。
由“My uncle is the owner of a restaurant...”可知，餐馆是“我”叔叔的，故将our 改为his 。
答案：our→his80．解析：词法错误。
grow 在此是实义动词并非连系动词，故用副词修饰。
答案：st eady→steadilyPassage 3(2016·全国卷Ⅲ)(导学号 58210083)The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They were also the best and worse years in my life.At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself.However, my parents didn't seem to think such.They always tell me what to do and how to do it.At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them.I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to college.At last ，I will be on my own ，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.答案：The teenage year yearsfrom 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me.They werealso the best and worse worst years in my life.At first ，I thought I kneweverything and could make decisions by yourself myself.However ，my parents didn't seem to think such so .They always tell toldme what to do and how to do it.At one time ，I even felt my parents couldn't understand me so I hoped I could be freely freefrom them.I showed them I was independent by wear wearing strange clothes.Now I am leaving home to for college.At last ，I will be on my own ，but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.【语篇解读】 本文中作者回忆了他的青少年时代。