最新高中英语写作扩句
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扩句的方法
在学习扩句法之前,先对学生进行五个简单句句型,并列句和复合句的专项训练,打好基础。扩句是在基本句型的基础上,添加各种修饰成分,使句子得到扩展,即根据表达的需求增加定语,状语,同位语等成分,或者举例子补充细节内容,或者添加谚语俗语等。
1 1. We arrived in Sanya.
----- We arrived in Sanya, happily and excitedly. (添加副词)
2 2. I like to make friends with my classmates.
------ I like to make friends with my classmates, who have the same interest as mine. (添加定语从句)
3 3. We were happy and returned home.
------- We were happy and returned home after we had finished collecting all the rubbish.(添加状语从句)
4 4. I like reading books.
------- I like reading books, such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers.(通过举例补充细节)
5 5. We should study hard.
-------- As we all know, “Practice makes perfect”.So we should study hard.(添加谚语)
6 6. I often join in many activities.
-------- I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students and broaden my mind. (添加目的状语)
三.具体应用
试题要求:假如你是一名中学生,请以My colorful school life为题,写一篇短文。要求100个字左右。开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总数。
要点提示:1:上课认真听讲
2:课后完成作业
3:经常参加体育锻炼
4:去图书馆阅读
I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m studying for. I have been working hard.
___________________________________________________ ____________________________
May there always be colorful life around my school.
学生的习作:
I’m a high school student and I understand what I’m
studying for. I have been working hard.
I listen to the teacher carefully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I often read in the school library.
May there always be colorful life around my school.
点评:该学生能完整的写出各个要点,没有出现太大的语法错误,表达通顺,单词拼写无误。但是很明显字数不够,没有达到100个字左右,字数不够是很多学生面临的共同问题。其次,句子的表达过于平淡无奇,没有句式多样化和使用高级词汇,固定搭配、固定短语等使表达地道。而且,没有使用连接词,上下文的连接不够顺畅。
改进方法:
步骤一:列要点
把要写的内容要点化,做到要点齐全。
1: Listen to the teacher carefully
2: finish my homework
3:take part in exercise
4: often read in the library
步骤二:造简单句
充分利用五个简单句句型对各个要点进行补充,使
其变成一个完整的句子。每个句子都要注意句子成分的完整性,语法是否正确,说法是否符合英语表达习惯。
1: I listen to the teacher carefully in the class.
2: I finish my homework after class.
3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates.
4: I do some reading in the school library.
步骤三:扩展句子
1: I listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say.(增加目的状语从句)
2: I finish my homework after class, which is a piece of cake for me.(增加定语从句)
3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates, such as playing football, going swimming and
playing badminton etc.(举例说明)
4: I often do some reading in the school library when I have nothing to do after class.(增加时间状语从句)