浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练(4)读后续写
浙江省18届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练(3)读后续写(word版,含
浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练(3)读后续写(Word版,含写作提升练(三) 读后续写1 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
(2017·浙江衢州二中5月模拟) It was the late 1930s,and things were had a hard time raising us on her own in our small community of New Westminster, dad had drowned in Pitt Lake,five years ago. Looking back,I realize what Mum went through sending us kids to morning she would tuck a new piece of cardboard in our shoes,because our soles(鞋底)were worn we got home,Mum would have “French toast” ready for moving was typical for my family in those was 25 dollars a month,but Mum couldn’t pay it,and we knew we would be evicted right after Christmas on the first of January.Christmas was approaching,and we were entitled to a twenty-five-dollar Christmas fund from social inspector came to our house,and searched it from top to bottom to be sure we didn’t have any food hidden he didn’t find any,he issued the cheque to said that instead of buying food,she would use the 25 dollars to pay back rent,assuring us all of a roof over our heads for a little while told us then there would be nothing for Christmas. Unknown to Mum,I had been selling Christmas tree,shoveling snow,and doing odd jobs to earn enough money to buy a new pair of that weren’t patched,boots with no cardboard in the knew exactly which boots I were ten-inch Top Genuine Pierre Paris and they had a price of 23 dollars. Well,the big day came on the afternoon of Christmas was excited,as I hurried up the road to the shoe store,but on the way I noticed a house with Christmas lights andwas then I realized at our house,we had no lights,no decorations,nor any money for Christmas knew that we would have no turkey or ham for Christmas,and I felt sad. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右; 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
18年浙江高考英语续写作文
18年浙江高考英语续写作文As the sun rose over the horizon, a sense of nervous excitement filled the air. This was the day of the Zhejiang College Entrance Examination, the culmination of years of hard work and dedicationfor high school seniors all over the province.当太阳从地平线上升起时，一种紧张刺激的感觉弥漫在空气中。
这是浙江高考的日子，对全省各地的高中毕业生来说，这是多年辛勤努力和奉献的巅峰。
For many students, the pressure of performing well on the exam weighed heavily on their shoulders. They had spent countless late nights studying and preparing, sacrificing time with friends and family in pursuit of their academic goals.对许多学生来说，高考的压力让他们沉重地背负着。
他们为了追求学业目标，牺牲了与朋友和家人共度的无数个深夜熬夜学习和准备。
But amid the stress and anxiety, there was also a sense of camaraderie and support among the students. They encouragedeach other, shared study tips, and offered words of encouragement to help alleviate the pressure.然而，在紧张和焦虑之中，学生之间也有一种情谊和支持。
浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习：写作提升练(四)+Word版含答案
写作提升练(四) 读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
(2017·11浙江)A Vacation with My MotherI had an interesting childhood.It was filled with surprise and amusements,all because of my mother—loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends.Who knew if we’d ever see them again?Finally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get the purse and traveler’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stan d outside the door and play lookout(放哨) while I go,and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.”I had terrible pictures in my mind: “Honey,where are the kids?” “What?! Oh,Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never act ually left behind in a strange city,but we weren’t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there?David and I became nervous.To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections(反对).If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep,Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2018年6月浙江高考英语续写 《优秀作文集》 2.doc
2018年6月浙江高考英语续写《优秀作文集》 2Suddenly a little rabbit ran in front of my horse and it was so cute that I wanted to catch it. I asked my dad if we could follow it and he nodded. The rabbit was very flexible, so it jumped here and there, which powerfully attracted us to catch it. Suddenly the rabbit stopped in front of a hole and began to graze. I kept up my spirits and immediately caught it. I could hardly conceal my excitement and turned back to show it to my dad. But without giving me any cheers of encouragement, he looked at me heavy-heartedly and said sadly, “My son, I will tell you bad news that we have got lost and I don't know the way.” Silence hung around us and we fell into desperation.We didn't know where we were and the sky became dark. To avoid getting stuck into a whirlpool of negativity, my dad and I rode the horse to find the track and I shouted “help” from time to time. When we felt exhausted and overwhelmed, I suddenly noticed a river in the distance. “Dad! Quickly, go to that river.” I yelled. Though feeling confused, he still followed my words. I said excitedly, “Dad, I think the river is the one nearby the farm house. So if we walk along the river, we may get back.” Finally he agreed and walked after what seemed like a century, the farm house came into sight. When we were approaching the house, we saw Uncle Paul, who was intending to go out to look for us. Hearing our experience, he sighed and patted me on the shoulder, saying, “Now everything is OK. Let's come in and have some supper.”(2019届Class Ten 曾尹)赠送以下资料考试知识点技巧大全一、考试中途应饮葡萄糖水大脑是记忆的场所，脑中有数亿个神经细胞在不停地进行着繁重的活动,大脑细胞活动需要大量能量。
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Almost reluctantly she tore the envelope open. Folded in the card was a piece of paper. Written on the card was a message under the printed Happy Birthday—Buy yourself something nice with the cheque, Myra and Harold. The cheque fluttered to the floor like a bird with a broken wing. Slowly the old lady stooped to pick it up. Her present, her lovely present. With trembling fingers she tore it into little bits.
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2018年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析(上)
2018年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析（上）(function() {var s = "_" + Math.random().toString(36).slice(2);document.write('');(window.slotbydup = window.slotbydup || []).push({id: "u3686515",container: s});})();2018年6月读后续写题型再次出现在浙江省高考英语科目写作第二节，该题型提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生根据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词语进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
下面让我们一起来分析一下本次高考读后续写试题。
一给定材料和题目要求It was summer，and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque，a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul，my dad’s friend，picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning，Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn onmy farm，” he said. After breakfast，I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens，while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze （吃草）. I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon，I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride，and he said yes，as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So，my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats，got on our horses，and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper，” Uncle Paul cried，“and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost！” “OK！” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks，the deep green pine trees，and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven （编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练五读后续写4
写作提升练(五) 读后续写1(2017·浙江普通高中学业水平考试仿真模拟)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的短文。
Want to know how to survive a plane crash?What about a terrorist attack?To put your mind at ease in nearly any situation,you can almost guarantee your survival if you never leave the house without 3 necessary items,i.e.a lighter(打火机),alifestraw(救命吸管) and a raincoat.Right off the place full of danger,your first instinct(本能) might be to search for help the minute you realize you’re in tro uble.But survival experts insist you should stay where you are until help finds you,instead;doing so will make it easier for the search and rescue teams to locate your location.What should you do until then,you ask?Prepare to hunker down(盘腿坐下) for the long run.That’s where your three pieces of survival necessities come intoplay,Stewart says.For one,you should have something to start a fire on you at all times.Fire-starting tools are inexpensive to purchase,and you can easily carry them around in a backpack or pant pocket.But even without a fancy item,all you really need is something to light the first flame.“You can use cotton balls covered in petroleum jelly(凡士林油) as a fire starter,”Stewart told USA TODAY.“They are water resistant and will start a fire with just a spark.”Second,you’ll need something to make your drinking water fit to drink,such as a canteen(饭盒) that can boil water.Stewart recommends buying a $20 lifestraw,which “can be struck into the muddiest pool of water you can find and you suck the water out like a straw.” Any doubt?It could still save your life,Stewart says.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头词或句子已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
浙江专用届高考英语二轮复习第四部分写作训练专题二读后续写
专题二读后续写Writing 1阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
At the center of the mall was the perfect Santa with a gentle manner and a real white six－year－old granddaughter，Leah，jumped from foot to foot as we waited in line for her turn to sit on his lap．“I don’t know what to say，” Leah said，raising her neck around the kids in front of her.“Sure you do，”her mother，Leanne，said.“It’s ’s already your friend．You’ll do just fine.”“He’ll ask you what you want for Christmas，” I said.“And you just tell him.”、We’d gone over and over the toys she’d ask mother didn’t want surprises! Leah repeated the list．But a minute later，she inserted new toys she’d just spotted at the mall.“I’ve got an idea，” said Leanne，digging into her purse as the line inched forward.“Let’s write down your requests so you won’t forget them.” I couldn’t help but to see Santa was such an important appointment for a six－year－ child should have any worries bigger than the night before，on the news，I’d seen a village in the Middle East that had come under of the wounded were children just like our around the mall full of magical decorations and happy shoppers I felt safe，as safe as anyone could in the world should have that kind of security，especially at Christmas.“Okay，” Leanne said.“Now you’v e got everything you want written down you get nervous you can just give the note to Santa.”Leah nodded and took the list. She read out loud，“A Chia Pet，Moon Sand and Aquadoodle．”“Why don’t you add a fourth request，Leah，” I heard myself say.“Ask forpeace on earth．” My daughter looked a little surprised by my suggestion.“What’s peace on earth，Grandma” Leah asked.“Peace on earth means all the people in the world would get ’s the true meaning of Christmas.” Leah nodded seriously.“Yes，” she agreed.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；>2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2018版高考英语二轮(专用)训练题：读后续写
2018版高考英语二轮(专用)训练题：读后续写Boys often want to be seen as brave。
XXX。
Henry。
a boyin the same class as Ronny。
showed us through his ns。
Ronnyand Henry were close friends who always played and went home together。
One day。
as they were walking home from school。
they stumbled upon a group of people XXX to go see what was happening。
but Henry was hesitant。
He didn't want to get involved and risk worrying his parents。
who were XXX called Henry a coward and ran off to join some other boys at the scene。
Henry went home alone and tried to put it out of his mind.After a few days。
Ronny fell into the river while playingwith his new XXX't know what to do.XXX XXX。
XXX happened to pass by。
Without XXX。
XXX him to the shore。
The other boys were amazed and grateful。
and they realized that Henry was not a coward after all.From then on。
读后续写(2018浙江高考真题为例)
A narrative writing
When: one summer late afternoon (before supper) Where: in the mountains Who: I and my father What: We were riding horses for fun
• 浙江省近几年高考中，读后续写这一题型多次出现，且 都标示了关键词，但山东省2020年新高考读后续写中并 没有标出关键词，这样更能考查考生的创造性思维，同 时也增加了试题的开放性。
读后续写的具体要求
提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依 据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词 进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定 材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
4. What did the author hear that night? 5. What would the author like to do? How do you know?
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In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take
6. Where did the author and his father go on their horses? 7. What did Uncle Paul remind them to do? 8. What would happen to the author and his father?
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2018浙江高考读后续写范文研读(第二课时新)
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Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I called out excitedly, “Dad! Catch it!” Terrified at my shout, the rabbit ran away like lightning. I raced to follow it eagerly. Finding it impossible to stop me, my dad caught up with me. We tracked the rabbit for about ten minutes until it got completely out of sight. Depressed and tired, I suggested going back. Unfortunately, we had been off the track Uncle Paul warned us to keep to.
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We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The thought that we might be trapped in such darkness sent shivers down my spine. If only I hadn't sought to catch the rabbit! Instead of scolding me, my dad wiped my tears of fear and regret. Then he listened carefully and said hopefully, “Flowing Water! To the west” We had ridden for what seemed like ages when a river finally came into sight. Speeding along it, we arrived safe and sound at the farmhouse. Exhausting as the ride was, it was an impressive experience like never before!
浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练三读后续写
写作提升练(三) 读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
(2017·浙江衢州二中5月模拟)It was the late 1930s,and things were tough.Mum had a hard time raising us on her own in our small community of New Westminster,BC.My dad had drowned in Pitt Lake,five years ago.Looking back,I realize what Mum went through sending us kids to school.Every morning she would tuck a new piece of cardboard in our shoes,because our soles(鞋底)were worn out.When we got home,Mum would have “French toast” ready forus.Constant moving was typical for my family in those times.Rent was 25 doll ars a month,but Mum couldn’t pay it,and we knew we would be evicted right after Christmas on the first of January.Christmas was approaching,and we were entitled to a twenty-five-dollar Christmas fund from social services.The inspector came to our house,and searched it from top to bottom to be sure we didn’t have any food hidden away.When he didn’t find any,he issued the cheque to Mum.Mum said that instead of buying food,she would use the 25 dollars to pay back rent,assuring us all of a roof over our heads for a little while longer.She told us then there would be nothing for Christmas.Unknown to Mum,I had been selling Christmas tree,shoveling snow,and doing odd jobs to earn enough money to buy a new pair of boots.B oots that weren’tpatched,boots with no cardboard in the soles.I knew exactly which boots I wanted.They were ten-inch Top Genuine Pierre Paris and they had a price of 23 dollars.Well,the big day came on the afternoon of Christmas Eve.I was excited,as Ihurried up the road to the shoe store,but on the way I noticed a house with Christmas lights and decorations.It was then I realiz ed at our house,we had no lights,no decorations,nor any money for Christmas goodies.I knew that we would have no t urkeyor ham for Christmas,and I felt sad.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2018高考浙江读后续写
2018 年高考英语浙江卷·读后续写参照答案与写作点拨2018 浙江卷·读后续写( 满分 25 分 )阅读下边短文，依据所给情节进行续写，使之组成一个完好的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided totake me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque inthe late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to hisfarm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spentthe night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the rivernearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.“The day starts at dawnon my farm,” he said. After brea kfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad wentwith Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze( 吃草 ).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as mydad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on ournew cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper, ”Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost! ” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colorsof the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的 ) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2.起码使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的重点词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写达成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的重点词语。
oo2018浙江高考英语读后续写考前总复习
6.1高考英语复习任务: 续写范文赏析:Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jenny, waiting for an explanation.Embarrassed, Jenny didn’t say anything. Dead silence suddenly fell. Then came Miss Walker’s voice. “Why is Lee’s watch on your wrist?” Jenny hesitated for a while and decided to tell everybody about the truth. However, thinking of the well-prepared speech, the magic of the watch, she changed her mind. “But Miss Walker, could I give the speech first and then explain?” She made a request in a tone of begging. [70 words]At that, Miss Walker smiled and asked the class to listen to Jenny’s speech first. Jenny made her way to the platform with every confidence. Words began to flood out of her. “How could she make it? We’ve never seen Jenny give so terrific a speech.” Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Walker nodded with approval. Immediately Jenny finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class.Relieved, Jenny told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch. “But it’s just an ordinary watch with no magic”, Lee announced. [80 words]好句式学习：1.Embarrassed, Jenny didn’t say anything.形容词作状语，精简高级。
2018年6月浙江高考英语续写《优秀作文集》2.doc
2018年6月浙江高考英语续写《优秀作文集》 2Suddenly a little rabbit ran in front of my horse and it was so cute that I wantedto catch it. I asked my dad if we could follow it and he nodded. The rabbit was veryflexible, so it jumped here and there, which powerfully attracted us to catch it.Suddenly the rabbit stopped in front of a hole and began to graze. I kept up my spiritsand immediately caught it. I could hardly conceal my excitement and turned back toshow it to my dad. But without giving me any cheers of encouragement, he looked atthat we have gotme heavy-heartedly and said sadly, “My son, I will tell you bad newsSilence hung around us and we fell into desperation.lost and I don't know the way.” We didn't know where we were and the sky became dark. To avoid getting stuckinto a whirlpool of negativity, my dad and I rode the horse to find the track and Ifrom time to time. When we felt exhausted and overwhelmed, Ishouted “help” I yelled.suddenly noticed a river in the distance. “Dad! Quickly, go to that river.” Though feeling confused, he still followed my words. I said excitedly, “Dad, I think th river is the one nearby the farm house. So if we walk along the river, we may get Finally he agreed and walked after what seemed like a century, the farmback.” house came into sight. When we were approaching the house, we saw Uncle Paul,who was intending to go out to look for us. Hearing our experience, he sighed andpatted me on the shoulder, saying, “Now everything is OK. Let's come in and havesome supper.”(2019届Class Ten 曾尹)赠送以下资料考试知识点技巧大全一、考试中途应饮葡萄糖水大脑是记忆的场所，脑中有数亿个神经细胞在不停地进行着繁重的活动,大脑细胞活动需要大量能量。
2018-2019浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析
2018-2019浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. 〝I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp" and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.〝Tom! "she cried. "Help!"No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落〕somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练五读后续写20171210184
写作提升练(五) 读后续写1(2017·浙江普通高中学业水平考试仿真模拟)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的短文。
Want to know how to survive a plane crash?What about a terrorist attack?To put your mind at ease in nearly any situation,you can almost guarantee your survival if you never leave the house without 3 necessary items,i.e.a lighter(打火机),alifestraw(救命吸管) and a raincoat.Right off the place full of danger,your first instinct(本能) might be to search for help the minute you realize you’re in tro uble.But survival experts insist you should stay where you are until help finds you,instead;doing so will make it easier for the search and rescue teams to locate your location.What should you do until then,you ask?Prepare to hunker down(盘腿坐下) for the long run.That’s where your three pieces of survival necessities come intoplay,Stewart says.For one,you should have something to start a fire on you at all times.Fire-starting tools are inexpensive to purchase,and you can easily carry them around in a backpack or pant pocket.But even without a fancy item,all you really need is something to light the first flame.“You can use cotton balls covered in petroleum jelly(凡士林油) as a fire starter,”Stewart told USA TODAY.“They are water resistant and will start a fire with just a spark.”Second,you’ll need something to make your drinking water fit to drink,such as a canteen(饭盒) that can boil water.Stewart recommends buying a $20 lifestraw,which “can be struck into the muddiest pool of water you can find and you suck the water out like a straw.” Any doubt?It could still save your life,Stewart says.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头词或句子已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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写作提升练(四) 读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
(2017·11浙江)A Vacation with My MotherI had an i nteresting was filled with surprise and amusements,all because of my mother—loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our knew if we’d ever see them againFinally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loadedsuitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get t he purse and travel er’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨) while I go,and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey,where are the kids” “What! Oh,Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a stran ge city,but we wer en’t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent thereDavid and I became our great relief,Dad turned down the never could understand our objections(反对).If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep,Mom would have been thinks everyone in the wor ld as as nice as she finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意:$1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.—Paragraph2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.-2阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jack,a clerk at the local bank,was wandering alone on the was a cold,silent winter mind was on his wife Linda,who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed,waiting for more money for her had sold everything he had,and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the pople and banks he the real world is large amount of money was still Jack,it would mean a great deal of suffering to see his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left,”Jack said to he went to the bank,his workplace, several days,he observed the bank and planned a next day,he went to work as seemed normal:he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work,instead of the small one he always 5:00 pm,the bank closed,and the clerks and the guards had all gone ,at that moment,Jack was in the bathroom,and the guards didn’t notice him,of the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and e verything turned dark,Jack came out from the first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his n ew was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 a special key and some other tools,he then easily opened the doors of the bank’s security system wasn’t very good,which allowed Jack to take a lot of minutes later,Jack left the bank with a heavy bag filled with money.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:\After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring.Paragraph2:But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.…参考答案写作提升练(四)读后续写1Paragraph1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with then we were half an hour away from the hotel,where the tent was left recommended buying a new one,while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it,saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly,so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally,we got back the tent and hit the road Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded,it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.Paragraph2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the day,towards evening,we found a great camping site at the foot of a high and I helped Dad put up the tent,and Mom was busy preparing the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains,the tent was set up and the meal was around the camp fire,we talked and time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread ov er Mom’s face.2Paragraph1:After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to police arrived at the bank very quickly,only to find no one next day was a really special day for the town,which was filled with newspapers and TV reporters covering the strange clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case,of course,including police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible,even though no clues had been found yet.Paragraph2:But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his last,with enough money for her operation,Jack’s wife was ,Jack felt guilty about the manager of the could not forget what he had done to the old guilt deepened as time went ,he turned himself into the police and accepted his punishment.。