上海中考英语作文

上海中考英语作文学习资料

•评分标准

上海中考英语作文总分为20分，其中内容分8分、语言分8分、组织结构分4分。

以下为上海中考英语作文官方评分标准：

1. 内容分8分。内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚完整。

2•语言分8分。学生需用语规范，表达准确，无或少见语法错误，词汇拼写正确，句型

使用恰当。首先是字数，少于60字的作文要酌情扣分。

3•组织结构分4分，也就是我们常说的文采分。根据学生使用复杂句型/单词和谚语/俗

语的情况来加分。

一・汪意点：

每少5个词扣0.5分，拼写错误每处扣0.5分，标点，大小写错误每2处扣0.5分3内容和语言表达总分达15分及以上，得2~3分内容和语言总分13~14分，如确有好句型或表达用语，可酌情给1~2分通篇句型，句式单一，词汇贫乏者，即使无语法错误，也不给分开头句+给的几个参考点+结尾句+亮点。

先划档次：A档18~15分B档14.5~12分C档11.5~8分D档3.5~0分

然后再仔细批阅看有否语法错误，最后给出总分。

三.学生常出现的问题：

1. 内容空洞，没有清晰的思路，表达能力不强，总是用一些不合适的句子内容来表达，所以可能让老师觉得理由或是内容太假，当然也就得不了高分。

2. 议论过多，描写不足。大多数情况下，我们把议论当成的作文的重点，所以常常会跑题。

应当多描述提示的内容或加以想像，不能只翻译了事。

3. 总是使用同一个主语写句子，重复太多。尽量使用不同的主语来表达，比如：I must learn

En glish well. 就可以换成：It is importa nt for me to lear n En glish well.

4. 结构散漫，想哪儿写哪儿，乱七八糟。应该使用总分或总分总的结构。

5. 都是简单句，缺少复合句。多用状语从句，宾语从句，定语从句及一些重要的句型，也人

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语态。

6. 连词的使用较少，句子之间的连接很生硬。可以加入一些：比如：to my surprise （让我惊

讶的是）,what' s more （而且，还有）等，让上文与下文衔接更紧密。意思也能更流畅地表

达。

四.中考写作高频使用词组、句法

1. 作文开头的有用句

As we all know. As it is kn own to all, It ' s known to all that' s comm on kno wledge that …It ' s

commonly accepted that •• There is no denying that …How time flies! In a blink of an eye, Time flies like a speeding arrow, Time goes like the flowing water.

2、中间分层部分的有用结构：

分正反两面论述：0n one hand. On the other hand 分两点：For one thing. For another,

分三点：Firstly, Secon dly, Last but not least

3、结尾部分

All in all, In a word, In conclusion, In brief, In short, To put everything in a shell, 概括的说，

简单的说Last but n ot least

组织语言发表观点的In my opinion, From my point of view, In my eyes, As far as I am

concern ed, Believe it or not,

表示递进的In additi on Furthermore More importa ntly What 'more Moreover 其他与

"我”有关的写作材料1、重点句型It's+a. for sb.to do sth. So +a./ad. That such a

+a.+n. that too …to do Not ….until That ' why+ 句子那是。。。的原因It 'said that + 句子

There ' no doubt that+ 句子毫无疑问•… It goes without saying that+ 句子毫无疑

问•…There' no need to do 没必要做・…There' no point in doing 做某事毫无意

义2、提建议Had better do/not do How/what about doing Why not do/why don、t+ 句子I think you should do I suggest that you should do If I were you, I would do 我要是你的话，我会做'、' It 'best to do 3、表示喜欢，感兴趣Like/love/enjoy doing Be fond of/be keen on sth. Prefer to do A rather than do B Be interested in doing=show/take great interest in 4 、努力做''' Try to

do/strive to do Make efforts to do=make every effort to do Try one' best/do one' best to do Do what/everything sb can to do 5、打算做・…/计划做•…Intend to do/plan to do Be

going to do Decide to do Determine to do=be determine to do Make up one' mind to do 6、表示

想/希望Want to do=would like to do Hope to do Expect to do Wish to do Consider doing 7 、其他有用的短语From now on/sooner or later/in the near future Have positive attitude towards/enrich my knowledge/learn …by heart/ Meet with various kinds of difficulties /face difficulties bravely/overcome the difficulties Play an important role/part in ….8、其他有用的句式For the r eas on above,/After all/As for me,/Fra nkly speak in g/Ge nerally

speak in g/Believe it or no t,/As a Grade Ni ne stude nt,/The reas ons are as follows, People 'vi s w on…vary from person to person

4、增添亮点使用复合句和谚语谚语举例I firmly believe that “ A foreig n Ian guage is a weapon in the struggle of

life ” . As a famous saying goes, “A man becomes learned by asking questions. ”t 'common knowledge that the road to success is not always full of roses. An old

saying goes, “ Nothing is impossible to a willing heart. ”

五.2002-2013上海中考英语作文题目集锦

2002 My favorite thi ng(s) 我的心爱之物

2003 To be a lovely Shan gha in ese 做一个可爱的上海人

2004 Leave School 毕业时分

2005 Grow ing pains and gains 成长的烦恼

2006 I have a dream 我有一个梦

2007 A Story about My Pare nt（s）一个关于我父/母的故事