雅思写作大作文审题之题目特点与分析

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英语考试作文-雅思写作真题范文之：大城市生活影响人们健康

英语考试作文雅思写作真题范文之：大城市生活影响人们健康考鸭们都知道，2018年的雅思作文真题都来自于历史题库。

本文就为大家梳理历年雅思写作真题范文——教育类话题：Some people think living in big cities is bad for people’s health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?(2014年3月1日)题目讲解题型类别：议论文审题要点：大城市的生活是否会对人们的健康造成破坏思路分析：文章架构可以选择单边倒，倾向一边或中立，城市发展和健康类的很多素材稍作改动都可以很好地支持论点。

同意：1.整个自然环境遭到严重破坏，如空气污染，导致人们的健康遭到威胁;2.生活节奏快，在大城市生活的人们往往精神压力大，心理不健康不同意(让步段)：城市健身设施完备，很多人也积极参加锻炼，但尽管如此，只要人们生活的自然环境没有得到改善，生活节奏过快，人们还是很难维持健康。

雅思写作大作文范文In many countries today, big cities seem to be stubbornly appealing to the mass population, along with which there arises the question as for whether living in a city will damage people’s health. For me, the answer is definitely yes.在今天的许多国家，大城市似乎一直在顽固地吸引着大量人口，同时也出现了一个问题，那就是居住在城市是否会损害人们的健康。

对我来说，答案是肯定的。

On one hand, the environment of most major cities, especially those in developing and underdeveloped countries, has been severely destroyed due to the overly quick industrialization. Take air pollution as an example, the speed of vehicles’s injecting tail gas and erect chimneys’ vomiting forth clouds of smoke is so fast and the volume so considerable that the atmosphere long before has failed to degrade the pollutants. Consequently, haze become a new natural hazard in many metropolises in the long run, with the PM 2.5 density insome reaching several times the national limit.一方面，大多数主要城市的环境，特别是发展中国家和欠发达国家的环境，由于过度的工业化而遭到严重破坏。

雅思作文题目和范文详细分析

雅思作文题目详细分析题目：It is better for people to be unemployed than people to be employed without a job they enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (对于人们来说，失业比从事不喜欢的工作好。

你同意还是不同意这个观点?)首先，正方观点可以概括为，宁可不工作，也不要做自己不喜欢的工作。

我们不难分析到，如果一个人对自己的工作没有兴趣的话，那么每一份工作都将很难做长久，尤其在面对困难或者更好薪水的工作机会面前，很容易放弃现有工作，这无疑不利于个人职业以及公司的长远发展。

有关这个论点给一段例文：It is undeniable that engaging in a job without enjoyment hardly lasts long. This is mainly because they are more likely to give up and hunt for other job opportunities especially when encountering difficulties. With low motivation， employees tend to be reluctant to do their utmost when dealing with tasks in the workplace， which would be totally different from those who insist in discovering new areas and conquering obstacles due to inner motivation without being disturbed by outer hindrances or worries， such as a shortage of a grant or lower salaries.相反，反方观点是不论喜欢与否，都应该先做一份工作。

英语考试作文-雅思写作高分攻略：雅思写作题目类型及思路分析

英语考试作文雅思写作高分攻略：雅思写作题目类型及思路分析进入雅思备考冲刺阶段，很多考生虽然做到了写作练习，但写作上依然存在很多问题，以至于越练越迷茫。

小站雅思君建议考生按照雅思写作题目类型复习和训练，对于雅思写作有一个全局的把握。

雅思写作题目类型：教育类 1. 教育应该包括哪些内容?母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? (050312提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开(个人与社会)，准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。

对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。

子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能?大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益?准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验?大学要不要扩招?中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育?要不要延长义务教育年限?要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学?老师要教学生如何判断是非吗?2. 学校的科目谁来选择?母题：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916)提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。

2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析

2023年6月17日雅思大作文范文及解析再犯罪的原因和解决办法一、2023年6月20日雅思大作文题目Many criminals continue to commit crimes even after being punished for it. Why do you think this happen? How can we solve this problem?二、范文及解析IntroductionA mushrooming number of criminals, after being released from the jail, will revert to crime, exerting ceaseless baneful influence on the social harmony and stability. Behind such a ticklish problem, from my perspective, are two predominant factors and viable solutions are in desperate need to avert the bleak future.解析本场考试重复1月14日大作文考题，虽然是很多考生害怕的犯罪类话题，但本题以说明文的形式考出，要求分析犯罪分子被释放出之后继续犯罪的原因及解决方法，是一个复古旧题，整体难度并不大；mushrooming adj.迅速增长的；越来越多的；ceaseless adj.不断的；不停的；baneful adj.不好的；有害的；ticklish adj.难对付的；棘手的；Body 1The chief culprit for re-offending would be the difficulty for the criminals to settle down and reintegrate into the society. Indisputably, one of the root causesfor anti-social behaviors is poverty, by which I mean living odds force some people to embark on a path of delinquency to support themselves by engaging in illegal activities such as stealing, larceny and the like. After being freed from the prison, with a criminal record, never would it be easy for the law-breakers who lack livelihood skills to secure a job and become economically independent. Another contributing factor for such a worrying trend has much to do with the psychology condition of the criminals. Suffering from improper treatment, be it physical punishment or verbal aggression, many offenders, when set free from the prison, are inundated with resentment instead of visions of life, for which they, running after revenge, are apt to fall back into perpetrating crimes.解析：再次犯罪的原因有：(1)物质层面：犯过罪的人出来之后在稳定生活重新融入社会上存在明显困难；(2)精神层面：报复心理；culprit n.不好的事情的原因；罪魁祸首；reintegrate into v.重新融入；living odds n.生活窘境；verbal aggression n.语言攻击；embark on a path of delinquency v.走上犯罪的道路；larceny n.盗窃；be inundated with v.充斥着；resentment n. 愤恨；怨恨；revenge n.复仇；are apt to v.倾向于；易于；perpetrate v.犯罪；作恶；Body 2Prickly as the issue is, steps can be taken to address this . Primarily, the government should play a leading role by enacting tougher laws and carrying out more severe penalties such as heavier fines or longer sentences for offenders toaccomplish the purpose of deterrence. The authorities should also polish the effectiveness of imprisonment with the aim to help criminals achieve rehabilitation. To specify, job-related training targeted at those released offenders are staunchly suggested, which enables them to be furnished with some employment abilities, be they a plumber, a hairdresser or a driver. In this case, they can be, in large part, encouraged to live a normal life rather than violate the law for survival. Efforts from family members, friends and the society are also indispensable to cure the mental disorders. To elaborate, showing enough respect and helping those ex-prisoners to find a job are great tender solicitude. The general public and the whole society should be made to believe are formed man deserves a new leaf.解析：解决方法：(1)政府层面：颁布更严格的法律配备更严厉的处罚以达到更好的震慑作用；进一步改进监禁的教育方式从而达到帮助犯罪分子真正改过自新；(2)家庭和社会：更多地尊重，接纳，包容改过自新的罪犯；prickly adj.麻烦的；address v.解决；enact v.制定；颁布法令；rehabilitation n.改过自新；staunchly adv.强烈地；be furnished with v.具有；配备有；solicitude n.安慰；关怀reformed adj.改过自新的；ConclusionIn conclusion, the problem for ex-prisoners to resort to offence, notwithstanding its gravity, can be brought under control with both the government and the public shouldering joint responsibility.解析：总结前文：notwithstanding prep. 虽然；尽管；gravity n.严重性;三、范文2There are a variety of punishments for criminals, including imprisonment, fines, and community service. However, even after serving their sentences, a significant proportion of ex-prisoners continue to commit crimes. This essay will explore the reasons behind this and propose solutions.对罪犯有各种各样的惩罚，包括监禁、罚款和社区服务。

雅思写作大作文要求

雅思写作大作文要求雅思大作文要求大概是这样的：一、题目类型与任务。

1. 议论文类型。

对于观点类题目，就像有人在你耳边叽叽喳喳说个观点，比如“有人觉得科技让我们的生活更孤独了，你怎么看？”你得明确说出自己同意不同意，或者部分同意，然后像跟朋友聊天辩论一样，摆事实、讲道理。

讨论双方观点类的题目呢，就好比两个人在吵架，各执一词，你得站在中间当和事佬，把两边的观点都分析分析，然后再说说自己更倾向哪一边，为啥。

解决问题类的题目，就像是家里出了个小麻烦，比如“城市交通拥堵，你有啥办法解决？”你要找出问题的根源，然后提出一些可行的解决方案，可不能天马行空，得是那种真的能在现实里使上劲儿的办法。

2. 报告类题目。

这就像是有人请你去调查个事儿。

比如说“描述一下你们社区的休闲设施，并且说说怎么改进”。

你得先描述现状，是有个破破烂烂的小操场呢，还是有个超酷的健身房。

然后根据现状，提出改进的点子，像给操场添点新的游乐设施，或者把健身房的器材更新一下之类的。

二、文章结构。

1. 开头。

开头得像个漂亮的开场白，把题目里的事儿简单提一提，就像你开始讲一个故事前先给个小引子。

比如“最近大家都在讨论科技对生活的影响，有人说让生活更孤独了，这事儿可有点意思，咱们来唠唠。

”然后最好在开头就表明自己的观点或者表明你要讨论的方向，这样读者（也就是考官）就知道你要带他往哪儿走了。

2. 主体段落。

如果是议论文，一般得有两到三个主体段落。

每个段落要有个中心思想，就像这个段落的小头目。

比如说一个段落是讲科技为啥会让生活孤独，你可以说“科技让我们的交流变得虚拟了”，然后围绕这个点展开，像“现在大家都在手机上聊天，看着屏幕里的文字，没有面对面那种温暖的感觉，朋友之间虽然天天发消息，但是真正见面的时候却没多少话说了”。

每个段落里要有足够的例子来支撑你的观点，例子要具体，不能光说大道理。

就像你说“运动对健康好”，你得具体说“我邻居老王，以前天天生病，后来开始跑步，现在身体倍儿棒，吃嘛嘛香”。

雅思写作真题之大作文利弊分析类

雅思写作真题之大作文利弊分析类这里我们给大家带来一篇关于探讨教育意义的雅思写作大作文题目，包括范文和解析，希望大家能够从中学习和领悟雅思写作思路和方法，同时掌握更多的句型和词汇。

接下来请看内容：雅思写作真题之大作文利弊分析类雅思写作真题之大作文利弊分析类雅思写作题目：The most important thing of people's life is his or her work. Without a satisfying career, the life is meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?雅思写作去模版范文解析：此题目为教育类话题，体裁为议论文下属的利弊分析类，要分别陈述将大部分时间花在学习上对社会和孩子自身的影响。

先交代background information，如：Education, especially children's, is undoubtedly of vital importance to a nation's sustained economic development.再进一步导入具体内容：对孩子产生的积极影响和小孩子可扎实掌握更多深层次知识。

对孩子产生的负面影响：小孩子花过多时间在学习上可能会对成长不利。

可举例说明一下，比如：长时间的sedentary lifestyle令人们担忧他们的健康状况。

在整个论述的过程中，考生可采用举例论证和因果论证这两种常见也是最有效的论证方法详细展开。

长时间学习对孩子自身和整个社会利弊皆有，可通过鼓励孩子在学习过程中积极参加更多的课外活动。

消除弊端，把孩子朝受益的方向引领。

雅思写作去模版范文：With the increasing proportion of employed workers, whether or not one’s career is his or her whole has become a widely debated topic. While some believe that job is the most crucial element of our life, others maintain that there are many other essential things which are meaningful to us. Given that lifeis colourful and non-inevitable relationship between success of career and the meaning of life, I strongly disagree that there will be nothing left if we failed to reach the peak of career.随着就业人数的增加，一个人的职业生涯是否是他或她的整个已经成为一个广泛争论的话题。

雅思作文考题审题误区分析

雅思作文考题审题误区分析雅思作文考题审题误区分析下面雅思为大家整理了雅思大作文审题误区分析，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。

雅思大作文审题误区题目的题干主次不分一个完整的雅思考题，一般是由题干部分和提问部分组成。

题干部分通常是一到二个句子，这二个句子之间的逻辑关系一般为因果，转折或者并列。

若是并列关系的话，前后这二个句子意思的重要性是一致的，但是若题干部分是因果或者转折关系时，意思的重点就放在了表示结果的和表示转折的这个句子上了，于是另外一个句子就变成了次要意思。

而很多考生在考试或者平时训练时，往往会很想当然地把题干中一些比较熟悉的单词当作题目的重心，然后马上就提笔展开写作。

其实这是很不对的。

下面我们来看一个考题：Scientificand technological advances bring benefits to our daily life. However，mostscientists are no longer able to find solutions to the problems they havecreated. To what extent do you agree or disagree？可能读了这个题目后很多考生会觉得接下来的'作文里至少有一段是要去论证一下科技进步给生活带来的哪些好处或者便利。

其实如果你写了这个内容的话那么就大错特错了。

题干的逻辑关系是转折，这就意味着转折词以后的部分是题干的主要意思，前面那个句子只是用来进行背景铺垫或者对比的作用。

因此，我们在对这篇作文进行段落布局的时候一个方面是要去论述一下为什么科学家很难找到解决科技进步所造成问题的解决方案，而另外一个方面则需说明一下科学家们已经或者可以或者有能力找到所有或一些解决办法。

这样的双边论证从思路上才是正确的。

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雅思写作之6大写作话题解析

雅思写作之6大写作话题解析雅思大作文写作话题许多，雅思写作高频话题有政府类，社会类，教育类，环境类，科技类，媒体类及犯罪类等。

今日我给大家带来了雅思写作之6大写作话题解析,盼望能够关心到大家，一起来学习吧。

雅思写作之6大写作话题解析雅思写作解析—政府类写作话题政府类的考题基本围绕政府的责任和政府投资进行。

比如政府是否应当禁烟，政府的钱应当花在哪些方面，艺术，体育，健康，教育，养老，国际救济等等。

1. Some people say the government should not put money in the arts, such as music, opera and paintings, but instead should spend more money on basic facility. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 政府投资艺术还是基础设施建设。

2. Some people said the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums, and they should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree? 政府投资体育消遣还是医疗教育。

3. Some people say that the government should pay for the health and education of its citizens, but other people say that it is not the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion? 政府是否应当担当人们的医疗教育。

雅思写作之真题解析

雅思写作之真题解析当拿到一道大作文题目去分析时，我们不仅仅需要去读懂题目本身的意思，同时还得了解到题目所涉及的是哪一类话题，它所考察的是一个什么能力，题目中是否有一些关键词需要格外注意以及对于这道题目所能想到的一些观点论证。

本文中，文都国际教育老师将和大家一起探讨两道典型的教育类话题。

As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题：题目翻译：作为教育的一部分，学生应该要花一段时间去海外学习和生活来学习当地的语言和文化。

你在多大程度上同意或者不同意?能力考查：这个教育类话题是同意不同意的考试指令，考查考生对于考官所呈现的社会现象或所表达的观点是否能够清晰地给出自己的想法并加以有效论证。

一般来讲，碰到这种指令，理论上是可以写完全支持或者反对的，但是还是建议大家尽量尝试用折中的写法，即部分同意部分反对。

这种一分为二的思考方式可以在考场上帮助你快速想出观点并进行有效作答，另外这种答题模式也不太会发生偏题的情况。

框架构造：Partly agree1. 开头段(用于引出题目背景，并且表明自己的态度)2. 论证出国学习和生活对于学习语言和文化的重要性3. 但是，反面论证这种做法对于部分学生是不现实的4. 结尾(再次重申自己的观点，并且可以给出自己的建议)Sample answer:Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL. Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition. As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes. Compared with second-hand experience, living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market. Meanwhile, living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief.However, it would be unrealistic if all students are encouraged to participate in it. First of all, considering students themselves, those who lack learning and adaptive ability may find it hard to integrate into local life and sometimes they will feel disappointed or even depressed because of culture shocks and language barriers. Tuition fees and life expenses can be another problem. Different from rich students, those who come from working-class families or needy families cannot afford such a big cost to study overseas. For example, studying in UK for one year may cost one student nearly 300 thousand, which is far from affordability.To sum up, an experience of studying and living overseas can help students to speak good language and understand the local culture well. However, it is not a practical way for most ordinary families unless they make full preparations.思路分析：Introduction:Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL.(用最熟悉的事件引出背景)Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition.(对于题目的改写)As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.(在段落的最后，用一句话表明出自己的观点)Body 1:主题句：Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes.(其中mentioned purposes指的是题目中的掌握语言和文化，为了避免重复，改用其他方式来表达)支撑论点部分：Compared with second-hand experience, (用了对比论证手法，强调国外生活与学习的好处)living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market.(凸显对于语言的好处，使用了因果论证来说明语言的重要性) Meanwhile,(论点之间的连接词) living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief. (论证了对于文化的帮助，使用including来举出文化的一些典型表现)。

《剑桥雅思13》写作大作文分析

剑桥雅思写作大作文题型分析在题目类型方面，剑13的四篇大作文中2篇同意与否大作文，1篇双边观点讨论大作文以及1篇报告类大作文（原因和解决办法）。

从题型数量上来看，同意与否类型无疑是剑13的贴心小棉袄，然鹅剑13却未曾出现利弊分析（Advantages and Disadvantages）和利弊分析姊妹版（Positive or Negative）的题目，这需要引起“烤鸭们”的注意。

纵观2018年上半年的雅思写作考试，同意与否（Agree or Disagree）类型的大作文占比较高，而其他题型的占比相对处于弱势状态。

并且剑13再次强调了同意与否类型大作文的重视，“烤鸭们”需要在备考阶段注意强化同意与否类型大作文的审清题目、寻找立场、提出分论点、展开思路和深入论证等。

剑桥雅思写作大作文话题分析从话题大类上来看，Test 1、2、4均为社会问题，Test 3为学校教育问题，并未出现极其冷门或偏门的话题类型，这也是2018年雅思官方已经举办的考试同样突显出来的趋势和特点，社会类问题和教育类话题依旧是大作文考察的主要方向。

从题目审题难度上来看，雅思官方逐渐加大对题目本身审题题眼的设置与限定，进一步考察“烤鸭们”的逻辑论证和思辨能力，除了Test 3学校教育问题题目中的广大“烤鸭们”较为熟悉的绝对化表达（比如：one of the most important），还增设了have to， as well as， too many， in spite of等单词的修饰，这从一个侧面反应了雅思写作考试的审题难度日渐加大，如何准确找准立场并深入展开论证是今后备考的重中之重。

剑桥雅思写作大作文逐题分析Test1从内容归类上来看，Test 1主要围绕语言及其可能导致的社会问题和实际问题，其实，在剑桥雅思真题中对语言话题的考察频率还不算低，比如剑9中两次提到了对语言的考察，一篇大作文询问的是语言逐渐消亡与生活难易程度的关系，一篇大作文落脚点是在小学比在中学学外语更好。

雅思作文话题范文及分析：多元文化

雅思作文话题范文及分析：多元文化多元文化的存在是一个既定事实，你对多元文化的看法是什么呢？雅思写作可能会考到这个话题，下面小编给大家带来雅思作文话题范文及分析：多元文化。

雅思写作高分范文关于多元文化的利与弊雅思写作题目：There is a mixture of people from different cultures and ethnic groups in a country. Why? Is this a positive or negative development?雅思写作题目讲解：第一段：介绍目前多元文化的社会现象。

第二段：分析原因，例如，全球化，人口流动增加和移民政策的影响等。

第三段：negative：例如，文化冲突和文化同化或边缘化，年轻一代的文化认同危机等。

第四段：positive：例如，文化融合，促进经济繁荣与文明等。

第五段：结论雅思写作范文：In many metropolises around the world, especially in English speaking countries, it is not surprising to see people from different ethnics or cultures living and working together. How this comes into existence and what influence this exerts on our society will be discussed as follow?在世界各地的许多大都市，特别是在讲英语的国家，来自不同种族或文化的人们在一起生活和工作并不奇怪。

这是如何产生的，它对我们的社会有什么影响?Such co-existence of races in many major cities can largely be attributed to modern transportation and telecommunication technologies, to be specific, airplanes，computer and the internet. This advancement increases mobility of human andpromotes communication and interaction between people without limitation of space and time. The earliest and most obvious representation lies in the globalization of trade and business which expand beyond the national border and facilitate people involved to immigrate permanently or live overseas temporarily. Some countries like USA or Australia have tradition of immigration and they welcome distinctive cultures and ethnics or at least they tolerate differences well. In these places, multi-culture is the embodiment of a high level of civilization.在很多大城市中，种族的共存很大程度上可以归因于现代交通和通信技术，具体地说，飞机、计算机和互联网。

雅思作文范文及分析：多陪家人

雅思作文范文及分析：多陪家人随着现代生活节奏的加快，越来越多的人缺少时间去陪伴家人，你对这种现象有什么看法呢？在雅思写作中可能会考到这种话题，下面小编给大家带来的是雅思A类大作文全球真题：年轻人应该多陪家人还是在外面娱乐?Some people think that young people should spend free time with families instead of outside entertainment, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.How to manage leisure time comes to an important problem to be solved nowadays since it is a dilemma to choose between spending time with family members and having fun outsides. In fact, there are various reasons for both sides and they can hold water.For most people, the family comes first under any circumstances. When they are young, they need to show their gratefulness and appreciation towards parents who raise them up, and then, after growing up, they shoulder the responsibility to support and educate children in the family. In this way, everyone should accompany families, who are most precious in the world, as much time as possible. On the other hand, it will stress people out if there is no time to enjoy themselves outside. Life is far more than family, and they need to hang out with friends, work with colleagues or date with lovers. Also, people must get tired to face the same person 24 hours per day for 7 days.From my point of view, spending more time with family is truly needed. Actually, people put the most of time outside and less and less time at home with their beloved since they should work 40 hours per week and meet up with business partners, andare willing to kit at shopping malls for a movie with buddies. There are too few hours for families. In addition, people still can get entertainment too when they spend time with family members. No rules to regulate what a family gathering should like and every family member can host one for the theme they love. Thus, tremendous happiness could be generated in family time.雅思写作大作文范文：父母应该多陪子女范文：In China, both of the parents have their jobs. With the development of economy, people tend to pursue high quality living conditions. Most of the parents try their best to offer their children comfortable circumstances, but they seldom have time to stay with their children. In my point of view, no matter how busy they are, they should make the best use of their time to stay with their children.)First, the love between children and adults will be improved by spending more time on their children. Children could feel parents' affection through the genial conversation and sharing their pleasure with them. Every time when parents take them to amusement park, help them to prepare their birthday parties, applaud for them when they are competing in the sports meeting, the time they spend with children will become treasure in their memories.Second, children need the direction from their parents. There are some wrong behaviors in our society such as dishonesty, corruption, violence and eroticism and so on. Children have weak resistance in defending this detrimental influence. In this case, parents' instructions seem to be very important to children's growth. Parents should sit down and talk with them about what they should do and should not do. In addition, if parents oftenspend time in staying with their children, adults' good behaviors will greatly influence their children.Here I do not deny that there are some disadvantages in spending too much time on children. Some parents restrict their children, and give them little freedom to develop their interests. Therefore, I emphasize that parents should educate and instruct their children appropriately in their spare time apart from their busy works.雅思大作文范文：家庭关系不紧密社会类：It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience. 家庭关系不紧密的原因和解决策略?相关提问：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and 例如子女不回家看望父母family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 是否认为电视破坏了家庭和朋友间的交流?老师思路拓展：家庭关系不紧密的原因：1. 生活节奏快，竞争激励，工作学习压力大没有时间和家人分享和交流。

雅思犯罪类写作范文解析

雅思犯罪类写作范文解析想要写出优秀的英语文章，首先就要对别人的高分范文进行分析，学习别人的思路和表达，下面小编给大家带来雅思犯罪类写作解析，希望可以帮到你。

雅思写作 discuss both views: 解决犯罪问题，教育比监狱更有效吗2018年3月3日场雅思写作真题：In many countries, prison is the most common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with better education so that they can not become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?范文来自唐老雅。

范文配写作审题及解析。

雅思大作文写作审题与解析本题是2012年5月12日的原题重现。

如果说2017年雅思写作考试对2014年情有独钟，2018年似乎返祖现象更为严重，已经考过的很多场都是在重复2013年甚至更早的原题，这给我们的复习备考带来了一定的难度。

但万变不离其宗，我们备考雅思写作，首先是要清楚其要求，然后按照要求去逐步落实，而不是把全部希望寄托在押题上。

看到本次题目，大家首先要弄清楚，题目要求我们讨论的观点是什么。

这里，提出了解决犯罪问题的两个措施，一是监狱，二是教育，问的是教育是不是有效，或者教育是不是比监狱更有效。

很明显，监狱和教育都是解决犯罪问题的办法，而且很难比较哪个更有效，但两者在解决犯罪问题时所起的功能还是不同的：监狱更多的是一种补救和威慑，而教育则是预防。

因此，本题就可以沿着这个思路，去论证监狱如何起到一种补救和威慑的作用，而教育如何可以预防人们犯罪。

唐老雅原创高分范文In many parts of the world, people who have violated the law are put into prison, which is a very effective way of preventing them committing more crimes. However, many experts believethat better education is probably an even more effective way of addressing the problem of crime. I would suggest that both prison and education are important and each plays a different role in crime control.在世界上许多地方，违反法律的人被投入监狱，这是防止他们犯罪的一种非常有效的方式。

雅思大作文真题分析1

写作Task 2Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural areas find it is difficult to access the university education. University should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university.To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题：大学应不应该给贫困地区的学生录取优惠政策？确定观点：进行双方论点头脑风暴Brainstorming......应该不应该1.（社会方面）：有利于贫困，农村地区的经济发展1.(学生个人方面)：学业，同学竞争的压力2.（社会方面）：不利于社会和科学持续发展“不应该”一方我们能想出两个分论，“应该”一方只有一个，因此我们的观点选择是“不应该”。

（有其它双方不同论点的同学可以写留言回复进行讨论）文章结构提纲I.开头段（背景引入+转述话题+自己的观点）II.立论1段：peer pressure, academic challengeIII.立论2段：depress social and scientific developmentIV.驳论段：boost the economy in rural and underdeveloped areasV.结尾：重申观点，概括驳论立论段例文：立论1段To begin with, students from rural areas will suffer form huge peer pressure and academic challenge after they are admitted by universities who give them easier access to higher education. Universities, especially those of international reputation, are full of talented students in every field, and academic achievement is a crucial evaluation criteria of a student. So, a mediocre student from rural regions will find it hard to compete with their outstanding classmates with better education background in urban areas, and some of them may even have difficulty to graduate. For example, in China, some high school students form underdeveloped provinces can get “bonus scores” in the College Entrance Examinations. Unfortunately, most of these “unqualified students” have to drop out university because their poor academic performance.驳论段例文Admittedly, affording students in poor areas easier access to university may help develop the local economy, as some of these students who are benefited from this policy may be willing to devote themselves to the development of their underdeveloped hometowns. Thus, the gap between rural and urban areas may be narrowed to some extent. However, the advantage of this policy is quite limited, since most of the university graduates will choose to stay in big cities for a more promising career development.。

雅思写作之大作文思路角度分析

雅思写作之大作文思路角度分析
1.重视以人为本的理念：无论什么样的作文题目，都离不开人的需求和利益。

因此，在分析问题时，需要从人的角度出发，考虑问题对人们的生活、工作、学习等方面的影响。

2.分类讨论：对于一些涉及多种观点或因素的题目，可以采取分类讨论的方法。

根据题目要求，将观点或因素进行分类，然后逐一分析。

3.找到核心词汇：在阅读题目时，要特别注意题目中的核心词汇。

这些词汇通常代表着重要的概念或问题，需要对其进行深入分析。

4.分析因果关系：在分析问题时，需要关注问题产生的原因和影响。

对于原因，可以从不同角度出发，分析可能导致问题的各种因素；对于影响，需要分析问题对个人、社会、国家等方面的影响。

5.给出合理建议：在分析问题后，需要给出合理的建议。

建议应该具有可操作性和针对性，能够有效地解决问题。

6.重视批判性思维：在分析问题时，需要具备批判性思维，能够对问题进行深入思考和分析。

同时，也需要尊重他人的观点，包容不同的声音。

通过以上几个方面的思路角度分析，可以更好地应对雅思大作文的各种题型，提高自己的写作水平和成绩。

雅思18 test2 writing 1 范文

雅思18 test2 writing 1 范文摘要：1.问题背景和现状2.两种观点的对比3.分析各自的优缺点4.提出自己的观点及理由5.结论正文：随着全球化的发展，英语作为国际交流的通用语言，其在各类考试中的重要性不言而喻。

其中，雅思考试作为衡量非英语母语者英语水平的标准之一，备受广泛关注。

本文将围绕雅思考试中的写作部分，具体讨论两种不同的写作观点，并分析各自的优缺点，最后提出自己的观点。

第一种观点认为，雅思写作应当侧重于测试考生的实际沟通能力，而不是纯粹的语言能力。

这一观点的主要支持者认为，考试的目的在于评估考生在实际生活场景中的英语应用能力，而不是仅仅评估他们的语言水平。

这种观点下的雅思写作试题，往往会设定具体的生活场景，如书信、通知、报告等，旨在考察考生在实际交际中的语言组织能力和表达能力。

第二种观点则主张，雅思写作应更注重测试考生的语言能力，尤其是词汇和语法水平。

这一观点的倡导者认为，语言是国际交流的基础，如果考生在词汇和语法方面存在明显不足，那么他们在实际交流中很可能会遇到困难。

因此，这种观点下的雅思写作试题，会更注重考察考生的语言准确性。

从我国考生的实际情况来看，大多数人在实际生活和工作中都需要用到英语，但他们的英语水平参差不齐。

在这种情况下，侧重于实际沟通能力的雅思写作试题似乎更符合我国考生的需求。

然而，我们也应认识到，语言能力是实际沟通的基础，如果考生在词汇和语法方面存在明显短板，那么他们在实际交流中很可能会遇到障碍。

综合以上分析，我认为，雅思写作在考察考生实际沟通能力的同时，也应关注他们的语言能力。

具体而言，雅思写作试题可以设定不同类型的场景，如生活、工作、学术等，以测试考生的实际应用能力。

同时，试题还应注重考察考生的词汇和语法水平，以确保他们在实际交流中能够准确地表达自己的想法。

总之，雅思写作考试既需要测试考生的实际沟通能力，也应关注他们的语言能力。

雅思作文题目和范文详细分析

你同意还是不同意这个观点?)首先，正方观点可以概括为，宁可不工作，也不要做自己不喜欢的工作。

解释一下雅思写作中的优缺点题型

解释一下雅思写作中的优缺点题型雅思写作中的优缺点题型是指要求考生对某个主题或问题进行分析和评价，明确列举其优点和缺点的写作形式。

这种题型要求考生具备批判思维和逻辑思维能力，能够客观分析并论证自己的观点。

通过对主题或问题的全面分析，既能展示自己的语言表达能力，又能展示自己的分析思考能力。

优点题型要求考生列举事物或观点的优点，可以从多个角度进行展开。

考生可以从实际生活中的例子、科学研究的支持、社会效益以及个人利益等方面进行论述。

例如，在讨论全球化的优点时，可以提及扩大市场、促进经济发展、加强跨文化交流等方面的好处。

需要注意的是，考生在列举优点的同时，还需要进行适当的论证和解释，使观点更有说服力。

缺点题型要求考生列举事物或观点的缺点，同样可以从多个角度进行展开。

考生可以从社会问题、环境问题、个人隐患等方面进行论述。

例如，在讨论科技发展的缺点时，可以提及信息泄露、人际关系疏远、人类职业受挤压等方面的问题。

同样需要注意的是，考生在列举缺点的同时，还需要进行适当的论证和解释，使观点更有说服力。

针对这种类型的题目，考生需要遵循一定的写作结构。

一般可以采用“引言-优点-缺点-结论”的框架。

在引言部分，可以对主题或问题进行简要介绍，引出后续的讨论。

在优点部分，考生可以先列举主题或问题的优点，再进行具体的论证和解释。

在缺点部分，考生可以同样的方式进行分析和解释。

最后，在结论部分，可以对所列举的优缺点进行总结和评价，并给出自己的观点。

需要注意的是，在写作过程中，考生应该注意语言的准确性、连贯性和流畅性。

句子要结构清晰，语言表达要准确得体。

同时，还要注意段落之间的过渡和连接，使整篇文章的行文逻辑明确，条理清晰。

综上所述，雅思写作中的优缺点题型要求考生全面分析和评价某一主题或问题，列举其优点和缺点，并给出自己的观点。

通过合理的写作结构和适当的语言表达，考生能够清晰、准确地展示自己的分析思考能力和语言运用能力。

雅思写作大作文5分范文评析

雅思写作大作文5分范文评析Band 5Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge forits own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, shouldbe the main function of a university?What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, moreand more people point out that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and skill is the s tudents’ needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would bevery disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its students.Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace makes a university progress. The newskills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do research and make it more modernization.Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries’ economy strong.In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every university’s bas ic function.只能拿到5分的原因：一、这个题目中有两方的观点：some 及others的，很明显这位考生在后面的论证过程中完全忽视了others的观点,都在一味地论证some 的观点的正确性，于是考官给出的评语是：it does not address all parts of the question.写作建议NO.3：Do not neglect any part, or youwill regret your mark.什么都不要忽略，不然你的分数会让你难过。

IELTS—Writing第六课时—causes+solutions类

IELTS大作文讲解：cause + solution类作文学生面授老师时间本次课时IELTS写作第六课时教学思路1.作文简介、写作技巧2.实例讲解3.课后作业教学目标1. causes+solutions类作文理论分析2.causes+solutions类写作技巧及写作方法3. 学习写作思路讲解重点写作理论分析范文学习常用句式总结备考资料剑桥真题、《雅思写作套路剖析与范例大全》教学详细内容：一、分析雅思写作——causes + solutions类理论1.题目特点及解题思路1）题目特点：Give your opinions and give some recommendations.Give reasons and make some suggestions.2）解题思路：在分析事情原因的基础上，提出解决方案或建议。

3) 文章结构包括：a: 开头段，背景阐述，引出论题b: 分析事情的原因c: 提出解决方案或建议d: 对于原因以及解决措施进行简要的总结或者a:开头段，背景阐述，引出论题b:分析原因一并提出相应的解决方案或建议c:分析原因二并提出相应的解决方案或建议d:对于原因以及解决措施进行简要的总结相比较，后者更有逻辑性。

在此推荐后者。

2.常用句型及模板：常用句型：1)我们绝对不能... On no account can we do ~2)那就是...的原因That is the reason why ~3)我相信这个不是最好或者唯一的方法做… I do not believe it is the best or onlyway to…4)这意味着每个人都必须知道他在世界上所造成的影响和他们在世界上所扮演的唯一角色。

What is meant by this is that each individual must be aware of the impact he or she has in the world and their unique part to play in this world. 5)…越多，似乎…越少As more and more…, there would seem to be less and less…6）但是对于这个问题的解决，在世界范围内毫无进展 Yet little has been done to solve this problem worldwide.7）伴随着…的第一个并且是最明显的问题是 The first and most obvious problems associated with … are …8）更严重的问题是… A further problem is…9）这个解决所需要的是… What is required of this situation is…10）需要记住的重要的一件事情是… What is important to remember is that…11）需要考虑到很多因素 Many factors should be taken into consideration.12）关于…的争论是不会有结果的Disputes about … are fruitless.13）使…之间达到平衡ensure the balance between … and …词组:1)不遗余力地做… Spare no effort to do sth2)让...明白… bring home to sb. sth.3)养成...的习惯 Get into the habit of doing sth. = make it a rule to do sth.4)令人不满意 ~ leave much to be desired5)使…之间达到平衡ensure the balance between … and …模板：开头段：According to a(n) survey (/investigation/analysis/statistics/report) released (/conducted/made) by _____, there is a growing (/increasing/declining) number of _____ who (/which) _____.To be specific, ______. (What amazes us most is that _____.) Among countless factors which directly and indirectly influence _____, there are several conspicuous aspects as follows.主体段一：The reasons (/causes/factors) for _____ are complex (/varied/profound). Some attribute it to _____. Others put it down to _____. Still others owe it to _____. In my opinion, however, three (/some) factors shout louder than others (/weigh heavier than others/stand out from others). The most critical reason lies in _____. Moreover, _____. Another important factor should not be ignored.主体段二：Among a myriad of suggested solutions to _____ (/measures against _____ /plans for _____ /moves toward _____ /ideas on _____), three have begun to stand (/stick) out. First of all, _____. An equally effective measure (/solution/recipe) is _____. Last but not least, _____.结尾段：To promote (/suppress/cultivate/popularize/curb/enhance/root up) the issue in question, the public attention (/more stress/more emphasis) should be placed (/put/focused) upon two proposals (/moves/measures/solutions).二、实例分析题目: 剑桥真题4 TEST4In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?1.题目分析题目意思：在许多国家，学生的行为有很严重的问题。