初中英语看图作文

May 3rd,Friday
Fine
This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw …
…The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .
假设下面五幅图画描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段亲 身经历。请你根据画面内容，写一篇80字左右的日记。
英文日记的格式
英文日记通常由书端和正文两个部分组 成。中、英文的日记格式大致一样。
英语日记的书端是写日记的日期、星期 和天气的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、 星期。右上角写上当天的天气情况，如： Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy等。
May 3rd,Friday
Fine
This afternoon, I went to see a film. On the way, I saw a case fall off a man's bike. I picked up the case and shouted to the man to stop. But he didn't hear me and rode away.
中考作文的评分标准
四档文：内容不完整，语言表述错误很多，不能完整地 表达思想。可得0-2分 三档文：内容完整，重点描述合理，但表述不充分，层 次结构不合理，语言不够流畅，字迹不够工整，5-6处 语法或拼写错误；字数不足。可得3-5分 二档文：内容完整，重点描述比较充分，层次结构比较 清晰，语言比较流畅，字迹工整，有3-4处语法或拼写 错误；字数符合要求。 可得6-8分
一档文：内容完整，重点描述清楚、合理，表达充分， 层次结构清晰，字迹工整，可读性强，语言流畅，仅有 1-2处语法或拼写错误；字数符合要求。 可得9-10分
看图作文难度稍大，在写作时它要根据图画呈 现的内容与所给的中英文提示相结合来表达其 内在涵义，描述图画内容，使短文达意、正确、 连贯。
看图作文可采用以下几个步骤： 1、理解图意，确立情景 2、注意所给的中英文提示 3、明确时态，理顺思路 4、连词成句，然后再连句成文 5、反复审核，修改错误
在路上,我看到一个手提箱 从一辆自行车上掉了下来.
on the way fall down from / fall off see / find + 复合宾语
On the way, I found/saw a case fall down from/off a man’s bike.
我捡起箱子,并向骑车人大声 喊叫,但他却没听见,走远了. pick up shout to ride away
我终于追上了失主,并把 箱子还给他.
I caught up with him at last and gave the case back to him.
give back / return refuse
失主非常的感动,他拿出 一些钱来感谢我,但被我 拒绝了.
The man took out some money to thank me, but I refused.
适当选择固定句型
But he didn’t hear me and rode away. But he rode too fast to hear me.
I wanted to catch up with him ,so I stopped a taxi quickly. I stopped a taxi as quickly as I could in order to catch up with the man.
把两个或多个句子合并为简单句
1、把其中一句改为介词短语 I picked up the case. I shouted at the man loudly. After picking up the case, I shouted to the man loudly.
2、把其中一句改为分词短语
It was such an interesting movie that I couldn’t wait to enjoy it.
Although I missed the movie, I was very happy to help others.
I stopped a taxi and got into it with the case. And we caught up with the man. I gave the case back to him. The man thanked me very much and wanted to give me some money. But I refused .
I gave the case back to the man.
The man took out some money to thank me.
Getting the case back from me, the man took out some money to thank me.
把两个或多个句子合并成复合句
日记的正文是日记的主要部分，写在星 期和日期的正下方，可以顶格写，也可以内 缩3至5个字母的空间。
今天下午我去看电影.
go to a movie go to the cinema see a film this afternoon
It’s a fine day today. I went to a movie happily this afternoon.
I went to see a film this afternoon. One the way to the cinema, I saw a case fall off a man’s bike.
I was on my way to the cinema this afternoon when I happened to see a case fall off a man’s bike.
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I picked up the case and shouted to the man, but he didn’t hear me and rode away.
于是,我拦了一辆出租 车去追赶失主.
stop a taxi catch up with
I stopped a taxi to to catch up with the man.