大学英语四级写作讲义
四级基础写作讲义
四级基础写作写作流程:破题,选词,组句,成段,谋篇题目格式练:1.my view on fake commodities2. on-campus marriage3. should the university campus be open to tourists?4.a letter in reply to a friend选词(一)选词要求✧准确贴切,避免重复✧切忌生造✧语体单一练习:1.客人们在共进晚餐后都放松下来,也随便多了。
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A Her answer was short but accurate.B Her answer was short but hit the nail on the head.(二)常见用词错误✧拼写unversity eviroment concluson argument phanomenonsugestion government polution technology✧赘词1)I will return back as soon as possible.2)No one wants to repeat it again.3)Everyone wants to lead a rich and wealthy life✧搭配Eg. crowded traffic expensive pricestudy/learn knowledge small opportunity✧误用Eg. industrial VS industrious effect VS affectecnomic VS economical continuous VS continualefficient VS effective considerate VS considerable(三)选词标准✧具体表抽象✧名词中心论✧应急措施a. 试用笼统词b. 试用解释性语句练习:1.He is dumb.2.He refused.3.I have never seen such a stubborn person.(四)用词替换&升级(五)题材语料库四级选题特点:1.校园热点话题—在校生活,学习,实践,人生观等2.普通市民关心话题—环境,疾病与健康,社会弊端,休闲娱乐等附一:升级词汇替换about—approximatelyalways—invariablyamount—quantityas a result—consequentlyable—capable, in a(ny)positionall the time--continually, continuously, constantlya lot of-- considerable, substantial, an abundance of(opportunities, sources etc.) basically--essentially, in essence, substantiallybuy—purchaselet, allow--permitbe amount to—constitutebecome smaller--be on the decline ,decrease, decline, diminishbecome worse--deterioratebefore--prior tobegin--commencebetter--superiorbe(come/get) used to --be(come/get) accustomed tobig--major, significant, substantialby means of—by virtue ofcarry out--conduct, execute, implementchange--alter, alteration, modify, modification communication—exchange, interactioncommon—universalcompetitor—rival,opponentconsider—allow for, take into considerationdeal with-- tackledo--conductdo not--fail toend--conclusion(to bring sth. to a conclusion)enough-- sufficient, adequate(grounds, evidence, preparation, resources etc) every year—annuallyexplain—account forfairly--comparatively, moderatelyfamous-- distinguishedfind out-- discover(the cause of, factors behind sth etc)have-- be equipped with, possesshelp--accommodateif--in the event of, in case(of)important—crucial,essential,necessary,vital,indispensable,significantin the end--eventually, ultimatelyin the future—in the days aheadlater--subsequent(ly)less and less--decreasing(ly)keep(doing)-- persist inlong--extensive(coverage, passages, scope)explore-- investigate(possibility),observe(behaviour)more and more--increasinglymuch--considerably, substantiallyneed--demand, requirenow--at present, for the time being, at this momentnowadays-- currentlyoften--frequent(ly)opinion--perspectivequick(ly)--rapid(ly),prompt(ly)realize--be aware ofremember—bear in mind thatright--appropriate, correct, properset up--establish(a newstate,a government,abusiness),sharp--abrupt, drastic(rise and falls)show—demonstrate,betrayside--aspect(of a problem)small--minor/insignificant (problems, differences etc)stop-- ceasesuitable--proper, appropriatetherefore--consequentlything--element, aspect, object, factor, considerationthink—assume, believe,consider, deem, emphasize,hold, maintain,reckon,supporttoo--excessively, undulytoo many/ too much --excessive(ly)try –endeavor , striveunderstand--appreciatevery--extremely, immensely, intensely附二:题材语料库永恒话题:经济增长,科技进步,人民生活水平提高极力推荐:英语学习1.学习:素质/应试/终身教育,必修/选修课,学位,留学,文化交流,启发性2.就业:人才市场,面试,工作经验,创业,房地产3.品质:谦虚,幽默,自信,随和,勤奋,忠诚,创造性,道德,智慧,耐心,毅力4.团队:合作,竞争,团队精神,求同存异5.健康:身体,心理,压力,情绪,乐/悲观,积/消极6.社会:政府,改革政策,爱国,与时俱进,抗震救灾,弱势群体,和谐,发展,繁荣,革新7.环境:环保,全球变暖,拼车,生存8.经济:金融危机,富裕,贫穷,商业,股市,利润9.科技:电子,手机,触屏10.休闲:娱乐,大片,健身,减肥,脱口秀组句⏹基本句型之“简单句”1.主谓结构Eg I gazed./ He lies. / I came, I saw, I conquered.Eg Our existence can only be proved by our sufferings.Lover departs, future dims, exam tortues, life pains.But all this sadness proves one thing: we are still alive.To everybody, in sad days, happiness is everywhere, for we have nothing to lose.2.主系表结构Eg “I think, therefore I am.”—DescartesParody “I pod, therefore I am.”—ipodEg “ Knowledge is power.”– Francis Bacon3. 主谓宾结构Eg “Change begets change.”—Charles Dickens4. 主谓宾补结构Eg I find you pretty.5. 主谓双宾A job interview offers the employers a lot of advantages.⏹组句基本要求a 成分完整性1. While waiting for my turn brought me to nervousness.2. Outlines are especially helpful if you want to see the details explain or develop the main idea,and to put these parts into a whole.(如果你想了解这些细节怎样来解释或拓展主要观点,并想把这些细节组合成一个整体,写好提纲事非常有帮助的)3. Being the yougest child, mother hates to see me leave home.b 成分一致性1. They want to keep freshmen from having a car on campus.2. The lecturer leaves time for the audience to ask them questions.3. Those who are imprisoned find it hard to find a job after they have been released.⏹扩展句子方法1.增添法2.并列法a 分句Ⅰ,并列词+分句Ⅱb 分句Ⅰ;并列副词,+分句Ⅱ✧并列连词(7个):for, and, nor, but,or, yet, so✧并列副词:furthermore, besides, moreover, also, however, nonetheless, nevertheless,still, otherwise, therefore, consequently, thus, accordingly, hence等3.排比结构Eg It is important for government leaders to think logically, to analyse carefully, and to make decisions practically.Eg Studies serve for delight, for ornament,and for ability.-- Francis BaconEg …and that the government of the people,by the people, and for the people, shall not perish from the earth.—Abraham Lincoln4.从属法✧名词性从句✧定语从句✧状语从句练:大学生刚刚毕业就想立刻找到高薪得工作事不可能的。
四级作文讲义
Diagram of an EssayTitle of the essayIntroduction opening remarks to catch reader’s interest; thesis statementBody Topic sentence 1 (supporting point 1 )Topic sentence 2 (supporting point 2)Topic sentence 3 (supporting point 3)Conclusion summary (optional); General concluding remarksBeginning引言/起始/淘金段,图标图画描述段,3句1.General description: 概述句,总体描述(1句)1) It is well known that…2) It goes without saying that3) It is quite clear that…4)It has been found that…5)It is believed that…6) Nowadays, there follows a craze for…7) As more and more people f ocus on…, …draw more and more attention from the public.8) …has witnessed an unprecedented tide of…2. Details:挖掘细节词、联结成句(1句)•Question•Quotation•Exemplification•Definition•Contrast•Statistics•Background引用句式:As the saying/proverb goes/says…As Mark Twain puts it…Earnest Hemingway once remarked…It is widely accepted that…对比:in sharp contrast, by/in contrast•on the contrary•rather than/otherwise/unlike•whereas, conversely, yet•while, however, but数据:The table shows the changes in the number of… over the period from…to…•According to the figures/indicators given in the graph,…•The table gives the information that…•It can been seen from the chart that…表格图:table饼状图:pie chart/graph柱状图(条形图):bar/column chart, histogram直线图(曲线图):line chart/graph; curve diagram增加:increase/raise/rise/surge/climb/soaron the rise/go up/gain a momentum/continue its upward trend 减少:decrease/drop/fall/descend/decline/reducego down/on the decline/drop off/continue its downward trend 程度逐渐增加:slightly-slowly-gradually-moderately-considerably-greatly-rapidly-sharply-dramatically小波动:a minor fluctuation/small rise and fall/up and down3. Theme: 立论句,主题(1句)BodyTopic sentence (1句)symbolic meaningArgument (3句) 论据:原因、解释、论证•Five angles•Six devices•Facts Relation(1) Five angles:Background政治、经济、文化和社会背景E.g. Idol Worship1) With globalization, idol worship is extremely popular among the adolescents.2) With the speedy social, economic and cultural development, young people inexpanding numbers adore superstars.Factse.g.1)There is no denying the fact that a great many fans worship pop singers, filmand sports stars.2)Actually, it is common to see the worship of idols among young people. Others’ Opinions•To begin with, the purpose of the topic is to show us that…yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously.•What the topic conveys goes far beyond only a…Instead, it carries…meanings.The fact that…Reasons•Owing to the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, stimulating everyone to pursue one goal after another. ConsequenceOnce the young people begin to seek independence and accept challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of challenges.(2) Six Devices•Enumeration•Exemplification•Classification•Comparison & Contrast•Cause & Consequence•Chronological order1)列举法:主旨句:a. Now people in growing/ever-increasing/significant numbers are beginning tobelieve/realize/recognize/understand/see/be aware that…b. My argument for this view goes as follows:c. We should take a more critical view of…列举例句:•First(ly)…,second(ly)…,third(ly)…,lastly/finally…•In the first place…,in the second place…,last but no least…•First of all/first and foremost…,then…, next…, lastly…•To begin with…, what’s more/moreover/furthermore…•Most important of all…, moreover…, finally…•On the one han d…, on the other hand…2)举例法主旨句:•Common sense tells us that…•What is worth noticing is…•History is filled with the examples…•The story is not rare, and it is one of many examples.举例用句:•For example/instance•Take…as an example/an illustration/for example• A case in point•Namely/that is/in other words•especially/in particular•exemplify/illustrate/prove/indicate3)分类法e.g. Topic: Certificate CrazeTopic Sentence:Admittedly, there are different purposes behind this phenomenon.•Some people aim at certificates because of the employment pressure.•However, some others consider all the diploma and certificates important standards by which a person’s ability can be measured.•Moreover, there are those who just want to enrich their life by preparing for the certificates because they really enjoy their progress.递进关系词:Furthermore•What’s more•In addition•Besides•Also•Next4)比较对比法—相同点和不同点主旨句:There is probably some truth on both sides.…is both a blessing and a curse for mankind.Everything has double folds.There is a good side and a bad side to everything, and that includes…相同:Both…and, equally importantHave…in commonIn the same way, just as, that isThe same as, likewise, similarlyLike, correspondingly不同:On the contraryRather than/otherwise/unlikeWhereas/conversely/yetWhile/however/but/neverthelessCompared to/in comparison withIn/by contrast5)原因和结果e.g. Topic: Due Attention Should Be Given To SpellingTopic Sentence:There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.•First, exam-oriented education makes the students pay less attention to spelling.•Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.•Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words.原因主旨句•There are many/different reasons/causes for this dramatic/significant change/growth/decline/increase in…• A number of factors could account for/contribute to/lead to/result in…•One may attribute/owe…to, but…is not by itself an adequate explanation.影响主旨句•It will have/exert/produce a far-reaching/decisive/profound/beneficial effect/influence/impact on…•It gives rise to/leads to/brings about/results in/creates a host of problems.6)时间法At the present time until nowAt the same time laterPresently meanwhileSoon afterwardsBeforehand sooner or laterIn due time eventuallyAt this point currentlySummary (1句)小结,1句,首尾呼应e.g. Briefly speaking, young people are inclined to idolize the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.Conclusion结尾句/建议、评论/展望未来结尾句开头模板•In general/generally speaking•In fact/conclusion/short/brief/summary•On the whole/all in all/as a general whole•To sum up/to conclude/some extent•As far as I am concerned/as for me•In the finally analysis/in a nutshell1) Hence,…, the thought-provoking social phenomenon is a double-edged sword which can exert profound influence on…2) As a consequence, it is imperative for us to take effective/drastic measures/actions.3) I assume this hard nut can be cracked if both …and … take effective steps.4) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw/reach/come to/arrive at the conclusion that…5)Judging from all evidence offered, we may safely conclude that…6)To reverse the trend is not an easy job, and it requires/demands/involves adifferent state of mind towards…建议和评论:7) It is my view that first of all….Meanwhile, there are good reasons to advocate…in the long run.8) On the one hand, we can….On the other hand, …should be sensible enough to…9) To begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who….In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that…收尾:特殊句型(1)倒装句;(2)强调句;(3)虚拟语气;(4)反问句。
大学英语四级写作专题讲解.ppt
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分析:开头引用Colton的名言说明“创造机会”
对于成功的重要性,点明主题。
常用的开头段的表达方法
• ●引用具体或粗略的数据 (use figures or statistics) 当然对于图表题型,该种方法是必须的选择,具体做 法是给出一些具体或粗略的数据,然后作出概括性分 析,点明主题或引出需要论述的问题。 如: As is demonstrated in the table, more and more college graduates are out of a job in our country, which is a serious problem to our economic development and social security. It is estimated that in 2004, there are 500,000 unemployed graduates, more than 30% higher than in 2002. 分析:文章引用2004年找不到工作的毕业生达到50万 这一数据来说明大学生找工作难这一现象的严重性, 很有说服力。
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大学英语四级写作专题
四级作文解析
四级写作讲义
CET4写作通关班电子教材第一节四级写作总论一、课程安排:1、四级写作总论:1)考试流程2)复习计划3)学习方法4)大纲解读2、应用文:1)个人简历2)书信3)口头作文4)告示3、论说文:1)评卷实例2)万能句型4、翻译:1)最新大纲2)最新真题二、考试流程:08:45 验证入场(身份证、准考证、学生证缺一不可)09:00 发答题卡(答题卡1正面为作文题,背面写作文),9:00之后无法入场。
09:10~09:35 写作(09:35发试题册)09:35~09:40 翻译09:40~09:55 快速阅读理解(在答题卡1背面作答)09:55~10:00 收答题卡1,建议快速浏览听力选项10:00~10:35 听力理解(以下在答题卡2作答)10:35~11:05 仔细阅读理解(选词填空或简答+篇章阅读理解)11:05~11:20 完形填空(11:05 监考教师提醒15分钟后交卷)三、复习计划:1、攻克词汇:1)词汇书:俞敏洪《四级词汇词根+联想记忆法》2)软件:《新东方背单词》(5)3)真题:最新10套四级真题4)记忆法:参见我的博客/m/jtwang:“考研复习”之“十天搞定考研词汇”2、精研真题:最新10套四级真题,尤其是2006年6月24日以后真题1)词汇:没有一个词汇不认识2)选项:没有一个选项不了解3、适当模考:参见王江涛编著《大学英语四级考试一本通》(群言出版社)四、学习方法:(一)提高实力:1、背诵:10大必背范文1)Directions: For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My Views on Examinations. You should write at least 120 words and base your composition on the outline below:1、大学都用考试来衡量学生的成绩2、考生可能带来的副作用3、我对考试的看法In most colleges and universities the examination is used as a chief means of deciding whether a student succeeds or fails in mastering a particular subject. Although it does the job quite efficiently, its side effects are also enormous.To begin with, examinations lower the standards of teaching. Since teachers are often judged by examination results, they are reduced to training their students in exam techniques. No。
大学英语四级写作完整课件
大学英语四级写作完整课件大学英语四级写作完整课件一、写作概述写作是英语四级考试的重要部分,旨在考察学生的英语书面表达能力。
考试中,写作部分通常占总分的15%。
二、写作要求1、内容切题:写作内容要紧扣主题,不跑题、不漏题。
2、表达规范:语言使用要规范,不使用不恰当的词语和语法结构。
3、结构合理:文章结构要清晰,段落安排合理,有明确的主题句和结论句。
4、字数符合要求:写作字数应在120-150字之间,尽量避免字数过多或过少。
三、写作步骤1、阅读题目:仔细阅读写作题目,明确写作要求和主题。
2、草拟提纲:根据题目要求,草拟一个提纲,确定文章的结构和要点。
3、写作开头段:根据提纲,写作文章的开头段,引入主题并明确文章结构。
4、写作主体段:根据提纲,写作文章的主体段,包括论点和论据。
5、写作结论段:总结全文,提出结论,回答问题并强调主题。
6、检查语法和拼写错误:在完成写作后,务必检查语法和拼写错误,确保语言使用的准确性。
四、写作技巧1、熟悉常见句型和表达方式:掌握常见的句型和表达方式,以便在写作中使用。
2、积累词汇:积累更多的词汇,提高语言表达的丰富性和准确性。
3、练习写作:通过大量的写作练习,提高自己的写作水平。
4、阅读范文:阅读范文可以帮助学生了解优秀的写作技巧和风格,提高自己的写作水平。
五、常见错误1、语法错误:学生常常出现语法错误,如主谓不一致、时态错误等。
2、拼写错误:由于拼写错误,学生常常漏写或错写单词。
3、表达不准确:学生有时使用不准确的表达方式,导致意思不明确。
4、结构不清晰:学生有时未能明确文章结构,导致文章逻辑不清晰。
六、复习建议1、坚持练习:定期进行写作练习,养成良好的写作习惯。
2、多读多听:通过阅读和听力练习,提高自己的语言表达能力。
3、积累素材:积累各种素材,包括词汇、句型和表达方式。
4、模拟考试:定期进行模拟考试,熟悉考试流程和时间分配。
七、结论英语四级写作是衡量学生英语书面表达能力的重要标准。
大学英语四级写作完整课件
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• People hold different views about X./__ or __, which is better? Different people have diverse opinions upon this question(issue)./ People’s opinions are divided upon this issue.
• 2. 从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和 语言是一个统一体。作文应该表达题目所规定的内容 ,而内容要通过语言来表达。既要考虑作文是否切题 ,是否用英语清楚而明确地表达了主题思想,也要考 虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。
• 3. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分,包括满分,该 给低分的给低分,包括0分,一名阅卷人员在所评阅的 全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分数。
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高分策略: 注重结构的逻辑性
• 关联词: • 一. Addition 此外 • in addition, and,similarly,besides,furthermore,
• 1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试,理由是……
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• Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
With the development of English education in China, nowadays, many attentions have been paid to spoken English skills.The question, wether students can actually use English as a communication tool after years of study, has caused hot debate.As a result, test of spoken English is becoming increasingly common in English education.But does it really necessary to set such a test?
四级写作讲义
Some Suggestions for Writing of the CET-4I 常考题材关于大学生的学习、校园生活及对将来的工作、人生等方面的态度和看法;例:(05-12) Should the University Campus Be Open to Tourists?贴近社会、发展和进步的热点话题,往往与日常生活紧密相关。
例:(06-12)On the Spring Festival Gala(04-6) A Brief Introduction to a Tourist Attraction出题方式1: 提纲式文字命题e.g (06-12)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to writea composition on the topic On the Spring Festival Gala. Youshould write at least 120 words and base your composition onthe outline (given in Chinese)below:1) 许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会2) 有些人提出取消春节晚会3) 我的看法出题方式2: 提纲式图表命题e.g (02-6)Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Student Use Of Computers. You should write at least 120 words andbase your composition on the outline given in the below1)上图所示为1990年、1995年、2000年某校大学生使用计算机的情况,请描述其变化.2)说明发生这种变化的原因(可从计算机的用途、价格或社会发展方面加以说明).3)你认为目前大学生在计算机使用中有什么困难和问题出题方式3:“情景+提纲”式命题应用文,信函(建议信、拒绝信、投诉信)(04-1) A Letter in Reply to a Friend(02-1) A Letter to a University President about the Canteen Service on Campus(01-6) A Letter to a Schoolmate倡议书(06-6)A Poster Recruiting V olunteers演说辞(05-1) A Campaign SpeechII 写作类型1提纲式命题作文和提纲式图表作文现象解释型(试题主体部分是要求对一种现象产生的原因进行解释)问题解决型(试题主体部分是要求针对一个问题提供解决方案)对比选择型(试题主体部分是要求对两种观点或两种现象作对比选择)观点论证型(试题主体部分是要求论证一种观点)说明文(书信为主:建议信、拒绝信、投书信、倡议书、演讲辞、通知)记叙文III 材料组织形式关于写作的建议1)了解写作类型与体裁,做到所谓的模板拆分和重新组合。
2024年大学英语四级写作课件
大学英语四级写作课件一、引言写作是大学英语四级考试的重要组成部分,它不仅考查学生的英语语言运用能力,还考查学生的逻辑思维和表达能力。
本课件旨在帮助同学们提高英语写作水平,顺利通过四级考试。
二、写作要求1.写作内容:四级写作要求考生在30分钟内完成一篇100-120词的短文,包括日常生活和一般常识。
2.写作目的:四级写作主要考查学生运用英语书面表达思想的能力。
3.写作题型:四级写作题型包括看图作文、续写段首句、关键词作文、情景作文、给出提纲的短文等。
三、写作策略1.审题:认真审题,确保作文紧扣主题。
2.构思:列出写作要点,确定文章结构。
3.草稿:先打草稿,梳理思路,确保文章连贯。
4.修改:检查语法、拼写、标点等错误,确保文章无误。
四、写作步骤1.写前准备:审题、构思、列出写作要点。
2.写作:按照提纲或关键词进行写作。
3.检查:检查语法、拼写、标点等错误。
4.修改:对作文进行修改,确保文章无误。
五、写作技巧1.句子多样化:使用不同类型的句子,使文章更具表现力。
2.连接词:恰当使用连接词,提高文章的连贯性。
3.词汇积累:积累常用词汇和短语,丰富文章内容。
4.时态和语态:正确使用时态和语态,确保文章准确性。
六、常见问题及对策1.无话可说:增加阅读量,积累素材。
2.语法错误:加强语法学习,多练习。
3.表达不清:提高词汇和句型运用能力。
4.时间不够:提高打字速度,合理分配时间。
七、总结通过本课件的学习,希望同学们能够掌握英语四级写作的方法和技巧,提高写作水平,顺利通过四级考试。
同时,写作能力的提高也有助于同学们在日常生活和学习中更好地运用英语。
祝大家取得优异成绩!一、审题审题是写作的第一步,也是决定文章是否切题的关键。
在审题时,考生应仔细阅读题目要求,理解题目意图,确定文章的主题和类型。
对于不同的写作题型,如看图作文、续写段首句、关键词作文等,审题的方法和侧重点也会有所不同。
例如,对于看图作文,考生需要仔细观察图片,理解图片所传达的信息和寓意;对于续写段首句,考生需要根据给出的段首句,推测文章的主题和内容。
四级写作讲义 最新版
四级写作必须掌握常识•必须涵盖提纲中的内容•最好把提纲内容置于每段首句•如果提纲为两点,则把其中的一点拆成两部分两个需要搞定的人•出题人•评卷人搞定评卷人的必备素质•文章脉络清晰•段落衔接顺畅•用词造句经典•书写优雅美观由于下大雨,他发高烧,所以不得不呆在家里。
因为他没去上班,所以被扣了工资。
Due to the heavy rain, he developed a fever, thus he felt obliged to stay at home. His absence caused the reduction of his salary.大学英语写作句子亮点打造•双重否定Impossible is nothing.应用:一定会never fail to大学生活一定会扩大我们的视野。
College life will never fail to enlarge our horizon.2. 并列I came, I saw, I conquered.Study serves for the delight, for the ornament and for the ability.…. of the people, for the people, by the people.2. 并列应用:and /or 连接两个相同或相似的成分•促进国家的发展promote the national development扩写:promote and enhance the national development and progress经典万能句型的套用Love is an emotional power, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes.To one world, you may be one person, but to me, you are one world.Cultivation is to the mind what food is to the body.A is toB whatC is to D长句制造•名词扩写步骤:加形容词,同位语,定语从句Kennedy is a good guy.Kennedy, an English teacher from new oriental school, is a responsible and hardworking guy.长句制造2. 动词扩写步骤:加状语(目的,方式,时间,地点)We sing a song.In order to relax ourselves, we sing a song happily and crazily at midnight in the New Oriental School.四级写作高分技巧•高级词汇•句型多样•醒目亮点醒目亮点的打造•数据•例子•谚语数据According to the recent survey/investigation/poll conducte d by ……, the past decade witnessed a sharp/abrupt increase/decrease in the number of……, from…… to …….例子•a good case in point is…• a convincing example is…•To illustrate this point, I can think of no better example than…•Take … as an example谚语•As the famous saying goes, “……….”参加托福雅思考试•As the Chinese famous saying goes, “ ……….”谚语•As the famous saying goes, “……….”参加国内考试•As the American famous saying goes, “ ……….”谚语•As the famous saying goes, “……….”参加国内考试艾宾浩斯曲线八个记忆周期•5分钟•30分钟•12小时•1天•2天•4天•7天•15天四级写作黄金模板1. 利弊类/对立观点类模板使用注意事项•个性化模板•根据提纲灵活使用模板使用注意事项•个性化模板•根据提纲灵活使用首段模板句1As regards…, there has been a heated discussion amo ng the general public in our society. 关于……, 在社会的公众中存在热烈的讨论。
四级写作讲义
read all the books. What’s more, there are
many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn’t read them. Since we can’t read all the books and we shouldn’t read bad books, we must read selectively. But others may not agree. They emphasize that today’s society is not what it was. If one man has many
better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us
pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and
1)词汇: 没有一个词汇不认识 2)选项: 没有一个选项不了解
3、适当模考: 考前务必模考三次
三、写作学习
1、背诵:十大必背范文
滚瓜烂熟!脱口而出!多多益善! 2、默写: 仔细对比原文、发现写作弱点 3、仿写:提高写作实力
四、大纲解读:两大黄金原则
But those books which we choose must be
大学英语四级写作专题讲解ppt课件
require them to be able to analyze problems, propose viewpoints, and provide arguments.
Adapt to the needs of international communication
Writing is one of the four basic skills in English learning: listening, speaking, reading, and writing are complementary and indispensable.
Writing is an important criterion for measuring English proficiency: it can reflect students' English proficiency and is also an important component of various English exams.
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Advanced vocabulary selection and replacement
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Use emotionally charged vocabulary such as "significant" instead of "important" and "financing" instead of "interesting" to enhance the infectiousness of the article.
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CHAPTER 1基本写作常识1写作步骤1.审题审题是最重要的一步,应分析题目的构成,辨别义体,抓住关键词,找出主题词和限定词.2.构思构思时应注意以下几个问题:1.研究作文题目的限定范围和可供利用的材料以及具有启发性的暗示.2.从多方面联想与主题相关的材料°3.找出所要论述的关键词或短语4.考虑从儿个方面进行讨论或描述5.具体考虑各段在义章中的作用6.写出全篇的提纲和简单的草稿.例:在构思Why Good Manners 一篇作文的时■候我们应按照如下几个步骤来构思:1.题目给出的话题是good manners,而且限定的范围是分析其原因。
2.根据上述范围我们可以联想到:有礼貌的重要性,没有礼貌会带来的不良影响,社会发展的需要,对学生来说有礼貌的意义,对其他行业的人来说礼貌的意义,从社会学的角度,从经济学的角度等。
但是在四级写作中,根据我们的知识水平,可以适当选择:有礼貌对学生的意义,没有礼貌的坏处等3.关键词:good manners, students, importance, benefits, harms4.应从以下几个方而进行论述①有礼貌的重要性②对学生的重要意义③没有礼貌的危害④总结号召大家要有礼貌首段点题,展开段论证有礼貌的重要性,结尾段重中主题发出号召。
提纲及草稿(略)4草拟写作提纲(1)为什么要写提纲在写作过程中,编写提纲是非常必要的。
TOEFL考试中心建议:”Think before you write, making notes maybe help you to organize your essay." Michigan 考试中心也建议:"It is wise to take a few minutes to organize your thoughts, once you have chosen a topic, and make a brief outline-可见在写作文前先编写一个提纲还是必要的,它往往是确保写出内容切题、条理清楚的作文的关键。
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词汇错误
拼写错误
注意单词拼写,避免简单的拼写错误。
词性误用
区分不同词性的词汇,确保在句子中正确使 用。
搭配错误
熟悉常用词汇的搭配和用法,避免不合适的 搭配。
语义不清
选用准确、具体的词汇表达思想,避免使用 模糊、笼统的词汇。
篇章结构错误
缺少主题句 在段落开头明确主题句,概括段落大 意。
缺少过渡词
在段落之间使用适当的过渡词,使文 章连贯、流畅。
请老师或同学对自己的文 章进行点评和反馈,以便 及时发现并改正问题。
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四级写作常见错误及避免方法
语法错误
主谓不一致
检查谓语动词与主语在人称和数 上是否一致。
时态错误
根据上下文判断动作发生的时间, 选用正确的时态。
语态错误
区分主动语态和被动语态,避免 误用。
虚拟语气错误
在表示建议、要求、命令等语气 的句子中,正确使用虚拟语气。
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模拟题三:图表作文写作
题目:根据所给图表写一篇文章, 分析中国人口老龄化的趋势和影
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描述图表中展示的中国人口老龄 化的趋势和特点
讨论应对人口老龄化的措施和政 策建议
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分析人口老龄化对中国社会、经 济、文化等方面的影响
总结全文,强调人口老龄化对中 国未来的挑战和机遇
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指出现代科技对人们生活的负面 影响,如沉迷网络、隐私泄露等
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模拟题二:应用文写作
题目:写一封求职信
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英语四级写作讲义
写作的三条原则:1. practice 从现在开始到考试,规定至少写十篇作文;2. input3. vary:作文要强调的不是内容,而是语言。
注:practice n. 实行, 实践, 练习;input n. 输入,投入逃税cheat on tax flee tax(错误的表达);vary 变化例:从图表中我们可以看出:在过去十年中,大学生花在电脑上的小时数是不断增加的。
In the past ten years, the number of hours a college student spent on the computer has been increasing.上升,增长ascendIt may affect his study if he spends too much time on the computer.eyesight 视力; It may do harm to one's eyes.对出题人的分析:1.出题的内容(1)关于大学生的话题;How are Finance My College Education?;Reading Selectively Or Extensively?campus life 校园生活(2)常见的社会问题。
The Changes in People's Diet;The Changes in the Ownership of HousesTraffic Jams;Traffic accidentes;Motorcycles;private cars 私人小汽车考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识,不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。
How to Develop the World Economy?;非典SARS第二节对出题人的分析:1.出题的内容(1)关于大学生的话题;How are Finance My College Education?;Reading Selectively Or Extensively?campus life 校园生活(2)常见的社会问题。
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一.The main types of guided writing:1. 提纲式作文:Directions:Women make a great contribution to the progress of modern society. But there are still some people who don’t agree with it.There has been a discussion recently on the issue in a newspaper. Write an essay to the newspaper based on the following outline.1. Role of women in modern society2. Prejudices and discrimination against women3. My commentY ou should write about 200 words within 40 minutes.Women play an important part in modern society. Now many women are going into professions, such as medicine, law and engineering. They comprise a large part of the workers in offices and factories. Many jobs they are engaged in are in line with their special capabilities of their sex. In addition, some of are working up to important positions which used to be held mainly by men. There are even some businesses which are run completely by women. It is obvious that women are making an outstanding contribution to the progress of modern society.There are, however, still some people who assert that men are superior to women in many ways. In the first place, many jobs men do can hardly be done by women, who are physically not strong enough. They believe that women are the weaker sex – both physically and emotionally. Thus, women are naturally suited, much more so than men, to the performance of domestic duties. According to them, a woman’s place is within the protective environment of the home. Secondly, most of the world-famous scientists and statesmen are found to be males. Finally, the whole society seems to have always been dominated by men only. In their opinion, men should enjoy more rights than do women.Personally, I’m firmly standing on the side of those women right defenders. Since both men and women are equally important in human activities, they should be on an equal footing. (242 words)2. 提纲图表式作文:Directions: In this part, you are to write an essay of about 200 words within 40 minutes. Study the following table care fully and your composition must be based on the information given in the table. Y ou should quote as few figures as possible.Outline: 1. Changes in people’s daily expanses in the past five years2. Possible reasons for the changesIn the past five years, there have been great changes in people’s daily expenses in XX city. According to the figures given in the table, the amount of money spent on food decreased gradually, accounting for 35 per cent in 2001. However, there was a rapid increase in clothing expenses, which made up 15% in 2001. In addition, the table shows an upward tendency in recreation expenses. The same was the case with other expenses.What caused these remarkable changes? In my opinion, there are at least three good reasons. T o begin with, with the rapid development of agriculture in China, the output of grain, fruit, vegetables and milk has sharply increased, which contributes to the decline in their prices. Secondly, the family incomes of people both in the city and in the country have greatly risen so that people now can afford expensive clothing and some of them even want to dress in the latest fashion. Finally, as the living conditions improve, the demand for a variety of recreations is growing steadily, too.In short, with the incomes continuing to rise, people will no longer resign themselves to living a dull, monotonous life. They are eager to make their life interesting and exciting. Therefore, I am sure that people will spend more money on clothing and recreations. (219 words)3.规定情景式作文:Directions: Migrant workers (外地民工) have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. In this part, you are to write within 40 minutes a composition of 200 words about “The Role of Migrant Workers”. Y ou can agree and/or disagree, completely or partially to above statement. But no matter which position you take, you should have supporting reasons.As is known to all, migrant workers have made a great contribution to the prosperity of cities. They are an indispensable part of our work force. Most of them work on construction sites. There is no doubt that without migrant workers many of construction projects would have to be held up for lack of manpower. In addition, a large number of migrant workers are a beneficial factor, which enhances the consumption of food and daily items. This in turn helps to develop food industry and service trades in cites. All these are positive aspects of migrant workers in cities.However, as a popular saying goes, “Everything has two sides”. The same is the case with migrant workers. Firstly, most of them are not welleducated and professionally trained. Some of them have had very little schooling. As you know. Illiterate people, who are usually ignorant of the law, tend to make trouble, thus endangering social order. Secondly, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money. Being illiterate or unskilled, some of them would stop at nothing to get what they are ambitious for. Therefore, they are a potential threat to the peace and stability of society.In my opinion, in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one-sided to affirm everything or to negate everything. We should appreciate the great contribution made by them, and at the same time pay enough attention to the problems caused by them. (244 words)二、The structure of a paragraph and its development:1. Structure of a paragraph: topic sentence, development sentence andconcluding sentence.2. Ways of developing a paragraph:1) Comparison and contrast (对比法)2) Cause and effect (因果法)3) Exemplification (举例法)4) Generalization and qualification (概述法)5) Argument (议论法)三、Some sentence patterns commonly-used in controlled writing :---关于利弊、优缺点的句型:1. S + have (or has ) a lot of advantages over ….. (与….相比有许多优点)译:汽车与自行车相比有许多优点。