雅思写作审题难点解析

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雅思考试作文试题讲解

雅思考试作文试题讲解

雅思考试作文试题讲解雅思考试作文试题讲解篇一:雅思写作小作文题型分类总结雅思写作小作文题型分类总结摘要:雅思写作小作文题型一般都是图表作文,常见的几种主要类型有:表格图,曲线图,柱状图,饼状图和图画题五大类。

雅思写作小作文是雅思写作的重要组成部分。

雅思写作小作文的题型一般包括柱图和线图是每月常考的题型,饼图和表格题也是相对频率较高的题型。

偶尔也会考综合题。

图画题主要分为流程图和地图题,一般每季度轮换题库的时候会出现。

只要同学们按照固定的题目分类学习,针对性的进行复习,做到多样性和灵活性的语言使用,考生就能达到更高的分数。

在雅思课程A类小作文图表题的写作当中,考生经常会碰到图表看懂了,专家将从动态图表和静态图表的角度来详细分析雅思小作文的解题思路。

一、动态图有时间推移变化的图我们通常叫做动态图。

曲线图都是动态图,但是对于表格图,饼图和柱图却有动态和静态之分。

对于大多数的动态图我们都可以大致当作线图来处理。

动态图重点在数字变化的表达上,利用主语句型的不同和衔接关联词来展开。

写好动态图的基础是要准备好三个方面:1. 解题思路1). 表格题的动态题解题思路大致可以分为四步:①先相减(年份大的减小的);②后分类(上升一类,下降一类);③挑出极值(最大值);④挑选数值(倍数关系,变化明显的数值);2). 线图的解题思路大致分为两种:第一种:①按整条线来写(可以把相同趋势的线放在一起,也可把相反趋势的线拿来做对比);②挑选重要信息(整体趋势,起点,重点,最高点,最低点);③整体作比较。

第二种:①按时间区间来写(横轴对上去有共同拐点或交点的分为一段);②对比着写(强调交点,拐点,最高点,最低点);3). 动态柱图解题思路:把各个柱子的顶点连起来就是几条线,所以按线图方式处理;4). 动态饼图解题思路:把每种颜色看做一条线,可把相同相反的颜色放在一起写,很多时候也可以把占的比例最大的单独写一部分。

2. 基础替换词汇1). 趋势词汇上升动词类:increase, rise, grow, jump, surge, shoot up, soar下降动词类:decrease, decline, fall down, drop, sink, dip波动动词类:fluctuate持平动词类:remain the same, stabilize, remain stable, remain constant修饰动词的副词:slightly 轻微地,slowly 缓慢地,gradually 逐渐地,steadily 稳定地,rapidly 迅速地,moderately 温和地,轻微地,significantly 明显地,sharply 明显地,dramatically 急剧地,drastically 急剧地上升名词类:increase, rise, growth, jump, surge下降名词类:decrease, decline, fall, reduction, drop波动名词类:fluctuation修饰名词的形容词:slight, slow, gradual, steady, rapid, moderate, significant, sharp, dramatic, drastic2). 极值类词汇和表达最高点:reach the peak/top/highest pointIncrease to the peak/top/highest point(所有上升类的动词都可以替换掉increase)最低点:reach the bottom/lowest pointdrop to the bottom/lowest point(所有下降类的动词都可以替换掉drop)占了:occupy/make up/take up/account for/represent/constitute3). 倍数的表达方式Double 是两倍/大一倍Increase/decrease three times 增长/减少了三倍4). 大约的表达方式Approximately/About/around+数字3. 常用的小作文的趋势句式表达句式一:变化主体/图画中主体+趋势动词+副词+数值+时间区间Eg: The number of aged people over 65 increased significantly from 1 million in 1940 to 1.2 million in 2000.句式二:There be+形容词+表示趋势的名词+in+变化的主体+时间区间Eg: There was a significant increase in the number of aged people over 65 from 1 million in 1940 to 1.2million in 2000.句式三:时间+see/experience/witness+ 表示趋势的名词+in+ 变化的主体+ 数值Eg: The period from 1940 to 2000 saw an upward trend in the number of aged people over 65 from 1 million to 1.2 million.句式四:表示趋势的名词+be+seen/experienced/witnessed+in+变化的主体+时间Eg: An upward trend was seen in the number of aged people over 65 from 1 million in 1940 to 1.2million in 2000.二、静态图静态图常见的是柱图,饼图和表格题。

雅思写作中的常见问题和解决方法

雅思写作中的常见问题和解决方法

雅思写作中的常见问题和解决方法雅思写作是许多考生面临的一大难题。

许多考生在准备雅思写作时,会遇到许多问题,如语法错误、词汇问题和逻辑不清等。

本文将具体列举并解决雅思写作中常见问题,帮助考生们更好地备考。

一、语法错误语法错误是雅思写作中最常见的问题之一。

在写作中,考生们往往会在句子结构、时态和主谓一致等方面出现错误。

为了解决这个问题,考生首先应该加强自己的语法基础,了解基本的语法规则。

其次,在写作过程中要注意认真检查和润色自己的句子,尽可能避免语法错误的出现。

最后,考生可以多阅读一些范文和词汇量较大的文章,以提高自己的语法水平。

二、词汇问题词汇问题是雅思写作中另一个常见的问题。

考生常常会用一些重复和简单的词汇,造成文章单调和缺乏亮点。

要解决这个问题,考生可以通过以下几种方法来扩充自己的词汇量。

首先,多阅读一些英语书籍、杂志和报纸,扩大自己的词汇储备。

其次,背诵一些常用的词汇和短语,通过实践应用来巩固记忆。

最后,多进行写作练习,尝试使用一些新的词汇和表达方式,提高自己的写作水平。

三、逻辑不清逻辑不清是雅思写作中常见的问题之一。

考生在写作时,往往会出现思路跳跃、逻辑不连贯的情况,导致文章不够连贯和有说服力。

要解决这个问题,考生可以通过以下几种方法来改善。

首先,进行合理的写作规划,明确自己的观点和结论,并按照一定的逻辑顺序进行组织。

其次,使用一些连接词和词组,如“firstly, secondly, moreover, furthermore”,来连接自己的论点和例证,使文章更加连贯。

最后,多进行练习,培养自己的逻辑思维能力,提高写作的逻辑性。

四、字数不够字数不够是雅思写作中常见的问题之一。

在考试中,如果字数不够可能会导致分数降低。

为了解决这个问题,考生可以采取以下措施。

首先,合理安排自己的时间,不要过于拖延写作进度,以免导致字数不足。

其次,多进行写作练习,培养自己的写作速度和思维的连贯性,这样就可以更快地完成文章。

详解雅思写作Task1常出现的问题

详解雅思写作Task1常出现的问题

详解雅思写作Task1常出现的问题对于雅思写作中的T ask1而言,很多考生容易忽视里面出现的问题。

因为字数少,要求又不多,而且通常都是比较描述等。

所以很多考生都不是特别重视,往往导致得分很低。

因为我们通常要求task 1能拿到高分,这样才能有效为你的雅思写作Task1获得高分。

今天店铺就为大家介绍常出现的两大问题。

详解雅思写作Task1常出现的两大问题雅思写作Task1需要注意的主语问题通常我们在Task 1会遇到很多变化类的图表题,例如表格,柱状,饼状图等。

常常需要描述某数据的变化趋势,以及对比哪些不同,发表一下简单的预测等。

我们可以看下面分析:WRITING TASK 1 (剑9 Test 4 Task 1)You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.通过上述的图表可以得知,Petrol and Oil这条线是能够很轻易的看得出他的变化趋势即整体上升,虽然在一开始这个数据是存在波动的。

于是大多数考生就会写出下面的语句:Petrol and oil increase from 1980 to 2030, despite initial fluctuations.当我们看到这样的语句时,通常喜欢选择正确的谓语动词以及相应的趋势名词来进行描述其变化,但是关键问题是主语在描述数据变化趋势时,广大考生一定要擦亮眼睛,并不是所有的名词都能够作为变化趋势的主语,比如这道题目中上升或者波动的其实并不是汽油和石油,而是它们的消耗量。

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略

雅思写作第一部分满分攻略雅思写作第一部分满分攻略TASK 1写作三大步骤(1)审题:找出主要信息点,具体为两个任务:A: 辨别所要写图表的类型,是线状(line ),柱状(bar ),还是饼状(pie)等B: 找图表的主要内容,是人口变化,交通工具,受教育水平,或者是一项工艺的制作流程。

(2)构思:审题是对文章主要内容的一个大概认识,而构思就是对自己认识的进一步深化。

构思的主要任务为:分析图表的主要特征,弄清写作重点并选用适当的分析方法。

图表的主要特征是指其所描述现象或者问题的规律,并找出描述重点,不是图表上所出现的所有信息都要写出来,之后就是分析方法的选择,主要的分析方法有:数据分类,数据比较,平铺直叙法等,具体选哪种,需要根据图表的内容来确定。

(3)写作:写作是对前两个步骤的确认。

考生把自己的想法准确而详细的落实下来。

一般来说,这个部分的写作可以采用三或四段式:1)引言段(用简短的语言来描述图表的主要内容)。

一把来说,写作命题会给出的主要信息,如,The line chart below shows thegrowth of households with personal computers in the U.S.通过这句话,我们可以了解图表的主要信息,“美国每个家庭所拥有计算机量的增长变化。

”在这种情况下,考生可以重现组织一下这个具体,在中间加入一些具体的数字和变化年限等,使得阅卷老师一下就明白图表的主要内容。

引言段通用句式如下:This is a table / chart / (line线状 bar柱状pie饼状)graph whichdemonstrate / illustrate / reveal /depict/privide informationabout.............2)图表具体信息描述段:这个段落主要描写体现图表主要特征或总体变化规律的数据或信息,并用恰当的连接词语,如,on contrast , on theotherhand, however, like wise 等,把文章内容紧密的衔接起来。

雅思作文考题审题误区分析

雅思作文考题审题误区分析

雅思作文考题审题误区分析雅思作文考题审题误区分析下面雅思为大家整理了雅思大作文审题误区分析,供考生们参考,以下是详细内容。

雅思大作文审题误区题目的题干主次不分一个完整的雅思考题,一般是由题干部分和提问部分组成。

题干部分通常是一到二个句子,这二个句子之间的逻辑关系一般为因果,转折或者并列。

若是并列关系的话,前后这二个句子意思的重要性是一致的,但是若题干部分是因果或者转折关系时,意思的重点就放在了表示结果的和表示转折的这个句子上了,于是另外一个句子就变成了次要意思。

而很多考生在考试或者平时训练时,往往会很想当然地把题干中一些比较熟悉的单词当作题目的重心,然后马上就提笔展开写作。

其实这是很不对的。

下面我们来看一个考题:Scientificand technological advances bring benefits to our daily life. However,mostscientists are no longer able to find solutions to the problems they havecreated. To what extent do you agree or disagree?可能读了这个题目后很多考生会觉得接下来的'作文里至少有一段是要去论证一下科技进步给生活带来的哪些好处或者便利。

其实如果你写了这个内容的话那么就大错特错了。

题干的逻辑关系是转折,这就意味着转折词以后的部分是题干的主要意思,前面那个句子只是用来进行背景铺垫或者对比的作用。

因此,我们在对这篇作文进行段落布局的时候一个方面是要去论述一下为什么科学家很难找到解决科技进步所造成问题的解决方案,而另外一个方面则需说明一下科学家们已经或者可以或者有能力找到所有或一些解决办法。

这样的双边论证从思路上才是正确的。

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雅思OG写作Test6 Task1解析

雅思OG写作Test6 Task1解析

智课网IELTS备考资料雅思OG写作Test6 Task1解析摘要:雅思OG写作提供详尽的写作思路,让考生明确如何合理的构建框架。

并且对范文进行完整的分解,点出范文亮点,供考生学习模仿。

一起看看小编带来的雅思OG写作Test6 Task1解析。

小马过河为考生做了雅思 OG写作Test6 Task1的解析:雅思OG写作审题要领(Task focus)这篇小作文是一张线形图(line chart),显示了2003-2012 年,发生在纽波特中心城区三种犯罪事件发生率的变化。

考生需要提取并总结主要信息,同时做出相关对比。

从图表信息我们可以看到,纵轴显示了事件的数量(number of incidents),横轴表示从 2003-2012 的时间发展。

三个犯罪事件分别是入室盗窃 (burglary)、车辆盗窃(car theft)和人身抢劫(robbery)。

雅思OG写作写作思路(Thinking before writing)考生需要在 150 字之内对图表里的信息进行概括,有侧重的描写主要特征,必要时选择适当省略。

我们要特别注意这张线形图中突出的以及变化的信息。

比较突出的信息是:在 2003 年,入室盗窃的犯罪率最高, 其次是车辆盗窃,人身抢劫的比率最低。

但是到了 2012 年,车辆盗窃成了发生率最高的犯罪事件,人身抢劫的发生率仍然最低。

变化最明显的信息是:从 2003 到 2012 年,变化最大的是入室盗窃率,总体呈大幅下降的趋势。

变化最小的是人身抢劫,其犯罪率一直处在比较低的范围。

根据所获得的信息,推荐的写法是将主体段分为三段,分别描写三种犯罪形式的变化情况,这是比较理想的行文方式,结构清晰,且便于进行内容之间的比较。

雅思OG写作范文演示(Sample analysis)Model ResponseThis graph illustrates how crime rates altered in Newport inner city during the period2003-2012. We can see immediately that the greatest change occurred in the number of burglaries, while incidentsof theft remained low but steady.In 2003, we can see that burglary was the most common crime, with approximately 3,400 reported cases. The figure rose to around 3,700 in 2004, but then there was a downward trend until 2008. At this point the figure stood at justover 1,000 incidents. This rose slightly in 2009, then continued to fluctuate for the remaining period.In 2003, the number of cars being stolen stood at around 2,800 and followed a similar trend to burglary until 2006. Atthis point the number rose, standing at around 2,200 in 2007. There was a marginal decrease in the following year, but from then on, the trend was generally upwards.Finally, robbery has always been a fairly minor problem for Newport. The number of offences committed changed little over nine years. It is interesting to note that the figure of approximately 700 in 2003 is the same figure for 2012. (187 words)雅思OG写作范文亮点(Sample highlights)第 1 段:改写原题第一段通常为题目的改写或提炼。

雅思写作之真题解析

雅思写作之真题解析

雅思写作之真题解析当拿到一道大作文题目去分析时,我们不仅仅需要去读懂题目本身的意思,同时还得了解到题目所涉及的是哪一类话题,它所考察的是一个什么能力,题目中是否有一些关键词需要格外注意以及对于这道题目所能想到的一些观点论证。

本文中,文都国际教育老师将和大家一起探讨两道典型的教育类话题。

As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn its language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?审题:题目翻译:作为教育的一部分,学生应该要花一段时间去海外学习和生活来学习当地的语言和文化。

你在多大程度上同意或者不同意?能力考查:这个教育类话题是同意不同意的考试指令,考查考生对于考官所呈现的社会现象或所表达的观点是否能够清晰地给出自己的想法并加以有效论证。

一般来讲,碰到这种指令,理论上是可以写完全支持或者反对的,但是还是建议大家尽量尝试用折中的写法,即部分同意部分反对。

这种一分为二的思考方式可以在考场上帮助你快速想出观点并进行有效作答,另外这种答题模式也不太会发生偏题的情况。

框架构造:Partly agree1. 开头段(用于引出题目背景,并且表明自己的态度)2. 论证出国学习和生活对于学习语言和文化的重要性3. 但是,反面论证这种做法对于部分学生是不现实的4. 结尾(再次重申自己的观点,并且可以给出自己的建议)Sample answer:Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL. Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition. As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes. Compared with second-hand experience, living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market. Meanwhile, living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief.However, it would be unrealistic if all students are encouraged to participate in it. First of all, considering students themselves, those who lack learning and adaptive ability may find it hard to integrate into local life and sometimes they will feel disappointed or even depressed because of culture shocks and language barriers. Tuition fees and life expenses can be another problem. Different from rich students, those who come from working-class families or needy families cannot afford such a big cost to study overseas. For example, studying in UK for one year may cost one student nearly 300 thousand, which is far from affordability.To sum up, an experience of studying and living overseas can help students to speak good language and understand the local culture well. However, it is not a practical way for most ordinary families unless they make full preparations.思路分析:Introduction:Going abroad for further study has become more of a trend as large numbers of students participate in international language tests, such as IELTS or TOEFL.(用最熟悉的事件引出背景)Some academics advocate that an experience of learning in foreign countries is a necessary part of education for language betterment and language acquisition.(对于题目的改写)As for me, however, such practice should be considered with discretion.(在段落的最后,用一句话表明出自己的观点)Body 1:主题句:Admittedly, studying and living in another country can be an effective way to achieve the mentioned purposes.(其中mentioned purposes指的是题目中的掌握语言和文化,为了避免重复,改用其他方式来表达)支撑论点部分:Compared with second-hand experience, (用了对比论证手法,强调国外生活与学习的好处)living in the native environment can provide students with many opportunities to use the language to communicate with local people. Such language ability can make them be more competitive in the future job market.(凸显对于语言的好处,使用了因果论证来说明语言的重要性) Meanwhile,(论点之间的连接词) living experiences can help students to have a deep insight into local life, including history, culture as well as religious belief. (论证了对于文化的帮助,使用including来举出文化的一些典型表现)。

雅思写作五大疑惑解答

雅思写作五大疑惑解答

雅思写作五大疑惑解答雅思写作五大疑惑解答雅思写作是最难以把握的,因为没有绝对的正确答案。

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1. 考官是怎么改卷子的?标准是怎样的?所谓知己知彼,百战百胜,所以考官是怎么改卷子的,他以什么为标准的评分是雅思作文尤为重要的一点。

在悉尼大学语言中心工作。

他改作文的模式非常非常的mechanical,他说考官一般会在1小时内改六份作文(including task 1 and task2),那就是说平均5分钟改一篇。

在这五分钟里,他就死死地盯着评分规则,从task response, coherence and cohesion, lexical resources, grammatical range and accuracy这四个方面评分。

而且让我无比深刻的是:雅思是一门语言能力考试,它侧重于测试学生的语言表达能力,而不是思维能力。

记住:关键是语言表达。

2. 雅思写作7分是什么样的概念?(a)task responseaddresses all parts of the taskpresents a clear position throughout the reponsepresents, extend and supports main ideas, but there may be a tendency to over-generalise and/or supporting ideas may lack focus首尾都要回答问题,允许泛泛而谈。

这就是说,我们没必要花太多的精力去考虑观点是否绝对严谨是否意义深刻,关键是要告诉考官你的思考逻辑。

这就是剑桥雅思的魅力,它要考你的不是你的思维能力,而是你的语言表达能力。

哪怕在ridiculous的观点,只要你能用最恰当的语言去表达,你也可以同样得7分。

《剑桥雅思13》写作大作文分析

《剑桥雅思13》写作大作文分析

剑桥雅思写作大作文题型分析在题目类型方面,剑13的四篇大作文中2篇同意与否大作文,1篇双边观点讨论大作文以及1篇报告类大作文(原因和解决办法)。

从题型数量上来看,同意与否类型无疑是剑13的贴心小棉袄,然鹅剑13却未曾出现利弊分析(Advantages and Disadvantages)和利弊分析姊妹版(Positive or Negative)的题目,这需要引起“烤鸭们”的注意。

纵观2018年上半年的雅思写作考试,同意与否(Agree or Disagree)类型的大作文占比较高,而其他题型的占比相对处于弱势状态。

并且剑13再次强调了同意与否类型大作文的重视,“烤鸭们”需要在备考阶段注意强化同意与否类型大作文的审清题目、寻找立场、提出分论点、展开思路和深入论证等。

剑桥雅思写作大作文话题分析从话题大类上来看,Test 1、2、4均为社会问题,Test 3为学校教育问题,并未出现极其冷门或偏门的话题类型,这也是2018年雅思官方已经举办的考试同样突显出来的趋势和特点,社会类问题和教育类话题依旧是大作文考察的主要方向。

从题目审题难度上来看,雅思官方逐渐加大对题目本身审题题眼的设置与限定,进一步考察“烤鸭们”的逻辑论证和思辨能力,除了Test 3学校教育问题题目中的广大“烤鸭们”较为熟悉的绝对化表达(比如:one of the most important),还增设了have to, as well as, too many, in spite of等单词的修饰,这从一个侧面反应了雅思写作考试的审题难度日渐加大,如何准确找准立场并深入展开论证是今后备考的重中之重。

剑桥雅思写作大作文逐题分析Test1从内容归类上来看,Test 1主要围绕语言及其可能导致的社会问题和实际问题,其实,在剑桥雅思真题中对语言话题的考察频率还不算低,比如剑9中两次提到了对语言的考察,一篇大作文询问的是语言逐渐消亡与生活难易程度的关系,一篇大作文落脚点是在小学比在中学学外语更好。

17 雅思7分备考完全指南 雅思写作考场实战技巧 审题的3大死穴

17 雅思7分备考完全指南 雅思写作考场实战技巧 审题的3大死穴

考场第一环—审题雅思写作的审题很重要,在平时重要,在时间宝贵的1小时考场中更为重要。

你是愿意思考 10 分钟,然后写 30 分钟,还是愿意写 5 分钟,思考 5 分钟,再写 5 分钟,又思考 5 分钟呢?动笔之前,预设好整个行动图,你将最快从雅思写作的 5 分深渊里逃出生天。

来看审题的 3 大死穴。

对于雅思写作 Task 2 而言,审题贯穿四大评分标准,其重要性也是可见一斑。

其中影响最大的就是 Task Response 这一部分。

审题重要性要写出高分作文就必须 sufficiently addresses all parts of the task 即充分回应写作任务的各个部分。

如果审题错误,那么文章大部分篇幅都没有在回答问题,或者只是回答了部分问题,如果分论点错误,那么也就不可能 presents a well-developed response to the question with relevant, extended and supported ideas 就写作任务中的问题进行较为充分的回应,并提出相关的、得以延伸的以及含有论据的论点。

其次会影响的就是Coherence and Cohesion,虽然审题错误并不怎么影响 manage all aspects of cohesion well 各种衔接手段运用得当,以及 uses paragraphing sufficiently and appropriately 充分且合理地使用分段,但是 sequences information and ideas logically 将信息与论点进行有逻辑的排序会,就会出现问题。

最后影响到的是Lexical Resource,所有词汇的使用可能并不扣题,也是达到高分的阻碍之一,而对于Grammatical Range and Accuracy,也就是语法部分的影响比较小。

审题中常见错误1. 偏题在雅思大作文中,如果审题不清很容易出现文不对题,即偏题。

雅思写作高分六大要点

雅思写作高分六大要点

雅思写作高分六大要点确定文章的框架和结构是雅思议论文写作的前提,熟练的掌握大量的词汇是雅思议论文写作的基础也是大家拿到高分的重要保障。

今天文都国际教育小编就给大家介绍下雅思写作高分六大要点。

雅思写作高分六大要点1.审题真的太重要了,你作文写的再好,跑题了也是根本没有什么用。

所以首要的就是学会如何审题,能够快速有效的把握重点。

怎样做到有效的读题:我们可以先通读题目,了解文章大意,再细读题目,分析句子中的逻辑关系,最后再辨别关键词,区分主题词和限定词。

雅思写作高分六大要点2.对于考官来说,考生的雅思写作思路是否清晰真的很重要。

我们备考时除了说做相关的题目练习之外,最好还要多阅读一些英文报刊之类的文章,这样有助于打开我们的写作思路。

如果实在没有办法那么广泛的阅读,可以多阅读专门为考试编写的思路拓展书。

雅思写作高分六大要点3.确定文章的框架和结构是雅思议论文写作的前提文章的framework(结构)是决定一篇作文是否达到要求的标准,一篇作文好与否,首先不是看他的句型,词汇,段落之间的衔接一定要非常清楚,我们跟小学生写记叙文一样,开头经过结尾。

我们可以多使用像firstly,secondly,moreover,last but not least这样的连接词。

加上多分自然段,一目了然,清清楚楚,考官就容易给高分。

雅思写作高分六大要点4.论点详实,论证充分。

不要老写一些抽象的大道理,看了真的很烦呢!其实跟写中文作文一样,举几个例子可以让你的作文更生动,还能充实文章字数,何乐而不为呢?雅思议论文的重要技巧可就是for example哦~雅思写作高分六大要点5、熟练的掌握大量的词汇是雅思议论文写作的基础也是大家拿到高分的重要保障。

说实话做到这点真的很难,首先你要有庞大的词汇量,第二你要用的恰当,不出错误。

当然大家可以累计一些固定搭配的词汇,列如:激烈的竞争fierce competition等。

这个就要平时多看地道英语,积累句型和词汇搭配,熟悉英语的习惯表达方法。

雅思写作大作文专用讲义

雅思写作大作文专用讲义

第一讲雅思写作考试对中国考生的四个难点(Chapter 1: The Four Hurdles in IELTS Writing Test)难点一: Academic Writing 学术类写作问题的特殊要求(改错练习) 1. Since private companies don't care much about the public interests, so the government has a significant role to play in scientific research. (不能缩写)2. Why these travellers damage the environment should be analyzed. (英式美式拼法不能混用)3. We must do our best(utmost) to protect (preserve) animals. (词汇用法太嫩)4. It is clear (manifest) that pornographic shows do harm to (undermine, endanger, jeopardy) the lives of lots of youngster (adolescent).词汇,专有特定的修饰5. Nowadays (In present-day society), human beings face big challenges in many areas.6. In these day and age, many companies have replaced telephone with internet.7. We are confronted with many environmental problems. They are becoming more and more serious. (句式,语法)8. The traffic problem is becoming worse. We must work together to solve it.(句子结构)9. So individuals, communities and the government all must work hard tofight crime! (不应该带感情色彩)10. We must be friendly to other because the Bible said, "Treat your neighbors as you would like to be treated." (文化背景,圣经不可用)难点二: No specific topic pool. 题库大,没有公开,而且题目变化多.对策:掌握思考素材的四种方法对策: 雅思写作"语法的七宗罪"改错练习1. Employee can benefit more from telecommuting than employee. (n.可数不可数)2.1 Work at home using modern technology can greatly enhance our efficiency. (v.原型不可做主语)2.2 Children who are raise in impoverished families can generally deal with problems more effectively in their adult years. (被动语态)Poor children can face problems when they grow up.2.3 The problems that are created by environmental contamination is very hard to resolve. (主谓一致)2.4 In present-day society, cultures were becoming very similar. (时态)3. Intelligent students should not be treated different by their teachers. 副词4.1 Countries should pay attention on the disadvantages globalization may create. 介词4.2 The Internet has instead of teachers in many classrooms.5. Some parents do not obey traffic rules himself.6. These old buildings should be destroyed, new buildings must be constructed. 逗号7. These are a great many children think the main purpose of education should be to afford them pleasure and enjoyment.补充材料IELTS 作文复杂句的七种内部关系(Seven possible relationships Underlying a complex sentence)Cause and effect因果关系标志词1)表示原因的because, as, since, due to, owing to (画横线的连接词请重点掌握)2)表示结果的hence(因此),thus(因此),therefore(因此),As a consequence,…(作为结果)Accordingly…(相应的),As a result…(作为结果)Consequently…(作为结果) so…that…(如此…以致…)E.g. The ecological problems are being aggravated. Hence, it is imperative that we take measures to curb the pollution of the environment. 生态系统正在急剧的恶化,因此,我们必须采取严厉的措施遏制对环境的污染.Exemplification 举例关系标志词…is a case in point.(某人或某事是一个恰当的例子.)Take…for example.(以…为例) for instance. (比如…) To Illustrate…(例如…) As an illustration…(作为例证…)e.g. The Asian countries are getting westernized at a staggering rate. TakeChina for example, when youngsters go to the movies, it is standard practice for them to choose Hollywood blockbuster over domestic films. 亚洲国家正以一种惊人的速度变得西方化,以中国为例,当年轻人去电影院的时候,通常都会选择好莱坞大片而不是中国电影. Comparison and contrast 对比关系标志词While …,whereas…,whilst…,in contraste.g. Whereas/ while modern man is so rushed and so stressed, our ancestors could oftenperform their business in a relaxed manner.(对比)现代人的生活是如此的奔忙与紧X,而我们的祖先却可以不慌不忙的从事他们的事务.e.g. The educational and medical facilities in big cities are mostly very advanced. In contrast, their counterparts in the country tend to be of inferior quality.Concession 让步关系标志词Despite /in spite of …(后面只能跟名词名词词组或者动名词)(尽管有…),albeit…(尽管,后面只能跟形容词或者介词短语), 形容词+as it may be…(尽管,前面只能加形容词),Nonetheless/Nevertheless,(尽管如此)e.g. 1 Tough as it may be to get accustomed to a new culture, it will prove very rewarding.尽管适应新的文化可能很难,但这会被证明是很值得的.2 Rote Learning is at times necessary, albeit monotonous.死记硬背有时候是必要的,尽管很枯燥和机械.3The government plays a crucial role in scientific research, Nonetheless, private companies hold certain advantages in conducting scientific research.Definition 下定义关系标志词A is best characterized by…( A 最明显的特征是…),A constitutes…(A 构成…) A means…, A consists of …(A 由…组成).e.g. A fine journalist is best characterized by discipline, determination and keen observations.一个好的记者最重要的特点是自律,毅力和敏锐的观察.Animal experimentation, in some cases, constitutes callous abuse of test animals.Supposition假设论证, 标志词provided that…(如果) given the choice…(如果可以选择的话…)only if…(只有…)as long as…(只要) if…, suppose that…e.g. Provided that we can minimize the pain of test animals, animal experimentation should be continued.e.g. Given the choice, many people would live in big cities rather than the countryside.Modification 修饰关系标志词that, which, whoIn this day age, we have a proliferation of buildings that look exactly likethe buildings our ancestors built.Today, teenage students are under increasingly severe stress in their studies, which has disturbed and alarmed many adults.补充资料IELTS 写作考试的常用模板和句型进步类1) In contemporary society, the human race is advancing at an unprecedented rate in a multitude of arenas.=in many fields. 在当今社会,人类正以前所未有的速度在很多领域向前发展.2) Today we have embarked upon the …era. 今天,我们已经进入了…的时代.We have embarked on the information era. –he has embarked on the road of committing crimes.3) Since the advent/arrival of the…era… 随着…时代的到来…例句:Since the advent of the information era, our efficiency at work has been greatly enhanced.随着信息时代的到来,我们的工作效率得到了很大的提高.例句 2 With the advent of the information era, school education has undergone profound changes at an accelerated rate.倒退类4) But A is accompanied by B 但是伴随着…(某种好现象)的到来,某种坏现象也出现了.例句:But the proliferation of English is accompanied by the extinction of many lesser-known languages.但是随着英语的广泛传播的是大量小语种的消亡.5) Accompanying all the advantages brought about by the profound social changes have come some sufferings; and …is very prominent among them. 随着深刻的社会变革带来的种种好处,出现了很多问题,…是其中很显著的一个.Please analyze causes of traffic congestion, and give some solutions. Accompanying all the conveniences brought about by violent social changes have come some negative effects, and traffic congestion is the most pressing one / the most serious one.6) With the incidence(发生率) of …hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed. …的发生率居高不下,这引起了很多人的困扰和警觉.Traffic offenses have become a problem confronting modern people, please give some suggestions of how to deal with it effectively.With the incidence of traffic accidents hovering at high level, many people, especially sociologist and anthropologist, have shown great concern.7) In this day a nd age, it is standard practice for … to do something. 今天,某些人做某事是很普遍的.例句:In this day and age, it is standard practice for parents to rush around all day busying themselves with their work. Many of them cannot spare some time to take care of their children,which has led to some serious social consequences. This essay will make some analysis concerning this phenomenon.8) Such a grave situation merits our careful attention.这样一个严重的情况值得我们关注.Juvenile delinquency is an issue/topic worth our concern / discussion / analysis.Efforts will be made to analyze this topic in this essay.9) The issue of … has been thrown into sharp focus. …引起了人们的强烈关注.例句:Soaring car ownership has thrown the issue of car accidents into public attention / widespread concern.10) Howev er, there is no consensus on …yet. 或者people hold divergent /contrasting/conflicting view on… 或者people are divided over… 不同的人关于某个问题持不同的看法.例句:People hold contrasting views on animal experiments.人们对动物试验持不同的看法.Some people hold that the experimentation on animals is justified. However, others believe that this practice is a reflection of cruelty. From my perspective, it is advantageous to some degree whilst its drawbacks can never be overlooked. / As for some experiments, animals are irreplaceable subjects but I think we should be kind as possible as we can when carrying out these experiments. /I think this practice is to some extent cruel and unjust to animals but at least in the near future we cannotget rid of it completely.11) Something has been growing at an alarming/ staggering rate. 某事物正在以令人震惊的速度增长.例句:With the car ownership soaring in China, traffic accidents have been growing at an alarming/staggering rate. Accompanied by the dramatic development of society, women crimes have been growing at an alarming rate. Such a grave situation has aroused widespread concern, especially sociologist and educationists. In essay attempts will be made to explore the causes of this issue and provide some feasible solutions.12) Whether…has triggered /aroused heated debate / discussion.是否应该…引起了激烈的辩论Whether… is an issue open to debate 或者Whether…is a controversial issue. 例句:Whether student should appraise their teachers' performance is an issue open to debate.是否学生应该评价老师的教学是一个没有定论的问题.13) Some (people) assert/ argue/hold/maintain/claim/assume that… 有一些人认为…例句:Some people assert that relocating large companies to the countryside is the best way to resolve the traffic and housing problems in cities. 一些人认为把大公司搬到乡村是解决城市交通和住房的最好方法.14) …is largely fuelled by...某现象主要是被…所推动.例句:The proliferation of plastic bag is largely fuelled by the pursuit for lowercosts.IELTS 议论文主体段写作加分37句型前进类1 profit fromPeople throughout the world can profit from the advancement in motorized flight.Flight to transport fruits to places where there is no such fruits or not in season.Mobile phones can bring about some drawbacks such diseases. Whether we should avoid using mobile phones.People throughout the world / in every corner of the world can profit from the advancement of information technology. Nowadays we can keep in touch with each other and communicate with our friends or clients quickly by means of mobiles phones. However, some research reveals that mobile phone may cause some medical complaints and thus it is suggested that we should cease using them. In my viewpoint, the advantages of mobile phones outweigh the disadvantages.2 A is an integral /indispensable part of BAdvertising has become an indispensable part of our lives and it has been exerting profound influence on the way we live, work, play and learn.3,S omething plays a pivotal /key role in …It is universally acknowledged that education plays a pivotal role in individual success.4, Enable /allow somebody to do somethingCultural assimilation enables newly-arrived immigrants to get ahead in the new societysuccessfully.5get accustomed to do something/adjust to /adapt toNew immigrants must get accustomed to the local culture to succeed.6Someone can have access to something 或者can access something 或者can utilize somethingIn this day and age, many individuals can have access to the Internet via /by means of computer or mobile phone.倒退类1…is attended by /…is accompanied byThe staggering advancement of technology is attended by severe pollution of the ecosystem.2The more…the more…The more vehicles on the road, the more traffic congestions to occur.3A can be attributed to B 或者B stems from AThe proliferation of traffic accidents can be in large measure attributed to the traffic law not being stringent enough.4be afflicted with/be plagued withIn present-day society, a host of countries are afflicted with chronic poverty.5deprive someone of somethingModern cities deprive city-dweller of fresh air and the comfortable pace of life.6something prompt/impe ls somebody to do…Peer pressure often impels youngster to spend excessively on fancy clothes and accessories.7A has rendered B + adj./noun 形容词或名词We must ensure that technological innovations will not render us slaves to high technology. 其中We must ensure that..意思是我们必须确保…我们必须确保科技创新不会让我们变成高科技的奴隶.The fast-paced way of life has rendered many people alienated from one another.With the acceleration of living tempo, modern people are confronted with many physical and psychological problems. Among them, stress is the most prominent one. This has brought about numerous negative social consequences and aroused widespread concern especially among psychiatrists and sociologist. This essay focuses on exploring the causes and providing some ways to relieve stress.快节奏的生活让很多人彼此疏远.8A recent study conducted by the organization / association / institution /union / scientist reveal that…如果是教育问题用UNESCO如果是犯罪问题可以用the Ministry of Justice 交通问题可以用the Ministry of Transportation 建筑问题可以用the Ministry of Construction 环境问题可以HSUS and GreenpeaceA recent study conducted by HSUS and Greenpeace suggested that there were over one million mammals in lab cages today.9 be addicted to /preoccupied with somethingIn present-day society, many individuals are addicted to /preoccupied with various forms of gambling.10 something is the chief culprit in 或者something is the root cause of …The population explosion is the chief culprit in water scarcity.11be confronted with somethingIn contemporary society, we are confronted with a large number of violent and pornographic TV shows.12 present/pose a threat to…In contemporary society, the proliferation of non-biodegradable rubbish poses a grave threat to humanity.13 be awash with/be inundated with somethingThe media are be awash with/be inundated with detailed crime coverage.14 if…something will ensueIf parents neglect their offspring, lack of discipline and respect will ensue. 15With the incidence of … hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.With the incidence of driving offenses hovering at high levels, many have become disturbed and alarmed.16something is unwarranted /unjustifiableExperimenting upon lab animals without trying to alleviate their pain is unwarranted/unjustifiable.中间类1…on the grounds that…Some others oppose to animal experimentation on the grounds that it is inhumane.2 exert beneficial/ baneful/ profound influence on somethingIn this day and age, globalization is exerting profound impact on the way we work, live,play and learn.3 A prevail over / outweigh/ outbalance BThe advantages of imposing stiffer punishment on driving offender prevail over the disadvantages.4 A bring about/ generate/ breed/ engender/ spawn /induce B. Technological innovations have brought about profound changes to the political, economical and cultural arenas.5 A is a key determinant of BIn an individual's career, tenacity is a key determinant of success.6 It is manifest that …或者It is universally acknowledge that…It is manifest that globalization can also engender a host of banes to the lives of people in the third-world countries.解决类1 give priority to somethingThe government should give priority to the optimization of its financial resources.2 dedicated A to BThe government should dedicate more money to the alleviation of chronic poverty.3 be likely to fall prey to / be vulnerable toWithout proper parental guidance, children are very vulnerable to the violent or pornographic content on TV shows.4 something should be condemned rather than condoned(押尾韵) Indiscriminate copying of traditional architectural style today should be condemned ratherthan condoned.5 it is imperative/ crucial/ key/ essential that… 或者something is of paramount/ overriding importance.To the newly-arrived immigrants, it is imperative that they adapt to the local culture immediately.6 abide by/ comply withIt is essential that government pass more stringent laws to compel drivers to abide by/ comply with the law.7 something requires/ necessit ates /call for…The grave ecological problem requires/ necessitates/ call for joint effort of all the nations on the globe.8 distinguish between A and BMany youngsters lack the capacity to distinguish between right and wrong.9 must ensure thatParents must ensure that they dedicate enough time and energy to their offspring.结尾段常用模板1) based on the above discussion, I am convinced that…(用于一边倒文章的结尾段)基于以上的讨论,我确信…2) In the final analysis, I concede that… However, ….On balance…(用于折衷式文章结尾段) 作为最后总结,我承认…但是…综合起来看… 3) The upside of something, outweighs its downside 或者the strengths of something,prevail over its weaknesses或者the pros of something outbalance its cons.某事利大于弊(如果弊大于利把顺序颠倒一下就可以了)IELTS 作文常用同义词人类the human race, humanity, man, humankind, Homo sapiens在当代in contemporary society, in present-day society, in this day and age解决(及物动词)tackle, address, resolve, combat破坏(及物动词)undermine, jeopardize, devastate(最后一个与其最强)影响(名词)impact, repercussions, ramifications, implications危险(名词)perils, hazards, dangers明显的(形容词)manifest, apparent, evident, obvious从事(及物动词)carry out, conduct, perform, go about积极的,好的beneficial, advantageous消极的,坏的baneful, detrimental好处-坏处benefits, blessings, boons—banes, pros—cons, advantages—disadvantages, merit—demerit无处不在的prevalent, pervasive大量的a host of, a multitude of, a vast number of (后面跟可数名词复数) a great deal of, a vast amount of(后面跟不可数名词单数)增进enhance代替improve 贫穷的impoverished代替poor保护preserve代替protect 富裕的affluent/wealthy代替rich污染contamination代替pollution 需要(及物动词)require, necessitate, call for第二讲十大全真版本X文,词汇与模板Education 类Some peoplethink students should be allowed to evaluate their teachers' job performance. Others believe that will lead to loss of respect and discipline. Discuss and give your own opinion.开头段(不少于4句)In this day and age, it is standard practice for business executive to fill out performance-evaluation forms to give their assessment of their subordinates' work. But when it comes to the evaluation of school teachers' job performance by their students, people hold divergent views. Some argue that students should be allowed to do so. Others contend that disrespect and indiscipline will ensue if students evaluate their teachers work. Personally, I believe both these two views have some merit.主体段1(不少于5句)Granted, there could be some possible drawbacks to students evaluating their teachers' work. First, if not well-managed, evaluation by the students may be completely worthless or even misleading. It is manifest that not all students would give their evaluation responsibly and some students may make mean comments. Secondly, some students criticize their teacher not because their teachers have a slack attitude about their job. Rather they do so because they dislike or even despise schooling.主体段2(不少于7句)However, encouraging students to evaluate their teacher can bring about more boons. In the first place, it is an effective means of motivating theteachers to improve their lectures.Teachers have to keep adjusting their teaching to measure up to the expectations of the student. In the second place, regular input affords the teacher objective and balanced ideas about their own performance. Without such feedback, it is hard for the teacher to have accurate assessment of their own teaching. In the third place, a measure of students' autonomy can make the student better prepared for their adult life. The student becomes better at decision-making and critical thinking.结尾段(不少于3句)In the final analysis, I concede that enabling the student to evaluate their teachers' performance might have some potential drawback. However, by averaging out student's appraisal and encourage them to evaluate responsibly can eliminate the downside of this practice. On balance, I am convinced that allowing students to evaluate their teachers is in the best interests of students, teachers, school administrators, and the society as a whole.教育类8分X文Children who grow up in families without large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with problems in their adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree题目点评:这道题目是IELTS writing task2当中比较少见的"看着容易写好太难"的题目(很多IELTS作文题目看起来很难,写好却不一定特别难).首先要注意到区别"families without large amounts of money" 和"poor families" 这两个概念的差异,前者不仅仅指"low-income families" 还包括"middle-income families", 所以题目的意思和一些同学概括的"穷人的孩子早当家不同";另外一个误区在于因为这道题目和中国的文化比较贴近,很多同学会举过多的简单生活事例但是忽略了推理,论证缺乏深度.从论点上看,考虑到多数考生更熟悉中国的国情,肯定是totally agree 更好写,布什的内阁里面现在也有拉洋板儿出生的(不过美国的富豪的孩子当中牛人还是出了不少,四十三位总统里面也有大量的富家子弟,从整体上看西方有钱的家长更舍得让自己的孩子经历风雨).既然观点写一边倒,那么结果当然就是五段式――开头段转述题目+主旨句,主体段1讲一般家庭的孩子比富家孩子有更强的心理承受能力,主体段2讲一般家庭的孩子有更强的独立性,主体段3讲普通家庭的家长对小孩的要求往往更严格,几位段总结上三层意思.Thesis statement 和topic sentences (X文里用横线标明) 关键词:income gaps 指收入差距income inequality 指收入不均intergenerational 两代人之间的turn the table 是个idiom, 有点像中文说的"打翻身仗" offspring 孩子counterpart 相对应的人(或事务) meritocratic society 说白了就是"凭本事吃饭的社会"self-restraint 自制能力infancy 婴儿期frugality 勤俭financial strains 说白了就是缺钱,名词well-off/affluent (adj)/ well-to-do/ well heeled/ wealthy 自己管理自己,名词initiative 主动性well-acquainted 对某事很熟悉,mitigate缓解,要说解决问题,雅思里面词汇也特多tackle/ address/ solve resolve grapple with /combat 再加题目里面的deal with,大家挑着用啦It is widely accepted that we have been living in a "the rich get richer whereas the poor get poorer" age in terms of income gaps within a generation. However, to this day, there has been no consensus yet over the extent to which income inequality is intergenerational. Some contend that the offspring of low-income and middle-income parents can largely grow up manifest better problem-solving abilities during adulthood than their high-income family counterparts thereby turning the table socially and financially. Personally, I believe this is generally the case in any meritocratic society. (Thesis statement) First and foremost, children raised in household not in possession of a good fortune are conditioned early on in their lives to exercise self-control and self-restraint. These individuals learn from their infancy onward that not everything they crave will become theirs instantaneously. Every so often their wishes go beyond their parents' means and they have to come to terms with the resulting sense of frustration or rejection. Throughout the childhood and early adulthood years they are tempered by the repeated experiences of parents' denial of their requests and frugality is inculcated into their minds as a virtue. Consequently these children, for the most part, are apt to interpret scrimping and saving, emotional uneasiness, not infrequent financialstrains and menial first jobs as an integral part of life rather than a devastating ordeal. Hence they end up being better able to manage stress in their adult years and less likely to panic or get daunted when problems occur.11Further, children brought up by parents of low or middle economic status often grow up to be physically, mentally and professionally more independent than children brought up by affluent parents. It goes without saying that children whose parents are not particularly well-off are more likely than children of affluent households to know how to get the most out of a modest allowance, if they ever get such a thing at all. To the former group of children most desirable things in life have to be "earned"—that is, more often than not they must put forth great effort before their desire is fulfilled. On the other hand, busy, low or medium salaried parents translate into more autonomy and initiative on the children's part. This originally disadvantaged group becomes spontaneous and handy through crafting toy on their own, resourceful by cooking their own meals, tactful with coaxing their parents into buying them gifts, intelligent thanks to the absence of private tutors, savvy in doing summer jobs, and above all, unrelenting in pursuing their dreams. Lastly, non-wealthy parents typically have higher and more definite aspiration for their children than well-to-do parents. Well-acquainted with all thedisadvantages a meager or fair-to-middling bank account generates, many non-wealthy parents pin their hopes on their children to get their families upwardly mobile. These adults mostly have high behavioral, educational and (subsequently) occupational expectations for their children. As a result, they cannot afford to be permissive parents. Spoiling their offspring rotten is the last thing they care to do and they are always ready to discipline their children when they misbehave. They keep tabs on their children's grades at school and do not spare the rod when their offspring do not measure up academically. The odds of children raised in such rigorous environments having good problem-solving skills are apparently better than children raised otherwise. To conclude, the chief determinant of individuals' problem-solving skills is not the amount of money their parents can amass when they are little. Rather, hands-on experience in comprehending, analyzing, resolving, mitigating or circumventing problems is more essential to the cultivation of problem-solving abilities. Hence, I am convinced that families without great wealth are more advantageous to the development of individual capacity to tackle problems.Education 类词汇Education:1) 培养(某种素质)cultivate/ foster/ nurture(vts)促进学生身心发展promote the student's physical, mental (或者用intellectual) andemotional development 心理健康psychological soundness/ well-being/ welfare(nouns) 学习能力(先天就有的)aptitude/ talent 学习能力(后天学习到的)ability/ skill 学生接受的学校教育(名词)schooling(noun) 儿童接受的家庭教育(名词)upbringing(noun) 给学生以动力give the students motivation to do something 或者motivate (vt) the student to do something 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youths2) 传授知识impart(vt)/inculcate(vt) knowledge 灌输高尚的道德观念instill(vt) high moral values (注以values 复数比试价值观) 给学生以灵感stimulate the students; thought 或者give the students inspiration 家长教育子女的方式(名词)parenting/ upbringing 教学法teaching methodology/ pedagogical methodology 适应(动词)adapt to do something/adjust oneself to do something/ become accustomed to do something 适应能力adaptability 学生对老师所教授的知识的掌握students' grasp/ command(nouns) of what has been taught 就业技能employable/ marketable skill 3) 限制创造力的发展extinguish(vt)/ stifle(vt)/ constrain(vt) creativity(noun) 打击学生的积极性dampen/sap(vts) the students' enthusiasm 或者frustrate the students 产生不不要的压力beget/ create undue pressure 塑造某人的性格mould(BrE,vt) one's character 责任感a sense of obligation 学生不应该只是被动的接收简单知识的容器student should not be treated as passive receptacles of predigested ideas. 死记硬背learn thing by rote.4) 记忆方程式,公式,定理,定律memorize equations, formulas,theorems and laws(nouns) 应用apply (vt) 盲从follow something blindly/ indiscriminately(adv) 用填鸭式教学教育学生force-feed(vt) the students 为了记忆而记忆memorize for memorization' s own sake 5) 把学生分开教育(比如根据智力或者课堂上的表现) segregate(vt) students 来自于其他同学的压力peer pressure 逆境adverse circumstances /adversity 团队精神team spirit(noun) 独立思考: think independently(adv) 6) 在理解的基础上学习learn things through understanding 鼓励学生用辨证的眼光看问题encourage students to think critically(adv) 学生的反馈students' feedback 或者students' input 学生评价老师的教学students appraise / evaluate their teachers' performance7) 学生学习的各门功课加在一起curriculum(noun) 具体的一门课的内容syllabus 课外活动extra-curricular activity 学校是社会的缩影A school is society in miniature 不遵守纪律(名词)indiscipline/ misbehavior/ mischief (nouns) 不遵守纪律的(形容词)学生disruptive/ unruly students 8) 理论只是theoretical knowledge 通才generalist 专才specialist 全面发展的well-rounded /versatile 为社会健康发展做贡献contribute to societal well-being/ welfare (注意这里welfare不是"福利"的意思)9) 大学学科的分类可以分为:人文学科(包括文学,历史,语言学等)humanities 社会科学(包括政治,经济,社会学等)social sciences 艺术(包括音乐,雕塑等)arts 文科的总称也可以称为liberal arts 或者liberal studies 理科(包括物理,化学,生物等)sciences 工科(包括工程,自动化等)engineering 大学里的任何一个学科都可以叫做一个discipline 基础科学basic sciences 应用科学applied sciences 小学教育primary-level education 中学教育secondary-level education 大学教育tertiary-level education 职业教育vocational education/ training 青少年adolescents/ youngsters/ youthsEducation 类模板1 In this day and age, it is universally acknowledged that education is one of the key determinant of individual success. 众所周知,在当代教育是一个人成功的决定因素之一.2In contemporary society, education plays a pivotal role in individual development. 在当代社会,教育在个人发展中扮演着至关重要的角色.Technology & media 类科技类2/26 people today can perform the everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions, without meeting others face-to-face. What effects will this phenomenon have on individuals and society as a whole开头段(不少于3+1句)The interactivity of the Internet and the mobile phone has enabled a multitude of people to purchase their desired items or pay their phone bills without stepping out of their offices or homes. And many others can even register for tests or sign contracts online. This。

雅思写作之大作文思路角度分析

雅思写作之大作文思路角度分析

雅思写作之大作文思路角度分析
1.重视以人为本的理念:无论什么样的作文题目,都离不开人的需求和利益。

因此,在分析问题时,需要从人的角度出发,考虑问题对人们的生活、工作、学习等方面的影响。

2.分类讨论:对于一些涉及多种观点或因素的题目,可以采取分类讨论的方法。

根据题目要求,将观点或因素进行分类,然后逐一分析。

3.找到核心词汇:在阅读题目时,要特别注意题目中的核心词汇。

这些词汇通常代表着重要的概念或问题,需要对其进行深入分析。

4.分析因果关系:在分析问题时,需要关注问题产生的原因和影响。

对于原因,可以从不同角度出发,分析可能导致问题的各种因素;对于影响,需要分析问题对个人、社会、国家等方面的影响。

5.给出合理建议:在分析问题后,需要给出合理的建议。

建议应该具有可操作性和针对性,能够有效地解决问题。

6.重视批判性思维:在分析问题时,需要具备批判性思维,能够对问题进行深入思考和分析。

同时,也需要尊重他人的观点,包容不同的声音。

通过以上几个方面的思路角度分析,可以更好地应对雅思大作文的各种题型,提高自己的写作水平和成绩。

雅思写作中常见的逻辑错误及解决方法

雅思写作中常见的逻辑错误及解决方法

雅思写作中常见的逻辑错误及解决方法雅思写作是考生在雅思考试中必须面对的一项重要任务。

然而,许多考生在写作过程中常犯一些逻辑错误,这导致了他们的文章表达不准确、逻辑混乱,严重影响了分数。

本文将就常见的逻辑错误进行分析,并提供一些解决方法,以帮助考生在雅思写作中提升逻辑连贯性和表达准确性。

一、主题偏离主题偏离是指文章的内容与题目要求或所讨论的话题无关。

这种偏离会导致考生没有回答题目,从而失去分数。

解决方法如下:1. 仔细审题:在写作前,考生要仔细审题,理解题目要求,明确自己要表达的主题。

2. 定好大纲:在开始写作之前,先写一个大纲,明确要点,并确保每一段落都与文章主题相关。

二、逻辑混乱逻辑混乱是指文章中的论点、论据和例证之间关系不清晰或不连贯,导致阅读者难以理解或迷失在文章的思路中。

解决方法如下:1. 有条理地组织:在展开论述之前,先整理好思路,明确文章的结构和重点。

可以使用时间顺序、因果关系、对比等方式来组织文章。

2. 使用连词:使用适当的连词(如and,but,however等)来连接不同的段落和句子,使文章的观点和论证逻辑清晰可辨。

三、无力证明无力证明是指论点不够有力,缺乏说服力的问题。

这会导致阅卷官对文章的观点表示怀疑,给文章带来负面影响。

解决方法如下:1. 提供充分的论据:每个论点都需要提供充分的、有力的论据来支持。

可以引用权威的研究结果、实际案例等来增加自己的论证力度。

2. 对反方观点有针对性的辩驳:在提出自己的论点之后,考生要对可能出现的反方观点进行有针对性的辩驳,使自己的观点更有说服力。

四、语法错误语法错误是指文章中存在严重的语法错误,导致句子不通顺、语言表达不准确,进而影响整篇文章的质量。

解决方法如下:1. 多练习语法:在备考雅思写作中,考生需要加强对英语语法的练习,提高自己的语法水平。

2. 使用简单句:如果考生对复杂句的掌握存在困难,可以更多地使用简单句,减少语法错误的发生。

五、过多使用复杂词汇过多使用复杂词汇是指考生为了显示自己的英语水平而使用过于生僻或复杂的词汇,导致读者难以理解。

2024年8月19日雅思笔试写作真题全解析附高分范文

2024年8月19日雅思笔试写作真题全解析附高分范文
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由于环境保护和气候变化话题的专业性,部 分考生可能出现语言表达不准确或使用不恰 当的词汇等问题。
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03 高分范文展示与 技巧指导
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高分范文一:观点明确,论证充分
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题目分析
该题目要求考生就“是否应该禁止在公共场所吸烟”这一话题进行论述
。高分范文在开篇即明确表达了支持禁止吸烟的立场,并围绕此观点展
它由英国文化协会、剑桥大学考试委员会和澳大利亚教育国际开发署共同管理。
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写作部分重要性
写作是雅思考试的四个部分之 一,占总分的25%。
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良好的写作能力不仅有助于在 雅思考试中取得高分,还对学 术和职业生涯有长远影响。
道理论证
运用普遍认可的道理、原则或理论来阐述自己的观点和论据,提高文章的权威性和可信度 。所引用的道理应该与文章主题密切相关,表述准确、清晰。
对比论证
通过对比不同观点、现象或事实来突出自己的观点和论据的正确性和优越性。所对比的内 容应该具有可比性和针对性。
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忽视题目要求
偏离主题
部分考生可能过于关注图表或数据本身, 而忽略了题目要求的分析和阐述主题。
在讨论环境保护和气候变化问题时,考生 可能不自觉地偏离主题,过多涉及其他不 相关的话题。
缺乏深度分析
语言表达不准确
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雅思写作审题难点解析
雅思写作审题的重要性是不容小觑的,雅思写作审题是决定了整篇文章方向最重要的一个步骤,而在中国考生中也有不少的学生因为雅思写作审题偏差造成满盘皆输,而只获得低分的写作,下面就让小编针对雅思写作审题难点解析给大家:
雅思写作的审题难度
1、 There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?
这个题目属于优缺点讨论,但很多考生看到第一问就觉得这题目和常规的讨论类分析的题目问题模式有所不同。

我们在审题的时候会发现第二问就是常规的优缺点讨论,可以得出用双边论证来写。

再回头看第一问中有个they,指代的是第一句中的social, medical and technical problems,所以我们必须在论证的时候要回答这个问题,即要写三个方面的缺点。

所以此类问题的应对策略为问什么答什么。

下面再看一题,也属于此种类型。

2、 The development of technology changes the way people connect with each other. In which way does the development of technology change the types of relationships among people? Does it have positive or negative effects on the relationships?
上题第二问也是优缺点讨论,而第一问问科技的进步对人们交往的影响,那我们在论证中也要回答这个问题。

可以两问相结合,即先回答科技进步都交往的影响,如手机、互联网等的发展,然后分别论证其两者的优缺点。

下面一题也是属于这种两问相结合的问题模式,这是一个多选题,考生可以双边论证,正文分别列举最重要和最不重要的两至三门课程进行论证。

3、 Most countries spend much money on education, as they start to realize the important of education. In your opinion which two subjects are the most important for young people and which one is the least important?
Subjects: Literature Sports
Mathematics Economy
Physics History
Music Geography
Philosophy Foreign languages
上述两题的难度在于问题对文章对应结构的影响。

像这种情况,雅思考试专家认为,考生只要做到认真审题,记住雅思写作的议论文的两种主题结构为双边论证和单边论证,然后尽量在论证过程中穿插入另一问。

这样就能很好的结合两个问题。

针对雅思写作审题难点解析,以上小编举的几个实例很有代表性,雅思写作审题其实不难,也没有什么高深的技巧,而中国学生因为考前会背很多的范文以及真题,在看到差不多的雅思写作题目时,审题环节也就放松了,而雅思写作考试在用旧题库的题目时也会有一定程度上的角度、内容改变,这就很容易造成雅思写作审题偏差。

以上就是小编给大家整理的雅思写作审题难点解析,希望可以帮助到大家。

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