英语写作分析总结(超有用)

首先，写一个句子需要：

1.must contain a subject

2.must contain a preditcate verb 谓语动词{可单独作谓语的动词，有实意动词充当或动词短语}

3.must take a complete thought 完整的思想

至于非谓语动词：

又叫做非限定动词

在句子中不定谓语的动词，主要包括不定式，动名词和分词，即动词的非谓语形式。

二，四种句子的形式

Simple sentence 简单句只有一套主谓结构，可以有很多个主语但只有一个谓语，可以有很多个主语但只有一个谓语。

Compound sentence并列句、复合句有两套或两套以上主谓结构（具有局部并列不是并列句）Complex sentence 复杂句由两个或两个以上的简单句组成

Compound complex sentence 复合复杂句

三，

Loose sentence 松散句to put things first

Periodic 圆周句the main idea is expressed near or at the end

Balanced 平行结构（结构形式一样，语法功能一样的两部分）

Short and long sentence 长句和短句（口译中演讲常用短句不宜太长写作中要用长句说明解释长短穿插）

四，comma fault：(蓝色为正确，红色为错误) run on sentence

一句话只有一套主谓结构，除非是并列句，不能用逗号把几句话隔开。

例：she rushed out of the room, the little baby carried in her arms.

这句是简单句+过去分词

后面那句不是完整的句子，因此不是comma fault。

同理：Having finished the experiment, they went out for a trip.

Fault：the experiment finished, they went out for a trip. 两个主语

Comma fault

Os：我发现自己的作文里面很多comma faults,因此以后要多加注意，不可以再写这种句子了，一定会注意是否写了两个完整的句子，然后用了逗号。

五，effective sentence

1.unity （一致性）主语谓语express a single complete thought.

2.coherence 连贯clear and reasonable connection 注意：当短语的介词不同的时候不可以省略任何一个we have great faith in and high hopes for her. 不要出现模棱两可的主语

3.conciseness 精简no unnecessary words 如果能表达完整单词越少越好

4.emphasis 强调（1）emphasis sentence 强调句

顶真the poet was born poor and poor he remained in his life.

(2)句子内部的强调emphasis within the sentence

a. placing位置放在开头或结尾

b. repetition 有必要的重复

c. the verb and the active voice 用动词而不是nouns, denoting actions名词，分词用主动语态强调

d. subordination 从属把次要信息放在从属结构，把主要信息放在突出位置

5.emphasis words and phrase: very. eg.

六，variety 句型多样长短搭配简单句和复杂句可穿插，不同的句型结构搭配

被滥用的句型

1.there be

there are fewer and fewer citizens who like to see films.

There are many people who complain of severe housing shortages.

Films are now losing their appeal for many citizens.

Housing shortages become the source of great complaint.

2.if

If you compare the two tables carefully, you will find the difference.

Careful comparison of the two tables will show you the difference. 倒装

3.in order to

An immediate step must be taken before the problem becomes too serious to solve.

4.more and more（一篇文章不超过两个）看一下金融杂志增加和减少的表达

People in increasing numbers prefer to stay at home and watch tv.

A growing trend toward...among young people gain its popularity growing number

on the rise increasing demand a sharp decline in the number of

5.it is that 学术论文多用这个以表客观

common sense tells us that

the girl whose mother was a famous pianist, began to learn to play the piano when she was a child. being a daughter of a famous female pianist,

os：以后写作尽量不要出现太多次，if，there be, in order to 等等这种句型了，可以用但是不要用太多次，尽量一片文章不要超过两次