高考英语书面表达专项咨询信learning guide

高三书面表达专题—A Letter Asking for Information

I．文章结构。

咨询信一般由三部分构成：

第一部分：表明写作意图。点明咨询的主要内容。

第二部分：详细叙述咨询的内容。

第三部分：希望对方给予回信。

写作语气：客气，有礼貌。

II.常见错误。

假设你是李华，正在英国牛津参加短期语言培训，计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上的一则广告引起了你的注意，但一些具体信息不明确（箭头所指内容）。以下是该则广告的信息。

请根据上述信息，给该旅行社发一封电子邮件，询问有关情况。你的邮件必须包括以下的内容：

1. 是否有购物时间，学生票价；

2. 费用是否包括景点门票、午餐；

3. 回牛津时间。

Correct the mistakes in the model essay：

Dear Sir/Madame,

I’m writ ting for more information about the day tour to London.

As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know do you have any special price for students. As for the money you charge, whether it covers the entrance fee for visiting the places listing? What

about lunch? Is it contained? Or do I need to bring along my own food?

How long will the tour last? Since I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return back. Besides, I’m wondering is there any time for shopping? I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

Yours,

Li Hua

III.范文示例：

Read the following passage and pay attention to the formal written requests for information. 假如你是李华，你在杂志Panorama上读到以下广告：

之后你想加入这一组织。请你写一封信给Greenplanet,了解以下细节：

meetings 多久举行一次，地点

talks 专家还是会员主讲

newsletters 是否额外收费

membership fee 学生是否优惠

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to you with regard to your advertisement published in the magazine “Panorama”.

I am interested in environmental protection and I am considering joining Greenplanet. I would appreciate it if you could give me some information about your organization.

To begin with, I would like to know how often the meetings are held and where they take place.

I ’m also interested in knowing whether the talks are given by experts in the field or by members of your association. In addition, I would be grateful if you could inform me whether there is any extra charge for the newsletters you publish.Finally,it is not clear to me whether there is a reduced

membership fee for students.

I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua IV. 写作模板及注意事项：

写作模板

开头：1. ___________your advertisement in the paper, I am interested ________ it.

拜读了你们在报纸上做的广告，我很感兴趣。

2. Now I am writing for some detailed information.

正文：

1._________________, I would like to know…. 首先，我想知道……

2.I ’m also interested in knowing ….

3.而且，我不知道newsletters是否会额外收费（至少3种表达）。

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

五星级的表达：____________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

4.就价钱而言，学生有优惠吗？

_______ the price, do you have discounts for students?

As for the price, I ’m wondering _____________________________________.

5.最后，不知道学生是否有优惠。

Finally, it is still not clear to me whether there is a reduced membership fee for students.

五星级的表达：

结尾：I would appreciate it if you could give me a reply at your earliest convenience.

Or: Your timely reply would be much appreciated.

Or: I am looking forward very much to hearing from you soon.

注意事项：1.句式忌单一，要注意变换和过渡词的恰当运用；

2. 区分名词性从句和一般疑问句或特殊疑问句的语序。

V. 写作训练:

假设你是李华，寒假期间你准备和家人去香港迪斯尼乐园游玩。你想了解有关订票方面的具体情况，例如：可否在网上订票？团体购票是否可以打折？可否因故取消订票？你在互联网上查到了一份门票价格表（见下表），但还有些具体信息不明确。请给迪斯尼乐园发一封信，询问有关情况。

注意：词数在100左右，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

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