2020河北中考英语作文写作讲解分析. 话题-----校园旅行(共20张PPT)

3. At the museum, I learned a lot about robots. →At the museum, I learned a lot about robots. It was so cool！[七(下)Unit 11 P65]
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1. I camped in the mountains with some friends.(扩写具体
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3. 总之, 这次旅行对我来说很难忘。它真的是结交新朋友的好机会。
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obey the traffic rules on the way there. We
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人教课本中涉及“校园旅行”这个话题 教 的单元有：
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(2019娄底改编) “读万卷书，行万里路”， 研学旅行现在受到教育主管部门和学校的高度 重视，也深受学生和家长的欢迎，但是旅行途 中也有一些需要注意的事项。
审主题：研学旅行中需 假如要你注是意李的华事，项请；你审根时据态所：给提示和要求，写 一篇一短般文现。在时
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2. My school trip was great! We had so much fun！[七
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3. It’s really interesting, isn’t it? It’s a great way to spend
______________
because everything here is great.
2. 我们在这次旅行中获得了太多的乐趣。 _______________________________________________________
We got so much fun in this trip.
介绍某次校园旅行
We will organize a trip to ① _t_h_e__n_e_a_rb_y__v_i_ll_a_g_e_(目的地). I’m really happy because ②_________t_h_is_i_s_m__y_f_i_r_st__ti_m_e__to__g(o理th由er).e In the morning, we will ③__fe_e_d__a_n_im__a_l_s____(活动 1). In the afternoon, we will ④ _le_a_r_n_t_o_c_o_o_k__m_e_a_l_s(活动2).I’m sure we will ⑤
活动) I camped in the mountains with some
friends. We put up tents and cooked
2. We toooukttshiedetr.ain to the museum. (扩写感受)
We took the train to the museum. It was so hot _____o_n__t_h_e__s_lo_w___t_r_a_in__. ____________________________
介绍某次校园旅行
【句子扩写范例】
1. We went to Green Park. →We went to Green Park. We climbed the mountains there and saw a lot of flowers.[七(下)Unit 11 P63] 2. Today I went on a school trip. →Today I went on a school trip. We visited the science museum and it was really interesting.[七(下)Unit 11 P65]
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要点3：必要 要求：(1)短文须包时括求所助有提示内容，可适当发
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(2)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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_3_:_3_0_p_._m__. _b_y_b_u_s. Wish we will have a good trip.
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have scientific activities in the Forest Park this
We are going to meet at 8:00 a.m. at the
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__________________________________________ time. We will ride the sharing bikes because
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must park our bikes on each side of the gate
after arriving there.
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Now study trips are becoming more and more popular with parents and students. What should we pay attention to when we’re having a study trip?
First, we should take more exercise and get enough sleep. Drink clean hot water. It is good for our health. Second, we should pay attention to the safety. We should take the safe taxi or car when we go out. When we meet something strange or find someone in danger, please call the police at once. At last, when we have some troubles in our life or study, we can ask our teachers or friends for help.
a Saturday afternoon.[八(下)Unit 9 P66]
4. It’s really a good chance to learn about other countries.
பைடு நூலகம்
【句子仿写】 1. 我觉得这个地方值得再次来参观, 因为这里的一切都很棒。
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河北中考英语作文写作讲解 话题--- 校园旅行
命题探索 教材链接 三阶攻关 写作练兵
分析河北近10年中考真题的书面表达可知，
针对“校园旅行”这一话题，河北并未考查。
但分析全国近年真题发现，此话题在中考中出
命 现频率较高。常见的命题角度有：介绍旅游地 题 点、针对某种旅行发表观点或看法，及旅游经 探 历等。
(3)词数80个左右。(开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Now study trips are becoming more and
more popular with parents and students. What
should we pay attention to when we’re having a
_____ 3. There were too many people in the park.(扩写结果)
There were too many people in the park. It was
really noisy.
旅行经历及感受
1.
I
【好句范例】
think today’s school
I hope we will have a wonderful trip.
(2020原创)你们班将于本周六组织同学们
去森林公园进行科普小活动。请你根据下面的
提示，以班长李华的名义给同学们发布一则通
写 知。 作 提示：(1)When to meet and return?
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(2)How to get there?
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(3)What to do there?
• 要求：(1)通知须包括所有提示内容，可适 当发挥。
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(2)通知中不得出现真实的人名、校
名和地名。
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(3)词数80个左右。(开头和结尾已
给出，不计入总词数)
Dear classmates，
May I have your attention please? We will
___h_a_v_e__a_ good time __________(感受)．
旅行经历及感受
Last week, our class organized a trip to the science museum. We saw ⑥ ____g_r_e_a_t__________(经历1) there. The guide also toldiunsventions ⑦_t_h_e_d_e_v_e_lo_p_m__en__t _o_f _so_m__e_i_n_v_e_n_ti_o_n_s___(经历2). We all ⑧___f_el_t___ ____e_x_c_it_e_d_w__h_e_n_w__e_s_a_w__t_h_o_se__g_r_e_a_t _in_v_e_n_t_i_o_n(s感 受1). All in all, we thought the trip was ⑨ _an__u_n_f_o_r_g_e_tt_a_b_l_e_e_x_p_e_r_ie_n_c_e__fo_r__u_s_(感受2)．