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雅思5分至6分作文评分标准

雅思5分至6分作文评分标准

雅思5分至6分作文评分标准很多人会选择店铺,而且雅思考试和托福考试很重要,那么雅思作文5到6分的最低标准是什么呢?和一起来看看,下面是小编整理的雅思5分至6分作文评分标准的资讯,欢迎阅读。

雅思5分至6分作文评分标准雅思5分作文标准:●在完成任务(TaskAchievement/TaskResponse)方面,文章基本上符合题目要求;图表写作中机械描述细节,缺少清晰的概括,有时可能缺少数据支持。

书信写作中写信目的有时不明确。

议沦文部分跑题,有立场,但论述不够清晰,可能缺少结论;有主要观点,但观点有限并且论证不够充分;用于论证的部分细节与文章主题不相关●在连贯与衔接(CoherenceandCohesion)方面,内容有一定组织结构但缺少总体延续性;衔接手段不充分,不准确,或过多地使用衔接手段:缺少指代和替换,显得重复过多;没有分段,或者分段不充分●在词汇资源(LexicalResource)方面,词汇量有限,只是在最低层面上满足题目要求;拼写和构司法上可能出现明显错误,造成读者的某些阅读困难●在语法结构的范围和准确性(GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy)方面,只能使用有限的句子结构;试图使用复杂句,但复杂句的使用准确性不如简单句,语法错误较多,标点有误用,造成读者的某些阅读困难雅思6分作文标准:●在完成任务(TaskAchievement/TaskResponse)方面,文章符合题目要求;图表作文进行了概括,信息选择合理。

书信作文写信目的基本清晰,语气可能有不一致之处。

议论文有的部分内容涵盖不够完整,但符合题目要求;立场切题,虽然结论可能不清晰或重复●在连贯与衔接(CoherenceandCohesion)方面,信息和观点组织连贯,文章有延续性,衔接手段使用有效,但是句子内部和句子之间的衔接可能有误或过于机械;指代关系可能不总是清晰、合理;有分段,但不总是有逻辑性●在词汇资源(LexicalResource)方面,能使用适当范围的词汇,试图使用较不常见词汇,但使用有一些不准确;在拼写和构词法上有错误,但这些错误不至于影响交流●在语法结构的范围和准确性(GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy)方面,能使用简单和复杂句子结构;语法和标点出现一些错误,但这些错误很少导致交流障碍。

雅思口语5分和7分的区别在哪里?

雅思口语5分和7分的区别在哪里?

雅思口语5分和7分的区别在哪里?雅思口语的分数有高有低,考得高分和低分你知道区别在哪里吗?三立在线教育雅思网就带大家来好好把领略一下这些区别,以供备考的同学参考,希望对大家有所帮助。

对于雅思口语,别的就不多说,直接摆上实例,让大家能够更清楚的认识且明白:What's your dreamy house?My dreamy house is a villa which (is located/situated) on the seaside. It should be big and comfortable...5分……不要问我为什么,这样的模版考官都会背。

听说以前一个小伙伴考口语,背模版卡到一半,考官帮他把剩下的内容背完了...。

I’ve been thinking about building a dreamy house, a villa by myself since I was young.It should beat the edge of tropical beaches surrounded by palm trees and blue oceans.In the front, there could be an open-air swimming pool, and at the backyard, some well-equipped barbecue facilities are also a requisite in case we throw a party.6分大概长这样,落到5.5的这半分差距可能视你的流畅度、准确度和考官的心情而定... 6.5分比如:When it comes to the villa itself, my chief aim was to create somewhere that as environmentally-friendly as possible, so everything, from thefurniture to the décor, is designed to be made of recycled woods and materials.其实就是稍高级的短语和句式。

雅思写作评分标准对照表

雅思写作评分标准对照表

雅思写作评分标准对照表雅思写作评分标准对照表:Task Response(任务完成度):8-9分:在题目范围内,全面地回答问题,切题角度新颖,表达遣词用字精准,结论合理,能清晰地表达自己的观点和想法。

6-7分:回答问题犀利,内容全面,但可能会出现一定程度的偏颇或者有些不够精准,表达语言可能略显生硬,但大体上能够传达出自己的意图。

4-5分:内容大致相关,但在回答问题的方面存在一定程度的偏差,观点可能不够清晰,表达的语言可能有瑕疵,但整体来看,能够表达出自己的思想。

0-3分:严重离题或者未能完成任务要求,内容大体上与题目无关,缺乏明确的结论,表达力非常弱,影响了整体的传达效果。

Coherence and Cohesion(连贯性和衔接性):8-9分:在段落、句子和表述上使用了非常自然、高效的连接词汇,整篇文章结构清晰合理,流畅性非常高,令人印象深刻。

6-7分:在段落和句子的结构方面,使用了一些连接词汇,但可能存在一些小的问题,整体结构基本合理、连贯,但可能解读上有一定困难。

4-5分:在文章结构的组织上出现了不够自然或者较明显的错误,段落和句子的表述相对独立,衔接性欠缺、有些老套。

0-3分:在文章结构上有严重的问题,段落和句子之间缺乏任何的衔接性,无法为读者带来清晰、连贯的思路。

Lexical Resource(词汇运用):8-9分:用词丰富且准确,能够运用大量高难度的词汇,且在使用上非常自然流利,表达的深度、广度均能与话题相关内容相适应。

6-7分:用词恰当,词汇量能够支持表达所需的深度和广度,但并没有使用过多的高难度词汇。

4-5分:用词基本准确,但表达上可能显得有些平庸,缺少个性化和深度化的特点。

0-3分:用词不准确,表达上过于单一,缺乏纵深和广度。

Grammatical Range and Accuracy(语法运用):8-9分:在语法的使用上准确无误,能够灵活运用各种语法结构,表现出高级别的语法能力。

雅思写作提高之雅思7分大作范文批改与解析

雅思写作提高之雅思7分大作范文批改与解析

雅思写作提高之雅思7分大作范文批改与解析我给大家带来了雅思写作提高之雅思7分大作范文批改与解析,一起来学习一下吧,下面我就和大家共享,来观赏一下吧。

雅思写作提高之:雅思7分大作范文批改与解析雅思写作提高第一步:结构(5.0 - 5.5)问题:出国留学的优点(the advantages of disadvantages of study abroad)同学:One reason for those who decide to go overseas to get a higher degree is that they believe they can get better education in certain fields. That is to say, different universities in different countries have their specialized courses and rich resources can be provided according to their needs and requirements. Another reason is that they can learn a foreign language in a more efficient way. There is no denying that living in an all-round English environment and being affected by local culture make people quick learners.解析:出国留学和高学历完全是两回事(出去读学校和高中都算出国);出国就是better education,在国内就不是better? 出国留学可不仅仅是上高校,而该同学认为出国留学就是去上高校的(由于她可能就是去上高校的,所以觉得全部人也都如此),偏激。

雅思写作评分解读,5-7评分标准差距

雅思写作评分解读,5-7评分标准差距

雅思写作评分解读,5-7评分标准差距大多数考生的雅思作文分数局限在5分到7分之间,那么这个分数段的雅思写作评分标准又是怎么样的呢?为此小编特收集整理5分到7分的雅思写作评分标准介绍,分享给大家,希望对大家有所帮助,文中观点仅供参考。

下面和小编一起来看看吧:雅思写作评分标准:5分对于任务的回应只是部分回应题目要求,格式在有的地方不得体有立场,但论证并不总是清晰,可能没写结论提出了一些主要观点,但这些观点有限,论证不够充分;可能有无关细节连贯与衔接信息的呈现有些组织,但缺少整体延续性只能使用有限的句型试图使用复杂句,但准确度不如简单句语法和标点经常错误,这些错误导致阅读部分困难雅思写作评分标准:6分试图使用较不常见词汇,但有一些不准确在拼写和构词法上有错误,但这些错误不至于影响交际语法结构的范围和准确性能使用简单和复杂句子结构语法和标点出现一些错误,尽管这些错误很少导致交流障碍。

雅思写作评分标准:7分对于任务的回应涵盖题目要求文章立场清晰提出、引申、并支持主要观点,但可能有过度概括,分支观点不够紧凑连贯与衔接信息和观点组织有逻辑性;文章从头至尾有延续性衔接手段使用合理,虽然可能有一些使用过少或过多每个段落都有明确的主题词汇资源词汇使用丰富、有一定的准确性和灵活性能使用较不常见词汇,对语体和搭配有所了解在词汇的选择、拼写和构词法上偶尔有错误语法结构的范围和准确性使用多种复杂结构多数语句无误语法和标点掌握较好,但可能会犯一些错误。

以上就是对于五分到七分的雅思写作评分标准的相关介绍,值得注意的除了基本的词汇,语法外,对于文章结构也提出了相应的要求,最后小编预祝同学们在雅思考试中取得好的成绩。

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雅思写作5分6分范文

雅思写作5分6分范文

雅思写作5分6分范文雅思写作的评分标准是从0分到9分,其中5分和6分属于中等水平。

下面我将为你提供一篇5分和一篇6分的范文,以供参考。

5分范文:题目,城市化对环境的影响。

城市化是当今社会的一个明显趋势,然而,它对环境产生了许多负面影响。

首先,城市化导致了大量土地的开发和建设,这直接破坏了自然生态系统。

许多自然栖息地被破坏,动植物物种面临灭绝的风险。

其次,城市化带来了大量的交通和工业污染。

汽车尾气和工厂废气排放对空气质量造成了严重影响,导致空气污染和健康问题的增加。

此外,城市化还导致了水资源的过度开采和污染,给水生态系统带来了威胁。

然而,城市化也有一些积极的影响。

首先,城市化提供了更多的就业机会,吸引了大量农村人口进入城市寻找工作。

这有助于减轻农村贫困问题。

其次,城市化带来了更好的基础设施和公共服务,例如交通网络、医疗设施和教育资源的改善。

这提高了人们的生活质量和福利水平。

综上所述,城市化对环境的影响是复杂的,既有负面的影响,也有积极的影响。

我们需要采取措施来减少城市化对环境的破坏,例如加强环境保护法律法规的执行,推动可持续发展的城市规划和建设,以及鼓励人们采取环保措施。

只有这样,我们才能实现城市化和环境保护的双赢局面。

6分范文:题目,科技对社会的影响。

科技在现代社会中发挥着重要的作用,对社会产生了广泛而深远的影响。

首先,科技的发展提高了生产力和效率。

自动化和机器人技术的应用使得生产过程更加高效,提高了生产效率,降低了成本。

其次,科技改变了人们的生活方式。

互联网的普及使得信息获取更加便捷,人们可以通过网络购物、在线学习和远程工作。

此外,科技也改变了人们的社交方式,社交媒体的兴起使得人们可以随时随地与朋友和家人保持联系。

然而,科技的发展也带来了一些负面影响。

首先,科技的快速发展导致了一些职业的消失。

自动化和人工智能的应用使得一些传统行业的就业机会减少,给一些人带来了就业困难。

其次,科技的过度依赖也会导致人与人之间的隔阂增加。

雅思大作文写作7分范文

雅思大作文写作7分范文

雅思大作文写作7分范文雅思写作对于一些同学来说是难点,今天给大家整理了雅思作文真题优秀范文,希望能够帮助到大家,下面小编就和大家分享,来欣赏一下吧。

2018年11月10日雅思大作文写作7分范文:职场社交能力重要性大作文写作题目是:Nowadays, many employers think that social skills are as important as good qualifications for employing people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?雅思大作文解析今天的考题是一个旧题,重复的是2012年1月14日的考题,不过由于过于久远,想必很多同学都没有复习到。

但这个题目的问题,我们多数同学都应该思考过,即到底文凭重要,还是社交能力重要?就这个问题,我们的思考方向依然是三种:A. 双边讨论:认为两者都很重要B. 一边倒讨论:只认为文凭更重要,或社交能力更重要C. 批判思维:对某些工作而言,文凭更重要,而对其他工作而言,社交能力更重要。

考生可以在以上思维方式中任选一个进行写作。

以下是老雅的高分范文。

本范文中,老雅遵从主流意见,认为文凭和社交能力都重要。

本题还应注意的是,要结合“招聘”来讨论问题。

老雅认为,在招聘的时候,文凭很重要,因为文凭背后代表的是求职者具有某种能力,而没有文凭,应聘者可能连面试的机会都得不到;同时,社交能力也很重要,因为这种能力意味着求职者可以和各种人和谐快乐地相处,从而提高工作效率。

请大家认真阅读范文,看老雅是如何把以上思路落实到具体文字表达的。

It is important for job seekers to highlight both their professional qualifications and social skills. Employers are looking to hire those who have the right mix of professional qualifications as hard skills and social skills as soft skills.(1) 本段开门见山,直接表明观点,即专业资质和社交能力同等重要。

雅思考官眼中的7分雅思作文怎么写

雅思考官眼中的7分雅思作文怎么写

我的托福雅思必过雅思考官眼中的7分雅思作文怎么写雅思考官眼中的7分雅思作文怎么写?给大家整理了相关内容,里面有详细的批注和修改,这是一篇关于交通话题的作文,一起来看看。

题目:Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for many major cities. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic in big cities。

作文:Nowadays, it is obvious that the congestion in nearly all over the world in most countries is on the increase and cities are becoming busier. In my opinion, this problem must be tackled because it is a global issue and most of people most people, especially who live especially those who live in big cities, are suffering from that。

One of the main reasons which causes the traffic jam causes of traffic jam/reasons for traffic jam is that the majority of people prefer using their own cars instead of public transportation. However, it is not impossible to find good and effective ways to control the congestion. Public transportation is the easiest way to solve this trouble problem. If there are comfortable and cheap public transportations is comfortable and cheap public transportation such as trains and buses, they will make people like to use them better than drive people will choose to use it rather than drive. For instance, in Manchester, Stagecoach buses are the most convenient buses that help the city to have comfortable life in its to reduce the traffic on roads and streets during rush hours. In fact, governments should provide much better public transportation and charge prices that are affordable for everyone。

雅思5分-7分范文

雅思5分-7分范文

5分The university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. Do you agree or disagree?In modern society, more and more people think that the university should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training. However there’s also a lot of people do not agree with them. In my opinion, the university provide student more practical training is very necessary.First, when people come to university, most of them is more than 18 years old, so they have ability to teach-self. That means student can learn theoretical knowledge mainly by self-teaching rather than by lessons.Second, in modern society, the practical ability is becoming more and more important. But in school, students rarely have chance to practice themselves. The most of their life is compare with lots of books rather than practical training. Therefore when graduating from university, many students find them can not adapt social working requirement. That makes them frustrated. If this situation happens, it’ll be the failure of high education of the university.Third, the target of high education is to bring up person with ability for society. The ability can be understood in two points: one is theoretical ability, the other is practical ability. As a result, the practical training is also a very import part in high education. Many universities gradually know that practical training is necessary but most of universities do not make enough effort or even give enough attention to this main task. Thus they could not really complete their duty.So I agree that should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give students more practical training.6分Some people think that animal experiments are cruel, while others believe that it is good for the development of science. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?The animal experimentation is very difficult issue with a lot of people feeling very strongly of it, we are use the animals for the experimentation in different way, one of most big problem is for test the cosmetics, the images of animals with things put in their eyes for so we are able to look a bit better make many people very angry. Is it necessary?The companies such as the body shop said that they do not experiment on animals and they produce good cosmetics who make money, I am not agree that making the cosmetics that make our faces better does not mean the animals must suffering in terrible ways, it does not seem moral for me. On the other hand we also use the animals for test the new drugs.Without these new drugs people die and suffer when they need not, some of the people believe that the animals should not suffer and die so that we can avoid it, I am not agree here, these people will change the minds when it is they who are die or one of their children, it is sad that the animals have to suffer for this thing but here I believe that the suffering is justify. Is there alternative to the animal experimentation?I’m not expert but I don’t think so, the monkeys are most near biology animals and without test to them, we cannot sure of affects of the new drugs, we test on humans also but only when we know the drugs not a problem to us, the testing on humans without the tests on the animals could make the tragedies.So in conclusion I do not believe that the animal testing is justify for not essential things but for essential things I believe that there is not choice and it is justify.7分You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.In many countries television shows many foreign-made programmes. The dominance of imported entertainment is harmful to the cultures of these countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.In developing countries, where resources limit domestic productions, many programs are imported. They bring people opportunities to broaden outlooks, however, much content contains characters and messages that, at best, are simply not relevant to local cultures, and at worst convey violent images and mass marketing messages, which threatens cultural identification and values. In addition, the pervasive programs block the citizens to have access to their own cultural products.Many people may see the effects that the foreign-made programs bring to the scattered culture. Citizens may be less identified with their own traditions and habits. What’s the worse is that people don’t see the dominance of commercialism on TV programs, which converts their national cultural awareness. Few are really aware that television programs exist solely as a means of delivering culture as marketing tool. The commercial advertising has moved from the obvious and easily ignored sponsorship of programming to more subtle and effective means. The viewers’ consumption trends will be influenced by theforeign-made programs.Television programs define the modes of education and discourse. Most imported TV programs are entertaining, supported by superficial self-esteem. They seldom encourage viewers to think deeper about meanings of life. The viewers may even be lost in the jungle of mixed cultures; and abandon the essence of their own culture to pursue the fashionable but dross part of foreign culture.To save our culture from being overwhelmed by foreign entertainment imports, the government should censor programs and policies in cultural industries to ensure the citizens are not so strongly affected by foreign culture. The government should also developa competitive environment for the production and distribution of national content in all media.。

新雅思7分范文(推荐十五篇)

新雅思7分范文(推荐十五篇)

雅思7分范文(推荐十五篇)5雅思7分范文(篇一)Although we can easily acquire knowledge from modern media like television and internet,I think it is not enough to prove that the teachers will lose their position in the future. Indeed,people can absorb a lot of knowledges from television and example ,some students now can watch many teaching videos on television and internet and they do not need to get these knowledge from modern software can even help students to make a suitable study is obvious that students do not need to listen to the fixed content in the classroom. However,are all students have the chance to get the knowledge that they want from television and internet?Many poor students cannot afford the cost of television or internet and some elders do not know how to use these various of knowledge from teacher is the best way for learning needs time to make the student cannot learn the new course if the courseware has not completed by the teacher. Even if television and internet can meet some needs of students but they cannot completely perform the effects of the fact, children also need to learn the method of communication and how to become a good this aspect,teachers play an important role during the learning computer cannot completely achieve the teaching goal. To sum up, modern technologies can replace some of teachers' job. but considering other important parts in education, I do not believe this development can make teachers useless in the future.雅思7分范文(篇二)You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Families are not as close as before. Give reasons for this change, and suggest some ways to bring families closer.You should write at least 250 words. You should use your own ideas of knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.In the past, family was a very important concept in people’s minds, and it was the center of many people’s lives. Nowadays, however, the relationship between family members is not as close as before. But as to what factors contribute to this phenomenon, different people have diverse opinions. As far as I am concerned, it results from the following reasons.The first reason is that people spend more time on their study and work. Compared with the past, people face fierce competition and suffer from great pressure. Therefore, they have to devote more time and energy to their careers. Some people are too occupied to spare time for their family. What is more, many jobs require people to work in other cities and many children have to leave their parents at an early age to study or work elsewhere. As time passes, these people become emotionally estranged from their parents.Another reason is that there are more entertainment forms available. Nowadays high technology brings us more interesting things which can easily attract people’s attention, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet or plating video games. As a result, people are indulged in these activities, totally neglecting the feelings of other family members.To bring families closer, people put forward various suggestions. Firstly, never bring your work home and leave it in your office. We should spare more time with family members no matter how occupied we are. Secondly, try to squeeze some time for a regular family dinner because dinner time is a perfect time and opportunity for people to exchange their feelings and ideas. Last but not least, we should teach the children the sense of family when they are still young.Family is the basic unit of a society. It plays a significant role in our lives. In order to enjoy a harmonious family life and maintain a stable society, we should take efforts to create a close family relationship. (342 words)雅思7分范文(篇三)题目:The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?范文:It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have aboutlife are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.雅思7分范文(篇四)Nowadays, there are several channels to get news, such as radio, TV, newspaper and internet. I think internet is the best among these. In my essay, I am going to explain why.Since its invention, the Internet has been keeping booming as a prospective industry. Not only because it is a combination of texts, audios and videos, but also due to its convinience. It has threatened the domination of spreading news of the traditional media, and, I would say, is about to take control.We can find everything we want on internet – latest news, books, songs, movies, cartoons… whatever. With radio, we can merely hear. Compared with newspaper, radio and TV can provide the lastest information. For instance, it was immediately availalbe of the breaking news of the Americans’ attacking on Iraq, as we ll as thatthe Twin Towers of New York were destroyed on September 11, 2001. __ However, we just cannot carry TV 24/7.Internet is a convinient way of getting information, as long as your mobile phone is connected or you possess a laptop. When I am on a vehicle, I usually have my cellphone connected to internet, then browse what happend in the past few hours, or log in MSN to begin a conversation with my friends. Reading newspaper is also a good way to kill time, but for me, a youngster, it is not so modern as “surfing online while being transported”.The traditional media will never disappear, though internet has taken a big advantage in the competition. And definitely, there is still a long way for internet to go. Anyway, internet benefits me the most, and I highly appreciate it.雅思7分范文(篇五)题目:Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?范文:Some people argue that it is pointless to spend money on theprotection of wild animals because we humans have no need for them. I completely disagree with this point of view.In my opinion, it is absurd to argue that wild animals have no placein the 21st century. I do not believe that planet Earth exists onlyfor the benefit of humans, and there is nothing special about this particular century that means that we suddenly have the right toallow or encourage the extinction of any species. Furthermore, thereis no compelling reason why we should let animals die out. We do not need to exploit or destroy every last square metre of land in orderto feed or accommodate the world’s population. There is plenty of room for us to exist side by side with wild animals, and this should be our aim.I also disagree with the idea that protecting animals is a waste of resources. It is usually the protection of natural habitats that ensures the survival of wild animals, and most scientists agree that these habitats are also crucial for human survival. For example, rainforests produce oxygen, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise the Earth’s climate. If we destroyed these areas, the costs of managing the resulting changes to our planet would far outweigh the costs ofconservation. By protecting wild animals and their habitats, we maintain the natural balance of all life on Earth.In conclusion, we have no right to decide whether or not wild animals should exist, and I believe that we should do everything we can to protect them.雅思7分范文(篇六)Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Nowadays, purpose of education being changed in Korea. There are some people who think that competition in children should be made, also others believe that children who are taught to co-operate as well as become more useful adults. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.To begin with, what is good if a sense of competition in children is made? They could develop themselves more and more as they learn and study a lot to win from the competition. To prove this, in Korea, it is popular- even common now- to have a tutor who come to student’s house to teach extra pieces of study with paying a lot of money. They learn faster than what they learn at school. Furthermore, during the vocations, students study abroad to learn English for a month instead of revise school work. If they have experiments such as study abroad, it is one of the greatest plus point to go to the famous well-known high school. Moreover, there are four big school exam and twonational examinations to test students’ level of studies. Generally, only the highest 40% can go to the good quality highschools and colleges children learn as much as they can, to win the competition to obtain good quality schools.On the other hand, as they are busy to enter the schools and study individually with their own tutors, there are problems. They become selfish. They become careless and don’t help others a lot if it is about studies. There will be no co-operations for them. Then, why are there companies for many people to work in? each of them are clever, however, there are weak parts and strong parts for each person. Toco-operate is to improve this part. People talk and listen to what others thinking of and learn. That could also be a great opportunity to learn instead of learning alone with one teacher.In conclusion, I strongly agree with that children should be taught to co-operate rather than compete. Nobody is perfect. People learn together, work together to develop each other. therefore, I want parents and teachers to educate children concentrating on co-operation, not compete and ranking them.雅思7分范文(篇七)现在小伙伴们都知道雅思baba的写作套路了么?那既然已经知道写作有题库,同学们是不是应该对雅思写作真题重视起来市面上的很多资料都是有题目不完整、没范文、没高频词汇的情况,对童鞋们来说其实用处并不大。

雅思写作批改实录:5分到7分

雅思写作批改实录:5分到7分

雅思写作批改实录:5分到7分题目Some people think that people can not benefit from international travel. Why is this case? How can people improve their understanding of other countries?学生习作Nowadays, life quality has been improved. Many people choose go travel abroad, but some people think that is not benefit from travel to the other counties. In my opinion, international travel is the best way to understanding other countries.Personally, some people think why people cannot benefit from international travel is they might never go travel abroad. Travel is my favorite thing. I have been travel to 10 countries. I met a lot interesting things for every times travel, although the countrywhich I go there for the second time. I totally disagree people just use book or Internet to understand the other counties.Firstly, before I went to Singapore, I knew the official language in Singapore is English, but when I been there I found Singaporean usually speak Singlish. Singlish is the language that include English, Cantonese, Hokkien and Malay. For example they call milk tea ‘Teh’ and coffee as ‘kopi’. I haven’t known that on the book or Internet before I went to Singapore. The overseas information are very limit on the book or internet and the most book has similar content to describe a country. We have to stay their to real understanding the local customs and habits. Secondly, the process of travel is the best moment for me. I can taste the special local food and I can social with local people to know the country better. I prefer independent travel to guide tour. The time and schedule is freer for Independent travel.Admittedly, book and Internet are both the good way for people to understanding other counties. But real travel to the counties can know the local culture more understanding.评分:5点评:围绕题目要求,结合自己经历,因此内容比较充实,具体。

雅思口语5分到7分究竟有啥区别

雅思口语5分到7分究竟有啥区别

雅思口语5分到7分究竟有啥区别雅思口语5分到7分究竟有啥区别dreamy house考官:What's your dreamy house?5分……不要问我为什么,这样的模版考官都会背:My dreamy house is a villa which (is located/situated) on the seaside. It should be big and comfortable...从前,一个小伙伴考口语,背模版卡到一半,考官帮他把剩下的内容背完了……背完了……背完了……6分大概长这样,落到5.5的这半分差距可能视你的流畅度、准确度和考官的心情而定:I’ve been thinking about building a dreamy house, a villa by myself since I was young.It should beat the edge of tropical beaches surrounded by palm trees and blue oceans.In the front, there could be an open-air swimming pool, and at the backyard, some well-equipped barbecue facilities are alsoa requisite in case we throw a party.6.5分的同学请在此加上一些细节,比如:When it comes to the villa itself, my chief aim was to create somewhere that as environmentally-friendly as possible, so everything, from the furniture to the décor, is designed to be made of recycled woods and materials.有没有发现秘诀?就是稍高级的短语和句式。

雅思口语5678分实例对比分析

雅思口语5678分实例对比分析

雅思口语5/6/7/8分实例对比分析很多烤鸭考完后都觉得自己的雅思口语分数给少,为什么我的雅思口语分数那么低,其实如果你来看看不同分数的雅思口语答案也许你就明白了。

一、设想考生在描述一个他认识的人,而这个人一直喜欢吃大量的快餐。

5分考生会这样描述:He is too big, too fat.他块头很大,很胖。

6分考生会这样描述:He is fat and overweight.他很胖,体重超常。

7分考生会这样描述:He is seriously overweight, I mean, way beyond plump!他严重超重。

我是说,他可不仅仅是偏胖。

8分考生会这样描述:He has ballooned out to an incredible size. He’s so fat now he can scarcely walk.他像吹气球似地胖了起来,块头大得吓人,胖得几乎都走不了路。

二、设想考生在谈论周围环境及全球变暖的威胁5分考生会这样描述全球变暖带来的威胁:Now the planet is getting global warming. The weather is not good.现在地球正在全球变暖,天气不好。

6分考生会说:Global warming is a big problem. The ice is melting.全球变暖是个大问题。

冰在融化。

7分考生会说:Global warming is causing significant climate change. For example, the glaciers are getting smaller and weather patterns are changing.全球变暖正导致明显的气候变化。

例如,冰川正在变小,天气类型正在改变。

8分考生会说:Global warming is a major threat. Glaciers are dwindling andpotentially the sea level could rise and flood many coastal cities.全球变暖是一大威胁。

雅思作文7分标准作文

雅思作文7分标准作文

contact with the outside world. Many people[c1] argue that children should begin learning a foreign language atelementary school, instead of waiting until [c2] they enter secondary school. There are several reasons for this.Firstly, despite the fact that parents donot want to put too much pressure on their children, they also do not want themto lose at the starting line. This means, if the kids start to learn a foreignlanguage early, their parents are relieved from the thought that their kidswill have to catch up later on, which is true to some extent.On the other hand, it is scientificallyproved that children tend to learn a language faster before the age of 12. Asfar as I know, my friends who started to learn English when they were six orseven now have a much more satisfactory English level than those who started at12 or 13. So it is wise to have foreign language course in primary schoolcurriculum.Additionally, learning a foreign languageat an earlier age can lay children a solid foundation for future studying.Rather than just learning a language itself, children(下面评分项里面的小分意在指出你的优势劣势)Task response 6.5 分1. address all parts of the task 7分首先列举的advantages,然后提出disadvantage,紧接着驳斥了这个disadvantage。

雅思作文评分标准5到7分段

雅思作文评分标准5到7分段

7• covers the requirements of the task• (Academic) presents a clear overview of main trends, differences or stages • (General Training) presents a clear purpose, with the tone consistent and appropriate• clearly presents and highlights key features/bullet points but could be more fully extended• logically organises information and ideas; there is clear progression throughout • uses a range of cohesive devices appropriately although there may be some under-/over-use• uses a sufficient range of vocabulary to allow some flexibility and precision • uses less common lexical items with some awareness of style and collocation • may produce occasional errors in word choice, spelling and/or word formation • uses a variety of complex structures• produces frequent error-free sentences• has good control of grammar and punctuation but may make a few errors6• addresses the requirements of the task• (Academic) presents an overview with information appropriately selected • (General Training) presents a purpose that is generally clear; there may be inconsistencies in tone• presents and adequately highlights key features/ bullet points but details may be irrelevant, inappropriate or inaccurate• arranges information and ideas coherently and there is a clear overall progression• uses cohesive devices effectively, but cohesion within and/or between sentences may be faulty or mechanical• may not always use referencing clearly or appropriately• uses an adequate range of vocabulary for the task• attempts to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy• makes some errors in spelling and/or word formation, but they do not impede communication• uses a mix of simple and complex sentence forms• makes some errors in grammar and punctuation but they rarely reduce communication 5• generally addresses the task; the format may be inappropriate in places • (Academic) recounts detail mechanically with no clear overview; there may be no data to support the description• (General Training) may present a purpose for the letter that is unclear at times; the tone may be variable and sometimes inappropriate• presents, but inadequately covers, key features/ bullet points; there may be a tendency to focus on details• presents information with some organisation but there may be a lack of overall progression• makes inadequate, inaccurate or over-use of cohesive devices• may be repetitive because of lack of referencing and substitution• uses a limited range of vocabulary, but this is minimally adequate for the task • may make noticeable errors in spelling and/or word formation that may cause some difficulty for the reader• uses only a limited range of structures• attempts complex sentences but these tend to be less accurate than simple sentences• may make frequent grammatical errors and punctuation may be faulty; errors can cause some difficulty for the reader。

雅思写作大作文5分范文评析

雅思写作大作文5分范文评析

雅思写作大作文5分范文评析Band 5Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge forits own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, shouldbe the main function of a university?What knowledge and skills should universities provide has been argued for many years. Some people think that the true function of universities provide knowledge for their own purpose, but nowadays, moreand more people point out that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills according to the workplace.The first reason for universities should provide these knowledge and skill is the s tudents’ needs. Obviously, the most of the students go to university purpose of is to get some knowledge and skills which could make them have the ability to get a job. If a university does not provide these knowledge and skills, the students might not get a job and they would bevery disappointed. As a result, the university would lose its students.Moreover, providing knowledge and skills needed in the workplace makes a university progress. The newskills and information always are initiated in the workplace, so focusing on the needs of the workplace the university could get sound strategies to do research and make it more modernization.Lastly, providing these knowledge and skills could benefit our country which usually gives a financial support to universities. Having these knowledge and skills, students are more easy to get a job, and this can make our countries’ economy strong.In conclusion, it can be said that providing the knowledge and skills which the workplace needs is every university’s bas ic function.只能拿到5分的原因:一、这个题目中有两方的观点:some 及others的,很明显这位考生在后面的论证过程中完全忽视了others的观点,都在一味地论证some 的观点的正确性,于是考官给出的评语是:it does not address all parts of the question.写作建议NO.3:Do not neglect any part, or youwill regret your mark.什么都不要忽略,不然你的分数会让你难过。

目标分值决定雅思写作模板使用方法

目标分值决定雅思写作模板使用方法

目标分值决定雅思写作模板使用方法考雅的小伙伴对雅思写作模板确定都不生疏,但是对于写作模板的用法,不同考生存在不同的看法。

下面我就和大家共享目标分值打算雅思写作模板使用方法,来观赏一下吧。

目标分值打算雅思写作模板使用方法1. 目标分值5分-5.5分如何使用雅思写作模板许多同学初次考雅思试水,或者本身基础较差对于雅思写作版块的目标分值要求不高,这种请状况是可以使用雅思写作模板的。

雅思写作目标分值定位5分到5.5分的同学相对来说英语基础薄弱,语法和词汇的把握程度特别有限,直接写作可能会导致文中消失很多语法错误,或者全文都是简洁句堆叠。

此时假如套用模板写作,作文整体水平会比原本的要高出一些,得分自然也会更高。

但是,小站君建议大家在背模板的时候选用一些比较新的模板,万能写作模板不建议使用。

2. 目标分值6分-6.5分如何使用雅思写作模板目标分值6-6.5分的同学可以使用雅思写作模板吗?雅思写作6分到6.5分对于大家写作要求提高了许多,此时已经不能完全套用雅思写作模板了。

根据雅思评分标准,雅思大作文想要拿到6分-6.5分必需满意几个要求:1.文章切题;2.能够回应题目要求;3.能够绽开论述。

当然这样分数也有肯定的容错度,比如论据不是很充分,文章布局欠合理等等。

此时,大家假如还是套用模板,机械式写作,分数很难达到要求。

建议大家敏捷运用模板,可以依据写作套路总结出自己针对各类写作话题的模板,然后应用在写作考试中。

3. 目标分值7分-7.5分如何使用雅思写作模板雅思写作7分-7.5分已经是特别不错的分值,雅思索试中的高分分界线为7分,那么雅思写作目标7分-7.5分是否可以使用写作模板呢?答案是尽量不用。

虽然从评分标准来看,雅思写作7分-7.5分仍有肯定的容错度,但是对于作文的要求也会更高,文章不仅要切题,开头结尾也要写的更有新意,此时假如大家仍实行套用模板的方式去写作,不论是网上找的模板,还是自己整理的模板,都会导致作文看起来没有新意。

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^| You have to believe, there is a way. The ancients said:" the kingdom of heaven is trying to enter". Only when the reluctant step by step to go to it 's time, must be managed to get one step down, only have struggled to achieve it.-- Guo Ge Tech分析比较5分和7分作文TopicInternational tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the disadvantages?A Poor Essay - The following is a band 5 essay.International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?In my opinion advantages outweight the disadvantages. Firstly, many countries like Egypt or Tailand live from tourism Lots of people work there as a seilsmens or tourist guides. These countries without support of tourists wouldn’t be able to funtcion properly.Secondly, in countries visited by tourists are plenty of places where people just can’t pass because of rare animals or plants.Another thing is that people like traveling and seeing new exotic places. They like lie on the beach or swim in ocean.Furthermore, tourism is now more growing industry highering tousands of people. There are makeing new places to work and to have fun.But on the other hand, people often forget that they aren’t the only beings on the planet.Many tourists are living garbage just anywhere. Some of them wan’t an exotic souvenir so they pay for illegal things like dead or live animals or some sculpture.To sum up I think international traveling is a good thing but people must realise that there is something else besides them. They need to know that flora and fauna needs to be protected. People have to enjoy their holidays but also protect environment.Below is an analysis of this essay.Task Response.The essay question has been copied and used as the introduction (paragraph 1). Once these 34 words are taken off the word count, the response is under length at 194 words and so loses marks. Nevertheless, the topic is addressed and a relevant position is expressed, although there are patches - as in the third paragraph - where the development is unclear. Other ideas are more relevant but are sometimes insufficiently developed.Coherence and Cohesion.The candidate’s ideas are clearly organised, and there is an overall progression within the response. There is some effective use of a range of cohesive devices (e.g. connectives like “Secondly” and “Furthermore”). Referencing i s also sometimes used effectively (e.g. in paragraph4, the use of “they” in the second sentence to refer to “people” in the first sentence). However, there is also some mechanical over-use of linkers in places (e.g. “But on the other hand,” paragraph 6). As well, paragraphs are sometimes rather too short and inappropriate.Lexical Resource.A range of vocabulary is attempted, and this is adequate for a good response to the task. However, control of the vocabulary is weak, and there are frequent spelling errors which can cause some difficulties for the reader (e.g. “seilsmens” instead of “salesmen,”paragraph 2). This lowers the mark.Grammatical Range and Accuracy.The candidate uses a mix of simple and complex structures with frequent subordinate clauses. Control of complex structures is variable, and although errors are noticeable, they only rarely make it difficult to understand the message.A Good Essay - The following is a band 7 essay.Tourism is a very big industry in the modern time and is growing quite rapidly. Thousands of people travel everywhere to various destinations every year. Arguments have come up regarding the benefits and negative impacts of tourism in places and on its local inhabitants and environment; however, I believe there are more advantages than disadvantages of international tourism.People travel for various reasons; we travel for business purposes, holidays, visit friends and relatives etc. Travelling is mostly seen as a recreational activity. Tourism has many advantages. Tourism can play a tremendous part in a countrys economy, the more tourists visit a country and spend money there, the better it is for the country; that way more money is circulated within the country and even the stability of their currencys rate of exchange persists if not improve. Vendors and shops get to sell more goods and make an income. Tourism also has its non-monetary advantages; it brings cultures and people closer. People from all around the world get to share their culture with each other and even learn more. This is a good opportunity in education.Tourism seems to have some disadvantages too; However, I believe the problems caused by tourism are not something that cannot be solved or prevented. A lot of people believe that tourism can destroy or deviate culture and causes quite an impact on visited locations, such as pollution and littering. People can adhere to their own beliefs and way of life if they want to; no one can really forcefully influence someone to change from their morals and ethics. Pollution can be avoided by increasing usage of environmental friendly vehicles used for tours and rents, warnings and visual education on littering and smoking, specific times can be allocated for tours to certain areas, such as peak times where local inhabitants feel uncomfortable due to too many foreigners.Where there are problems there can always be solutions. Tourism brings great amount of advantages for any place in many ways and is a “win-win” exchange process. The very few problems caused can always be avoided or taken care of. I believe tourism should be highly promoted, specially in traditional and poor countries with natural beauty such as Thailand.Below is an analysis of this essay.Task Response.The candidate addresses both aspects of the task and presents a clear position throughout the response. Main ideas are generally clear and relevant,although some supporting ideas lack focus, as in the opening of paragraph 2.Coherence and Cohesion.Ideas are generally wellorganised, and there is a clear overall progression with only minor lapses where points are not well-integrated into the argument. A range of cohesive devices is used effectively, although there is some under-use of connectives and substitution, and some lapses in the use of referencing.Lexical Resource.A good range of vocabulary is used with some flexibility and precision. The candidate has a good awareness of style and collocation, although occasional awkward expressions or incorrect word choices and word form lower the mark.Grammatical Range and Accuracy.A good range of sentence structures is used with a high level of accuracy resulting in frequent error-free sentences. Minor systematic errors persist, however, and punctuation is unhelpful at times.2008年3月1日Most countries spend much money on education, because they realize the importance of education. Among the following courses, which two in your opinion are the most important and which one is the least important?Literature, sports, mathematics, economy, physics, music, history, geography, philosophy, foreign language.分析:命题是分析事物利弊的,考生自由选择,无论考生选择什么,分数都不会受到影响,重要的是考生选择后,对自己选择的理由进行符合逻辑地,令人信服地陈述。

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