考官是如何巧妙改写雅思写作话题的

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雅思写作的套路解析

雅思写作的套路解析应对雅思写作大作文，一样讲套路。

多看一些范文，学习大作文的行文思路和写作结构，然后照着模板来练习，雅思写作提升很快哒！下面来看看雅思写作的套路解析这篇文章吧。

雅思写作必看“套路”!5.5到7全靠这几招我相信很多烤鸭都有过一样的经历。

很多考生在写文章的时候也经常用这样的语句彰显人类复读机的本质。

比如之前很多学生在写作中常出现的，令人头大而大家又意外地用着很顺手的“模版”：It is very importantfor the government to alleviate poverty (扶贫) as this isreally useful. This will bring many advantages to the country, so it is very necessary. In many cases, the benefits brought by this can be seen everywhere, and people will think that it is really good to live in such a good country.考官看完的心路历程：Wait, 我是不是刚才改了一个复读机的卷子?这段话一共60个词，但反反复复就强调了一个意思：这事儿超重要。

这位考生你莫不是给考官念了一段洗脑经?不用说，这段文字出现在雅思写作卷子上，是拿不到高分的。

那么我们怎么能摆脱“复读机”的本质，在雅思写作考试中拿个高分呢?方法一：换同义词这是最简单粗暴的方法，考官也喜欢花里胡哨的词汇，同义词越多，文章就能越漂亮。

这段文字中出现的表示“褒贬”的词汇是在雅思写作中十分常见的，建议我们每类至少记三个。

好[adj.] advantageous, beneficial, profitable, worthwhile, rewarding, expedient, conducive[n.] advantage(s), benefit(s), strength(s), merit(s), bright side(s), virtue(s)有助[v.] benefit, contribute to, aid to, be conducive to重要[adj.] important, necessary, significant, essential, vital, crucial, principal, noteworthy, imperative, substantial促进[v.] enhance, promote, facilitate, foster, optimize, stimulate, boost, cultivate, accelerate获得[v.] accomplish, achieve, complete, finish, fulfill支持[v.] favor, be for, approve of, side with, stand on the side of, consent to, vote for坏[adj.] disadvantageous, harmful, adverse, problematic, detrimental, prejudicial[n.] disadvantage(s), drawback(s), weakness(es), demerit(s), downside(s), shortcoming(s)阻碍/破坏[v.] damage, impair, spoil, endanger, undermine, hinder, hamper, obstruct, deteriorate, aggravate, jeopardize, eradicate 导致(多为贬)[v.] cause, result in, lead to, trigger, give rise to, bring about, contribute to, generate方法二：换词性假如我们词汇量不够大，或因备考时间太短没办法短期内背这么多单词，这种方法其实是比较事半功倍的一种技巧，能有效用上我们背过的仅有单词，只需要把词性一换，又摇身变成另一个词。

雅思小作文开头改写技巧

雅思小作文开头改写技巧一、改变句子结构，例如将主动句改为被动句。

使用同义词替换例如将“The chart shows the percentage of people who use different modes of transportation to go to work.”改写为“Different modes of transportation used to go to work are presented in the chart, with the percentage of people using each mode.”二、通过转变它的句式来改写，例如将长句改为短句。

1.替换表达方式例如将“In this report, we can see the number of students who passed the exam in each subject.”改写为“The table demonstrates the amount of students who passed the exam in each subject.”2.增加细节或解释性信息例如将“As can be seen from the table, the percentage of people who use public transportation to go to work is decreasing.”改写为“As can be seen from the table, the percentage of people who use public transportation to go to work is decreasing. This may be due to the factthat more and more people are choosing to drive to work, causing a decrease in the number of public transportation users.”3.采用反面论证例如将“As the graph shows, the use of pesticides on farms has increased significantly over the past few decades.”改写为“As the graph shows, the use of pesticides on farms has NOT increased significantly over the past few decades.”雅思小作文开头段的改写需要根据实际情况选择合适的方式，同时需要注意保持句子的准确性和流畅性。

灵活应对雅思写作考试大作文题目中的偏题怪题（优秀范文五篇）

灵活应对雅思写作考试大作文题目中的偏题怪题（优秀范文五篇）第一篇：灵活应对雅思写作考试大作文题目中的偏题怪题雅思考试时很多考生候遇到过这种情况，在考试前准备了很多大作文需要的素材和材料，但奇怪的是真正到了考场，碰到某些题目这些素材好像就没有用了，心情就变的紧张起来从而影响正常的发挥。

根据笔者这几年所积累的教学经验，雅思大作文绝大多数情况下出题还是比较常规和正常的，但也确实存在着某些偏题或者难题、怪题（大家不用紧张，雅思怪题和难题出现的频率不高）。

于是今天朗阁海外考试研究中心的雅思培训专家就给大家介绍一下如何应对雅思大作文偏题怪题。

Example 1 Advertising encourages people to buy in quantity rather than promoting itsquality.To what extent do you agree or disagree?广告鼓励人们购买大量的产品而不是促进提升产品的质量。

你同意还是不同意？其实这道题目是典型的广告类题目：考生拿到这个题目，首先要读三遍，理解题目本质的含义。

广告的本质之一其实就是帮助卖家(selling agencies)或者厂商(manufactures)提升产品知名度(increase the brand reputation),从而打开市场(explore the wider markets), 提升产品的销售额(boost the sales rates),怂恿或者引领消费者购买更多的产品(encouraging and leading the consumers to spend their salaries to purchase large quantities of products), 所以考生从正面来回答(agree)的话，就可以从以上这些角度来入手，写起来应该不难。

而且考生们还要知道厂商或者销售商是付钱给广告商的(advertisement agencies receive payment from manufacturers）, 如果人们买得多，对广告商本身也有好处。

考官倾囊相授如何完美回应问题

【雅思作文高分经验】考官倾囊相授如何完美回应问题编者：当一只烤鸭从考试楼外的等候，到楼内的等候，再到考场教室的等候，再到听读的洗礼，再到小作文的折磨，终于，ta来到了这一天雅思考试的最后的一个关口-大作文，很多又马不停蹄地开始飙单词。

可是殊不知，一部分人在下笔之初就已经开始了快速掉分的进程。

对于如何审题，看看考官是怎么说的吧。

小编翻译。

In your academic essay, a considerable number of points are availableaccording to how well you answer the question in the title. Therefore, it’s veryimportant to make sure you understand the title fully before you begin. Don’tjust find a keyword in the title and start writing. Examine the question carefully first.在你的雅思大作文写作中，按照你回答题目中所提的问题的优劣程度，有不少得分点你是有机会拿到手的。

因此，确保动笔之前已充分理解题目非常重要。

不要在题目中找到个关键词就死怼它。

首先仔细审题You need to consider:你需要考虑：1. How many things are you being asked to do?你被要求做多少事情?Some essay titles may have two parts, so make sure you address bothquestions.有些题目的问题部分有两部分，所以你务必两个问题都要回答。

2. What are the question words in the title?问题中的疑问词是什么?Make sure you understand what the question words mean. Here are a few of thecommonest question words:确保你搞清楚了疑问词的意思。

雅思大作文分段思路总结

雅思大作文分段思路总结一、雅思大作文分段思路如下：第一段：提出观点，引出话题。

根据提示性词语（比如I believe that...；I suggest that...），首先明确作者的观点，即认为什么是重要的、有价值的。

此处需要适当阐述观点，以便让读者了解作者的态度和看法。

第二段：阐述理由，展开论述。

这一段需要进一步阐述自己的观点，给出令人信服的理由来支撑观点。

分段展开，让论述更有条理。

第三段：比较异同，补充观点。

如果话题涉及两个事物，这一段可以比较它们的异同，并补充自己的观点。

分段展开，让论述更有条理。

第四段：总结观点，强调价值。

这一段可以总结前文所述的观点，并强调其价值或意义。

二、示例：2019年12月的题目作为例子：Nowadays people are living in a 'thrown-away' society where they use things for a short time and then throwaway. What cause this and what problem it may lead to?审题：利用1分钟弄清题目、类型。

包括：题目类型是什么?要求讨论的话题是什么?有几个问题?常见大作文题型有以下五个大类：To what extent do you agree or disagree?Discuss both views and give your opinion.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?What are the reasons and is there any solution can be taken?To what extent do you agree or disagree? Do you think it is a positive trend or negative?那么上题就是第四种报告说明类型的题目，讨论的话题就是人们用完就丢弃这种现象，两个问题：原因和影响利用3-5分钟列提纲好多考生在真实考试中会省略这一步，觉得费时间、没必要。

英语考试作文-考官雅思口语写作观点词汇语料：传统与现代

英语考试作文考官雅思口语写作观点词汇语料：传统与现代再好的雅思范文，也只能告诉你如何写好一篇文章的骨架，而要做到有血有肉，言之有物，则要靠大量的话题观点及相关词汇的支撑，而simon同学也告诉反复在讲，提升写作最快的两点：一点是减少语法错误，另一点就是积累并运用大量的话题词汇。

本文分享的话题观点语料是：传统vs现代。

注意文末还附上数道相关雅思写作历史真题供练习。

合集分享：考官9分写作口语观点词汇语料库绝对干货Traditional vs Modern传统vs现代Losing traditional skillsBecause of industrialization and global trade, many traditions have disappearedGlobal advertising encourages everyone to buy the same productsMost products are now made in factoriesMachinery has replaced skilled human labourFactory work is boring and leaves people feeling unfulfilledGoods are produced very quickly and in large numbersProducts are cheaper, which means that more people can buy themExamplesClothes are mass produced in standard sizesPeople wear similar clothes, rather than traditional costumesJeans and T-shirt are now worn throughout the worldHistoric buildings took skilled craftsmen years to buildModern concrete, steel and glass buildings are built in only weeks or monthsThere are fewer people who can create hand-made goodsTraditional customsTraditional customs are still important during weddings and religious festivalsPeople wear traditional costumers and eat special foodsIt is important to maintain our different cultural identitiesWe should celebrate festivals, teach traditional skills and protect historic places相关雅思历史真题1.When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent you agree or disagree with the statement?2.he older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life.3.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?People should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?。

Simon考官范文-雅思写作Task 2：Crime话题范文(一边倒的写法)

题目：Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later, and it is often argued that these are the best people to talk to teenagers about the dangers of committing a crime.To what extent do you agree or disagree?有些人进了号子之后放出来就变乖了，一些人觉得他们这伙人是最适合去给懵懂少年现身说法的。

多大程度上同意还是不同意？考官范文：1.开头段：完全同意题目的观点It is true that ex-prisoners can become normal, productive members of society. I completely agree with the idea that allowing such people to speak to teenagers about their experiences is the best way to discourage them from breaking the law.讲真有犯罪前科的前科的人是可以变成有益于社会的。

我完全同意让他们去给懵懂少年现身说法的主意，这是一种警示他们不要触犯法律的好办法。

2.主体段：(第一个理由)：犯人可以告诉青少年他们真实的犯罪经历。

年轻人会相信并被这些真实的故事所震慑，然后举例子In my opinion, teenagers are more likely to accept advice from someone who can speak from experience. Reformed offenders can tell young people about how they became involved in crime, the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and what life in prison is really like. They can also dispel any ideas that teenagers may have about criminals leading glamorous lives. While adolescents are often indifferent to the guidance given by older people, I imagine that most of them would be extremely keen to hear the stories of an ex-offender. The vivid and perhaps shocking nature of these stories is likely to have a powerful impact.在我看来，骚年们更喜欢接受有实践经历的人来讲道理。

雅思大作文开头改写分析3篇

雅思大作文开头改写分析3篇1）场景或背景信息，即题目中出现的phenomenon.2）一些人的观点（some people’s opinion）,这局部在改写文章首段时可要可不要，考生可按照自己的情况来安排。

3）个人观点，这一局部在有些文章的开头首段中也可以不要。

大作文要求字数至少到达250字，在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排，第一段最好写3-5句话，大约40字左右，并且切忌在第一段就掏心掏肺把什么话都说完。

因此总结出大作文开头的方式通常有以下几种情况：1）题目中包含了背景信息（phenomenon）,有时也出现一些人的观点，并且题目中字数较多。

这种情况下最保险的方法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达（paraphrase）,可以做：主动语态换成被动语态主谓宾换成主系表某些近义词互换Example:At present,it is hard for college students to find jobs.Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practical courses like puter science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography.To what extent do you agree转换成The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation.Numerous people blamethis on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as puter science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography.其后再加考生自己的观点即可。

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雅思小作文开头段改写诀窍

改后：The following chart describes the percentage of diverse types （同义词替换）of poor families （改变关键词的位置和词性）in Australia in 1999.
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图表作文开头段常用替换
give, describe, demonstrate, outline,
名词和从句之间的相互转换
The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the U.S. and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999
N. how N. + V. (change / fluctuate) unemployment rates how unemployment rates changed
开头段的写法：改写 / 转述题目同义替换 1. 同义词替换 2. 关键词词性、位置的转换。 3. 时间、地点的改写。 between A and B during the period from A to B 地点改写（具体概括） 4. 名词和从句之间的相互转换。 N. how N. + V. (change / fluctuate)
indicate, reveal, present, illustrate,
offer / provide an overview of…,
compare
show: (10种)
proportion: percentage, share
Information:
4.types:
Sole parent
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Couple with children

雅思大作文重点题型解题攻略

雅思大作文重点题型解题攻略雅思写作考试大作文中，经常会要求大家描述是否同意所给出的观点，有时候也会出现讨论类的题型。

接下来小编为大家介绍一下雅思写作考试重点题型的解题攻略，希望能帮助我们提高雅思写作分数，进行更全面的备考。

雅思大作文重点题型解题攻略1、愿意不同意型愿意不同意便是在方框中最终一段会显示信息“to what extent(有多大的水平) do you agree or disagree”.有时将会不容易显示信息“do you agree or disagree”,可是要是见到“to what extent”,基础后边跟的便是对方框內容的改变.愿意不同意的优秀作文有3种写法.假如你愿意方框内的观点,那麼给2-三个主体段,表明“unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programme”有哪些益处,并进行2-3句表述 .这时开头结尾必须彻底说明你十分愿意这一观点.假如你不同意方框内的观点,那麼给 2-三个主体段 ,表明“unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programme”为何不太好,并进行2-3句表述 .这时开头结尾必须彻底说明你十分不赞同这一观点.大部分,新手们搞不懂许多得以支撑点论点论据的原因得话,能够采用这类保持中立的写法,表明这一观点具有好的,也是有不太好的.去除开头结尾,这类保持中立写法一共是两个主体段,每一个主题风格段最少两个论点论据 .第一个主题风格段表明“unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programme”有哪些益处 .因此主体段1：益处1, 进行3句表述益处2,进行3句表述.随后另一个主题风格段可以说：虽然你认为有益处,可是这类作法還是有一些地区并不是非常好.随后表明一下哪一方面不太好：不好一,2-3句表述不好2,2-3句表述.这时开始能够说明“你认为这一观点有所不同”,随后末尾严格执行“这一观点有所不同”.之上是彻底不疾不徐型的作法.这类作法你的末尾只需严格执行有所不同就可以了.自然,即便是保持中立,你也能够有一定的偏重 ,例如你将会感觉方框中的观点益处更多一些.如果是那样的话,你能给优势的主体段写长一些,或是将这一主体段一拆为二,变为两个主体段,每一个主体段写一个论点论据.随后写缺陷的主体段就只留一个,可是缺陷的主体段還是必须两个论点论据,但是你能无须写的那麼长.这时开始说明“你认为这一观点有所不同”, 末尾严格执行“这一观点有所不同”,可是你觉得这一观点益处更多一些 .(假如你更偏重好药方)如同那样：开始：观点有所不同主体段1：优势--优势1 论述主体段2：优势2 论述主体段3：缺陷--缺陷1 论述,缺陷2 论述末尾：观点有所不同,益处大量假如你偏重不太好的一方,那麼就把缺陷的主体段写长,优势的主体段减少,随后末尾改为你觉得这一观点弊端大量.2、多边探讨型说白了“多边探讨”,在方框内最终一段显示信息的便是“discuss both views and give your opinion”,而方框内想要你探讨的內容必定是有二种观点,即赞同派和反对党.碰到这类种类的优秀作文,二种观点你务必都探讨,要是没有写到在其中一种,“ Task response ”这一项会罚分.针对得出的观点,你能表达彻底赞同,还可以只赞同在其中一部分 ,而另一部分抵制.大部分2个观点中有一个观点或多或少都一些并不是很恰当的地区 .因此,去除开头结尾：第一个主体段 ,表明某一个观点中赞同或不赞同的层面.第2个主体段 ,表明另一个观点中赞同或不赞同的层面.第三个主体段 ,实际表明自身的观点 .假如自身的观点与某一方的观点合乎,那麼能够将自身的观点融进进来,将你愿意的观点变为两个主体段,随后撤销独立表明自身观点的主体段 .如果你觉得这二种观点与你的观点都一些并不是很合乎的地区,那麼你能在第三个主体段实际表明自身的观点 .例如上边这一事例：你读题的情况下毫无疑问会想：最好是的方法是提升体育设备吗?毫无疑问,体育设备的提升是能够提高身心健康,可是是最好是的方法吗?应当并不是的.因此第一个主体段你可以写“体育设备的提升是能够提高身心健康”这一论点论据,随后得出 2-3语句表述.随后第2个主体段中反驳“体育设备的提升并不是最好是的方法”这类观点,得出 2-3语句实际表明为何.(这时表明了第二种观点) 第三个主体段举例说明表明“也有别的提升身心健康的方法”.(这时表明了第二种观点)开始能够复述这二种人的观点,还可以立即说明自身的观点 . 末尾则务必说明自身的观点 .大部分这就是多边探讨的整体方式.3、多种问与答型多种问与答实际上是问与答的全新升级(这类作文类型经常包括“是啥缘故有哪些对策处理”这类问与答组成).针对这类种类的文章内容,去除开头结尾, 第一个主体段写第一个难题 ,第2个主体段写第二个难题就可以.开始只需简易表明第一个难题就可以.例如这一事例,你可以说：“There are a lot of factors may contribute to job satisfaction.”(筱槿写的是非常简单的书写,考試的情况下不可以像筱槿那样彻底照搬)雅思写作：大作文首段的三要素要素之一： Restatement of the Topic大作文的题目都会给出相关情景或话题，在首段中应先对题目中的情景或话题进行展开。

雅思考官如何批改作文

雅思考官如何批改作文雅思考官如何批改作文雅思写作是雅思考试中非常重要的一部分，同时也是广大考友们必须攻克的一大难关。

下面就和yjbys网店铺一起来了解下雅思考官是如何批改作文吧!雅思作文这样批，系列一在执教雅思写作的这些年中，我会发现，很多时候学生会从某某老师那里获取种种所谓的“黄金模板”，又或者是高举考前必备一本，视若雅思界的圣经。

而不去管什么“碰文”。

而最最难过的却是分数不给力，才知天道难酬勤!换个方式学吧，看看隔壁的“他”的作文中那些错误的背后是否隐藏了写作的某些玄机。

请看下面这个小作文的开头段，看似行文流水，实则欲哭无泪。

As can be seen from the table chart, it gives us the percentage of national consumer experience by category in 2002 in five different countries.谈及套句，小作文中“As can be seen from…”曾被列为小作文必备佳句，而孰不知此句虽好，但native speaker 常把它放在主体段落开头句。

若论行文习惯，实在勉强。

再者，“table chart”必会让考官在批卷的疲劳中会心一笑。

但是烤鸭们，不知啊，你让他笑，他却让你人比黄花瘦，尽管他是那样的爱你。

此短语翻译成中文叫“表格图”，考生自是觉得挺有中国风的感觉。

但考官会认为是“这table就是表格，也就是图的'一种，还后面要是再加一chart，再来一图。

实为“black sheep 一族”啊!南部陈更要翻译成“表格图图”?实在是具有喜感啊!再论“us”一词，感觉倒是亲民派系，考官考生一家人啊。

但是，雅思写作，半学术文体，这词总有点较为随意。

所以，宁为被动，隐去施动者，换成it can be seen ,或是it represents that 等句，或许会更好点。

雅思写作之题目改写技巧

雅思写作之题目改写技巧一、题目改写8大技巧1.直接改写直接改变题目中的个别词或短语，使其意思发生变化。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“现代科技的利与弊”。

2.提问式改写将陈述句变为疑问句，或将疑问句变为陈述句。

例如，将“手机的利与弊是什么？”改为“你认为手机的利与弊是什么？”。

3.换词法使用同义词或近义词替换题目中的词汇或短语。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“智能手机的利与弊”。

4.句式变化1改变句子的语序、句型或结构，使表达方式更加多样化和丰富。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“智能手机的优点和缺点”。

5.归纳总结对题目的内容进行归纳和总结，将其变为一个更具有概括性的问题。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“现代科技的影响与挑战”。

6.分解问题将一个复杂的问题分解为几个小问题，使其更加易于理解和回答。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“手机对个人生活的利与弊”和“手机对社会生活的利与弊”。

7.增加细节在题目中增加一些细节或条件，使其更加具体和明确。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“使用手机对健康的利与弊”。

8.抽象概括将具体的问题抽象化或概括化，使其具有更普遍的意义和适用性。

例如，将“手机的利与弊”改为“科技发展的利与弊”。

2二、改写题目时需要注意的4点：1.保持题目的主题和核心意思不变，不要偏离题目的本意；2.改写后的题目要符合语法和语义规则，不要出现语法错误或语义不清的情况；3.尽可能使用多样化的表达方式，避免重复使用相同的词汇或短语；4.注意保持题目的简洁明了，不要过于复杂或冗长。

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雅思写作 discuss 考官范文

雅思写作中的“discuss”题型要求考生对一个话题进行正反两方面的讨论，并提出自己的观点。

为了帮助考生更好地掌握这种题型，下面将提供一篇雅思写作考官的范文，供大家参考和学习。

题目：随着科技的发展，人们的生活变得越来越便捷。

然而，有些人认为科技的发展也带来了一些负面影响。

请在以下两个问题中选择一个进行讨论：科技的发展是否让人们的生活变得更加便捷？科技的发展是否带来了一些负面影响？首先，让我们来看第一个问题：科技的发展是否让人们的生活变得更加便捷？正方观点：科技的发展确实让人们的生活变得更加便捷。

例如，互联网的普及使得人们可以随时随地获取信息，进行在线购物、支付、社交等活动。

科技的发展也提高了生产效率，使得许多行业得以快速发展。

例如，自动化和机器人技术的广泛应用，使得制造业的生产效率得到了显著提高。

科技的发展还为人们提供了更多的娱乐方式。

例如，智能手机和平板电脑的普及，使得人们可以随时随地观看电影、玩游戏、听音乐等。

反方观点：虽然科技的发展让人们的生活变得更加便捷，但也带来了一些负面影响。

例如，过度依赖科技可能导致人们缺乏社交互动和人际交往能力。

科技的发展也可能导致人们对于隐私和安全的担忧。

例如，网络犯罪的增多以及个人信息的泄露等问题，都是由于科技发展带来的安全隐患所导致的。

科技的发展还可能导致一些人沉迷于虚拟世界中，忽视现实生活中的问题。

例如，一些人沉迷于网络游戏或社交媒体中，导致学业或工作受到影响。

综上所述，科技的发展确实让人们的生活变得更加便捷，但也带来了一些负面影响。

因此，我们应该在享受科技带来的便利的同时，也要注意防范其可能带来的负面影响。

例如，加强网络安全意识、培养良好的使用习惯、保持健康的生活方式等都是我们应该注意的问题。

同时，政府和社会也应该加强对科技的监管和管理，确保其发展符合社会的利益和人民的福祉。

雅思口语考官范文

雅思口语考官范文雅思口语考官范文：关于阅读和语言的话题雅思口语话题：阅读What kinds of books do you like to read?I'd say I like reading quite a variety of books, both fiction as well as nonfiction. So for example, I'm a big fan of detective novels, because I enjoy trying to solve the crimes while I'm reading, although I have to admit I'm pretty useless at it most of the time! And as for nonfiction stuff, I'd say I mostly like reading things like self-help books and biographies of various people I admire, such as the new book on Steve Jobs, which I'm currently in the middle of reading.我想说我喜欢阅读各种各样的书，既有小说也有非小说类的。

举个例子，我是侦探小说的忠实粉丝，因为我喜欢在读书的时候解决犯罪问题，尽管我不得不承认我大部分时间都毫无用处!至于非小说类书籍，我想说我最喜欢读自助书和各种我喜欢的人的传记，比如关于史蒂夫·乔布斯的新书，我现在正在读这本书。

Are you reading any books at the moment?Yeah, I'm actually halfway through a couple of books right now. One of them's a novel which a friend of mine lent me, and the other is a book on business, which I bought about a year ago, but didn't get round to reading until now.是的，我实际上已经读过几本书了。

雅思小作文句型表达总结

雅思小作文句型表达总结雅思小作文句型表达总结————————————————————————————————作者：————————————————————————————————日期：首段（题目的改写方法）1, 替换表示“显示”的动词show=illustrate=describe=present=reveal2, 若国家的名字是缩写，可改为全称或者相反USA=United States of American 或AmericaUK=United Kingdom 或BritainChina=P.R.C3，变换时间的表现形式连接时间的介词和常用表达--in, at --over the period--for the following --from...to--between...and...4，将图表内信息具体化The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey.(two companies: Mongol and Jack&Jones)5，替换同义词These two figures are about crime in Britain. (5分）These two figures given concern criminality in Britain.(6分）Given are two figures concerning criminality in Britain. (7分）6同义表达percentage=variation changes=variationmen=males women=females data=figures/statisticsuniversity=college family=household during=overdifferent=various=several=diverse per year=annualspending=expense=expenditure kind=type=categorycountry=nation and=as well as about=concerning=regarding首段（结构性改写）一：变成There be 句型题目: The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive.改写: The pie chart shows that there are four main causes of farmland becoming degraded in the world today.二：变成How句型题目：The graph below gives information about water use in two different countries.改写：The graph shows how the amount of water used changed in two different countries.三：显示整体趋势题目:The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.改写:The graph shows the increase in the aging population in Japan,Sweden and the USA between 1940 and 2040.首段高分模板1, The pie chart shows that there are + 中心+（国家+时间）.The pie chart shows that there are three main countries using Internet shopping today.2, The graph shows how+主题+changed+(国家+时间).The graph shows how the amount of water used worldwide changed between 1900 and 2000.3,The graph shows the increase+主题+（国家+时间）The graph shows the increase trend in the aging populationin Japan, Sweden and the USA between 1940 and 2040.increase=upward decrease=downward描述变化的句型句型1: 主题/中心+v+adv+数据+时间During five years, Internet users in Germany and UK increased dramatically to 14 million and 22 million respectively.句型2：The number/amount/percentage of +主题/中心+v+adv+数据+时间或The figures for主题/中心+v+adv+数据+时间After that, the percentage of TV audiences rose sharply until 8:00 p.m. from 5% to 25%.句型3：主题/中心+saw/witnessed/experienced/showed a(n) +adj+trendWatching TV among adults, on the other hand, showed a downward trend.句型4：时间段+saw/witnessed/experienced a(n) +adj+n+数据+主题/中心The 10-year period saw a dramatic increase from $75 to $120 in the amount of monthly spending on electricity and water.句型5：There was /is/will be a+adj+n+主题/中心+（数据+时间）However, there was a slight decrease in expenditure on the other two items.描述变化的常用表达1，从......到...... from...to...The number of students enrolled increased from 5,000 to 20,000.2, by （表示数量、程度）之差The number of students enrolled grew by 15,000 (or by 300%).3, double/triple 翻一倍/翻两倍During these years, electricity generation almost doubled, rising from 127 to 200 units in New Zeal-and, and from 107 to 214 units in Germany. 4,with a(n) (overall) upward / downward trend伴随（整体）上升/下降的趋势Between 1965 and 1970 the number of immigrants fluctuated with an overall upward trend.5, see an opposite trend 呈现相反的趋势In contrast, the cost of furniture and equipment saw an opposite trend. 比较句型句型1, 主题/中心+v+the highest/largest/lowest/smallest+n+in/among+范围.From an overall perspective, German speakers achieved the highest grades with an average score of 6.7 across all four sections among the four countries.句型2：The number/amount/percentage of 中心A +be +adv+adj比较级+than that of +中心B.The number of medals Germany won was significantly more than that of South Korea.句型3：中心A+v+adj比较级+n+than+中心B.They won more medals than any other country.句型4：中心A+be+half/twice/...times/ not+as...as +中心B.The total number of medals America won is almost three times as many as Australia's.三大比较连接词1，词、词组之间的连接词compare with / to 与.....相比Men enjoyed over eighty hours of leisure, compared with forty-three hours for women.2，句子之间的连接词...while..., / ..., whereas... ...然而......Over the twenty-eight-year period from 1970 t o1998, in all five economies the number of people employed in manufacturing has decreased, while/ whereas the number employed in services has increased.3,段落之间的连接词By/ In contrast,... / In comparison... 与之相比On the contrary,... 与之相反By contrast, figures for the consumption of fish and chips fluctuated slightly and then fell over the same period.常用的比较词1，超过v--exceed, outnumber, overtake, rank, place2, be followed by..., then... 被.....紧跟，然后是......转换话题的句型1, As for / As to... 关于......As for the main destinations of travel, North America is becoming increasingly more popular.2, As far as ...be concerned... 就......而言The three main sources of stress as far as CEOs were concerned were: time pressures and deadlines, the demands of work on private life and the demands of work on the relationship with the family.占比例的句型3, ...account for / make up / constitute / occupy...Magazines account for the greatest number of sales in 1996.White, which is 62%, is considerably more common than blue, which makes up only 14%.表示时间的句型1,over the next.../ for the following... 在接下来的2, thereafter... 然后......3, from...to... / between...and...从....到..../在...期间4, until / by 直到；in /at 在.....5，over the period from...to... 从...到...的期间表示未来的句型It is foreseen/ anticipated / expected / forecast that...=...be foreseen / expected / anticipated / forecast to... 预期/预测/预见......It is foreseen that hamburgers will increase.结尾段句型一：有升有降句型1：Overall, the graph shows how+中心A +increased +adv+while +中心B+decreased over the period.E.g. Overall, the graph shows how leisure activities such as talking with family and friends increased significantly while the popularity of eating out and watching TV decreased over the period.句型2：In conclusion, while +中心A+be becoming increasingly/ decreasingly used, 中心B +has/had not become +adj比较级E.g.In conclusion, while water and pipelines are becoming increasingly used, rail has not become more popular as a method of transport.句型3：Generally, while +中心A+ increased/decreased dramatically / slowly, there were corresponding drops in + 中心B.E.g.Generally, while spending increased dramatically for equipment and insurance, there were corresponding drops in expenditure on things such as books and on other workers’ salaries.。

剑9考官范文

剑9考官范文雅思写作较新考试范文分析怎么写的有范文分析：考官的范文依旧是“只适合观赏不适合模仿”；四篇全是辩论类题目（两篇agree ordisagree，一篇discuss，还有一篇outweigh）2：范文开头段清一色的“改写”，反而两篇一高一低的学生范文更有借鉴意义，中间分段的多少并不重要、背会再默写出来、A类大作文分析1、题目内容，高分范文以及考官的范文之共同点在于；相比以往剑桥系列真题在真实考试当中“百年难得一见”的情况而言，剑9的题目更接近现实考试、趋势分析：根据有实战指导意义，过去三年当中的冷门题型（地图以及四饼图）都被收录在剑9中3、范文分析、趋势分析；比起剑8上面一些极少考的“分析类”题型而言，剑9更像一本“真题集”，并且证明了一个规律：A类考试当中教育类话题才是老大，辩论类的题型屹立不倒3、观点诠释：相比传统非黑即白的辩论题，剑9的考题更加考察发散型思维的能力，以Test3大作文为例，除了增加体育设施之外能够改善人们身体素质的办法要自己去想，把优秀的词句画出来、难度分析：图表作文对细节性的描述要求更严、难度明显增加：用简洁的词句对复杂纠结的数据图进行了巧妙地局部特写，然后与别的同学交换批改最后在与高分范文进行对照一、整体难度分析1、题目综述。

三，比方说Test4的大作文明显是2011年3月5日年考过的题，大作文的难度基本不变。

二、A类小作文分析1。

8分范文从头至尾都在围绕着主题中的关键字展开，并且“五大语法技巧”运用的犹如行云流水；4分范文又生动鲜明地向我们展示了导致文章低分的“四条绝路”。

四、备考建议在不看范文的情况之下先自己卡时间写在答题纸上、题目内容：如上表所示（终于出现了历史变迁类的地图），并且“柱、线、饼”三大图齐聚2。

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2...【哪儿可以下载到剑桥雅思1剑1到剑8都是剑桥出的官方复习参考资料，都是一段时间考过的真题，挑选出来出的一本书，最后还有部分考官的写作范文。

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题目：2015年06月13日(题目本身信息难度不大)The charts show the information about the water consumption and water residential use in Australia in 2004.The charts include the information which represent the Australian water consumption and residential use in 2004.The residential cost +of water is divided into two parts,》: one is +for house and another one》the other is +for apartment. The house one》The former accounted for the most part which is》was 57 percent. As for the apartment, one》itis much less than +the water use inside the house, which is only 13 percent. There are also several other fields, including industry, business, government and others. but compare with the residential use , their total cost is only a small section. others take 3 percent which is the smallest one. government is the second smallest which only occupied 6 percent. the business and industry are respectively 10 percent and 11 percent.》》将以上句子进行合并：Compared with the residential water usage, several other fields consumed only a small section of water, including industry, business, government and others, the amount of which are 11[[[%]]], 10[[[%]]], 6[[[%]]] and 3[[[%]]] respectively.(提高句子表达效率和效果)讲解：通过本段可以看出，该生信息描述不够准确，语言比较重复，而且标点符号错误率很高。