浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练读后续写
浙江省18届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练(3)读后续写(word版,含
浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练(3)读后续写(Word版,含写作提升练(三) 读后续写1 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
(2017·浙江衢州二中5月模拟) It was the late 1930s,and things were had a hard time raising us on her own in our small community of New Westminster, dad had drowned in Pitt Lake,five years ago. Looking back,I realize what Mum went through sending us kids to morning she would tuck a new piece of cardboard in our shoes,because our soles(鞋底)were worn we got home,Mum would have “French toast” ready for moving was typical for my family in those was 25 dollars a month,but Mum couldn’t pay it,and we knew we would be evicted right after Christmas on the first of January.Christmas was approaching,and we were entitled to a twenty-five-dollar Christmas fund from social inspector came to our house,and searched it from top to bottom to be sure we didn’t have any food hidden he didn’t find any,he issued the cheque to said that instead of buying food,she would use the 25 dollars to pay back rent,assuring us all of a roof over our heads for a little while told us then there would be nothing for Christmas. Unknown to Mum,I had been selling Christmas tree,shoveling snow,and doing odd jobs to earn enough money to buy a new pair of that weren’t patched,boots with no cardboard in the knew exactly which boots I were ten-inch Top Genuine Pierre Paris and they had a price of 23 dollars. Well,the big day came on the afternoon of Christmas was excited,as I hurried up the road to the shoe store,but on the way I noticed a house with Christmas lights andwas then I realized at our house,we had no lights,no decorations,nor any money for Christmas knew that we would have no turkey or ham for Christmas,and I felt sad. 注意: 1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右; 2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语; 3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练(4)读后续写
写作提升练(四) 读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
(2017·11浙江)A Vacation with My MotherI had an i nteresting childhood.It was filled with surprise and amusements,all because of my mother—loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and forgetful.One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way.As the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends.Who knew if we’d ever see them again?Finally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loadedsuitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove off.We bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get t he purse and travel er’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨) while I go,and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey,where are the kids?” “What?! Oh,Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a stran ge city,but we weren’t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy.After driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there?David and I became nervous.To our great relief,Dad turned down the idea.Mom never could understand our objections(反对).If a strange family showed up on her frontdoorstep,Mom would have been delighted.She thinks everyone in the wor ld as as nice as she is.We finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2018浙江高考读后续写真题范文赏析
浙江高考:One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to campovernight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. "I'm going to find a better spot for us to camp and walked away. ------------With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost.甥?枷黑?助棒?物敦?助效八、、提No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落)somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- great joy,she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is thatfor me Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow -------------------------------------------------------------------------- blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. 注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语:3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
高考英语二轮复习读后续写练习课件(在陌生人的帮助下找回迷路的母亲)
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Our preferred park was a 2 km walk from my house and it had a l km walking track. I could not drive her there every day as I had to leave for the office at the same time she wanted to set out. Since there were hardly any footpaths in Chertsey, my mother said she was delighted to walk on the road as she was certain there wouldn’t be much traffic in the morning.
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上午11点10分,门铃响了,我母亲站在门外微笑着,身边有一位年轻女子。我 紧紧地、深情地拥抱着母亲。这位年轻的女士非常放心地告诉我,我母亲早上散步 回家时迷路了。她能提供的唯一描述是,我的房子在公园附近,房子是红砖砌的。 经过近两个小时的搜寻,这位年轻女子终于找到了我的房子。她对我母亲回家表示 非常欣慰。
2018高考浙江读后续写.doc
2018 年高考英语浙江卷·读后续写参考答案与写作点拨2018 浙江卷·读后续写( 满分 25 分 )阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided totake me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque inthe late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to hisfarm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spentthe night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the rivernearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawnon my farm, ” he said. After brea kfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad wentwith Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze( 吃草 ). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as mydad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on ournew cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper, ”Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost! ” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colorsof the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven ( 编织的 ) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1. 所续写短文的词数应为150 左右;2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
2018年6月高考英语浙江卷读后续写真题解析及范文赏析(度假骑马迷路)
2018年6月浙江卷:度假骑马迷路
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1 试题再现 2 试题分析 3 写作思路 4 范文赏析
01 历年高考英语读后续写真题分析 2018 试题再现
试题再现
读后续写 高中英语写作 新题型
阅读阅下读面下材面料短,根文据,其根内据容所和给所情给段节落进开行头续语写续,写使两之段,构使成之一构个成完一整篇的完析 2018 试题分析
原文分析
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West. We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad’s friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the
chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃
03 历年高考英语读后续写真题分析 2018 写作思路
理解材料
高中英语写作 新题型
阅读回下面答材下料面,几根个据其问内题容,和检所测给段一落下开你头是语否续读写两懂段了,原使材之料构成。一篇完整的短文。
2018版高考英语二轮训练题:专题限时集训(十八) 训练1 读后续写含解析
专题限时集训(十八)读后续写训练1(对应学生用书第191页)A【导学号:38144069】(2017·浙江宁波5月考前模拟)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Boys like to be considered to be brave,but what kind of things can be considered to be brave?It is not a question that can be answered by words,but by the actual deed.A boy with the name Henry gave us a good example.Ronny and Henry were two friends in the same class.They always played together and went home together.One day as Ronny and Henry were going home after school,they saw some people fighting in the street corner.Ronny said excitedly,“Some people are fighting!Let's go and have a look!”But Henry refused,“It's none of our business.We'd better go home and don't get close to them.Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with us together at home and I don't want them to worry about me.”“You are a coward,and afraid to go,”said Ronny,and off he ran to the spot with some other boys.Henry had to go home alone and didn't think about it anymore.But Ronny thought Henry was a coward and told all the boys that.They laughed at him a great deal.From then on,they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him.Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Ronny for his rude behavior,because he had learned that true courage was shown most in bearing misunderstanding when it was not deserved,and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong.Thus,he just ignored the other boys' laughter and continued to stick to his thought and go to school and study as well.However,Ronny didn't invite Henry to go home with him anymore.Instead,he had his new friends who also thought Henry was a coward.Every day after school,they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had lots of fun.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Almost reluctantly she tore the envelope open. Folded in the card was a piece of paper. Written on the card was a message under the printed Happy Birthday—Buy yourself something nice with the cheque, Myra and Harold. The cheque fluttered to the floor like a bird with a broken wing. Slowly the old lady stooped to pick it up. Her present, her lovely present. With trembling fingers she tore it into little bits.
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2018年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析(上)
2018年6月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析(上)(function() {var s = "_" + Math.random().toString(36).slice(2);document.write('');(window.slotbydup = window.slotbydup || []).push({id: "u3686515",container: s});})();2018年6月读后续写题型再次出现在浙江省高考英语科目写作第二节,该题型提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生根据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词语进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
下面让我们一起来分析一下本次高考读后续写试题。
一给定材料和题目要求It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul,my dad’s friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn onmy farm,” he said. After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens,while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me. I wasn’t going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don’t be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried,“and keep to the track so that you don’t get lost!” “OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的)blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
高中英语高考复习最新读后续写练习(共12篇,附参考范文)
班级考号姓名总分一、阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My teenage son, Jordan, always complained about having to be home earlier than all his friends.He would tell me that he was already seventeen, but still had a curfew (宵禁),He believed he was practically an adult.I pointed out that he was not an adult as he was still in high school.“You don't trust me!” he yelled.Before I continued, he rolled his eyes, slammed the door and walked away.I sighed.How could I make Jordan see that I only wanted to keep him safe?I decided to go for a walk, hoping the December air would clear my head.I opened the front door and nearly stepped on her: a small black cat, just like a meatball.“Hi, Meatball," I said, bringing her into my arms.I walked back in, touching her neck gently.Meatball seemed happy enough to come in the house, but after an hour or two, she sat by the door, meowing to go back outside.“Why won't she just stay in with us all the time?” Nathan, my youngest son asked.I explained to him that she was happy here but she liked being able to come and go as she pleased.“That must be nice,” Jordan muttered from the other room, complaining why the cat, not him, could come and go.He even asked me to give Meatball a curfew.Meatball became a regular.One night, temperatures were unusually low.Meatball stood at the door, meowing to go outside.I shook my head at her, afraid that she might freeze to death.She stared at me and meowed again.I patted her head, “I know you're not happy, but it's for your own good.”“Mom's not being mean to you,” Nathan told the cat.“She's just trying to keep you from turning into a frozen meatball.”We both laughed at his joke.The next morning, I couldn't find Meatball.I asked the kids if anyone had seen her.【注意】1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
(浙江专版)高考英语二轮复习写作组合练2
写作组合练训练2Ⅰ.应用文写作假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Jack在观看《中国汉语桥》节目时,决定学习中国语言文化,希望你能给他一些建议。
请你根据以下提示写一封信。
1.通过中国古典作品了解中国文化;2.借助电视节目以及报刊更好地了解中国国情;3.和中国朋友多沟通。
注意:1.词数80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,Yours,Li Hua 【写作指导】本篇书面表达是应用文中的书信,属于半开放式写作,主要内容是给决定学习中国语言文化的英国朋友Jack提出具体建议。
写作前,学生要认真审题,进一步明确写作任务,以确保文章的内容与主题一致。
试题已经给出了书信的开头和结尾,因此学生不需要考虑格式问题,可直接进入主题,展开写作。
在提建议时主要围绕提示的三个方面适当展开。
文章应以第二人称和一般现在时为主。
此外,写作时不要一味使用简单句,应注意复合句和并列句的交错使用,长短句相结合,使文章有层次感。
学生还要注意使用必要的衔接词,以增强文章的逻辑性。
【参考范文】Dear Jack,I'm glad to know that you are interested in Chinese Bridge Contest and want to learn more about the Chinese language and culture.To learn the Chinese language and culture well,first of all,you have to read some classical literature,which will broaden your horizon.Besides,watching TV programs and reading newspapers are also good ways of language st but not least,you are supposed to make some Chinese friends with whom you can communicate frequently.Only by doing so can you achieve your goal.Yours,Li Hua【导学号:85602036】Ⅱ.读后续写阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
基于浙江省新高考英语读后续写题型分析及教学策略
摘要:近几年来,浙江省采取了新高考模式,其中英语科目的写作考试也发生了变化,增加了读后续写的题型,所以对教师教学提出了更高的要求。
教师需要逐渐加强读写方面的教育,以此来培养学生阅读和写作的能力,使其可以从根本上提高英语学习水平,从而推动其全面发展。
本文对浙江省新高考英语读后续写题型进行了简要分析,并提出了针对性的教学策略,希望可以改善当前英语教学状况,提高学生的读后续写能力。
关键词:浙江省新高考;英语;读后续写题型新高考中读后续写题型的增加对学生产生了重要影响,也使其教师教学重点发生了一定变化。
长期以来,阅读和写作一直是教学中的难点,学生关于这方面的能力也是相对比较薄弱的。
因此,在实际写作教学时,教师不仅要让学生拥有良好的写作能力,还要在阅读理解基础上,加强续写锻炼,以此来让学生全面掌握文章内容,并灵活运用自己的语言对文章进行更深层次的阐述。
一、浙江省新高考英语读后续写题型特点分析读后续写就是在阅读短文以后,根据文章中的情节进行续写,通过续写要使文章表达得更完整。
这种题型加强了写作和阅读的紧密联系,成为了检验学生读写能力的有效方式。
要想获得好的成绩,就要全面分析文章,根据写作要求灵活运用自己的语言,使上下文可以得到有效衔接,其完整性也可以得到进一步提升。
读后续写题型在评分时,主要考察的是学生的语言表述是否准确、合理,以及对文本信息的处理能力等。
由此可见,这是一种开放性的题型,要想获得较高的评价,就要进行多方考量。
在进行实际教学时,教师要明确读后续写题型的评分标准,并且根据这些要求,对学生进行明确且有效的写作指导,以此来提高他们的写作能力和阅读理解能力,从而高效地完成续写。
二、新高考背景下提高英语读后续写能力的教学措施(一)注重阅读教学,梳理文章情节在实际考试中,有些学生所写文章上下文不连贯,表述的不够准确,造成这些问题的主要原因是学生对文章信息的掌握能力有待能力,并且缺乏一定的文本意识。
基于此,教师要加强阅读练习,为学生讲解正确的阅读方法和阅读技巧,使其可以高效地完成文章阅读,从而掌握其全部意思,在实际写作时也可以按照基本要求来完成任务。
读后续写(2018浙江高考真题为例)
A narrative writing
When: one summer late afternoon (before supper) Where: in the mountains Who: I and my father What: We were riding horses for fun
• 浙江省近几年高考中,读后续写这一题型多次出现,且 都标示了关键词,但山东省2020年新高考读后续写中并 没有标出关键词,这样更能考查考生的创造性思维,同 时也增加了试题的开放性。
读后续写的具体要求
提供一段350词以内的语言材料,要求考生依 据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词 进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定 材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
4. What did the author hear that night? 5. What would the author like to do? How do you know?
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In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take
6. Where did the author and his father go on their horses? 7. What did Uncle Paul remind them to do? 8. What would happen to the author and his father?
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2 构思情节
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3 尝试续写
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浙江省2018届高考英语二轮复习写作提升练五读后续写20171210184
写作提升练(五) 读后续写1(2017·浙江普通高中学业水平考试仿真模拟)阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的短文。
Want to know how to survive a plane crash?What about a terrorist attack?To put your mind at ease in nearly any situation,you can almost guarantee your survival if you never leave the house without 3 necessary items,i.e.a lighter(打火机),alifestraw(救命吸管) and a raincoat.Right off the place full of danger,your first instinct(本能) might be to search for help the minute you realize you’re in tro uble.But survival experts insist you should stay where you are until help finds you,instead;doing so will make it easier for the search and rescue teams to locate your location.What should you do until then,you ask?Prepare to hunker down(盘腿坐下) for the long run.That’s where your three pieces of survival necessities come intoplay,Stewart says.For one,you should have something to start a fire on you at all times.Fire-starting tools are inexpensive to purchase,and you can easily carry them around in a backpack or pant pocket.But even without a fancy item,all you really need is something to light the first flame.“You can use cotton balls covered in petroleum jelly(凡士林油) as a fire starter,”Stewart told USA TODAY.“They are water resistant and will start a fire with just a spark.”Second,you’ll need something to make your drinking water fit to drink,such as a canteen(饭盒) that can boil water.Stewart recommends buying a $20 lifestraw,which “can be struck into the muddiest pool of water you can find and you suck the water out like a straw.” Any doubt?It could still save your life,Stewart says.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;2.应使用5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头词或句子已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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写作提升练(四) 读后续写1阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
(2017·11浙江)A Vacation with My MotherI had an i nteresting was filled with surprise and amusements,all because of my mother—loving,sweet,yet absent-minded and strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorado and North Dakota,and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the the first day of our trip approached,David,my eight-year-old brother,and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our knew if we’d ever see them againFinally,the moment of our departure arrived,and we loadedsuitcases,books,games,camping equipment,and a tent into the car and bravely drove bravely drove off again two hours later after we’d returned home to get t he purse and travel er’s checks Mom had forgotten.David and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept:“You stand outside the door and play lookout(放哨) while I go,and I’ll stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“Honey,where are the kids” “What! Oh,Gosh...I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a stran ge city,but we wer en’t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night,we had trouble finding a hotel with a driving in vain for some time,Mom suddenly got a great idea:Why didn’t we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent thereDavid and I became our great relief,Dad turned down the never could understand our objections(反对).If a strange family showed up on her front doorstep,Mom would have been thinks everyone in the wor ld as as nice as she finally found a vacancy in the next town.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.????????Paragraph2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.???????2阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
Jack,a clerk at the local bank,was wandering alone on the was a cold,silent winter mind was on his wife Linda,who had been in a car accident two months ago and was now lying in a hospital bed,waiting for more money for her had sold everything he had,and he had tried his best to borrow money from all the pople and banks he the real world is large amount of money was still Jack,it would mean a great deal of suffering to se e his wife die without any help.“I have only one option left,”Jack said to he went to the bank,his workplace, several days,he observed the bank and planned a next day,he went to work as seemed normal:he joked with his workmates and helped his clients as he always no one noticed that he had brought a bigger suitcase to work,instead of the small one he always 5:00 pm,the bank closed,and the clerks and the guards had all gone ,at that moment,Jack was in the bathroom,and the guards didn’t notice him,of the noises coming from the street were replaced by silence and e verything turned dark,Jack came out from the first cut the lines of the alarms and monitors with tools from his n ew was all too familiar with the equipment since he had been working there for 8 years and had been studying the security system for the past 30 a special key and some other tools,he then easily opened the doors of the bank’s security system wasn’t very good,which allowed Jack to take a lot of minutes later,Jack left the bank w ith a heavy bag filled with money.?注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph1:After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to ring.??????????Paragraph2:But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old man.????????参考答案写作提升练(四)读后续写1Paragraph1:The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with then we were half an hour away from the hotel,where the tent was left recommended buying a new one,while Mom insisted on our going back to fetch it,saying “Forgetful people like me may lose things repeatedly,so it’s unwise to give up the tent.” Finally,we got back the tent and hit the road Mom hadn’t been that absent-minded,it would have saved us the trouble of going back again and again.Paragraph2:We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the day,towards evening,we found a great camping site at the foot of a high and I helped Dad put up the tent,and Mom was busy preparing the setting sun cast an orange light over the mountains,the tent was set up and the meal was around the camp fire,we talked and time we mentioned the funny incidents of the journey a pleasant smile would spread over Mom’s fa ce.2Paragraph1:After Jack had been gone from the bank for a while,the alarms began to police arrived at the bank very quickly,only to find no one next day was a really special day for the town,which was filled with newspapers and TV reporters covering the strange clerks at the bank were busy discussing the case,of course,including police could only promise to catch the thieves as soon as possible,even though no clues had been found yet.?Paragraph2:But the most unlucky man was the manager of the bank,an old seemed to be the only person to blame and was removed from his last,with enough money for her operation,Jack’s wife was ,Jack felt guilty about the manager of the could not forget what he had done to the old guilt deepened as time went ,he turned himself into the police and accepted his punishment.。