MBA英语作文

MBA作文讲义

考试流程

2010—2014年作文回顾

写作25%分数

小作文2010—2014年99%信件10分/15mins

2010 感谢信［邀请］中美文化项目刚回国①感谢②邀请来中国玩

2011 恭喜信［建议］表弟考上大学①恭喜②给些建议

2012 投诉信［解决方案］电子词典坏了①投诉②给出解决方案

2013 邀请信我们班举行一个慈善义卖①邀请

2014 询问信出国与室友居住①你的生活习惯②给出建议

大作文议论文15分/35mins ( 数据图表连续5年硬币原理看图说话/坏现象) 提出问题／分析问题／总结

作文注意：

一个中心，两个基本点（以阅卷老师为中心；风险最小化，得分最大化）

卷面：字数+20（恰当字数）小100+20 大150+20

段落3段式（4段式）

格式空行，空格

字句，行距

杂项改错不改好(Fudan University is an old school; it is very famous.)

书写规范cannot can’t

基本要求：涂改拼写语法

高分作文标志：

1、是否长短句交叉；习惯使用被动we should pay attention to而用Attention should be paid to.

2、是否会使用插入语；如however / therefore /for example/I believe 做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说：Other individuals, however, take the attitude that …

3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；

The apartment is very close to your school. = The apartment is within a stone’s throw of your school.

4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；

Internet=cyber-space/ the Web/ world/ community

people= individuals/citizens/ netizens/ residents/ working-age adults

more and more= growing/increasing…

5、句型使用是否准确、地道。

A: Hi John! You’re up early!

B: Yes, the early bird catches the worm!

A: Hi John! You’re up early!

B: Well, you know what they say about the early bird!

有关当局要采取更好的措施

The relevant authorities have to make better rules and regulations.

The authorities concerned

小作文

一．六种头：

1. I am writing this letter to tell you that _____________

I am happy to learn/ hear that ____________

I am sorry to say/ tell you that ____________

2. It is believed/ said/ hoped/ known/ assumed/ acknowledged (by many people) that ____________

3. 众所周知As we all know, ___________/ As is known to all, ____________

4. 我认为：We/ I come to realize/ believe that ____________

I am firmly convinced that____________

As far as I am concerned, ____________

In the eyes of most people, ____________

I strongly feel/do suggest that____________

I have reasons to believe that____________

5. Everyone (in business/ in the world) has been told that __________

6. I hope this letter can find you in a good mood. / This letter is expected to find you in a good mood. 二．3→30

长句=头+身体+尾巴+垃圾

以复旦很有名为例：Fudan University is famous. 如何变长句

头: As is known to all, ___________________________________

身体：Fudan University enjoys great reputation and popularity –主句

垃圾：all over the world –介词结构

尾巴so, I am proud that you become a part of it.---从句

推荐使用从句:

When/if----假设逻辑关系

because/so—因果

but, 转折

，which_____________

，who_____________

三．静态----动态语言（be 动词的转化问题）

be popular/ famous: enjoy great reputation and popularity all over the world

be cheap: enjoy a low and competitive price in the market.

be important: play a crucial role in doing something

eg. Q uality plays a crucial role in boosting a company’s popularity and reputation in the modern market. 四：主体部分万能句（2句话）

1. 因果关系