学生作文中的常见错误

You won’t miss it and I am looking forward to your coming. Yours, Harrison
第1步：审题
1 主题 (what)
2 时间 (when) 3 主要 任务
用英语写一封便函给Mary， 邀请她参加生日宴会
本周六（4月28日）下午6点30分
What What can can make make up up good good sentences? writings?
[写作内容] 话题：Why should we study English? 内容包括以下要点： 1. 英语已成为国际语言，懂英语可以使你轻 松地与外国人交流，到世界各地旅游 2. 你可以阅读很多用英语写的又价值的书， 报刊和杂志 3. 你可以到外企或国外工作，所以，懂英语 还是你谋生的一种方式
Why should we study English?
As you know, English has become an international language. // If you know English, you can communicate with foreigners as well as make a trip round the world without difficulties with language. // You can also get knowledge directly from some valuable books, newspapers and magazines written in English. // What’s more, finding a job in a foreign company or even working abroad are possible for you if you know it well. // Therefore, not only is English a tool of yourcommunication, but also it is a way to make your living.
请根据情景说明，用5个规范的句子描述全部所给的信息内容。 【写作内容】 用英语写一封便函给Mary，邀请她参加你的生日宴会。 时间：本周六（4月28日）下午6点30分。 地点：Harrison家（教育路18号）。 地点路线图：按下图所画路线告诉Mary怎样去Harrison家。
Heng Yi Hotel Bank Jiaoyu Road
好句子
1. Hellen Keller, who couldn't see or hear by the time she was 7, was a famous American writer and educator.(淑贤) 2. In her early life when she was 7, Ann Sullivan, who later became her close teacher and friend, was brought in to help her.(显荣) 3. If you ask me who is my most admirable character and I will reply that Hellen Keller is, because I learnt she couldn't hear or see in her early life, but she never let it defeat her.(艳梅) 4. And thanks to her great stories, thousands of people were encouraged by her words and spirits.(皓鹏)
1. Some students study late into the night. 2. They can sleep longer in bed if they don't have breakfast. 3. So they tend to be sleepy all day. 4. They have bad memories. 5. They can't get high marks in the exams. 6. Morning meal is very important in our daily life. 7. It can provide 30% of the whole day’s energy. 8. We students should think much of breakfast.
词形变化错误 语法结构错误 常见错误 表达错误 1. Knowing English can make you easy to communicate with foreigners. (惠琼，龙清)
2. Try your best to learn English is for your own good no matter now or in the future.(冬妮) 3. We all know English has became a international language. (满明，碧燕) 4. So you know English can become a way which you make a living.(小慧)
Writing Steps
1. Read the topic and identify all the information, key points ; (审题, 确定信息点) 2. Think of the words, phrases, sentence you may use in writing; (草拟短语，确定短语和句型) 3. Join the sentences together and change their structures where necessary; （连词成句，合并句子，适当改变句型） 4. Add some linking words, or sentences if needed. （加关联词或句成篇, 润色, 使更流畅）
Your Task:
1、标题：Top Meal of the Day（头等餐） 2、必须使用五个句子介绍全部所给的内。 3、将五个句子组织成连贯的短文。 * 原因：晚上学习太晚，不吃早餐可以多睡 一会。 * 结பைடு நூலகம்：上课总想睡觉。注意力下降。考试 成绩不理想。 * 建议：早餐不可少，它提供全天所需的能 量的30%， 我们学生应重视早餐。
第2步：用英语表达短语句子
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. have a birthday party at home at 6:30 this Saturday afternoon on Apr.28th. I live at No. 18 Jiaoyu Road Take No.602 Bus at our school gate Get off at the second crossing. Ririsheng Supermarket is near the crossing. Its opposite is a bank. Turn right and you will find Jiaoyu Road. Walk along the road and you will see my home on the right side. 10. It is opposite to a net bar.
第3步：合并句子
1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. 8. 9. have a birthday party at home at 6:30 this Saturday afternoon on Apr.28th. I live at No. 18 Jiaoyu Road Take No.602 Bus at our school gate Get off at the second crossing. Ririsheng Supermarket is near the crossing. Its opposite is a bank. Turn right and you will find Jiaoyu Road. Walk along the road and you will see my home on the right side. 10. It is opposite to a net bar.
第4步 润色成篇 Dear Mary, ① I’m going to have a birthday party at home at 6:30 this Saturday afternoon on Apr.28th and I’m glad if you can join us. ② It is not very difficult to find your way to my home, for I live at No18 Jiaoyu Road which is close to Ririsheng Supermarket. ③ Please take a No. 602 Bus at our school gate and get off at the second crossing when passing Hengyi Hotel, where you can see a bank opposite to the surpermarket. ④ Then turn right at the corner and you will find Jiaoyu Road.⑤ Walk along this road and in a minute you will find my home on the right just opposite to a net-bar. You won’t miss it and I am looking forward to your coming.
告诉Mary宴会的地点和路线图。
整理信息点
1 周六（4月28日）下午6点30生日宴会。 （时间地点） 2 教育路18号。 3 在学校门口坐第602路公汽， 4 过恒益酒店后在第二个十字路口，日日 升超市旁下车， 5 下车后，向右转，找到教育路。 6 沿教育路直接往前走，在右手边，网巴 对面。
任 务 告 知 路 线
No 602 bus
Ririsheng
No 18
Net Bar
【写作要求】 1、必须使用5个句子介绍全部所给的内容 2、将5个句子组织成连贯的短文。 注意：便函的格式已给出。 April 27th, 2007 Dear Mary,
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Top Meal of the Day Some students, who study late into the night, choose to miss breakfast so that they can have a few extra minutes in bed.// As a result, they tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories, making it hard for them to get high marks in all kinds of tests.// As a matter of fact, the morning meal plays an important part in our daily life. // It can provide 30% of the whole day’s energy so as to keep our mind in better conditions. // So