2019年GRE考试写作经典范文赏析(二)
2019课标全国卷2英语作文
2019课标全国卷2英语作文In the journey of life, we encounter various challenges that test our resolve and perseverance. The English essay prompt from the 2019 Curriculum Standards National Volume 2, which asks us to reflect on the importance of perseverancein overcoming difficulties, provides an excellentopportunity to explore this theme.Perseverance is the steadfastness in doing something despite difficulty or delay in achieving success. It is a quality that is honed through adversity and trials. Life,by its nature, is full of ups and downs, and it is only through perseverance that we can navigate through the tough times and emerge stronger.Consider the story of Thomas Edison, the inventor ofthe light bulb. He faced numerous failures and setbacks in his quest to create a long-lasting, efficient light source. However, instead of giving up, he persevered, learning from each failure and ultimately succeeding. His story teachesus that perseverance is not just about not giving up; it's about learning, growing, and ultimately achieving our goals.The same is true in our daily lives. Whether it's a challenging academic task, a difficult sporting event, or a personal goal we are striving to achieve, perseverance is the key to success. It is the driving force that pushes us to keep going when the road ahead seems tough and unyielding.Moreover, perseverance instills in us a sense of purpose and direction. When we persevere, we are morelikely to set clear goals and work towards them with determination. This focus and direction not only help us achieve our aims but also give our lives a sense of purpose and fulfillment.However, perseverance does not mean stubbornly sticking to one path regardless of obstacles. It also involves adaptability and the ability to pivot when necessary. Sometimes, the wisest course of action is to reevaluate our goals and strategies in the face of insurmountable obstacles. This is not a sign of weakness but rather a display of wisdom and strategic thinking.In conclusion, perseverance is a critical ingredient in the recipe for success. It is the driving force thatpropels us forward in the face of challenges and困难, and the learning experience that helps us grow and adapt. As we journey through life, let us remember that with perseverance, no dream is too big, and no challenge is too great.**中文内容：****标题：面对挑战时的坚持之力**在人生的旅途中，我们遇到各种各样的挑战，这些挑战考验着我们的决心和毅力。
GRE考试写作经典赏析（二）
GRE考试写作经典赏析（二）2016年GRE考试写作经典范文赏析(二)导语：下面是小编收集的一篇GRE考试写作经典范文，供您参考，希望能帮助您。
The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."The speaker contends that technology's primary goal should be to increase our efficiency for the purpose of affording us more leisure time. I concede that technology has enhanced our efficiency as we go about our everyday lives. Productivity software helps us plan and coordinate projects; intranets, the Internet, and satellite technology make us more efficient messengers; and technology even helps us prepare our food and access entertainment more efficiently. Beyond this concession, however, I find the speaker's contention indefensible from both an empirical and a normative standpoint.注意这种新结构：运用了大量的事实作出对原文观点的让步性同意，但是在最后还是有所创新的提出自己的读到见解。
2019年俞敏洪老师精彩讲解GRE之作文-范文模板 (1页)
2019年俞敏洪老师精彩讲解GRE之作文-范文模板
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俞敏洪老师精彩讲解GRE之作文
最有意思的是，到DUKE后的第一个星期，每个中国学生都要写论文。
他写了之后交给教授，教授看后对他说，你这个论文是剽窃的，因为我从事了20年的教学，从来没有看到中国学生能写出这么漂亮文章的。
你有没有证据可以证
明这是你自己写的?他说我现在不拿什么证据，但是我能背100篇文章，可以背给你听听。
然后他就背了两篇文章，背了之后，他说，那个教授号啕大哭起
来了。
他没想到在遥远中国的一个角落里有居然有人能把那么难的文章、那么
优美的文章，背的这么炉火纯青，真让人很感动。
就是这个学生的例子促使我编了现在那本英文现代文选。
所以我建议大家
如果是针对GRE作文，要背的话，可以选择新概念英语第三册的后30篇。
如果还想背的，可以选择我和包凡一老师编的现代英语背诵文选，那里面的句子
难度刚好相当。
80篇中选你最喜欢的30篇就行了。
有这30篇垫底，就足够了。
剩下的就是自己写了。
但是要背到怎么熟练呢，就是任意选一篇就能倒背如流。
模仿别人的优秀文章
写有两种方式。
有些同学天天写，但是水平和一年前没有什么长进。
所
以光靠自己写是不行的。
没有什么参照，思想越挖越空，最后就没什么可写的了。
2019考研英语2作文
2019考研英语2作文It was a cold winter morning, and I was feeling a bit under the weather. I had been studying for the GRE for weeks, and the pressure was really getting to me. I decided to take a break and go for a walk in the park. As I was walking, I couldn't help but notice the beauty of nature around me. The trees were bare, and the ground was covered in a blanket of snow. It was a peaceful and serene scene, and it made me forget about my worries for a while.I had been preparing for the GRE for months, and I was starting to feel the pressure. I knew that I had to do well on the exam in order to get into my dream graduate school, but the thought of taking such an important test was really stressing me out. I had been studying day and night, and I was starting to feel burnt out. I knew that I needed tofind a way to relax and de-stress, so I decided to take a break and go for a walk in the park.As I was walking, I couldn't help but think about allthe hard work and dedication that had brought me to this point. I had spent countless hours studying and preparingfor the exam, and I knew that I had given it my all. I also couldn't help but feel a sense of pride and accomplishment for how far I had come. I knew that no matter what happened, I had done my best, and that was something to be proud of.As I continued my walk, I started to feel a sense of calm and clarity wash over me. I realized that no matter what happened on the exam, I had the skills and knowledgeto succeed in the future. I also realized that it was important to take breaks and take care of myself, even in the midst of such an important and stressful time. I made a promise to myself to prioritize self-care and relaxation,no matter what the future held.In the end, my walk in the park was just what I neededto clear my mind and regain my focus. I returned homefeeling refreshed and ready to tackle the challenges ahead.I knew that the GRE was just one small part of my journey, and that no matter what happened, I had the strength and determination to succeed.。
2019年GRE写作题库范文：生动剖析写作
2019年GRE写作题库范文：生动剖析写作GRE写作题库范文：生动剖析写作GRE写作题目：Too much time, money, and energy are spent developing new and more elaborate technology. Society should instead focus on maximizing the use of existing technology for the immediate benefit of its citizens.GRE写作范文：I must say that I reject this statement. While it is true that we need to support society as much as possible with current technology, that does not in any way mean that we should stop progressing simply because our current technology cannot handle all the problems we have brought to it. Does that mean that we should simply accept the status quo and make do? No, I don’t think so. To do so would be tantamount to adopting a fatalistic approach; I think most people would reject that.Technology has helped, and it has hurt. Without it, we would never have our standard of living, nor quality of nutrition, expectation of a long and productive life span, and the unshakable belief that our lives can be made even better. But it has also brought us universal pollution, weapons so powerful as to be capable of rendering us extinct, and the consequent fear for our survival as species and as a planet. Technology is indeed a double-edged sword. And yet, I still have to argue in its favor, because without it, we have no hope.Some might argue that we would be better off without technology. They might say that a return to a less technologically driven approach to life would have the benefits of reducing stress and allowing us to live simpler, happier lives, like those of our forebears. Such an idea is seductive, so much so that much of art and all of nostalgia are devoted to it. But upon closer inspection, one realizes that such a move would only return us to a life of different kinds of stress, one of false simplicity, one fraught with danger. It would be a life without antibiotics where a minor cut could prove deadly. It would be a life where childbirthis the main killer of women, and where an emergency is dealt with in terms of hours and days instead of minutes and hours;a life where there are no phones or cars or planes or central heating, no proven drug therapies to treat mental illness, no computers. Would this world really make people happy?What we already have, we have. And since the only way to move is forward, instead of allowing ourselves to be paralyzed by fear and worry, we need to learn how to clean up the pollution we have caused, and how to deal with a world that feeds on weapons and mass destruction. Doing these things means having to move away from technology into a more difficult realm, that of diplomacy and compromise： to move from the bully stance of “I am bigger and better and I have more toys and so I win” to a place where everyone wins.Technology is the thing that will allow people to do that. But, advanced as it is, it is still in its infancy. We have to allow it to grow up and mature in order to reap the real rewards that it can bring. And there are even greater rewards ahead of us than what the world has alreadyexperienced. When technology is pushed to the outer edge,that is where serendipitous discoveries can occur. This has been seen throughout technological advancement, but the easiest example is probably the space program which made us think, really hard, about how to do things in a different environment. It gave us telecommunications, new fabrics and international cooperation. Paramedical devices, so that people can be treated even as they are being transported to the hosptal, are a direct development of that technology. None of this would have happened in the time frame that it did if we had not pushed for technological advancement. If we had decided to “focus on maximizing the use of existing technology” instead of foolishly reaching for the stars, we would not have made those discoveries which now are the bedrock of the 21st century.GRE写作分析：字数：651语言：平实的语句完全没有网络流行模板的痕迹，也是很多过了6级的考生通过练习能够达到的水平。
2019-201XGRE作文高分例句总结-优秀word范文 (2页)
2019-201XGRE作文高分例句总结-优秀word范文本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！== 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ ==201XGRE作文高分例句总结人生如梦，别总失眠;人生如戏，别总穿帮;人生如歌，别总跑调;人生如战场，别总走火;人生如灯，努力是油，若要灯亮，嗨，朋友，你得加油。
以下是小编带来的201XGRE 作文高分例句总结，希望对你有帮助。
1. counterproductive adj.产生相反效果(结果)的e.g. It is counterproductive to be too tough: it just makes the staff resentful.e.g. Although the speaker overlooks certain circumstances in which undueskepticism might be counterproductive, and even harmful, on balance I agree thatwe should not passively accept whatever is passed off as fact; otherwise, human knowledge would never advance.2. seminal adj.萌芽的，潜在的;开创性的;有重大影响的e.g. in the seminal state (在萌芽状态)|| seminal thoughts || seminal principle(基本原则)e.g. a seminal book/poet || This experiment was to have a seminal influence on his own political development.3. forgo v.放弃 (The choice to forgo his security is always available, although it might carry unpleasant consequence)4. intuition n.直觉 (I will trust my strong intuition that free will is an essential part of our being as humans.)5. satisfy v.证明是正当的，公证的;为…寻找正当理由e.g. Such action can be justified on the grounds of greater efficiency.e.g. In the final analysis, government cannot philosophically justify assisting large cities for the purpose of either promoting or。
2018-2019-关于gre作文范文分析-word范文 (1页)
2018-2019-关于gre作文范文分析-word范文本文部分内容来自网络整理，本司不为其真实性负责，如有异议或侵权请及时联系，本司将立即删除！== 本文为word格式，下载后可方便编辑和修改！ ==关于gre作文范文分析Such nonmainstream areas of inquiry as astrology， fortune-telling， and psychic and paranormal pursuits play a vital role in society by satisfying human needs that are not addressed by mainstream science.这个题目是讲主流和非主流的关系，提的方面是科学领域内。
但是这个题目里面我自认为的一个问题是，speaker把astrology，fortune-telling，psychic，和paranormal pursuits也归结为科学的范畴内了，但这些都是我们通常成为的伪科学的几个典型方面。
这个题目，目前我没有想到什么好的方面来支持这个speaker的正确性。
希望有持支持观点的朋友来说说你自己的看法伪科学的相关释义附在点评最后处This statement actually consists of two claims: that non-mainstream areas of inquiry are vital in satisfying human needs， and that these areas are therefore vital to society. I concede that astrology， fortune- telling， and psychic and paranormal pursuits respond to certain basic human needs.干净利索的分析了题目，但是个人认为还不是分析的很透彻。
考研2019英语二作文
考研2019英语二作文I remember the day I decided to take the GRE. It was a spur-of-the-moment decision, fueled by a combination of ambition and panic. I had no idea what I was getting myself into, but I knew I had to do it. So, I signed up for the test and started studying like my life depended on it.Studying for the GRE was a rollercoaster of emotions. There were days when I felt like I was on top of the world, acing practice tests and feeling confident about my abilities. But then there were days when I couldn't even bring myself to open a book, feeling overwhelmed by the sheer volume of information I had to absorb. It was a constant battle between determination and self-doubt.The day of the test finally arrived, and I was a nervous wreck. I had done all I could to prepare, but I couldn't shake off the feeling that I was about to face a monumental challenge. As I sat down in front of the computer screen, I took a deep breath and reminded myselfthat I was ready for this. I couldn't afford to let my nerves get the best of me.The test itself was a blur. I moved through the sections, trying to stay focused and not let the pressure get to me. There were moments when I felt like I was in over my head, but I pushed through, drawing on all the hours of studying and preparation I had put in. When I finally clicked the submit button, I felt a mix of relief and anxiety. I had done all I could, and now it was out of my hands.In the end, the test results were better than I had expected. I had managed to overcome my doubts and fears, and I was proud of myself for taking on the challenge. It was a reminder that sometimes, the things that scare us the most are the ones that push us to grow and become better versions of ourselves. And for that, I was grateful for the experience.。
2019年GRE考试阅读长难句详细解析(2)
2019年GRE考试阅读长难句详细解析(2)Virginia Woolf’s provocative statement about herintentions in writing Mrs. Dalloway has regularly beenignored by the critics，since it highlights an aspect of her literary interests very different from the traditionalpicture of the "poetic" novelist concerned with examining states of reverie and vision and with following the intricate pathways of individual consciousness.难句类型：复杂修饰、省略、抽象词译文：弗吉尼亚.伍尔夫(Virginia Woolf)在创作《黛洛维夫人》(Mrs. Dalloway)时相关其创作意图的这番发人深思的陈述，迄今为止一贯为文学评论家们所忽略，因为它突出反映了她诸多文学兴趣中某一方面，而这个方面则与人们对“诗性”小说家(poetic novelist)所形成的传统见解大相径庭。
所谓的“诗性”小说家，所注重的是审视想入非非和白日梦幻的诸般状态，并致力于追寻个体意识的通幽曲径。
解释：本句逗号以前只有复杂修饰的长主语有些难，但总的来讲比较好懂，since引导的原因状语从句较难。
A、 since之后的it指前面的statement，highlight的宾语an aspect之后有两个修饰成分，一个是of her literary interests，另一个是以that引导的定语从句that is very different from the traditional picture of the poetic novelist，都是修饰an aspect 的。
2019年GRE写作题库范文：information
2019年GRE写作题库范文：information GRE写作题目：Much of the information that people assume is factualactually turns out to be inaccurate. Thus，any pieceof information referred to as a‘fact’should be mistrusted since it may well be proven false in the future.绝大部分人们认为是事实的信息结果实际上都是不准确的。
所以，任何据称是事实的信息都应该被质疑，因为它在将来很可能会被证明为是错误的。
GRE写作范文：Should we be doubtful to all the information at hands because the rightness of which is uncertain? The speakerclaims so，I concede that people often commit variousfallacies in the course of cognizing things，however I fundamentally take exception of the arguer's assertion to mistrust every fact we might encounter. And I willsubstantially discuss my views thereinafter.To begin with，the speaker seems to implicate that afact would be proven false in the future under numerous circumstance. Nevertheless I prefer to arguer that factsnever change. No matter how did the Medieval Church and Inquisition persecute Bruno，the fact never changes that the earth is far from being the center of the universe as the religious sovereigns had assumed or hoped for，while just a minor particle in it. Equally，no matter how Edison had tried to incite the public fear and distrust to the alternative current electricity，the fact never changes that Teals’electrical system is vastly superior to his direct current electrical one，and would be accepted and applied in larger range.However，what do change are the human's objective interpretations to facts. One compelling argument to thispoint is that，due to the limitation of human’s knowledgeand comprehensive capability，they tend to make insufficientor even false understanding to the certain fact. An apt illustration is the changes of cognition to disease. While at the ancient time，our progenitors believed the a man becoming a patient for the reason that he had conduct crimes or offended some ghosts or spirits，the contemporary people have well know that the varies of pathogens are the basic causesto our diseases，and the defects of our immune system and so forth are also the factors as well. Another argument for the change of comprehension to fact is that different people always observe and interpret from different perspectives. Though the Relativity theory is not well compliable with the Quantum mechanism，no one call the greatness of both Einstein and Bohr，because their theories are based on distinct views，the former from the macrocosm and the later from the microcosm.Notwithstanding the foregoing reasons for that humantend to make fallacies during the cause of comprehending and cognizing facts，these reasons should never be the excuses to doubt every conclusion we might draw from facts. Based on certain rational inference and proper knowledge fundament，the conclusions we make might well be justifiable，if not completely right，to certain degree. What we need to do is to promote the enterprise of pursuing the better answer and tryto use the result we have get to application，instead of wasting our time to undue doubt and suspicion. Though the medical scientists have not fully understood the mechanism of how the does the implanted organ interact with the wounded body，they are not refrain from using the implanting skill to save patients，of course the precondition or which is that this technology is much well established than the fundamental theory.To sum up，while I advocate the speaker's opinion thatit is inevitable for human to comprehend facts inaccurately，for the reason of the limitation of the abilities，I essentially disagree with his assertion that facts will continually alter themselves，as well as his recommendation to discredit any piece of fact. In the final analysis，I would arguer once more that facts never change and although the misunderstanding to them is inevitable，we should not defer ourselves from the pursuit to fully comprehending them.。
2019年GRE写作题库范文：想法付诸行动的困难
2019年GRE写作题库范文：想法付诸行动的困难GRE写作题库范文：想法付诸行动的困难GRE issue写作如何组织思路、灵感，有理有据的表现自己的观点?来看看小编为同学们带来的 gre issue写作实例，希望同学们能够从中得到启发，对同学们的GRE考试有所协助，GRE写作题目：Practicality is now our great idol, which all powers and talents must serve.Anything that is not obviously practical has little value in today's world.GRE写作正文：In today’s society idealism seems to become an ideology that is marginalized and practicality is our great idol, thus, the speaker asserts that anything that is not practical bears little value. I admit that being practical is the wide-accepted dogma in order to survive in this world, but bygoing too far to claim that anything that is not practicalhas little value is against the empirical observation as well as the general stimulus that push the human society forward.Admittedly, practicality has become a cult in today’s society. Too often do we hear people talk about beingpractical whenever they come to make important decisions or choose between several alternatives. The deep-rooted cause underlying this phenomenon is that with the development of modern society, the emphasis is placed more on financial gaining, quick fame, sensible choice and so forth. Oursociety is rather stable compared with that of the lastcentury when war, violence, human right movements has becomethe symbol of that period. People are enjoying this peaceful environment with less crucial missions rested upon them and as a result, they shift from idealism to struggle for the common well being of mankind to the practical concept of individual achievement.This ideology has its merits since after all thedisaster and upheaval that our human race has undergone, itis judicious to focus on the economic aspect of things in order to tackle the most important social problems such as poverty, hunger and environmental problems which all deserve us to sit down and work out practical solutions. On the personal level, being practical is how a person would possibly succeed in his career or personal life. One islikely to make sensible decisions for his education and job choice on the basis of practical consideration of his own strength and weakness and careful analysis of the prospect of research direction and job market. Even those in power and intellects need to consider practically since hasty decision built upon pure ideal meditation would hardly find its way in the modern society and is doom to failure.Agreeing with the speaker that practicality has become the great idol in our society, I am strongly against hispoint that anything that is not practical has little value. Even in today’s society, idealism is by no means relegated to the place of total neglect and disregard. For one thing,in history, so much achievement is the outcome of several generations’ struggle such as fighting for equality for women, human rights movement,etc. In today’s society, practicality is the way we can obtain our goal but idealism offers the philosophical explanation of why we should setthis as our goal and the clear the ultimate value of our pursuing. What is more, by totally fixed one's eyes upon the practical aspect of things, we face the danger of neglecting one important part of our pursuit, that is the mental enjoyment brought out by idealism. If we have a clear goal set in mind and put practical endeavor at the same time, the result would be more satisfactory and valuable.To sum up, I agree with the speaker insofar as the wide acceptance of practicality is considered. Being practical is the tenet of modern society and it does shed light on the wise way of doing things and obtaining goals, no matter in the personal or social level.But the speaker goes too far by claiming that it is the only valuable ideology in society.I am strongly against this idea since in history or at present, we human beings still need the philosophical explanation to clear our goal and to provide motivation. In this aspect, idealism would never be replaced with pure practical consideration. Otherwise,human society will be replete with insensible people directed by economic profit and quick fame and recognition.。
2019年GRE考试写作作文思路火力全开(2)
2019年GRE考试写作作文思路火力全开(2)GRE写作题目："Competition is ultimately more beneficial than detrimental to society."GRE写作思路解析及提纲：2、同意，防止不良竞争1、经济领域，竞争能够提升产品质量，促动创新更好的质量、服务、创新的动力，消费者受益2、政治领域，竞争能够选出最有水平的，人民受益竞争中，承诺福利，个人水平;防止无能政府3、不良竞争对社会带来问题，如压力，不正当竞争学生成绩竞争;工作岗位竞争;immoral竞争，slag off behind the back2T "Competition is ultimately more beneficial than detrimental to society."归根结底，竞争对于社会是利多弊少。
4①使得更有效率。
A 同事之间竞争 B优胜劣汰②增加社会福利。
如：竞选时，使得民众对于该选谁更清晰。
③当竞争失控时，会有问题。
如：超出法律和道德的界限④导致社会上人们普遍压力增大Through competing, the one who is most eligible is put on the right place, and then will produce muchmore values than those who are not competent as he or she.While, on the other hand, if a competition is fraught with adulteration and illegality, it will bringdeterioration to the society rather than progress. A case in point is related to market economy.。
【资格考试】2019最新整理-(备考辅导)GRE作文范例2
整理-(备考辅导)GRE作文范例2
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"The study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives."
【资格考试】2019最新整理-GRE写作范文及领悟
——参考范本——【资格考试】2019最新整理-GRE写作范文及领悟______年______月______日____________________部门休息了几天，对GRE作文本人领悟了一些东西。
人家说到底也是考“ANALYTICAL writing”，分析还是在第一位的，我们的态度因此不要太偏了(有时候)，只是想到作文，这个“作文”是有条件的——分析性写作。
所以，不一定非得想尽办法紧扣题目。
人家写了一个claim以后，想溯源的说起因，想结果的去推断，想就着这个claim来论证的也可以分方面分程度，定性结合定量。
死扣一个很容易没话说(关键词：原因，结果，方面，程度，定性，定量)。
我还觉得自己可以界定一下范围。
今天晚上写完了issue74之后才想起来，人家说的是most，完全可以交代一下，说most涉及的东西太多了，无法说清楚，但是就within language&image而言，的确是image更好(我的position)。
这样也可以避免绝对化。
只要人家看出来你会，而且很好的进行逻辑分析，就okay了。
同时想完了后，看了一看pp3里边的一些说明，正好不谋而合。
下面是根据GRE写作考试Issue74写了一篇范文，大家可以从中得到一点启发。
［Issue74］“The most effective way to communicate anidea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language.”［参考范文］I strongly agree with the author on the claim that image generally serves to be a better means of communication than language， and this is no exception whenthe audience is a large group. Though everyday we speak oneor several languages to express ourselves， theAchilles‘ heel of language makes it incompetent in certain critical case.That Achilles‘heel is “misinterpretation”， a characteristic of language，particularly conspicuous when it comes to multi-language situations. Among countless misunderstandings in this way ever since people begin to speak， one heartbreaking tragedy can effectively supportthis claim. The story begins with one American boy who fellin love with a Japanese girl， but neither expressed their feeling for each other at that moment. One day when the boy was to leave the girl for a period of time，he left her anote with the word “shine” on it. The word “shine”，initially indicating her shining beauty as the boy later said，shocked the Japanese girl when she see it， and so despairedat the note that she committed suicide three days later. The reason， later discovered，is that the girl with poor English interpreted the word as “shi-ne”，which is “go hell” or “die” in Japanese. In the case nobody can deny the crime of language，since the young girl would not have perished wereit not for this grievous misinterpretation. Therefore we see the harmful， in this case fatal， consequence that may be brought about by the Achilles’ heel of language.。
2019英语二大作文
2019英语二大作文I remember the first time I traveled alone. It was both exciting and nerve-wracking. The feeling of independence was liberating, but at the same time, I couldn't help but feel a bit anxious about navigating a new place on my own. However, as soon as I arrived at my destination, I wasfilled with a sense of adventure and curiosity.The best part about traveling alone is the freedom to do whatever you want, whenever you want. There's no need to compromise with anyone else, and you can truly immerse yourself in the experience without any distractions. Whether it's trying new foods, exploring hidden gems, or simply taking a leisurely stroll, every moment feels likeit's truly yours.Of course, there are also challenges that come with solo travel. One of the biggest hurdles for me was the language barrier. It can be intimidating to communicate with locals when you don't speak their language, but Ifound that a smile and some basic phrases can go a long way. It's all part of the adventure, and overcoming these obstacles only adds to the sense of accomplishment.Another aspect of solo travel that I love is the opportunity to meet new people. Whether it's striking up a conversation with a fellow traveler at a hostel or gettingto know the locals, there's something special about the connections you make on the road. It's amazing how quickly you can form meaningful relationships with people from all walks of life.Overall, my experience with solo travel has been incredibly rewarding. It has taught me to be more independent, open-minded, and adaptable. There's something truly empowering about navigating the world on your own terms, and I can't wait for my next solo adventure.。
2019全国二卷英语作文范文
2019全国二卷英语作文范文I woke up this morning feeling completely exhausted.It's been a long week and I haven't been getting enough sleep. I really need to start prioritizing my rest and relaxation.As I was getting ready for work, I realized that I had forgotten to do my laundry. I rummaged through my closet and managed to find a clean outfit to wear, but Idefinitely need to set a reminder for myself to do the laundry tonight.Work was incredibly busy today. I felt like I was running around non-stop, trying to meet deadlines and attend meetings. I barely had time to take a break and grab a quick lunch.After work, I met up with a friend for dinner. It was so nice to catch up and unwind after a hectic day. We talked about everything from work to our personal lives,and it was exactly what I needed to de-stress.When I finally got home, I realized that I hadforgotten to pay my bills. I quickly logged onto my computer and took care of it, but I really need to be more organized when it comes to managing my finances.Before going to bed, I decided to do a quick meditation to clear my mind and relax my body. It's amazing how just a few minutes of mindfulness can make such a difference in how I feel.Overall, today was a whirlwind of a day. It had its ups and downs, but I'm grateful for the moments of joy and connection with others. I'm looking forward to a goodnight's sleep and a fresh start tomorrow.。
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2019年GRE考试写作经典范文赏析（二）
The primary goal of technological advancement should be to increase people's efficiency so that everyone has more leisure time."
The speaker contends that technology's primary goal should be to increase our efficiency for the purpose of affording us more leisure time. I concede that technology has enhanced our efficiency as we go about our everyday lives. Productivity software helps us plan and coordinate projects; intranets, the Internet, and satellite technology make us more efficient messengers; and technology even helps us prepare our food and access entertainment more efficiently. Beyond this concession, however, I find the speaker's contention indefensible from both an empirical and a normative standpoint.
注意这种新结构：使用了大量的事实作出对原文观点的让步性同意，但是在最后还是有所创新的提出自己的读到见解。
这种开头给人一种很爽的感觉——have forcibly posed your viewpoints.让我们记住：The speaker contends that……I concede that……Beyond this concession, however, I find the speaker's contention indefensible from both an empirical and a normative standpoint.
The chief reason for my disaGREement lies in the empirical proof： with technological advancement comes diminished leisure time. In 1960 the average U.S. family included only one breadwinner, who worked just over 40 hours per week. Since then the average work week has increased
steadily to nearly 60 hours today; and in most families there are now two breadwinners. What explains this decline in
leisure despite increasing efficiency that new technologies have brought about? I contend that technology itself is the culprit behind the decline. We use the additional free time that technology affords us not for leisure but rather for work. As computer technology enables greater and greater
office productivity it also raises our employers' expectations——or demands——for production. Further technological advances breed still greater efficiency and, in turn, expectations. Our spiraling work load is only exacerbated by the competitive business environment in which nearly all of us work today. Moreover, every technological advance demands our time and attention insgroupsto learn how
to use the new technology. Time devoted to keeping pace with technology depletes time for leisure activities.
精华：注意breed的含意：generate, bring in能够说，这就是自己的见解，这就是the power ofshavingsbeen thinking。
作者一反常规，提出advanced technology在给人类带来这样那样的方便的同时，反而在蚕食人的time and energy。
I disagree with the speaker for another reason as well：the suggestion that technology's chief goal should be to facilitate leisure is simply wrongheaded. There are far more vital concerns that technology can and should address. Advances in bio-technology can help cure and prevent diseases; advances in medical technology can allow for safer, less invasive diagnosis and treatment; advances in genetics can
help prevent birth defects; advances in engineering and chemistry can improve the structural integrity of our buildings, roads, bridges and vehicles; information
technology enables education while communication technology facilitates global participation in the democratic process. In short, health, safety, education, and freedom——and not leisure——are the proper final objectives of technology. Admittedly, advances in these areas sometimes involve improved efficiency; yet efficiency is merely a means to these more important ends.
确实精彩!读者也会不得不承认technology has resulted in short, health, safety, education, and freedom——and not leisure, the final destination.
In sum, I find indefensible the speaker's suggestion that technology's value lies chiefly in the efficiency and resulting leisure time it can afford us. The suggestion runs contrary to the overwhelming evidence that technology diminishes leisure time, and it wrongly places leisure ahead of goals such as health, safety, education, and freedom as technology's ultimate aims.
精华：……value lies chiefly in……The suggestion runs contrary to the overwhelming evidence that……and it wrongly places……ahead of。