雅思大作文模板及写作中复合句和复杂句ppt课件
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雅思语法 ppt课件
语法的主流趋势
我要喝点东西。 I want a drink.
a water, a beer, a coffee 创新是必须的。 Innovation is a must.
语法在“进化”
1. 句子成分: 主谓宾+定状补 2. 简单句:五大基本句型 3. 并列句 4. 复合句: 宾语从句,定语从句,状语从句 5. 动词四类和五大基本时态
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雅思写作 并列句
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定语从句 状语从句 名词性从 句(主宾 表同)
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Grammar & vocabulary
Grammar 无规矩不成方圆
Vocabulary 巧妇难为无米之炊
Reading > > >Writing Listening > > >Speaking
及物动词,直接跟宾语,如 eat, drink, know, play, watch
不及物动词,可以不直接跟宾语, 如 jump, sit, stand, think, sleep, wait, die, fight, run, live
情态动词或其他助动词加动词原形 系动词 如 am, is , are
9. I‘m not sure____if_/w_h_e_t_h_er_i_t _w_il_l b_e__su_n_n_y_t_o_m_o_r_ro_w_______(明天天 气是否晴朗)
10.He asked me_____w_h_a_t_I_d_id__w_it_h_th_e__m_a_tt_e_r ___________(是如何 处理这件事的)
雅思写作大作文话题及模板及范文 精品 PPT课件
simpler way of life will protect the environment, while
others believe that science and technology can solve
environmental problems. Discuss both views and give
也就是说,从平均值看,名校毕业生的 收入就 已经遥 遥领先 好几倍 ,更不 用说那 些高薪 行业的 实际收 入差距 了。 好的大学,不一定保证每一个人都会有 高收入 ,但他 的确能 够为你 提供通 向高收 入的第 一块敲 门砖。 2 开学季前几天,老家的一个远房表兄传 来消息 ,刚满 17岁的 表侄小 立不愿 意再继 续读高 三,准 备辍学 去打工 。 表兄很是着急,把家族里学历比较高的 我也搬 了出来 ,希望 我能劝 劝小立 。 “我虽然这些年到处打工也挣了一些钱 ,但这 样挣钱 太辛苦 了,我 不希望 他重走 我的老 路,” 堂兄苦 口婆心 ,一再 强调, “你一 定要好 好劝劝 他:不 上学以 后没有 出路。 ” 刚开始我和这位00后表侄在微信上聊的 时候, 非常话 不投机 。 我问他:不想读书是不是觉得功课太难 了? 他答道:也没有多难,就是不想太累了 ,高考 复习很 无聊。 我劝他:再坚持几个月,苦一阵子熬一 熬就过 去了。 他回答得很干脆:太没劲!考上又能怎 么样? 现在我 家邻居x x大学 毕业上 班了, 挣的还 没我爸 高呢! 我再问他:你爸爸现在一身伤病常年要 吃药, 你不是 不知道 吧,还 有,你 爸爸为 了多挣 点钱, 一年到 头在外 面跑, 只有过 年才能 回家一 趟,这 些你也 很清楚 吧? 他无话可说了。 最后,我实在忍不住,不得不扎他一句 : “如果现在你连高考都比不过别人,凭 什么以 后你能 比别人 成功? ” 微信那头
雅思写作高分课件(1)
识别关键词
关注题目中的关键词,这 些词通常会给出写作的重 点和方向。
明确写作任务
根据题目要求,确定写作 任务,如需要提出观点、 分析问题、举例论证等。
拓展思路与素材收集
头脑风暴
围绕题目主题,进行头脑 风暴,尽可能多地列出与 主题相关的想法和观点。
素材收集
从平时积累的知识、经验 、阅读材料等方面,收集 与主题相关的素材,包括 事实、数据、案例等。
多变句式和语法结构
运用复杂句式
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适当使用复合句、并列句、倒装句等复杂句式,使文章句式富
于变化,增强表达的层次感和逻辑性。
掌握多种语法结构
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熟悉并掌握多种语法结构,如定语从句、状语从句、非谓语动
词等,提升表达的准确性和多样性。
避免单调的句式
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避免大量使用简单句和相同的句式结构,通过句式的变换和组
分类整理
将收集到的素材进行分类 整理,以便在写作时能够 快速找到所需内容。
确定主题和立场
确定主题
构建论点
根据题目要求和头脑风暴的结果,确 定一个明确、具体、有深度的主题。
根据立场,构建清晰、有逻辑的论点 ,为后续的论证和阐述打下基础。
明确立场
针对主题,明确自己的观点和立场, 确保在写作过程中始终保持一致。
转折句
在需要的地方加入转折,使文章更具层次感和逻 辑性。
结尾部分总结陈词
重申立场
再次强调自己的观点或立场,加深读者印象。
总结全文
简要概括全文内容,帮助读者回顾文章脉络。
提出建议或展望
针对话题提出具体建议或展望未来发展,提升文章深度。
04 语言表达与句式运用
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丰富词汇和短语积累
雅思大作文概述ppt课件
大作文评分标准
结构是否有逻辑性(Structure) a)引言introduction 涵盖主题、写作任务和主题句 b)主体body 包括足够的论点、论据 c)结论conclusion 重申观点、提出建议或者展望未来
大作文评分标准
二、连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion) 文章段与段,句与句之间的衔接 段落之间的“转”“承”“启”“合” a)表开始:first of all, in the first place, at the
very beginning, to begin with, currently, at present, for one thing等 b)表承接:besides, further more, in addition, moreover, what’s more, meanwhile, apart from, as well as, similarly, in the same way
雅思写作大作文
第二讲 主题、类型与段落结构
雅思大作文主题归类
1 科技发展主题 The development of science 2 政府的职能和职责 About government 常见考点:宏观政府职能?具体职能? 3 环境污染和保护 The environmental protection 常见考点:狭义环保+广义环保(动物) 4 当代社会问题 People in modern society 常考考点:经济类,工作类,家庭类…
观点(同意 /不ቤተ መጻሕፍቲ ባይዱ意) 第二段:立论理由一(最大/最重要/最显著
的理由) 第三段:立论理由二 (次大的理由) 第四段:驳论段——反方观点+反驳理由 第五段:结论----重申论点+结语(可选)
雅思写作课件 ppt
总结词
考察学生对于说明文写作的掌握程 度
详细描述
题目要求学生写一篇说明文,介绍 某项发明或技术的工作原理和使用 方法。
模拟试题三
总结词
考察学生对于图表描述的能力
详细描述
题目要求学生根据所给的饼状图描述某地区的人口职业 分布情况,并分析其优劣。
总结词
考察学生对于议论文的写作能力
详细描述
题目给出一段背景信息,要求学生针对“是否应该限制 塑料袋使用”这一话题发表观点,并进行论证。
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雅思写作范文解析
范文一:议论文
总结词
逻辑严密,观点鲜明
详细描述
议论文是雅思写作中的常见题型,要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法。范文一 展示了如何通过合理的论证和有力的证据支持观点,使文章逻辑严密、观点鲜明 。考生可以从范文中学习如何构建段落、使用转折词和总结句等技巧。
范文二:图表作文
总结词
内容问题
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总结词
内容空洞、缺乏逻辑性
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详细描述
考生在雅思写作中常常因为缺乏写作经验和技巧而无法有 效地展开论述,或者逻辑结构不清晰,导致文章内容空洞 、缺乏说服力。
解决方案
考生需要学习如何构建文章结构,掌握常见的论证方法和 技巧。在写作过程中,考生需要明确自己的观点和论据, 并注意逻辑的连贯性和严密性。此外,考生还可以通过模 拟练习和反馈来提高自己的写作能力和技巧。
语言表达
准确用词
句子结构多样
使用准确、具体的词汇来描述和说明 观点。
使用不同的句子结构,如简单句、复 合句和复杂句,使文章更具表现力。
语法正确
确保句子语法正确,没有拼写或语法 错误。
逻辑连贯
过渡词使用
考察学生对于说明文写作的掌握程 度
详细描述
题目要求学生写一篇说明文,介绍 某项发明或技术的工作原理和使用 方法。
模拟试题三
总结词
考察学生对于图表描述的能力
详细描述
题目要求学生根据所给的饼状图描述某地区的人口职业 分布情况,并分析其优劣。
总结词
考察学生对于议论文的写作能力
详细描述
题目给出一段背景信息,要求学生针对“是否应该限制 塑料袋使用”这一话题发表观点,并进行论证。
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雅思写作范文解析
范文一:议论文
总结词
逻辑严密,观点鲜明
详细描述
议论文是雅思写作中的常见题型,要求考生就某一话题发表自己的看法。范文一 展示了如何通过合理的论证和有力的证据支持观点,使文章逻辑严密、观点鲜明 。考生可以从范文中学习如何构建段落、使用转折词和总结句等技巧。
范文二:图表作文
总结词
内容问题
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总结词
内容空洞、缺乏逻辑性
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详细描述
考生在雅思写作中常常因为缺乏写作经验和技巧而无法有 效地展开论述,或者逻辑结构不清晰,导致文章内容空洞 、缺乏说服力。
解决方案
考生需要学习如何构建文章结构,掌握常见的论证方法和 技巧。在写作过程中,考生需要明确自己的观点和论据, 并注意逻辑的连贯性和严密性。此外,考生还可以通过模 拟练习和反馈来提高自己的写作能力和技巧。
语言表达
准确用词
句子结构多样
使用准确、具体的词汇来描述和说明 观点。
使用不同的句子结构,如简单句、复 合句和复杂句,使文章更具表现力。
语法正确
确保句子语法正确,没有拼写或语法 错误。
逻辑连贯
过渡词使用
雅思大作文的结构及写作方法ppt课件
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结构:四段或五段
引言部分:提出主题(描述当前背景), 改写复述题目,表明自己的观点,衔接 下文。
正文第一段:原因1 正文第二段:原因2 正文第三段:原因3(可省略) 结尾:重申主题,建议措施,展望未来
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引言部分:提出主题(描述当前背景),改写复述题目, 表明自己的观点,衔接下文。
As is known to all, the big contradiction between the limitation of land and the rapidly increasing demand for it causes an alarming headache of human beings. To improve the situation, some people suggest we instantly give up protecting wild animals, the reason for which, according to them, is simply that they believe there will be no spare places for the wild animals as their habitats in the 21st centhing but a waste of resources to carry out the protection. As far as I am concerned, the so-called “suggestion” is extremely ridiculous and has no point at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
结构:四段或五段
引言部分:提出主题(描述当前背景), 改写复述题目,表明自己的观点,衔接 下文。
正文第一段:原因1 正文第二段:原因2 正文第三段:原因3(可省略) 结尾:重申主题,建议措施,展望未来
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引言部分:提出主题(描述当前背景),改写复述题目, 表明自己的观点,衔接下文。
As is known to all, the big contradiction between the limitation of land and the rapidly increasing demand for it causes an alarming headache of human beings. To improve the situation, some people suggest we instantly give up protecting wild animals, the reason for which, according to them, is simply that they believe there will be no spare places for the wild animals as their habitats in the 21st centhing but a waste of resources to carry out the protection. As far as I am concerned, the so-called “suggestion” is extremely ridiculous and has no point at all.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
雅思图表作文模板句型PPT课件
❖ 1965年到2005年间英国人购物时使用自带购物袋的人数在稳定下降。
❖ Eg:There was a steady fall in the number of British households using their own shopping bags when shopping between 1965 and 2005.
一般不写最后一部分,但在大作文中必须加入。
3、 题型分类:
❖ Ⅰ给出图形形式: ❖ ① Line Chart(线图) ❖ ② Pie Chart(饼图) ❖ ③ Bar Chart(柱形图) ❖ ④ Table(表格) ❖ ⑤ Map(地图) ❖ ⑥ Flow Chart(流程图)
❖ Ⅱ图形变化特征: ❖ ① Trend(动态) ❖ ② Static data(静态) ❖ ③ Mixture (Trend+Static)(混合) ❖ ④ Picture(图形)
the year of…/until…/from…to…/between…and…/over,during the period from…to… ❖ ⑶Where(地点):in Australia=in the selected/certain country——Australia. ❖ ⑷What happened(事件):participation/involvement/taking part in…/join in…
+between…and…
❖ Eg:Sales of coffee increased steadily between 2004 and 2006.
❖ ⑶There be +a/an+adj+n.+数据+时间
❖ Eg:There was a steady fall in the number of British households using their own shopping bags when shopping between 1965 and 2005.
一般不写最后一部分,但在大作文中必须加入。
3、 题型分类:
❖ Ⅰ给出图形形式: ❖ ① Line Chart(线图) ❖ ② Pie Chart(饼图) ❖ ③ Bar Chart(柱形图) ❖ ④ Table(表格) ❖ ⑤ Map(地图) ❖ ⑥ Flow Chart(流程图)
❖ Ⅱ图形变化特征: ❖ ① Trend(动态) ❖ ② Static data(静态) ❖ ③ Mixture (Trend+Static)(混合) ❖ ④ Picture(图形)
the year of…/until…/from…to…/between…and…/over,during the period from…to… ❖ ⑶Where(地点):in Australia=in the selected/certain country——Australia. ❖ ⑷What happened(事件):participation/involvement/taking part in…/join in…
+between…and…
❖ Eg:Sales of coffee increased steadily between 2004 and 2006.
❖ ⑶There be +a/an+adj+n.+数据+时间
雅思大作文题目类型及作文结构(课堂PPT)
Memorization of information by frequent repetition (rote learning) plays a role in most education systems. Do the advantages of this method of learning outweigh its disadvantages? (08.12.06)
opening:Education should be offered to everyone in the society. body: (1)Education could enhance the personality of people, not only the
level of knowlegde. (2)Offering education to young people could reduce the unstable factors of the society. (3)Admittedly, offering education to young people is costly. conclusion
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assignment : 1,复习以上几种文章结构 2,思考混合型题目文章结构
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辩论型题目文章结构分析(三)
Some people believe that a country benefits greatly with a high percentage of young people who go to university, while others argue that it only leads to graduate unemployment. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (08.12.13)
雅思大作文的结构及写作方法 (课堂PPT)
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另一方面,就业的压力也越来越大。 (举例论证,因果链)
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Secondly, the pressure of employment is becoming greater and greater. Statistics show that in 2007 about one million college graduates failed to find jobs. Most of them held bachelor’s and even master’s degrees. The fact that even well-educated people are confronted with unemployment problems urges children to obtain more skills and become more versatile so as to stay competitive on the job market.
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Nowadays children are growing up in more favorable conditions than ever before. However, they are also faced with much greater pressure than children in the past. As for me, their childhood is indeed less colourful and carefree than that of the children in the past.
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结构:四段或五段
引言部分:提出主题(描述当前背景), 改写复述题目,表明自己的观点,衔接 下文。
主体段2
另一方面,就业的压力也越来越大。 (举例论证,因果链)
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Secondly, the pressure of employment is becoming greater and greater. Statistics show that in 2007 about one million college graduates failed to find jobs. Most of them held bachelor’s and even master’s degrees. The fact that even well-educated people are confronted with unemployment problems urges children to obtain more skills and become more versatile so as to stay competitive on the job market.
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Nowadays children are growing up in more favorable conditions than ever before. However, they are also faced with much greater pressure than children in the past. As for me, their childhood is indeed less colourful and carefree than that of the children in the past.
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结构:四段或五段
引言部分:提出主题(描述当前背景), 改写复述题目,表明自己的观点,衔接 下文。
《雅思写作》课件
如何备考雅思写作
熟悉考试形式和评分标准
了解考试的具体要求和评分标准,有助于考 生更有针对性地进行备考。
练习写作
多写多练,培养写作手感,提高写作速度和 准确性。
积累词汇和句型
扩大词汇量,掌握更多的高级词汇和句型, 提高表达的准确性和丰富性。
请教老师或专业人士
向老师或专业人士请教,获取有针对性的指 导和建议,帮助自己更好地备考。
培养批判性思维,提高文章深度
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对不同观点保持开放的态度, 不轻易接受或拒绝某种观点, 而是进行深入分析和思考。
学会提问和质疑,针对某种观 点提出合理的问题和质疑,进
一步推动思考和讨论。
掌握逻辑推理和辩证分析的方 法,能够从多个角度审视问题 ,提出全面、客观的观点。
通过阅读、讨论和写作等方式 不断提高自己的批判性思维能 力,使文章更具深度和说服力
例如,使用“significant”代替“important”,使用“varied”代替
“different”。
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避免重复使用同一词汇
通过同义词、近义词或上义词进行替换,增加文章词汇的丰富性。
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注意词汇的准确性和正式程度
确保所选词汇符合雅思写作的要求,避免过于口语化或过于生僻的词汇
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复杂句式构造和变换技巧
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模拟试题与范文欣赏
模拟试题示例及解析
模拟试题一
讨论现代科技对人们社交方式的影响。
模拟试题二
分析国际旅游业的利与弊。
解析
该题目要求考生就现代科技对社交方式的影响进行讨论。 可以从社交媒体的普及、在线交流的便捷性、虚拟社交的 利弊等方面展开讨论。
解析
复合句在英语写作中的应用ppt课件
写作中复合句常见的错误
1) He will help you. If you ask him.
2) There are still many problems should
be solved.
3) As is known to all that computers play
an important role in many fields of our
evenings we want to be free. On
Sundays and Saturdays we’d like to
visit some scenic spots in other cities
of Guangxi.
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宾从
I wonder if you can send us your formal invitation as soon as possible so that we can go through all the procedures.
把从句错当句子
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写作中复合句常见的错误
2) There are still many problems
should be solved.
that / which
3) As is known to all that computers
play an important role in many fields of our life.主从句叠置
I spoke slowly so that I could make myself understood. 结果状语从句
4) How can I get to the station? Could you please tell me that?
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100个写作加分词汇之一
然而,吸烟带给人们健康的这种伤害被夸大了。(exaggerate) 另外,吸烟引起火灾,导致巨大的人身和财产损失。(property) 例如,一个人看了太多理想化的节目,可能会变得不切实际。(unrealistic
) 另外,包含淫秽和暴力内容的不健康的电视节目可能会引发人们的好奇心。
A的优势之一。For instance, ( 2 )举例说明优势之一 。Besides, (3)A 的优势之二。Nowadays, (4) 举例说明优 势之二。In addition, ( 5 ) A 的优势之三。 On the negative side, (6) 此处填入 A 的劣势之一。For example,(7) 举例说明劣势之一。Besides,(8)A的劣势之 二。Furthermore,(9)A的劣势之三。 All in all, we can not live without A for the conveniences it brings to us, but we should also be aware of the negative effects it creates on the modern life.慑。(deterrent)
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雅思写作的高分标准
1,观点明确,条理清晰structure 2,词汇广泛,精确地道vocabulary 3,引言精彩,新颖独道introduction 4,句型复杂,变化多端sentences 5,语法准确,拼写无误grammar
4、There are two different views on the matter of DOING C. Some people believe that (1) 支持的观 点 A. By this , they argue that (2) 进一步阐述观点 A. For example,(3) 举例说明。Others hold, on the other hand, that (4) 反对的观点 B 。 Forthermore,(5) 进一步阐述观点 B. For instance,(6) 举例说明观点 B 。Considering the views on the two sides, I prefer to put weight to the pros rather than cons. Personally, (7) 我支持 A 的 原因。
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对立观点式
3、As a matter of fact, there are also some disadvantages in A ,such as (8) 举例说明 A 的劣 势。But these can be compensated by its advantages. So from what has been discussed, one can reach only this conclusion that (9) 重申观 点。.
Although there is a great deal of enthusiasm nowadays over the advantages of A, its disadvantages should not be neglected.
So as shown above, I consider the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
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对立观点式
(一)A or B ,which one do you agree with? Give specific reasons for your answer. (A,B 表示供选择的两种观点。Do C 指题目中提及的某件事情。如:some people prefer A in order to Do C.
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大作文模板句
A may involve some problems in terms of its cost. However, there are still many advantages of A.
It is true that such cases do exist in our life. However, these cases are uncommon and are the result of bad management. So the problems are in fact the problems of bad management, not A itself.
The restaurant has been widely acclaimed for its excellent French cuisine.
这个餐馆因出众的法式烹调而受到广泛赞扬。
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大作文模板句
It is indisputable that On the positive side, A has enabled us to (1) 此处填入
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次句
First, For a start, To begin with, To start with, For one thing,
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三句
Therefore, Hence, Thus, As a consequence, As a result, Consequently,
concern around the globe. 10. When economy is running on the right way for a relatively long
period, and commercialization is sweeping across the world, the issue of has been mentioned and emphasized in our society more frequently than ever before. 11. It is not uncommon these days to 12. Over the last half century, the pace of change in has increased beyond our wildest expectations.
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开放观点式
Argument A (and B) about DOING C . What’s your opinion about it ?
Nowadays almost everyone discusses about whether AAA is desirable.
There is certainly some truth on both sides, yet neither provides a satisfactory answer. In my view,…
(obscene) 虽然人类自从出现在地球上起就占据了统治地位,但是神却在创造人类之前
创造了动物。(dominant) 有些种类的动物被用作交通工具。(vehicle) 这是一种残酷和野蛮。(brutality) 另外,随着技术的发展,计算机模拟可以得到相似的结果。(simulation) 像小偷、抢劫犯、强奸犯甚至杀人犯,释放他们是不合理甚至非常危险的,
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模板中间段
Unquestionably, Convincing arguments can be made that Undeniably, Indisputably, On the one hand, it is arguable that There is no denying that True, It is true that It is evident ,clear ,manifest ,apparent ,obvious that Clearly, There is no doubt that It goes without saying that
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对立观点式
2、According to my personality and fondness, I would prefer A rather than B. Although B(1)B 的优势,there is no evidence to suggest that B is better than A.
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四句
Second, In the second place, Then, Moreover, Further, Furthermore, Besides, For another,
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五句
Specifically, More exactly, More precisely, It has been calculated that It has been speculated that
A is a question of controversy. People have different notions about the matter:
take more efficient measures to avoid and minimize them.
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大作文模板首句
2.It goes without saying that 3.There is no avoiding the fact that 4.There has been a long-term dispute over whether 5.have found their popularity and acceptance among citizens. 6. have become the focus of public concern. 8. It wasn’t until that 9. is increasingly becoming the focus of government and citizen’s
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六七句
Lastly, Finally, Last but not least, More importantly, Additionally, In other words, As a matter of fact, It seems that In fact,......