美国留学MBA申请常见Essay分析.doc
美国留学商科如何应对essay问题
美国留学商科应该怎么准备呢？去美国留学申请商科专业中很重要的一步就是essay的准备。
今天就给大家讲讲如何回答商科申请中的'essay问题。
在商科申请中常会出现这样的ESSAY问题，如你认为你的成绩能反映出自己实际的能力水平吗？为什么？或是你认为你的优势和劣势分别体现在哪里，通过商科学习希望能有什么改变？
这些美国留学商科essay问题显然不是简单的YES或NO就可以回答完毕的，仅仅解释一下成绩不足的问题，例如像情感波动这样的回答，听起来则显得苍白无力。
在回答问题时，学生首先要能分析出对方通过问题想要考查自己的哪个方面，同时需要结合自身实际情况巧妙作答，回答得中肯真实则可借机胜人一筹。
另外，课外活动、社会活动、实习活动，组织能力、领导能力、贡献程度也是美国大学录取的重要参考依据，是美国大学的价值观所在，学生在准备的过程中亦不可忽视对实践经验的积累。
去美国留学商科的中国学生，既了解中国国情，又掌握西方管理理论、方法，还能熟练地使用英语进行沟通交流，因此成为跨国企业的首选目标。
希望上述信息对大家申请美国留学中的商科专业提供帮助。
美国商科留学申请essay写作准备指南.doc
美国商科留学申请essay写作准备指南美国的本科/研究生留学申请竞争是相当的激烈，要想有更大的竞争力，在文书的准备上要花费心思。
下面和我一起来看看美国商科留学申请essay写作准备指南。
书写素材。
1，个人成长经历这也许是最常见的一个选题了，因为它确实触及到了个人陈述这样的一份申请材料的本质--帮助录取委员会了解申请者的个性和特质。
有时学校也会有目的性地出一些命题的散文，例如＂你生命中最大的挑战是什么？从中你学到了什么？＂，或者＂描述你生命中最有意义的一件事情，并解释为什么如此有意义以及它是如何对你产生影响的？＂。
在选择了这样的一个题材以后，最有效的办法就是借助一个具体的事件作为镜子来折射出你以前是个什么样的人，通过这件事情你成长为了一个什么样的人。
所有孩子都很爱提问，你是否也曾经问过你的幼儿园老师为什么会有四季，试着建一个模型并且向你的同学解释太阳系这个概念？成功的个人陈述是建立在刻画出一个生动并且形象丰满的你这一基础上的，应该是一篇告诉录取委员会你有很多东西可以提供给这个学校的文章。
2，对你影响深刻的人选择这个题材，你需要表现出你不是另一个由完美成绩单包装起来的普通申请者，在你生命中有一个人对你影响很深，是他把你塑造成今天这个全新的你。
在写作过程中不要偏离主题，转到描述你与这个人的交往上，重点还是应该放在这种影响为什么会对你有如此重大的意义以及你被影响成为一个怎样的人这两个内容上，也可以适当的引用一些个人或是家庭生活的片断，尽量尝试用一些比较新颖的角度。
在人物的选择上不用一定要选择某位名人，生活中的人会给人很亲切的感觉，讲述一位带领你们去参观博物馆的恐龙展从而激发了你对考古学兴趣的高中老师就是个不错的选择。
3，成绩与成就描写你所获得的成绩也是使学校了解你个性的一个好方法。
但是要注意抓住重点进行描写，不要把你所有的兴趣爱好、高中时代所参加过的活动、所获得的所有奖项都像流水帐一样记录下来，这样的个人陈述不是学校想要的，聪明的申请者知道学校希望学生有一些自己的个人兴趣爱好，并且能够在某一项或几项上有所成就。
美国MBA文书范文
美国MBA文书范文很多人会选美国商科留学，美国MBA专业的申请文书该怎么写呢？下面是MBA专业的文书范文，跟着来看看吧!欢迎阅读。
美国MBA文书范文What are your expectations of the MBA program? What contribution do you think you will make? How will your personal distinctiveness enrich our learning environment?First of all, I expect that I will be presented with a challenging educational environment in your highly respected MBA program. Your MBA program offers a solid course curriculum that will allow me to build on my previous extensive business experience to give me the skills that are required in the rapidly changing international business world.Although my business experience is important, it is not enough in the competitive business environment today to have only practical experience. I believe that through your MBA program, I can learn the theories behind successful business strategies as well as learn about other organization’s experiences through the reading of different types of case studies. Readingand understanding a wide variety of case studies will allow me to learn how to approach certain business situations as well as to learn how to avoid some business mistakes that others have made in the past.In addition to learning in a classroom situation from my professors, I know that I will learn much more than that by gaining the life experiences of living in a foreign country. The opportunity to learn by living and experiencing life in another country will make me a more complete business person by giving me the chance to look at the business world from anothercountry’s perspective. An international perspective is essential to being successful in business as the different countries in the global business environment become increasingly intertwined and interdependent.I will also expect to learn much valuable information from my classmates as we work our way through the MBA program together and become friends. Learning from the most elite students from many different cultures and developing lasting friendships with them will be another very attractive benefit of studying in your MBA program.My contribution to this established MBA program will be that of an experienced businessperson in the most populous and rapidly developing country in the world. My previous experience working in multinational organizations has given me a very useful working knowledge and first-hand knowledge of the methods of doing business in China. I have experience with both large and small businesses in China, both as an assistant engineer and a higher level manager. I have worked with some of the world’s largest companies in China, which gives me a unique perspective and the ability to contribute not only the Chinese viewpoint but also a multinational viewpoint to classroom discussions. These perse working experiences have given me a very broad-based, cross-functional knowledge of how to do business in China.My unique experiences in working as an assistant engineer in the computer center of Jin Jiang Industrial Co., Ltd. have given me a solid foundation in actual working knowledge of computer software and computer systems. As a sales representative for nearly four years with the multinational company 3M in the southwest region of China, I learned to analyze buying behaviorand develop a full marketing plan for our products. I also managed a distribution network, which involved inventory planning, marketing channel studies, incentive program development and training of new business partners.With Xerox China Co., Ltd., I performed the duties of a high-level sales consultant. This position involved analyzing major potential clients' needs and developing an XES (Xerox Engineering System) solution to fit the clients' technical specifications and budgetary needs. I also worked for three years with China Hewlett-Packard Co., Ltd. My position as a Supplies Market Development Manager with the Consumer Business Unit required me to use my thorough understanding of all aspects of the marketing value chain, including the analysis of market dynamics and developing and implementing annual marketing plans for the entire business unit. My current position as a Business Director for , Inc., has allowed me to take full responsibility for developing the business of an e-commerce start up company involved with IT/office equipment and office consumable products.As you can see from my extensive and unique business experience in China, I have much to contribute to the learning environment of your MBA program. I believe that the learning environment can be greatly enhanced by classroom participation from the students, particularly in an MBA program such as yours that involves the best students from around the world. I am eager to thoroughly involve myself at the proper times to add my real-life experiences in the rapidly changing business world of China to give an international perspective to classroom discussions. I also believe that I can learn to develop a better international vision and a sense of future business trends while adding my ownexperiences to your MBA program.。
美国留学申请文书essay怎么写及范例展示（一）
美国留学申请文书essay怎么写及范例展示（一）没有留学申请文书，大学的申请是不完整的，但这对许多学生来说是有点难的。
为您整理了一些信息关于学校对文书的要求及范例展示，希望对您有所帮助。
一些简单的建议，一些反省和洞察力，了解招生人员在寻找什么，能帮助学生缓解压力。
以下是一些帮助学生进入学校的大学论文范例。
学校招生办的工作人员分享了这些文章，它们之所以脱颖而出，是因为学生们的“声音”发出了光芒。
马萨诸塞州塔夫茨大学招生和招生管理主任卡伦•理查森表示：“我们实际上是在倾听学生的声音，并试图弄清楚他们在我们的校园里会处于什么为位置。
”专家表示，这篇文章应该让学校了解他或她的性格。
纽约汉密尔顿学院负责招生管理的副校长莫尼卡·英泽说，“对我来说，一篇好的论文，总的说来，是我在申请中看到了学生身上在其他地方看不到的东西。
”但英泽指出，对许多学生来说，找到自己的声音（真正想表达的东西）可能是一项挑战，因为他们的生活经验可能有限。
此外，她补充说，到目前为止，他们一直在按照高中老师的指示写作，而不是展示自己真正的想法。
找到自己的声音意味着学生必须了解自己，以可信地方式写作，与招生官员分享他们的生活感受。
在其招生页面上，汉密尔顿列出了该校录取学生撰写的多篇大学论文。
下面节选的这篇文章，经汉密尔顿学院许可，通过对飞钓的热爱展现了这位学生的个性。
•我紧紧地抓住虹鳟鱼，把鱼饵从它的嘴上取下来。
我的心砰砰地跳着，把鱼放进水里，看着它一闪而过。
•我仍然被它深深地吸引。
•五年前，我在瀑布溪用邻居吉尔送给我的一根5美元的钓竿钓到了那只10英寸长的弗莱林。
这条小溪从150英尺高的伊萨卡瀑布瀑布分流而下，非常壮观。
再往前走100英尺，它会经过一座破旧的枪支工厂，再经过一座涂鸦桥，然后流向我高中附近的卡尤加湖。
除了瀑布之外，这条小溪基本上是可以被整体俯瞰的。
我认识的所有的高中学生每天都要过那座桥，但对下面的小溪他们却没有什么想法。
20XX美国留学ESSAY范文解读.doc
2019美国留学ESSAY范文解读【美国大学申请ESSAY给申请者留下的想象空间非常宽泛，但是由于中国学生在小学时期延续的写作习惯，越是宽泛的题材越是不好把握，和小编一起来看看2019美国留学ESSAY范文解读。
美国大学ESSAY范文：ABoy’sFirstsTheboyissuchacommonboy.Heissocommonthatonly acquaintedfriends cannoticehimamongtheheisso common thathedoesnot changehis girlfriend onetimeper month，justasplayboys do；andheis socommon thathisdailylifeisnomore special than thoselistentorockn’roll，betfor soccer games and seldom clean their rooms.However，theboyissomewhatspecial.Heusuallythinksthat，hisexperienceandpersonal achievements，along withown happinessand grievances，areenoughforhimtobeunique，though hedoesnothaveaasgood-looking asBradPittorKeanu Reeves，orwhoever.First AwardItwassucha surprising giftfora12-year-old boytoknowthat hehad wonthefirstprizeinthenational mathematics competition. The boyclutched the certification andlaughedlikeasun-flower bloomingina springmorning. Hespentthreemonths preparingforthat competitionandhadlost5kgweight buthewasveryhappy，ashappyyoucould imagine. Enjoyingthe paceof enterprising，hebegantobelieve“Nopainnogain”thatafternoon.First SetbackHuddling upinthequilt crying，theboywas introspecting Truehis haughtinessachievingthesecondprizeintheNational PhysicsCompetition，hedeservedtherankoflast5%infinal examination of7thgrade. Wipingupthetears，hesethimselfapromiseofbeing humble andsober.boy keptthe promise and became ayoung manofgreat maturity.First cooking“Quite atough work.”Theboysaidto himself，smearing soaponablister causedby theburningButasmallblisternevercouldstophimfromdoinghis “cookingresearch”. Theboystoodinofthegas-stove again，holding apancaketurner inhislefthand，hewastryingtofindoutcorrect timeof addingsalt andthe appropriate amountofother flavorings. Aftersomany failures，hefeltitwasnotasimple taskof cooking out palatable meals，nut achallenge of surpassing himself.theboy finally finished working one anda half hours later，heputa sweet smile onhisdirty face. Theboy wrote inhis diary，“keep working and you’ll win.”First LoveAttheageof16，theboyfellinlovewithasmartgirl.Eatingice-cream withtheintheice-cream baratthestreet，walkingon theboulevard handinhand，cyclingherhomekissing goodbye，heregarded loveastheholythinginhislife.Thus，theboy demonstrates afrom heart；hecares everyone nearby and wants themtobe beatific with their families. Aspeople say，angelic soul.First JobThe extremely hot summer holidayof16，theboywasexcited when hegotajobatthelocaltrain stationasaticket-taker. First working day，theboygotupsoearlythatwhenhearrivedatthestation，the previousticket-taker wasstillonhisin astonishment oftheboy’s Truethe ticket-taker didnotknowthat，theboywasjustsoastoget onthejobtoshow thathehad grown up.Soon a commonstudentwillhebe.Acommon onethatwill beassiduous inclassand passionate inthebasketball court；thatwillmake everyeffort torunforthe Chairman ofthe Student Unionbutmaystillface failure；that isnomore special thanthosewhospendhalfadayinlibraries andgotodinnerwhendo researchesinlabs.But somehowhewillbea uniquecollege student，hewill have hisown wayof fulfilling his dreams.And asyou may know，theboyisme.以上就是一篇标准的美国ESSAY范文，看懂这篇美国大学申请ESSAY的文章写作套路了吗？一、标题：也许，这个标题不算非常特别，但是它引人注目，一个男孩的第一次，可能我们想到更多的是一些“第一次”，联想到我们自己的“第一次”，兴趣自然就产生了！二、结构：结合了“第一次”的标题核心，下面分别以男孩生活、学习及工作中的各个第一次进行阐述，涉及的面比较全，包括感情，给人的感觉非常丰富且完整。
美国留学文书Essay题目的写作样本
美国留学文书Essay题目的写作样本美国留学文书Essay各种题目怎么回答?美国留学文书Essay一般会出现在名校申请要求中，当然其他的学校也会有，会给出题目，让学生按照题目进行写作。
86店铺小编给大家搜集一些Essay题目的写作样本，大家可以借鉴一下：1、What accomplishment(s) are you most proud of and why?You can answer this question with a personal or professional achievement. If you are asked for more than one accomplishment, I recommend giving professional and non-professional examples. While you can certainly mention winning an award or honor if applicable, the essay focuses on what you did and why you consider it an accomplishment. What made it difficult? Why are you proud of it?Your accomplishment should reflect the qualities valued by MBA programs —leadership, team work, initiative, communications or social skills, analytical ability, persistence —though it does not have to reflect all of them. Ideally the readers should be able to conclude that you have these qualities after reading about the difficulties you overcame without you having to tell them explicitly that your accomplishment required those attributes.2、Discuss a failure and what you learned from the experience.Be honest. When did you really blow it? What did you learn from the experience? How have you changed as a result?Open by describing the situation and giving a brief picture of the scene or background. Then discuss your reaction when you realized that you had made a BIG mistake. What did you do to recover from the failure? Have you handled a similar situationsuccessfully? Bring evidence, like better grades, promotions, or increasing responsibility, to prove that you really changed your ways and turned failure into success.As I indicated above, the key to answering this question is candor and authenticity. Admissions people read thousands of essays. They can spot a fake "failure" from a mile away, and it irritates them. On the other hand, an honest essay telling a good story and showing growth engages and informs. It is exactly what they want to read.3、What are your professional goals and how will an MBA from First Choice B-School help you achieve them?To further bring out your experiences and add pieces to the jigsaw puzzle that is you, tie your future to your past with this school's program: Show how your aspirations stem from past experience and then discuss how the school's program will enable you to achieve your goals. Use this essay to bring out elements of your experience not discussed elsewhere and reflect back on what you liked and disliked. Then demonstrate knowledge of the school's program while showing how it is the perfect bridge between the past and the future.In discussing the school's program, please include specifics and don't use the same essay for all the schools. If you do, your essay will blend into the monotonous blur of flowery compliments and platitudes about "exciting (or quiet) location, top faculty, outstanding reputation, and diverse student body from which I can learn so much as I too contribute." They don't need you to tell them how wonderful they are. If they weren't wonderful, you wouldn't be applying in droves.Write about the school's special features. If one of the professors is an expert in the area in which you are particularlyinterested, mention that you would like to study with him or her. If this school has unusual opportunities or programs that appeal to you, discuss how they will help you to achieve your goals. Show that the school has a unique appeal to you.When revealing your goals and plans for the future, be realistic. Demonstrate an understanding of typical career paths in your field. For example, unless you have some very responsible position now, you can't expect to manage a multi-billion dollar portfolio upon graduation. But you may plan to be an analyst upon graduation and after a few years manage increasingly large portfolios, perhaps specializing in an area of particular interest. If you have a long-term goal that even you acknowledge is a long shot, you can still discuss it, but I suggest you refer to it as a dream (dreams are great!) and also discuss some down-to-earth goals — goals you are likely to achieve as a result of your past experiences and the MBA you hope to receive from First Choice B-School.4、Discuss an ethical dilemma you faced and how you dealt with it.Probably the most troublesome question. Let's first review the nature of a dilemma. According to Webster, a dilemma is a "situation involving choice between equally unsatisfactory alternatives." No obvious or right solution exists for a dilemma. Every choice has undesirable consequences.The first step in approaching this question is choosing a situation to discuss. Were you ever asked to do anything on the job that you felt was unethical, but where refusal to act would cost you your job? Were you ever asked to withhold information damaging to a client? Did a colleague tell you in confidence something that would be very harmful or helpful to youremployer? Did you ever face a situation where following the rules would have unintended, and possibly unconscionable, consequences? Any of these situations represents an ethical dilemma.After you choose the situation, your first step in writing your response is to describe it and briefly paint a picture of the pressures that surrounded the dilemma or the history that led up to it. Then describe the pros and cons of the options you faced. If the question calls for it, discuss how you resolved your dilemma. Conclude either with the lessons you learned from facing this situation or your opinion today of your actions then.。
2022美国留学MBAessay写作要求一览表
2022美国留学MBAessay写作要求一览表去美国读MBA，是必须要准备好自己的essay的，那么写作essay需要做好哪些基础的准备呢？接下来就由来介绍2022美国留学MBA essay写作要求一览表。
言简意赅每一个句子都应该精简到只保留它的基本部分。
任何冗余或者不能增加新意的词语都应该删除。
当你把文章精简并删掉不必要的词和短语时，文章的质量就得到了提高。
要知道，招生委员会在审核期间，要短时间内面对那么多essay，他是没有时间来看啰啰嗦嗦，没有主次的文章的。
表述要精确任何时候都要尽可能详尽而又具体。
细节能让你的作品更具真实性。
对于要表述的内容，想要表达的思想要精确的表达出来，感染到读者，让读者信服，从而体现文章的真实性。
主题要明确申请的时候，学校给出的essay题目都是有很强的针对性的，所以，在撰写essay之前一定要想清楚这个题目的隐含意义，了解学校想通过这篇文章考察你什么。
然后在动笔，这样写出来的文章才有针对性，而不会偏离目标。
有的时候题目显得很简单，但是事实上这类题目是最不好写的，因为简单的一句话让人很难摸清楚他们的出题思路和意图，对这类的题目反而要更加注意。
各篇essay之间要相辅相成一般来讲，每所学校会要求3-5篇essay，每篇essay考察的目的是不同的，因此，在动笔之前要想好写作的思路和结构。
在一篇文章中已体现的重点就不要在另一篇文章中出现，否则几篇文章写下来却只反映了一个特点，很多优势没有展示出来，这样，录取委员会就不会看到一个完整优异的你，从而不能决定是否录取你。
保持同一风格和语调在开始动笔之前，你就要决定好采用怎样的风格和语调，并在整篇短文中一以贯之。
如果你在短文开头部分的语调是轻松和幽默的，就不要突然在短文中间转变为忧郁或者严厉的语调。
如果你打算把自己的短文写成是个人日记风格的，就不要突然开始向局外的读者吹嘘自己。
第一类是有关优缺点和成败类。
这类问题要求申请者论述自己过去的成就和失败事例，分析自己的优缺点。
申请美国MBA留学的Essay要怎么写
申请美国MBA留学的Essay要怎么写很多学生选择去留学美国MBA，那么美国的MBA Essay要怎么写?很多学生都不知道如何写，那么就来给大家讲讲美国MBA Essay 的写作事项。
美国MBA申请，文书是美国MBA留学的重要组成部分。
但是好的essay少之又少，天道美国MBA申请指南就为大家指点一些写作美国MBA文书的技巧：许多著名的商学院在录取时对申请人各个方面要求都是非常严格的：文化背景、学历背景、工作背景、团队合作、领导才能以及创新精神和敏锐的目光。
Essay和推荐信就是让招生委员会认识了解你的几乎的唯一途径！商学院是培养商业高级管理人才的地方，所以对申请人的表达能力是否足够出色十分看重。
这就要求申请人的文字能力相当高，能够清楚、准确的表达自己的见解。
同时，文章还要简洁而有力，在思想上有出色的创造性，在内容上有良好的逻辑性和逻辑思维的严密性。
这样高的要求决不是其他专业研究生申请所能达到的高度。
总结下来，就是要有优秀的才能和精彩的语言能力！MBA申请人要有多年的工作经验，对自己所从事的工作有相当的研究与深切的体会，这样才能有足够的积累，来完成不同学校的不同命题。
以每个学校5个题目为例，如果申请学校的数量多，就需要申请人使用大量的精力进行Essay写作。
另外，还要用地道的英语进行写作的，这对单个人来说即便是能够完成，也难以在各个方面达到很高的水准。
1、GPA本科阶段的GPA成绩是申请研究生的主要标准之一，出色的GPA 成绩是申请美国MBA者综合学术素质的反映。
本科阶段的GPA应在3.0以上；如申请前十名的商学院，GPA在3.5以上。
2、托福成绩对于英语非母语的学生，需要提交托福成绩来证明自己的英语水平，一般托福需要90分以上，如果能够考到100分，甚至110分，那可以选择排名靠前的学校。
3、GMAT成绩海外商学院对GMAT成绩不作硬性要求，但如果申请人能够提供较好的GMAT成绩，将大大增强申请人的竞争力。
美国商科留学essay怎样更出彩.doc
美国商科留学essay怎样更出彩众所周知，美国的教育水平高，申请竞争亦很激烈，那么书写一篇好的留学essay，必能给你申学加分不少。
今天我为大家来讲解美国商科留学essay怎样更出彩？首先来看看留学essay要写哪些内容。
一、头脑风暴我们都知道写文章的时候，开头其实是最难的!所以一定要对自己的研究经历、个性、品质、优缺点等等进行很好的思考，从而产生一个好的思路来开始你的Essay。
二、第一稿准备在考虑好自己想要写的内容之后，可以先根据自己的想法列一个提纲来决定各个部分的内容和例子。
开始准备写第一稿的时候，要顺着自己的思路来写，不要想着一次性写好而不敢动手。
可以在成稿之后再多修改几次。
三、结构扩充一篇Essay通常是分为三大板块：介绍+主体+结尾;主体部分可以多写几个段落来介绍自己的研究背景和经历。
四、要详细文章要围绕问题集中陈述，选取一个合适的角度来展示和自身品质的相关性。
要确保我们写的所有内容都是围绕观点论证的。
五、要新角度根据自己的真实想法，尽可能的寻找新的角度来表达自己的观点。
比如你对一个学校的喜爱，可以从他的知名校友对你的影响入手。
六、要诚实不要想着去“讨好”录取委员会的老师们，也不要尝试去写一些你认为的他们想听到的答案。
按照自己的想法，如实回答Essay的问题即可。
七、多听反馈可以将你的Essay内容给你的家人、朋友或者老师们来看，问问他们的意见。
从这个Essay中是否可以了解到你的真正的想法和观点，并做适当的修改。
八、校对更正并成稿仔细阅读你的Essay，认真审核拼写失误、打字以及语法错误。
最好可以找别人来校对一下，会更容易发现其中的问题。
书写技巧有哪些？1.仔细阅读说明很多人可能认为仔细阅读说明是多余的，但事实并非如此。
如果美国留学申请者不能按照要求来写文书，那么招生官很有可能就认为将来申请者被录取后也不能够守纪律。
正确的做法应该是多读几次说明，记下重点，然后再开始着手构架ESSAY。
美国留学MBA文书点评范文
美国留学MBA文书点评范文美国MBA文书带有很大的主观成分和发挥空间。
在客观学术和语言成绩相似的情况下，文书的成败与否，成为申请者被录取与否的关键。
如何巧避文书雷区，让你的文书在众多文书中脱颖而出呢？我们来看一个美国MBA文书范例及名师点评，希望对大家有所帮助。
FailedInternetStartup[Prompt:Weallexperiencedefiningmoments,significanteventstha tcanhaveamajorimpactonourlives.Brieflydescribesuchaneventan dhowitaffectedyou.]Thepresidentofourcompanyannouncedthefinalvote:fivetothreein favorofendingthebusiness.Instantly,thetumultuousadventureof Versaworksabruptlyended.Thisweb-basedcompanywehadfoundedaim edtopromoteanonlinereservationsystemforrestaurants.Planning torunthecompanypart-timewhilewesoughtinitialbusinesscontrac tstogeneratesomebaserevenue,wehadhopedtoattractenoughinvest orstoprovidefundingfortheteamtoworkfull-time.Intheend,howev er,ourinabilitytosolidifyrelationshipswithrestaurantsledtothevoteonclosingthebusiness,andthevotesoutcomewaswhateveryon ehadexpected.However,closingthischapterinmylifeallowedmetoopenanewone,as itcausedmetore-evaluatemycareergoals.Iaskedmyself,whywasIso motivatedtostartabusinessinthefirstplaceWhydidIfinditspossi bilitiesmorerewardingthanmysuccessfulengineeringcareerIcame torealizethatwhileengineeringallowedmetoapplymytechnicalski llstodevelopingadvancedtechnology,IbelievedIhadtheopportuni tyandprivilegetoenhancepeopleslivesmoreeffectivelybyguiding acollaborativeeffort,awholecompanydirectedtowardsprovidingf ortheneedsofitscustomers.Inaword,todayIunderstandthatmylong-termcareergoalistomaximi zemycontributiontosociety.ThroughmyVersaworksexperience,Iga inedanewperspectiveonwhatittakestostartabusiness.Theclosing ofthatprojectcompelledmetorefocusonmygoalsandevaluatewhatIn eedinordertoachievethem.Today,IknowthatthepursuitofanMBAedu cationisthenextstepImusttake.作者通过对自己曾经的失败创业经历的描述，并且通过这次失败的经历，使得自己明确了目标，重新为自己的未来的目标确立了更新更细更有规划性的理念。
美国商科专业留学essay写作步骤及常见题目
美国商科专业留学essay写作步骤及常见题目美国留学申请需要出示的材料中，商科专业是非常的重视essay 的写作的，大家在进行准备的时候一定要提前开始准备。
店铺来介绍美国商科专业留学essay写作步骤及常见题目。
查询资料在你拿到一个论题时，首先要查询相关资料，图书馆、相关论文、再不济偷点懒google下，或者知乎上溜溜，也能让你的观点不那么肤浅和二。
参考和借鉴当你查询了很多资料以后，你已经有良好的知识储备，接着就开始分析你阅读过的Essay。
分析别人Essay里的论点、论据、论证，并写下来，找出其中缺乏逻辑和很有逻辑的地方。
一定要学会写Essay 前，先要分析别人的Essay。
思考思考还是思考！！你的Essay要具备独特的见解，那么首先就是你写东西起来不能太惨，文笔不好可以理解，至少你要语句通顺。
搞清楚状况的比较好的办法，就是先给自己提几十个问题，然后一一解答。
把这些问题与答案都记录下来，这是我觉得加深思考的办法，我觉得这就是自己和自己头脑风暴你们也试试。
你要一直思考，直到你知道要写什么。
论点=核心选一个最佳的观点，这样全文都可以围绕这个点来写。
论点是你的主要观点，用一句话描述出来，这样读你Essay的人就知道你在写什么、为什么要这样写。
这个论点也可以理解为自己的优点闪光点，就是自己比较独特的东西，安身立命的根本，只能这样拼了。
你要搞清楚状况，看你essay的人估计不会给你多长时间，你要让他有印象，就要与众不同，泡面哥能拿罗村offer这里面虽然有调侃意味，但也是那老师记住他了。
没有论点，你就很有可能写成流水账，文章拖沓，哪能写出好东西。
动手前的大纲！无论做任何事情，都要知道你是要干嘛，你想表达什么，你的目的是什么！在写之前，用思维导图什么的画个框架，脑中要清晰勾勒出文章的框架。
每一段写一句概括的话，并列出关键词，用来提醒你每段的主旨大意。
严格按照框架的顺序来写，并确保每段的形式是统一的。
第一段起手式起手式是什么！为什么很多文章我们看了第一段就能断定是个高手，一定是他用生命在写第一段啊！第一段的究极奥义就是要抓住看官的眼球和引入主题。
美国MBA文书写作主次分析
美国MBA文书写作主次分析
MBA在美国留学申请中是极为热门的专业之一，而毋庸置疑的一点是，文书材料对于申请美国MBA是必不可少的，同学们知道美国MBA文书哪些材料时最重要的吗?下面，百利天下留学专家为您分析美国MBA文书写作主次。
核心文书：
☆ESSAY：1-3篇，学校会大致划定题目，经典题目“Why our school?”
☆推荐信：通常是3篇
☆个人简历：1份，不要超过1页
其它文书：
☆学习计划(SP)：用于签证，不用交给学校
☆Cover Letter：用于材料打包
☆套磁信：MBA申请不建议套磁，没作用
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美国留学：MBA申请文书范文解析
美国留学：MBA申请文书范文解析导读：本文美国留学：MBA申请文书范文解析，仅供参考，如果能帮助到您，欢迎点评和分享。
芝加哥商学院是商学院中的“理论”派，在MBA申请中，essay 的写作具有很重要的作用，所以我们今天就来为大家分析一下芝加哥商学院的essay题目。
芝加哥大学布斯商学院今年的MBA申请短文总体格式与过去几年类似，要求申请人回答3篇短文，其中一篇则是一个4页的PPT，这已经成为该校5年来的传统。
当然，今年也有一些显著变化，比如Adcom放弃了第2篇短文的topic，即不再要求申请人论述其曾经勇敢面对的风险以及所学到的经验教训，取而代之以对个人领导力风格来源的思考。
Essay 1: What are your short- and long-term goals, and how will a Chicago Booth MBA help you reach them? (600 words)Essay 1 a) Re-applicants only: Upon reflection, how has your thinking regarding your future, Chicago Booth, and/or getting an MBA changed since the time of your last application? (300 words)布斯商学院本申请季再次调整了其开篇短文，要求MBA申请人在600字内描述其MBA毕业后的职业目标以及对布斯商学院MBA课程感兴趣的原因。
这是一篇比较标准的职业目标类短文，要求申请人论述他们从商学院毕业后的短期及长期计划，并阐述为何在布斯商学院的两年学习可以帮助他们实现这些目标。
600字的字数限制应当可以确保申请人详细的论述自己的计划，我们建议申请人需要把握用以论述职业目标的篇幅以及用于论述选择MBA课程原因的篇幅之间的平衡。
哈佛大学申请Essay范文（四）
哈佛大学申请Essay范文（四）学校名称：美国哈佛大学(剑桥) Harvard University (Cambridge) 所在位置：美国，86 Brattle Street Cambridge, MA 02138创建时间：1636年QS排名：1USNEWS排名：2学费：39849录取率：0.058下面给大家提供一篇申请美国哈佛大学商学院mba的ESSAy范文及分析，希望对申请哈佛大学商学院的读者提供帮助。
Harvard Business School Essay:What are your three most substantial accomplishments and why do you view them as such?1.During my third year in college, I set up the first student-run legal aid hotline in my city, offering legal assistance to female migrant workers, many of whom were plagued by domestic violence and unequal treatment in the workplace.Shocked by their situation when doing social work, I came up with the idea of a legal aid hotline. I recruited a team of law students, led the initial fundraising of $1500, and secured time commitment from our professors for legal advice. The hotline started operation two months later.The success of the first case was a huge encouragement. A young girl, who lost her finger in a work accident, was refusedcompensation by her employer, citing no formal contract. I spent months traveling across the city and going through papers to collect evidence of contractual relationship, and finally won her the deserved compensation.I continued to lead the hotline until my graduation, when it had grown to handle more than 400 calls a year and won funding from several Foundations. Fourth year in operation, it is now part of the largest NGO network in my province. This accomplishment fulfilled my dream of helping the underprivileged.2.I was the only "amateur" of a seven-girl team that won the gold for women's gymnastics in the Beijing University Games.After an injury in the team, the coach asked me to join because I was the "best amateur". But I quickly discovered the big gap with a professional. Seeing my teammates easily bend their legs over head or jump with a perfect split, I could barely keep up with their pace.I was extremely nervous to become a drag to the team, and ruin their "golden dream". So were my teammates. I begged the coach for extra intensive training in body flexibility. Everyday I trained two hours more than the team in the midst of heavy law curriculum. I got blisters on both feet and almost injured myself from forcing too hard on a split. The rest of the team gradually changed their attitude towards me and we bonded more closely.Four months later, I could perform as well as anyone else in the team. When we finally won first place, the team threw me in the air. Tears in my eyes, I could see big smile on everyone's face. Through relentless effort I earned respect from the team and together we achieved the best.3.In my second year as a consultant, I helped a multinational pharmaceutical company bring affordable medicine to more than one million people in rural China.The project was to find new growth areas for the company. Accustomed to "the usual ways of business", the client initially only focused on large cities. However, my experience told me that "capturing rural China" would not only pose a long-term growth opportunity, but also fill a major gap of medical supply in rural areas. I convinced the client to make "rural growth" a priority.The most challenging part was to design a cost-effective model to serve the vast and dispersed rural market. Having selected thirty representative rural areas, I led a client team across China to interview local distributors, pharmacies and hospitals. Armed with firsthand knowledge, I proposed a model using innovative tools like mobile clinics, makeshift workshops and promotion-on-the-van. We further backed up our ideas with concrete cost-benefit analysis.The CEO was impressed by the "local ways" of selling medicine. He authorized a pilot model in five areas across China.The initial results showed good financial return, but more importantly, brought access to quality medicine for over one million rural people.点评：Three most substantial accomplishments(三个最重要的成就)是美国哈佛大学商学院mba申请essay最经典的题目，而且已经持续了多年。
essay分析 - MIT
Cover Letter: Prepare a cover letter seeking a place in the MIT Sloan MBA Program. Describe your accomplishments and include an example of how you had an impact on a group or organization. Your letter should conform to standard business correspondence and be addressed to Mr. Rod Garcia, Director of MBA Admissions. (500 words or fewer)Clear Admit:Rod Garcia has long likened the MBA application process to the recruiting process; MBA aspirants, just like job applicants, need to demonstrate that they know how to market themselves. This is why the school requires a cover letter as part of their application.As you approach this assignment, keep in mind that many of the standard cover letter themes need to be discussed – your attributes and skills, why you are interested in joining the ‘company’ (MIT/Sloan), and what you feel you could contribute. These certainly intersect with the ideas covered by other schools’ “career goals” essays, so much so that it may be tempting to simply tack a greeting onto the beginning of a career goals essay you’ve prepared for another program. MIT’s request for these ideas in cover letter format, however, actually makes it very easy to spot recycled material, so it’s important that you tailor your response to the school’s unique process. A potential outline for this essay might open with a‘greeting’ to the committee followed by a statement of your interest in MIT and what you would bring to the school, then a short statement of your career goals with a summary of the ways in which your experience to date has prepared you, then a “why MIT” section explaining why it is the best place for you in terms of what you need from an MBA and your fit with the school, concluding with a thank you.With the “impact” angle, there’s a good deal of ground to cover in this essay. The best way to satisfy this requirement might be to build a brief professional accomplishment into the overall career background narrative. It will also be important to conduct a fair amount of research on the program in order to efficiently reference the most relevant programs and offerings. Taking the time to learn about MIT’s curriculum, special programs and extracurricular activities – whether through a visit to campus, conversation with alumni or reading the Clear Admit School Guide to MIT Sloan– will pay dividends here.Veritas prep:While th is isn’t an essay in the traditional sense, the cover letter is a rite of passage of MIT Sloan applicants every year. Over the past couple of years the prompt has evolved slightly to place more emphasis on your “impact on an organization.” This wording was introduced a couple of years ago, and remains the same this time around. Given that the wording has not changed in a while, it’s safe to assume thatthis phrasing has been working well for the Sloan admissions team. In other words, assume that they’re loo king for a lot of evidence of impact in your cover letter! Amerisa:For many, when they think of Sloan, they think immediately of the infamous cover letter essay assignment. Like the other infamous MIT admissions tradition –the behavioral interview – the cover letter is a great way for Sloan to figure out who has dexterity of skill and intelligence, rather than just rote portrayal of those traits. Rod Garcia, the man to whom the cover letter must be addressed, has often stated that MIT Sloan is looking for that which has predictive value. End of story. If they can’t learn something predictive, it’s not worth anything. It’s part of the reason they don’t have a goals essay – they find little predictive value in you merely telling them what you plan to do. They want to know WHAT YOU HAVE DONE. They want to know WHO YOU ARE. So tell them! The cover letter is not a hard essay –it’s a gift from the MBA gods. You get to sit down and say “here is who I am and what I want.” Don’t try to turn this into your goals essay. Don’t turn it into a love letter to MIT. Can you mention your goals? Sure. Can you mention why you want to go to Sloan? Of course. But this letter should sum you up. It should tell them what you want (a spot in the class) and it should tell them who you are and what you have done (focusing on making an impact). Our rule of thumb is this: if they would not be able to admit you solely off the cover letter, you don’t have a good MIT Sloan cover letter.Mba missionYou will note that unlike most schools, Sloan does not ask its applicants to discuss either future goals or “why Sloan.” This is not an oversight! In keeping with its conviction that past behavior is the best predictor of future success, Sloan wants candidates to emphasize their past actions and thought processes in their essays, rather than their long-term aspirations. In fact, in an interview with Fifteen, the MIT Sloan newspaper, Director of MBA Admissions Rod Garcia explained that the “admissions committee does not explicitly ask applicants for their future goals to prevent candidates from telling stories that they think the admissions committee wants to hear.” Garcia added, “That’s why we don’t ask the ‘Why Now?,’ ‘Why MBA?,’ and ‘Why Sloan?’ type of questions that every other business school asks because these questions are leading questions, i.e. they lead the interviewees to tell the interviewer what the interviewer wants to hear. So, to go around this trickery, we ask candidates to talk to us about past examples instead.”Our advice? If you believe that you absolutely must outline your goals in your cover letter to provide context for your stories, do so, but discuss them as minimally as possible. Similarly, explaining “why Sloan” is neither expected nor encouraged, but if you feel you absolutely must address this topic anyway, again, keep your statement(s) brief, relevant and specific.Essay 1: Please describe a time when you went beyond what was defined, expected, established, or popular. (500 words or fewer, limited to one page)Clear Admit:This prompt calls for an anecdote in which a candidate sets him- or herself apart from the pack by demonstrating the confidence to deviate from the norm or explore new channels, or the ability to see a situation or problem in a different light. Fitting topics might include developing an innovative solution through a nontraditional avenue or challenging the status quo with an eye for how operations could be enhanced. Ideally, the end result would be one in which you reached new insight or perspective, created a new process, or established a new process or standard in a professional or extracurricular setting.Veritas prep:This question carries over unchanged from last year. Once again, Sloan must have liked what it saw in applicants’ responses. Just as the cover letter prompt has evolved to place more emphasis on impact, this change suggests that Sloan is really looking closely for evidence of how you have gone beyond your regular job description to make a positive impact on those around you. We consider this as one of the key ingredients of leadership, and Sloan clearly wants to see more of it in its applicants.Mba mission:For this essay, candidates typically consider times when they possessed a bold vision and achieved ambitious goals, despite discouragement from others, or times when no one else had even realized an opportunity existed. Either circumstance is reasonable as a starting point, but we suggest that applicants also consider instances when they demonstrated themselves to be independent thinkers, capable of finding their own path and/or adhering to morals and principles they hold dear. No matter which event from your past you choose to discuss, by creating a clear picture of what was expected of you and then contrasting your choice—by describing your actions and outlining your reasoning and thoughts—you can present a compelling picture of yourself as a strong-minded and adventurous “hero.”Essay 2: Please describe a time when you convinced an individual or group to accept one of your ideas. (500 words or fewer, limited to one page)Clear Admit:This prompt calls for a discussion of how the applicant handles opposition or resistance to an idea, while managing potential interpersonal fall-out in navigating the situation. In providing a detailed description of the situation and the steps takento garner support from others, applicants should highlight their ability to persuade and inspire others to accept their ideas, as well as their sensitivity and receptiveness to others’ concerns and suggestions.In doing so, applicants will highlight their problem-solving and leadership skills, thus showing the adcom that they possess the abilities to succeed through challenges at MIT Sloan and in their future careers.Veritas prep:This question was new last year, and it is yet another example of how Sloan is really looking for leaders in its applicant pool. If you just read that last sentence and thought, “Oh no, I’ve never managed anyone or been a team lead,”that’s okay. That’s not how Sloan (or any top MBA program) defines leadership. One practical definition of leadership is the ability to positively influence others, and Sloan directly asks for an example of that ability with this question. Even if your example feels fairly mundane (such as an engineer convincing other engineers to pursue a certain technical solution), you will be successful if you can show real skill maturity in HOW you go it done.Mba mission:We suspect that this essay is likely less about convincing than it is about persuading. The admissions committee wants to fully understand your people skills, and especially your level of diplomacy. The committee probably does not want to read about how you forced an opposing group or individual to accept defeat. So, you should focus on describing a time when you encountered a problem and explain how you maneuvered to gain consensus and solve the problem, or a time when you conceived of an idea, sharing how you advocated for it to achieve mutually beneficial ends. Describing a classic “win-win”situation is likely ideal, but you could just as successfully deviate from this approach and instead identify a complex situation in which you were able to persuade others to mitigate losses (though one could perhaps argue that such a situation would still be “win-win”).Regardless of the situation you choose to discuss, be sure to concentrate on describing your actions and the thought processes behind them, rather than the results.Essay 3: Please describe a time when you had to make a decision without having all the information you needed. (500 words or fewer, limited to one page)Clear Admit:A new addition for this admissions season, this prompt centers on the applicant’s decision-making process, requiring a discussion of a time he or she had to make a choice or choose a path without having all the facts. Making decisions based on incomplete information is often a necessity in the fast-moving business environment, and while an MBA program will no doubt impart some useful tools in this area, theSloan adcom is likely seeking students who demonstrate a strong set of baseline skills and good instincts in this area. It would therefore behoove applicants to showcase their sound judgment and, if applicable, willingness to consult others in arriving at a highly defensible (and ideally beneficial) decision, walking the reader through their attempts to track down the information they needed and their ultimate weighing of the options.Veritas prep:This question is new this year, and it gets at another dimension that admissions officers look for in applicants: analytical ability. If you just read that and thought, “numbers and spreadsheets,” think again. It really means having the ability to take a pile of information — whether it’s numbers, words, charts, or anything else — and being able to pull out key insights, even though you probably won’t be able to answer every question that you have. This is an especially hot topic among MBA admissions officers these days, as witnessed by GMAC’s addition of the new Integrated Reasoning section to the GMAT next year. When thinking about your past experiences, don’t feel a need to make your story a quantitatively-slanted one, although we do recommend that you try to make it a work-related story. What was the situation? What questions did you ask? What answers were you not able to get? Despite the lack of key info, how did you make your decision? What was the outcome, and what did you learn from it? Plan on answering all of these questions in this essay.Amerisa:See the big picture behind Essay 3. MIT has a new question for Essay 3 this year. It reads: Please describe a time when you had to make a decision without having all the information you needed. Translated: show us you can navigate ambiguity. This is the most beautiful essay question that any school has introduced in quite some time. Why? Because this entire process is an exercise in navigating ambiguity. There are not easy answers to everything. You can’t go on a forum and gain certainty through consensus of opinion. You can’t know for sure that you are always making the right decision. The people who succeed in this process (and I’m referring to people who work with us, so they have already added an expert to the equation) are the ones who can plant their feet, stand tall, and make a decision. They can ultimately say “yes, this is the right story for this essay” or “thank you for presenting me with X, Y, Z, now I am going with my gut here.”They are the ones who roll with the punches in an interview, understanding that it won’t be perfect, but it can still be good. They set their recommenders up for success by sitting down for coffee, sharing information, and then trusting that person to do the job (rather than getting involved and turning the rec letter into a essay with someone else’s name on it). In years of doing this, what we have noticed more than anything is that some people have the courage of their convictions and some people are just leaves blowing in the wind. You can guess which group does well. Embrace this essay, and this application, and this wholeprocess with the courage of your convictions. Show that you can navigate ambiguity. Share with Sloan –and with everyone, for that matter –that you can survey the landscape, do your best to acquire info, and then charge forward with passion, confidence, and determination. It will be your gift to the school, to your consultant, and to yourselfMba mission:The only change to Sloan’s application questions from last year is this one for Essay 3. Although choosing a situation to discuss that appropriately fulfills the requirements of the question is of course important, the key in this essay will be showing your thought process and truly conveying the how element of your decision making. In the business world, one must regularly make judgment calls without the benefit of all the desired data, and even though this is a skill that candidates will have the opportunity to hone while in business school (and particularly at those schools that use the case method to a large degree), we suspect that the admissions committee wants to know that you already have good instincts in this respect and the willingness to make a decision and stand behind it. Sharing a story about a situation in which your decision proved to be the right one and resulted in positive outcomes would be ideal, but no matter what the final outcome was of the incident you choose to discuss, be sure to focus on demonstrating the thoroughness of your contemplation and outlining the reasons you made the decision you did. No one always makes the right choices in life or business, but showing that you seriously considered your options and made a reasoned, rational and well-founded final decision will indicate to the admissions committee that you took the responsibility seriously and put forth your best effort.。
美国十大名校MBA申请Essay题目汇总
美国十大名校MBA申请Essay题目汇总在美国留学申请中，Essay是美国留学文书中的重要一项。
为各位打算申请美国名校MBA的同学整理了美国十大名校MBA申请Essay 的题目，希望这个分享能够帮助到大家。
1、哈佛大学 Harvard UniversityIntroduce yourself.Note: Should you enroll at HBS, there will be an opportunity for you to share this with them.2、哥伦比亚大学Columbia UniversityEssay 1:Short Answer Question:What is your immediate post-MBA professional goal (50 characters maximum)Through your resume and recommendations, we have a clear sense of your professional path to date. What are your career goals going forward, and how will the Columbia MBA help you achieve them (Maximum 500 words)Essay 2:Columbia Business School’s location enables us to bridge theory and practice in multiple ways: through Master Classes, internships, the New York Immersion Seminars, and, most importantly, through a combination of distinguished research faculty and accomplished practitioners. How will you take advantage of being “at the very center of business” (Maxi mum 250 words)Essay 3:CBS Matters, a key element of the School’s culture, allows the people in your Cluster to learn more about you on a personal level. What will your Clustermates be pleasantly surprised tolearn about you (Maximum 250 words)3、耶鲁大学Yale University1)Required EssayThe Yale School of Management educates individuals who will have deep and lasting impact on the organizations they lead. Describe how you have positively influenced an organization, as an employee, a member,or an outside constituent. (500 words maximum; reapplicants from last year may resubmit their essay from that application)2)Optional EssayIf any aspect of your candidacy needs further explanation (unexplained gaps in work experience, choice of recommenders, academic performance,promotions or recognitions, etc.), please provide a brief deion here.(200 words maximum)4、芝加哥大学Chicago University (Booth)2015-16Essay: Chicago Booth values individuality because of what we can learn from the diverse experiences and perspectives of others. This mutual respect creates an open-minded community that supports curiosity,inspires us to think more broadly, take risks, and challenge assumptions. At Booth, community is about collaborative thinking and tapping into each other's different viewpoints to cultivate new ideas and realize breakthrough moments every day.Using one of the photos provided, tell us how it resonates with your own viewpoint on why the Booth community is the right fit for you.5、宾尼法尼亚大学University of Pennsylvania (Wharton)(Required) What do you hope to gain both personally and professionally from the Wharton MBA.(500 words)(Optional) Please use the space below to highlight anyadditional information that you would like the Admissions Committee to know about your candidacy.(400 words)6、西北大学Northwestern University (Kellogg)Leadership and teamwork are integral parts of the Kellogg experience. Describe a recent and meaningful time you were a leader. What challenges did you face, and what did you learn (450 words)Pursuing an MBA is a catalyst for personal and professional growth. How have you grown in the past How do you intend to grow at Kellogg (450 words)If needed,use this section to briefly describe any extenuating circumstances(e.g. unexplained gaps in work experience, choice of recommenders,inconsistent or questionable academic performance, etc.) (no word count)7、达特茅斯学院 Dartmouth College (Tuck)What are your short and long-term goals Why do you need an MBA to achieve those goals Why are you interested in Tuck specificallyTell us about your most meaningful leadership experience and what role you played. How will that experience contribute to the learning environment at Tuck(Optional) Please provide any additional insight or information that you have not addressed elsewhere that may be helpful in reviewing your application (e.g., unusual choice of evaluators,weaknesses in academic performance, unexplained job gaps or changes,etc.). Complete this question only if you feel your candidacy is not fully represented by this application.(To be completed by all re-applicants) How have you strengthened your candidacy since you last applied Please reflect on how you have grown personally and professionally.8、纽约大学New York University (Stern)Essay 1: Professional Aspirations(750 word maximum, double-spaced, 12-point font)Why pursue an MBA (or dual degree) at this point in your life What actions have you taken to determine that Stern is the best fit for your MBA experienceWhat do you see yourself doing professionally upon graduationEssay 2: Personal ExpressionPlease describe yourself to your MBA classmates. You may use almost any method to convey your message (e.g. words, illustrations). Feel free to be creative.9、杜克大学Duke University (Fuqua)What are your short-term goals, post-MBAWhat are your long-term goalsLife is full of uncertainties, and plans and circumstances can change. As a result, navigating a career requires you to be adaptable. Should the short-term goals that you provided above not materialize what alternative directions have you considered Share with us your list of "25 Random Things" about YOU.Why Duke: When asked by your family, friends, and colleagues why you want to go toDuke, what do you tell them Share the reasons that are most meaningful to you.At the end of your 2 years at Fuqua, if you were to receive an award for exemplifying one of the 6 Principles listed below, which one would it be and why Your response should reflect your knowledge of Fuqua and the Daytime MBA program and experience, and the types of activities and leadership you would engage in as a Fuqua student.1)Authentic Engagement:We care and we take action. Weeach make a difference to Team Fuqua by being ourselves and engaging in and supporting activities about which we are passionate.2)Supportive Ambition: We support each other to achieve great things, because your success is my success. The success of each individual member of Team Fuqua makes the whole of Team Fuqua better.3)Collective Diversity: We embrace all of our classmates because our individuality is better and stronger together.4)Impactful Stewardship: We are leaders who focus on solutions to improve our communities both now and in the future. We aren’t satisfied with just maintaining the status quo.5)Loyal Community: We are a family who looks out for each other. Team Fuqua supports you when you need it the most.6)Uncompromising Integrity: We internalize and live the honor code in the classroom and beyond. We conduct ourselves with integrity within Fuqua, within Duke,and within all communities of which we are a part.10、密歇根大学University of Michigan--Ann Arbor (Ross)What are you most proud of and why How does it shape who you are today (400 words)What is your desired career path and why (400 words)。
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2019美国留学ESSAY范文解读【美国大学申请ESSAY给申请者留下的想象空间非常宽泛，但是由于中国学生在小学时期延续的写作习惯，越是宽泛的题材越是不好把握，和小编一起来看看2019美国留学ESSAY范文解读。
美国大学ESSAY范文：ABoy’sFirstsTheboyissuchacommonboy.Heissocommonthatonly acquaintedfriends cannoticehimamongthecrowd；heissocommon thathedoesnot changehis girlfriend onetimeper month，justasthose playboys do；andheis socommon thathisdailylifeisnomore special than those who listentorockn’roll，betforsoccergamesandseldomcleantheirrooms.However，theboyissomewhat special.Heusuallythinksthat，hisexperienceandpersonal achievements，along withhisownhappinessandgrievances，areenoughforhimtobeunique，though hedoesnothaveafaceasgood-looking asBradPittorKeanu Reeves，orwhoever.First AwardIt wassucha surprising giftfora12-year-old boytoknowhehadwonthefirstprizeinthe national mathematics competition. The boyclutched the certification and laughedasun-flower bloomingina springmorning. Hehadspentthreemonths preparingforthat competition andhadlost5kgweight buthewasveryhappy，ashappyasyoucould imagine. Enjoyingthe paceof enterprising，hebegantobelieve“Nopainnogain”that afternoon.First SetbackHuddling upinthequilt crying，boywasintrospecting Truehis haughtinessafterachievingthesecondprizeintheNational PhysicsCompetition，hedeservedrankoflast5%inthefinal examination of7thgrade. Wipingupthe tears，heset himselfpromise of being humble andsober. Theboy keptthe promise and became ayoung manofmaturity.First cooking“Quite atough work.”Theboysaidto himself，smearing soaponacausedbytheburningoil.Butasmallblisternevercouldstophimfromdoinghis “cookingresearch”.boystoodinfrontofthegas-stove again，holding apancaketurner inhislefthand，hewastofindoutthe correct timeof addingsalt andthe appropriate amountofother flavorings. Afterso many failures，hefelt thatitwasnota simple taskof cooking out palatable meals，nutachallenge of surpassing himself. Whentheboy finally finished working oneandahalf hours later，heputa sweet smile onhis dirty face. The boy wrote inhis diary，“keep working and you’ll win.”FirstLoveAttheageof16，theboyfellinlovewithasmartgirl. Eatingice-creamthegirlintheice-cream baratthe street，walkingon theboulevard handinhand，cyclinghome and kissing goodbye，he regarded loveas theholy thinginhislife. Thus，theboydemonstrates alovefrom heart；hecares everyone nearbyandwantsthemtobebeatificwiththeir families.Aspeople say，an angelic soul.First JobThe extremely hot summer holiday of16，theboywasexcited when hegotajobatthelocaltrain stationasaticket-taker. First working day，theboygotupsoearlythatwhenhearrivedatthestation，the previousticket-taker wasstillonhiswork，in astonishment oftheboy’s Truethe ticket-taker didnotknow that，theboywasjustsoastoget onthejobtoshow thathehad grown up.Soon a common collegewillhebe.A common onethatwill beassiduous inclassand passionate inthe basketballthatwill make everyeffort torunforthe Chairman ofthe Student Unionbutmaystillfailure；that isnomore special thanthosewhospendhalfadayinlibraries and forgettotodinnerwhendo researchesinlabs.But somehowhewillbea uniquecollege student，becausewill havehisown wayof fulfilling his dreams.And asyou may know，theboyme.以上就是一篇标准的美国ESSAY范文，看懂这篇美国大学申请ESSAY的文章写作套路了吗？一、标题：也许，这个标题不算非常特别，但是它引人注目，一个男孩的第一次，可能我们想到更多的是一些“第一次”，联想到我们自己的“第一次”，兴趣自然就产生了！二、结构：结合了“第一次”的标题核心，下面分别以男孩生活、学习及工作中的各个第一次进行阐述，涉及的面比较全，包括感情，给人的感觉非常丰富且完整。
美国留学：三所顶级商学院的Essay题目分析
美国留学：三所顶级商学院的Essay题目分析众所周知，世界级顶级商学院大多数都集中在美国，这绝非偶然，原因之一是商学院在美国的教育体系中已具有悠久的历史，其对商业运作的独到理解使得美国的商学院独树一帜，领导着世界商学院教育的发展。
正因如此，美国商学院也成为了全世界莘莘学子的向往之地。
商学院的项目向来是美国留学申请中竞争最为激烈的，而在金融危机以后，MBA的申请竞争激烈程度更是史无前例。
随着美国留学的愈加成熟，申请者在标准化考试、文书撰写及面试中各显神通。
这是一个双向选择的过程，只有知己知彼，方能百战百胜。
以下我选用了三所顶级商学院的2010年Essay题目分析，共各位参考：1、沃顿商学院沃顿商学院要求申请人完成4篇申请论文，第5篇为选择性申请论文：Essay 1 (750-1000 words)As a leader in global business, Wharton is committed to sustaining "a truly global presence through its engagement in the world." What goals are you committed to and why? How do you envision the Wharton MBA contributing to the attainment of those goals?这道题如果用简单的语言表达，就是what's your goal? why this goal? Why Wharton MBA? (你的目标是什么?为什么有这样的目标?为什么申请沃顿商学院?) 。
职业目标是商学院重点考虑的因素，你的职业目标既要结合实际(切合你的学术背景和职业背景)，又要有一定前瞻性。
在说明职业目标的时候也需要解释为什么有这样的职业目标，通过对职业目标的解读，录取委员会了解到你的个性、视野、领导潜力等。
【美国留学攻略】美国留学申请MBA常见错误分析
【美国留学攻略】美国留学申请MBA常见错误分析培莘教育和大家分享【美国留学攻略】美国留学申请MBA常见错误分析更多留学美国的详细信息可以咨询培莘教育哦~美国留学MBA申请是每一个具有MBA梦想的申请者要准备的事项，但是随着美国留学人数的增加，美国MBA留学申请难度进一步加大，很多申请者对于美国MBA信息掌握的不全面，往往容易走入误区，下面培莘教育为大家介绍一下美国MBA留学申请常见错误。
一、美国MBA留学选校策略错误。
有些品学兼优的学生对自己比较有信心，在选校时对于申请难度和竞争激烈程度预判错误导致申请失败。
二、美国MBA申请思路没有重点，只针对学生情况做泛泛介绍。
这是申请的大忌，很多名校的优秀学生都会认为自己的成绩已经足够申请美国很好的大学了，又考了托福和GRE或者GMAT的高分，只要简单完成申请材料就可以申请。
事实上，美国名校从来不缺优秀的学生申请，在录取的时候，名校更青睐有个性特点的申请者，以增加其校园文化多样化。
三、文书缺乏亮点。
这也是很多申请者常见的错误：简历只是罗列了奖励荣誉和实习经历，看不出学生的个性和优势;个人陈述和文书套话较多，没有针对学生能力做重点阐述;推荐信的语气和用词雷同，甚至不同教授的推荐信中有部分相同的内容。
四、后期跟踪不到位。
有些学生性格比较内向，或者不习惯展示自己的优势，在面试准备和套磁两个方面准备不足，不够积极，没有给教授留下足够深刻的好印象。
美国名校的商学院面试至关重要，招生官们普遍认为，如果申请者不具备良好的口才和灵敏的反应，很难在将来激烈的商业竞争中脱颖而出。
二次进行美国MBA留学申请者需要注意的三大要点第一次申请失败并不代表美国留学梦想破灭，积极总结失败经验，发掘自己的优势，第二次申请完全有机会收获更为理想的学校录取，培莘教育提醒大家要注意以下三点：1.冷静分析，选择适合的留学申请规划。
2.通过文书充分展示你的能力和潜质。
这是非常重要的一点，你的文书一定要个性化并且主次分明，突出你的个性和独一无二的优势。
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美国留学MBA申请常见Essay分析
美国留学读商科的同学越来越来，每年的申请中如何写好Essay?下面我为大家整理了一些美国留学MBA申请常见Essay分析，一起来看看吧。
1，What is your most significant achievement in your life times?
中文意思：在你的人生经历中，你觉得最大的成就是什么?
分析：过去的成就是将来成功的最好的预测，名校MBA需要的是那种即使不读MBA也能成功的人。
而成就可以是多方面的，工作中的成就，如快速的提升，得到领导的褒奖;也可以是其它方面的，如竞赛获奖，还可以是那些常人没有的事迹或很难做到的事迹，比如同时做好两件非常有挑战的事情，可以是你的个人的成就又或是领导团队所获得的成就，学校希望感受到的是，通过MBA的学习，你会取得更大的成功。
2，Please briefly describe your leadership experience and how does it
influence your personal development.
中文意思：简单说一下你的领导经历，为什么它能影响你的发展?
分析：在对这个命题做出反应前，你必须要确定领导能力的概念。
而这篇essay的要点，不是让你去摘录一番言过其实的业绩，把重大项目的功劳占为己有。
它的目的是要你描述一段经历，说明你的想法和行为导致一种结局，而没有你的作用就不会产生这种结局。
为了留下持久的印象，你的作文必须清晰的展现你对领导能力的理解、你如何在实践中运用，以及你如何考虑改进这种难以捉摸的技巧。
你要将自己描绘成一个富于成效且不乏思想的商人，要以事例来证明你的能力，不要只说空话。
3，Describe an ethical dilemma that you have personally encountered. What
alternatives did you consider, and why?
中文意思：说一下你亲身经历过的一次道德困境，你是怎样处理并解决问题的?
分析：这篇Essay应该表现出你对生活中那些模棱两可的“灰色区域”的看法，你如何对待道德问题，以及你的处事原则是什么?这篇文章要写出你有能力在你的价值观和职责产生矛盾时做出的艰难选择。
在写作过程中，你必须详细说明究竟是什么使你的处境在道德上产生矛盾，是什么使你的抉择变的如此艰难。
为什么这是对你的考验，你一定要懂得说明你的思维过程，以及你个人的道德观和信仰所起的作用。
这篇Essay和我
之前谈到的MBA发展历史中第3条不谋而合，这也是商学院在看你的申请材料中所要考察的重点之一。
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4，Why School? What is your career goal? How does our university will help
you to achieve your goals.
中文意思：为什么选择我们学校?你的职业目标是什么?我们学校会如何帮你实现你的职业目标?
分析：这篇Essay相信各位申请者都已经见惯了，即使一个商学院没有其他Essay也会有这篇essay，而这篇essay考察的是你是怎样的一个人，你在生活中想要达到什么目标?你可以考虑按以下步骤来组织你的思维:首先，将你现有的和过去的经历串联起来，特别要说明他们如何与你未来的目标相关，其次，详细说明你的近期和长期的职业目标，考虑一下你想对社会所产生的影响，然后将其分解成你所能达到的不同阶段，第三就是评估你的经历与商学院
MBA教育中存在的缺陷，并将这个学校MBA项目的那些课程会如何弥补这些缺陷，学校有哪些特殊之处适合你的发展目标，然后想想你会对学校做出那些贡献。
Essay的问题包罗万象，如自己取得的最大的成就，亲身经历的失败，道德底线，性格的变化，等等，当你写完Essay后，你会发现自己重新审视了自己走过的这20多年的人生，哈佛的校长曾经说过：“当你写完Essay后，你就知道你的一生应该干些什么?”写作的过程中，要把你的经历，思想写的多姿多彩，学会体会失败，聪明的人会在失败中成长，从失败中学习。
这样我们的社会才在不断的进步。
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