中考英语作文复习专题一
中考英语作文专项训练50题(含范文)
中考英语作文专项训练50题含范文一、话题作文1.书面表达请你以Healthy living Habits为题,写篇80词左右的短文,谈谈你对健康生活的理解。
写作内容如下1、你有哪些健康的生活习惯(至少2个点);2、这些习惯给你带来的好处(至少2点);3、号召大家养成健康的生活习惯。
要求:开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
不得在文中出现学校真实名称和真实姓名。
Healthy Living HabitsEveryone knows health is important to us.___________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ __________【答案】例文Everyone knows health is important to us. Healthy living habits are important to our lives, which ensure us a healthy body and a good mood.Having a good rest is the basic, so that I can have enough energy in the whole day. Otherwise, I can do nothing if I am sleepy. Therefore, remember to sleep and get up early. Besides, eating healthily also plays an important role. There is an old saying goes, “A close mouth catches no flies.” That is telling us pay attention to our eating. Finally, doing exercises is essential. It brings me health as well as relaxation and pleasure. Many stress and negative emotions can be driven away by doing exercises. In short, healthy living habits bring many benefits, although sometimes you even do not realize.It’s important for us to have healthy living habits, so you should develop good living habits from now on and enjoy your lives.【详解】1.题干解读:该题目为命题作文,内容是叙述自己的健康习惯以及这些习惯给自己带来的好处,并号召大家养成健康的生活习惯;短文开头已经给出,承接短文开头即可。
人教版新目标九年级全册必考的14篇英语作文1
Unit 1 How can we become good learners?本单元话题为“学会学习”, 与之相关的话题作文主要为谈论英语学习方法, 这是各地中考英语真题中最常考的话题作文之一。
写作时可根据具体要求或提示, 对相关的学习方法提出建议。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:(1)What about listening to…?(2)Try to guess …by…(3) The more…, the more…(4)…is the secret to language learning.(5)I think…should…(6)It’s a good idea to…【典型例题】为了交流学习经验, 提高学习效率, 某初中英语学习报正在举办以“how to be a good learner”为题的征文比赛, 请踊跃投稿。
【优秀范文】How to be a good learnerTo be a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.W.nee.t.ge.read.fo.ou.lesson.befor.clas.an.alway.liste.carefull.i.class.Afte.cla ss.w.mus.g.ove.th.lesson.an.finis.ou.homewor.o.time.It’.goo.t.stud.i.group.an.he l.eac.other.W.shoul.d.mor.readin.i.ou.fre.time.I.w.hav.an.problems.we’.bette.as. other.fo.help. A..student.workin.har.i.important.bu.don’.forge.t.d.sport.an.kee.he althy.I think all above is helpful to us to be a good learner.Unit2 I think that mooncakes are delicious!本单元是围绕节日这一话题展开的, 是大家较为熟悉的内容, 要想写好这个话题的文章, 首先要注意其体裁, 通常是电子邮件式的说明文, 介绍一两个中国的传统节日, 内容涉及节日名称、时间、含义及主要活动, 还应谈到你喜欢该节日及理由。
中考英语作文专题训练及范文
精品基础教育教学资料,仅供参考,需要可下载使用!中考作文专题训练及范文(10篇)1. 你的学校正在开展“诚信教育”,英语俱乐部为配合这次活动将举行一次演讲比赛。
请根据下表所提示的要点,写一篇演讲稿。
要求:1)短文应包括表格中的所有内容,可适当发挥;2)词数90左右,不包含已给出句子的词数;3)演讲稿中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:cheat in the exam; fall behind (落后)Hello, everyone! It’s a great honor to give me a speech here.That’s all. Thank you for listening!2. 假设你是李杰,正通过e-mail 和美国友好姐妹校的朋友Tom 交流校纪班规,请你用英语向他介绍下面的“班级公约”。
要求:1、内容完整,书写清楚,表达通顺,书写规范;2、请勿逐字翻译,词数90左右,不包含已给出的句子的词数。
参考词汇:school uniform;be active in thinkingDear Tom,I’d like to in troduce my class rules made by us all. First, we shouldIt’s our duty to follow all the rules above. What about yours? Please write soon.Yours,Li Jie3. 为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,某校开展了以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。
请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
注意:1)内容必须包括所给的全部要点,可适当发挥;2)表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;3)词数80左右。
文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go badHow to keep safe?As teenagers we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.First, ____________________________________________________________________ ____________4. 2018年12月20日,福州市被评为“全国文明城市”(National Civilized City)。
人教版新目标中考英语作文复习范文 (1)
人教版新目标2019年中考作文复习范文1.假设你是John ,你的美国笔友Joe想知道你们班同学是如何学习化学的 ,为此你特意进行了调查。
请你根据下面的调查结果 ,给Joe写一封电子邮件 ,告诉他你们班同学学习化学的各种方法。
要求:1. 根据图示进行写作 ,可适当发挥;2. 80词左右 ,电子邮件的格式已给出 ,不计入总词数。
提示词汇:化学公式chemical formula做实验do an experimentDear Joe ,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,JohnDear Joe,There are forty students in our class. 10% of us learn chemistry by asking our teacher for help. 20% of the students think memorizing chemical formulas is a good way to learn. They often spend ten to twenty minutes remembering them every day. About 30% of us improve our chemistry by doing experiments often and it really helps. The others agree that working with a group is the best way to learn chemistry and I am one of them.Yours,John2.假设你是李华 ,你的英国笔友Tom很想了解被列入第一批国家级非物质文化遗产名录的中国传左右 ,电子邮件的格式和开头已给出 ,不计入总词数。
中考复习计划作文英文
中考复习计划作文英文英文:As the middle school entrance examination is approaching, I have made a detailed plan for my review. First of all, I will allocate my time reasonably. I will spend more time on subjects that I am not good at, such as math and physics. For example, I will set aside two hours every day to review math, and I will ask my teacher for help when I encounter difficulties. In addition, I will also spend some time reviewing English grammar and vocabulary every day, because I know that English is also very important for the exam.I will also make use of various review materials. I have bought some review books and exercise books for the subjects I need to review. I will also use some online resources, such as past exam papers and online courses, to help me better understand the exam questions and improve my skills. For example, I will do some exercises in the reviewbooks every day, and I will also watch some online video courses to deepen my understanding of certain knowledge points.Moreover, I will also join a study group with my classmates. We can discuss and solve problems together, which will not only help me learn from others, but also make the review process more interesting and efficient. For instance, we can take turns to explain the difficult problems to each other, and we can also quiz each other to test our understanding.Finally, I will make sure to take breaks and relax properly. I know that studying too hard without rest will not help me perform well in the exam. So, I will set aside some time every day to do things I enjoy, such as playing basketball or watching a movie. This will help me relax and recharge, and I will be more energetic and focused during my review.中文:随着中考的临近,我已经为我的复习制定了详细的计划。
2020年中考英语作文总复习题及答案解析(1-4)
2020年中考英语作文总复习题11.朋友是我们生活的组成部分,他们总是在我们最需要帮助的时候陪伴我们.你最好的朋友是谁?你是怎么看待你们的友谊的?请以"My Best Friend "为题,根据以下提示写一篇英语短文.1.简要介绍你最好的朋友的外貌和性格;2.介绍和你朋友之间发生的一件令人难忘的事;3.你是怎样看待你们之间的友谊的要求:1.语句连贯通顺,文章衔接紧密2.词数80﹣1003.文中不得出现真实校名及姓名Friends are very important in our life.They always help us when we are in need._______________________.【分析】【高分句型一】He is willing to share things with his friends and always ready to help people,which is admired by me very much.他愿意与他的朋友分享东西,随时准备帮助别人,这是我非常欣赏的.which引导非限定性定语从句.【高分句型二】I think real friend is a man who can help you when you in trouble.我认为真正的朋友是当你遇到困难时能帮助你的人.I think+宾语从句;who引导定语从句.【解答】My best friendFriends are very important in our life.They always help us when we are in need.(点题)My best friend is my classmate Jack.We have been good friends since we entered the same class.He is both tall and thin and looks quite clever.Jack is a very interesting boy and also very warm﹣hearted.He is willing to share things with his friends and always ready to help people,which is admired by me very much.【高分句型一】(外貌性格)He studies very hard and always gets the top score in my class.When we have difficulty in learning English or maths,he is always happy to help us.I failed in English last year.He helped and encouraged me patiently.With his help,I finally got good grades.(一件令人难忘的事)I think real friendis a man who can help you when you in trouble.【高分句型二】(我如何看待友谊的)I like him so much and hope our friendship will last for ever.(美好愿望)【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.2020年中考英语作文总复习题21.假如你是Li Ming,最近你的英国笔友Susan要来温州体验中国的传统文化,请你为Susan 设计温州一日游的活动,帮助她体验温州的文化习俗.请根据以下要点用英语给她写一封电子邮件:1.计划去的地方;2.一日游的活动安排;3.阐述安排的理由要求:1.不能出现真实的个人身份信息;2.词数:110词左右.开头已给出,不计入总词数.Dear Susan,I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou._______.Yours,Li Ming 小词典1.bare adj.裸露的2.deputy n.代表3.device n.电子设备4.drip v.滴5.dopamine n.多巴胺6.emojis n.表情符号7.involve v.包含8.multitasking9.physiological adj.生理上10.polish v.擦光11.proposal n.提案12.reaction n.反应13.session n.会议14.sweat v.出汗15.tune n.曲调16.update v.更新17.wrap v.包裹【分析】I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou,where there are lots of places of interest.(高分句型一)句中where there are lots of places of interest为非限制性定语从句我很高兴听到你来温州,那里有很多名胜.Along the Wenzhou Road,not only can you watch the wonderful scenery,but also you will find many historical relics,from which you can learn a lot of traditional culture.(高分句型二)句中from which you can learn a lot of traditional culture为非限制性定语从句沿着温州路,不仅可以观赏到美丽的风景,而且可以发现许多历史遗迹,从中可以学到许多传统文化.【解答】Dear Susan,I'm glad to hear that you are coming to Wenzhou,where there are lots of places of interest.(高分句型一)To experience traditional Chinese culture better,(计划去的地方)we can begin our tour by going sightseeing along WenzhouRoad.I bet you will be attracted.Along the Wenzhou Road,not only can you watch the wonderful scenery,but also you will find many historical relics,from which you can learn a lot of traditional culture.(高分句型二)(一日游的活动安排及安排的理由)Sincerely waiting for your coming!Yours,Li Ming【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.2020年中考英语作文总复习题31.作为一名初三学生,你即将毕业,请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对于初三生活的体会和对学弟学妹的建议.How to be happy in Junior 3Health schoolworkFriendshipandhobbies eat healthily…achieve a Share…sleep enough..…balance..managetime..…Help……注意事项:(1)词数:100词左右(文章开头已给出,不计入总词数);(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息;(3)文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥.Junior school always considered as the most meaning period of one's life.As a Junior 3 student I would like to give you some suggestions on how to live happily in Junior 3._________.【分析】【高分句型一】Also,having enough sleep can keep you healthy.而且,充足的睡眠可以让你保持健康.having enough sleep 动名词短语作主语,keep you healthy让你保持健康,keep +n.+adj.【高分句型二】You can turn to them any time when something worries you.当有什么事让你担心时,你可以随时求助于他们.turn to sb 向某人求助,when当……时候,引导时间状语从句【解答】How to be happy in Junior 3Junior school is always considered as the most meaningful period of one's life.As a Junior 3 student,I would like to give you some suggestions on how to live happily in Junior 3.(开篇点题)Firstly,it's important to be in good health.You'd better eat healthily.Fresh vegetables and fruit are good choices.Also,having enough sleep can keep you healthy.【高分句型一】Moreover,you should take part in sports actively.Secondly,you should achieve a balance between schoolwork and hobbies.Make a list of homework you need to do and manage your time carefully.Then you can spare some time for your hobbies to relax.Thirdly,truefriendship will be of great help to you.You can share your happiness with your friends.You can turn to them any time when something worries you.【高分句型二】You can ask your friends for advice if you are in need.(对于初三生活的体会和对学弟学妹的建议)In a word,I hope you will have a good time in Junior 3 and achieve both happiness and success.(愿望)【点评】能够根据提示进行书面表达,能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等,清楚连贯地表达自己的思想,进而完成写作任务.2020年中考英语作文总复习题41.假如你是李华,你最近认识的美国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件,向了解你进初三以来在学习和生活方面的一些变化、收获和感受.请根据下面的提示及你的实际写封回信.提示:less free time,much homework,more pressure,get into a good high schoolmore exercise,lose weight join the English Corner,improve English a lotcolorful and meaningful,learn more knowledge注意:1)词数80左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;2)回复须包括所有要点,可适当发挥,使全文连贯、通顺;3)文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息.Dear David,Thank you so much for your mail.I'm happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently.【分析】【高分句型一】In my free time ,I used to take more exercise to lose weight.在空闲时间,我经常多运动来减肥.used to do sth过去常常做某事,to lose weight动词不定式作目的状语【高分句型二】I want to get into a good high school so that I can learn more knowledge.我想进入一所好的高中,这样我就能学到更多的知识.so that以便,目的是,引导目的状语从句【解答】Dear David,Thank you so much for your mail.I'm happy to tell you about how my life has changed recently.(开篇点题)In the past ,I had a lot of free time.In my free time ,I used to take more exercise to lose weight.【高分句型一】My life has changed a lot since I became a student of Grade Nine.I have more pressure.I have much homework to do every day.I have less free time to do leisure activities.In my spare time ,I have to join in the English Corner to practice my spoken English.(初三以来在学习和生活方面的一些变化)This improves my English a lot.I make progress in my study.(我的收获)I want to get into a good high school so that I can learn more knowledge.【高分句型二】My life is busy but it is colorful and meaningful.(我的感受)Best wishes,Li Hua 【点评】在解答写作这类试题时,要根据短文的中心思想考虑如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下,形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题.。
2021年中考英语作文复习集锦(一)
中考作文复习集锦(一)一. 河南中考真题爱思考的人善于提出问题,而提出问题有助于解决我们生活或学习中的困惑。
请以“ A question I asked为题,并根据要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。
要点: 1)你提出的问题是什么2)你为什么会提出这个问题3)你提出的问题有什么结果。
要求:1)文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名;2)词数100左右。
【范文】A question I askedWhen I began to learn English, remembering words was a big headache to me. Even though I could remember some, they went out of my mind soon.I was so hopeless.One day I asked my teacher a question before I would give up,"Why do I have to remember words?"The teacher said, Words are not for remembering but for talking and writing.Keep using them and you will remember them.I took her advice and tried to use words in my talking and writing. To my surprise, learning words by heart didn't seem to be a problem any more.二. 假如你叫李华,即将进入高中学习,请你写一封邮件给英国的笔友Linda,谈谈你对高中生活的向往和担忧,并请她给提出建议。
参考词汇:Expectation(向往):new classmates and teachers; make decisions by myself; choose favorite subjects...........Worry: have no time; after-school activities; fall behind; be difficult to study;......注意:1)信中不得出现真实人名,校名和地名2)80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)3)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
2024年中考英语真题作文含解析
2024·湖北武汉·中考真题本周英语课学习围绕主题“Tomorrow’s Life”展开。
请你根据以下提示问题从生活、工作、家庭等方面,写一篇英语作文,描绘25年后你的生活。
1.Where do you want to live and work?2.What will your family be like?3.How are you going to spend your free time?4.Something more about your future life.注意:1.文中不得透露个人真实信息;2.词数100词左右;3.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【答案】例文My life will be very different in 25 years. I think I’ll be a reporter in Beijing. I will live in an apartment with my sister because I don’t like living alone. And I can play with her in my apartment. My parents will travel around the world and enjoy themselves. I will meet a lot of interesting and famous people and I will go to another place on business. I will have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle. I think I will go shopping with my sister and do some reading as long as I have time. And I will go to London on my vacation.I’ll work hard to achieve my dream. I’m sure my life in 25 years will be better and better!【详解】[总体分析]①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的要点,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
中考英语作文热点话题(一)环境保护类
中考英语作文专题(一)7. It’s our duty to protect our environment.8。
It is very important to take care of our environment9。
We should not throw litter onto the ground10。
We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees11. We should plant more flowers and trees。
12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin13。
If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。
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Trees are very helpful and important for us.15. We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future。
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It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment。
共享单车共享单车无疑是今年的火爆热点之一,它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利.In recent days, we have to face I problem____________A, which is becoming more and more serious.First, ____________(说明A的现状). Second, ____________(举例进一步说明现状).Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thi ng, ____________(解决方法一). For another ____________(解决方法二). Finally, ____________(解决方法三).Personally, I believe that____________(我的解决方法).Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is waiting us because ____________(带来的好处).【预测题目】(一)假定你是浣江中学学生李华.你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国新近出现的一种共享单车"mobike"很感兴趣,并请你做个简要介绍。
中考英语必背作文范文_中考英语作文
中考英语必背作文范文篇一:20xx届九年中考英语作文必背范文中考英语作文范文:Dreams and RealityDreams and RealityWhen we talk about dreams, we are so excited, we have many dreams, such as being a famous person, traveling around the world and so on. Dreams are what we pursue for a lifetime, with many dreams, we have motivation to fight for our life. The opposite side of dream is reality, we have to face reality everyday, reality is what we perceive in our life. Reality always frustrates us to be successful. We need to balance them. First, we need to face reality, though it is not ideal, we live in a world, we have to know exactly who we are. Second, to make our dreams come true, we need to adjust our dreams according to the reality。
译文:梦想与现实当我们谈到梦想的时候,会感到很兴奋,我们有很多理想,比如成为一个出名的人,环游世界等等。
梦想是我们一生所追求的,拥有梦想,我们才有动力为生活奋斗。
与梦想相反的另一面就是现实,我们不得不每天面对现实,现实是我们生活中所觉察到的。
中考英语作文写作专题综合训练50题含参考答案
中考英语作文写作专题综合训练50题(含答案)一、话题作文1.某英文网站正在举办以“My School Life”为主题的征文活动。
假设你是李华,请用英语写一篇短文投稿。
注意:1. 文中必须包括表格中全部内容要点,可适当发挥,参考词汇仅供选择使用;2. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名;3. 词数:80—100;4. 短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School LifeI’m Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you.___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Possible version: I’m Li Hua from Sunny Hill Middle School in China. I’d like to share my school life with you.We have many subjects at school such as Chinese, English and so on. I am focused more on Chinese, for I think it’s getting more and more widely used throughout the world. Our teachers are kind and helpful.Whenever I have problems, they are always ready to give me a hand.School activities are rich and colorful. I often play basketball with my classmates, which brings me lots of fun. I like reading as well. So I often spend my free time reading in the school library.My school life is wonderful and I enjoy it very much.【高分句型一】I often play basketball with my classmates,which brings me lots of fun.我经常和我的同学打篮球,这给我带来了很多乐趣。
2024年中考英语作文各话题练习
2024年中考英语作文各话题练习一,环保类现状:1.无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题。
There is no denying the fact that air pollution is an extremely serious problem。
2.异常的天气表明我们的生存环境正日益恶化,而这正是大自然给予我们的警告。
Unusual weather indicates that our living environment is getting worse, which is the warning to us from nature.3. 污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。
Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.4. 虽然水污染被认为是这个地区最严重的问题之一,但是当地政府所采取的行动还远不尽如人意。
( it)Although it’s accepted that water polution is one of the most serious problems in this area, the action (that) the local government is taking is far from (being) satisfactory.5. 环境学家指出:持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题,而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。
Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.措施:1.使河流变清不是件容易的事,但我们的政府已经下定决心要清除污染。
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中考英语作文复习专题一现代技术通讯一.与专题相关的话题项目通讯(C o mmunication) 、科普知识与现代技术(Popular science and modern technology)二.与专题相关的知识准备1. 相关单元:7BU6 Electricity,8AU1 Encyclopaedias, 8AU2 Numbers, 8AU3Computers,8AU4 Inventions, 8AU7 Memory, 8BU7 The unknown world2. 相关词汇:高频词:rule, anyone, reply, foolish, connect, moment, cooker, fridge, lock, test, tidy, touch, human, dinosaur, inventor, musician,scientist, born, countryside, intelligence, ability, perhaps,invention, notebook, include, even, however, suddenly, nobody,win, dollar, number, check, son, chess, wise, promise, prize,amount, rest, gold, instead, realize, copy, traffic, accident,order, type, brain, control, expensive, tiny, depend, speed,railway, company, price, sell, popular, funny, telephone,comfortable, invent, since, lose, improve, mind, silly, letter,worth, spell,unless, trouble, manager, unknown, receive, hill,loud, quiet, round, wonder, refuse, knife, pleased 高频短语:in a way,switch off, tidy up, in the countryside, human being, die out, find out, go for a walk, a long time ago,and so on, copy down, work as, depend on, in addition, lookforward to, since then, keep in touch with, in the daytime,keep…off, at the same time, instead of, take out, keepquiet, because of, as soon as possible, agree with, disagreewith拓展词汇:electricity, conversation, identify, wire, cable, battery, bulb, Italian, artistic, fossil, compare, operate, total,create,particle, mobile phone, special, memory, corner,mention, mile, step, similar, wallet, damage,frightened,terrible, explain, washing machine, a packet of,be connected to, power station, air conditioner,challenge…to…, be unaware of, grand total, pour out,3. 经典句型:a. It is + adj. + for sb. +to do/ It is+ adj. + that 从句b. Sb. spend time on sth./ in doing sth./ It takes sb. + time+ to do.c. One advantage is that …. Another advantage is that ….d. On one hand, … On the other hand,e. I think/believe that…二、经典例题:随着互联网的发展,越来越多的学生开始使用网络。
最近,你的学校进行了一个关于中学生是否应该上网的调查,大都数同学赞成上网,少部分同学反对上网,请根据以下表格内容,把同学们的讨论结果整理出来,并就如何正确使用网络提出你自己的观点,写成一篇80字左右的短文。
(注意:文章的开头已给出)With the development of the Internet, it has become more and more common among the students. Should students use the Internet? Recently, our school did a survey on it. According to the survey, 60 percent of the students agree to use the Internet because…解题思路:1.审题:a. 本文共有6个要点b. 时态主要采用一般现在时c. 人称是_we/The Internet_2.可能用到的短语和句型be useful to, change people’s life, communicate with, search information, share information, a waste of time, be harmful to, in one’s opiniona. It is + adj. + for sb. +to do/ It is+ adj. + that 从句b.S b. spend time on sth./ in doing sth./ It takes sb. + time+ to do.c. One advantage is that…. Another advantage is that….d. On one hand,…On the otherhand,3.成文:With the development of the Internet, it has become more and more common among the students. Should students use the Internet? Recently, our school did a survey on it. According to the survey, 60 percent of the students agree to use the Internet because the Internet is very useful and it change people life. It’s also more confident for us to communicate with each other and we can share information withours friends.There is a lot of information on it, so when we don’t understand sth.W e may find the explain on it.But 40 percent of the students against. They think play computer games is harmful forteenagers and waste a lot of time and money. Although Internet has someproblems,I think it is good for us. If we use the Internet correct, we will learn a lot.点评:整篇文章对要点的把握基本到位,但是拼写和简单的语法错误较多。
部分句子的结构不够完整,缺发主语或谓语,词类误用的现象比较明显,表达也过于中式,略显生硬。
此外,应适当使用连接词,是文章过渡更自然。
4. 分项分档评分表5. 检查思路:完成作文自查表:1. 如果没有问题的,请在项目后打√。
2. 如果有问题,请在项目中圈出来,并在文中做出修改。
6.参考例文:With the development of the Internet, it has become more and more common among the students. Should students use the Internet? Recently, our school did a survey on it.According to the survey, 60 percent of the students agree to use the Internet because it is very useful and it has people’s life.One advantage is that it is more convenient for people to communicate with each other.The other advantage is that we can search a lot of information on the Internet and share it with our friends in real time.The Internet helps make our life easier, but it can also be dangerous.40 percent of the students think that it is a waste of time and money to surf the net. Some students spend too much time on the net playing games. It’s really harmful to teenagers.In my opinion, the Internet has both advantages and disadvantages, we should make good use of it, but at the same time, we should also learn to control ourselves when we use it.三.练习:随着科技的发展,人们会选择不同的方式去和朋友沟通。